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Posted: 12 years ago
For the love of God... Pls continue 🥱🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 12
Leaving Pari fuming in her room, Dida walked out into the hallway of the hospital. Payal, who by then had parted from Aakash after her hot passionate moments, was waiting for Dida eagerly.
Payal: Dida?
Dida : hmm?
Payal : Dida, what plan are you hatching? I know I didn't inform Rahul about Pari, so how come he was here? So if I didn't tell him then that leaves only one person, doesn't it Dida? And that's you!!! Why Dida? Why? What were you expecting to gain by doing this?
Dida (smiles secretively) : Payal beta, you are very observant! Yes, you are right!! It was me. Not only did I inform that Rahul about Pari but I also paid for his tickets, although he doesn't know that both the anonymous information and money came from me...
Payal: But why?
Dadi: Oh, c'mon Payal beta, you and I both knew that there was a 50% chance that Pari's memory might return, and as it has happened, what was the one thing she asked for apart from her family members? She asked for Rahul!! I knew she would do that, and I knew if Arnav found out about Rahul, he would have just let Pari slip through his fingers, just because he treated her so badly recently, and he would have expected us to handle Rahul, if he did ever pose to be a danger to Pari...but this way, Arnav has seen Rahul's true nature, he will not let Pari go. He will woe her...and that way Rahul will be out of Pari's life for good...because we both know that Pari is so stubborn that she would have married Rahul by hook or crook...she is just so STUBBORRN!!!
Payal (whispers to herself): ofcourse she is stubborn, ...aakhir Poti kiski hai...Wait what do you mean by Jetji having treated Pari badly recently??? What did he do? I will go have a word with him...
Dida: Payal, whatever happened is between them, let them sort it out. Actually, this will be much fun...I think Pari likes Arnav but is too stubborn to admit it as that would mean that what she felt for Rahul was just a crush...and she would have felt that she is betraying Rahul...but now that she know she is married already...and Arnav said he will win her over...Rahul will act as the catalyst that will make these TWO STUBBORN LOVERS realise what they feel...oh its going to be fireworks!!!!
Payal (jaws hanging open) : ...Dadi that is a devious plan...ingenious...wow...we'll get rid of Rahul and save Pari and Arnav...wow you are so great...
After that, Dadi bid her farewells to Naani, and also told her of her plan to get Arnav and Pari closer, Naani agrees to help Dadi. She also agrees to keep Rahul in Shantivan for a while to use him to fan ASR's possessive and jealousy streak.
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Payal then joins Pari and Arnav in their room. They explain to Pari how she has to talk and behave in Shantivan . Payal does most of the talking, since all Arnav is able to tell her are the nicknames by which Khushi use to address him and other people 😉.
By mid-day, all the family members are discharged and head for home.
Pari steps into Arnav's room and admires the room. As soon as she sees the pool side she starts getting flash backs...
Flashbacks: Arnav holding her hand, pulling her using her dupatta, kissing her on her cheek...then all of a sudden she sees an angry Arnav thrusting her outside and closing the door to her face, she is in bridal attire...but whatever he says is not clear to her...it was like watching a movie with no sound effects...and after that her flashback ends...
Pari: What the hell was that? Did he do that to me? How dare he? Well too bad...today he can sleep outside...Mr Raizada, I don't know what all you did to me, but I promise to you, whatever and all it was that you did, payback time is here...now I will make you cry...
Just then Anjali stepped in to the room.
Anjali: Khushiji, are you ok?
Khushi: ha Di...bus muchhar bohot hai...
Anjali: achha...mein HP se kahey ke kamra saaf karwa doon...
Khushi: arrey nahee di...mein sumbhaal loongi...
Anjali: ok...par yaad rakhna ...pichlee baar ki tara mosquito coil mut baariyega...chote ko allergy hai na...
Khushi (her eyes gleams with the fire of revenge) : ofcourse Di, aap phikar mut kijiye...
Anjali then leaves.
Khushi thinking: oh, ho!! So Mr Raizada ko Mosiquito coil se allergy hai?...how nice for me...so revenge part one...tonight...(Khushi tries to do an evil laugh but fails miserably😆)
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At the dinner table, conversation is kept light as Arnav had told them that some thieves had broken into the house which is why Shyam was beaten up and Khushi was assaulted. They don't want to hurt Khushi's feelings but our dear Mamiji just could not resist a poke and hence said...
Mami: Hello Hi bye bye... waise Phati sari, ee kaise hua ki chor ne tumko chloroform nahee smells karwaya?...tells tells?
Khushi was about to answer back to her, when Payal kicked her in the legs.
Khushi: Ouch!!!
Nani: Khushi bitiya, kya hua?
while Anjali, Mama, Arnav, Aakash, Rahul and Mami give her a questioning look.
Khushi (smiles slightly) and says: kuch nahee Naniji, bus muchhar bohot hai.
Mami: Ab muchhar bhee hum sub ko chor kar sirf tumhey hee kyun kaat ta hai?
Khushi starts mumbling to herself : Payal ki bachhee!! Mujhey kyun martee ho, apnee saans ko jaa kar maaro...
Mami: ee kya aapas mein phus phusaa rahee ho?
Khushi: Mamiji mein muchhar se kahey rahee thee ki jaa kar mami ji ko bhee company de, aakhir who bhi lonely pheel kartee hongee...
Everybody laughed. Manorma was going to retort again but Nani silenced her down with one stern look at her.
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Arnav headed to his bedroom. He was walking like a caged lion. He couldn't understand how could Nani allow that Rahul to stay. With Khushi being an educated and rich girl, the task of woeing her had become difficult by ten fold.
Just then Rahul and Khushi walked into ASR's den.
Rahul: wow, nice room. Pari, we should design a room like this for us when we get married, what do you think?
Pari: Yeah sure babe, actually I was thinking that we can hire AR Designs to make my bridal outfit as well!!
Arnav heard this and stepped out near the pool area. Rahul and Pari followed him out.
Rahul yawns: Ok babe, I am feeling sleepy. A goodnight kiss then? Pari stepped up to him, and while she stared at Arnav, kissed Rahul on his cheek.
Rahul: On the cheek? Seriously?? C'mon its been ages since we last met, a proper pash one only could fit the bill!!
Arnav turned towards Rahul, breathing fire through his nostrils, he paced towards him. Rahul saw him coming and just in the last moment, stuck his foot out. Arnav fell into the pool. PAri and Rahul both started laughing at Arnav's state.
Arnav, who was initially angry, relaxed seeing Pari laugh. He extended his hand out for help to step out even though he could have easily sauntered out himself. But instead, he smirked, tried to look helpless and asked for help.
Rahul: what?? You can't get out yourself from the knee deep pool??? Ridiculous!!!
Arnav: Why what's your problem? I am asking MY wife for help, not you! Plus if I step out myself, the chances of you getting hurt are higher, as you made me trip, and I don't do childish things like that!!!
Pari extended her hand out to Arnav. Arnav held her hand, and tugged it down, Pari fell into the water too. Correct that! She had fallen right into Arnav's arms. He held her wet body flushed to his own hard one.
Pari: What the h...mm...
That's all she was able to say as Arnav's persuasive lips crushed into her pliant ones. He moulded her luscious form to fit into his form more snugly. Hot blood rushed into Pari's ears, making her deaf and blind to everything else. Right now all she wanted to do was feel. Feel his body imprint on hers, the clothes were getting in the way...her need was crossing all boundaries of decency. She moaned out loud.
Rahul had rushed out of the room. To see his girlfriend being kissed like that, no, not kissed but made passionate love to her lips, whilst wet had been too much for him to take. He was angry, wounded. He had to make Pari his before ASR did anymore damage to his beautifully laid out plan!!!
Pari wrapped her arms around Arnav's neck. Her slim fingers combed through his silky wet hair, pushing her body more into him, trying to indicate her need with her action. Arnav's hand glided down her curves, the dips and rises which were essentially a part of her. Loosing control, he hauled her kurtee up and planted his lips on the delicate pink buds crowning her bosom. Taking it into his mouth, sucking it, nipping it slightly, letting his hot tongue tug it into shape.
Pari moaned out louder this time. That got Arnav's attention!! 😳 Finally, one of them was coming to senses.
Arnav, gently pulled her kurtee down. He lifted Khushi's legs up and carried her and himself out of the pool with ease. He placed her on top of his bed and straight away bolted for a cold shower...😲
Pari, lay on the bed. She could feel that she had lost his bodily warmth. But the sinful needy pleasure was still very much pulsating through her body. She tried to take deep calming breath. Trying to think of anything which would make her gain self-control. She tried to think...but failed miserably and ended up asking the one question which her body was asking her,"Why did he stop?".
He was her husband, they were married! WHY did he stop? They must have made love lots of times in this nearly 6 month marriage! So why did he stop today!
Tears born of frustration from unfulfilled needs burst from her eyes. She felt alone and rejected! How dare he! Does he think I am a doll to dance to his tunes!! How could he do this, take me half way there and then all of a sudden just leave me cold??? Why? As she was lost in these thoughts, she slowly fell into a deep restless slumber, her plans to light the mosquito coil for her laad governor all forgotten...
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Phew!!!...there you go...a little long update...
Edited by s-576 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here you go guys...I have come back to the writers world now...the problems which made me stop writing are halfway resolved...hope the rest too disintegrates eventually...
Back to writing ...I will try to keep hindi dialogues but writing hindi using English is kinda hard so do forgive me if I mid way I start writing the whole story in English...
Hope you like this chapter...nitially I posted a short update...but later I made it longer...hope you all like it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic chapter
Loved it
God that was just...amazingly beautiful
The kiss so hot so intense
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update and don't forget to put english translation when you use hindi loved the plan and arnav pulling her down in the pool was wicked cute but she thinking he has rejected her no knowing they have not cross their limit in the 6 months they were married and rahual how dare he try to get her to kiss him awesome update thanks for the pm
Edited by dumas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved this jealous Arnav...
Bt did he stop there..??
Poor Khushi...She s hurt...
Dnt kno wats that Rahul planning...
Waitng 4 d nxt part...
Cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally u r back... good to see u updating

awesome work... dida is evil... n smart too
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Posted: 12 years ago
holy molly
they finally kissed huh and about time too
sorry pari khushi you guys havent consummated the marriage as of yet
and with the things are going wont be doing so for a while too
well this rahul sure is gonna help arhi become closer
hey he was instrumental of their first kiss
haiyye kya baat hai
dang man this is gonna be fun
and it seems these two are gonna battle it out
ahhh so she remembers something
this is just the beginning right
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
one of the most interesting FF pls pls continue

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