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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just a piece of scene for u guys sorry for my mistakes



_ Khushi !

_ What ?!

_ Stop acting like a baby and come here

_ Nahiii ! I am feeling good here !

_ Khushi Kumari Gupta Si...

_ Ssshhh , if you want me , u need to catch me Swami !

_ Khushi Barish !

_ So what ?

_ For the last time Khushi come here u will get ill

_ Aaj mausam ...

Arnav came near her , he held her hand tightly

_Arnav ... she whispered

_Oh now it's Arnav ? , you are just unbelievable Wifey , he said huskily

(Then , eyes lock and Rabba ve moment )


Arnav held her waist , she shivered the mere contact of his hand was a sweet torture for her.

_ Arnav ji aap kya kare ...Chodiye na what are you doing , leave me

_ Khushi , just for tonight can we just forget all our quarrels please , tonight it's just you and me.

He broke the distance them , and brush his lips on her

_ Deal ? he whispered

She closed her eyes and nodded



She smiled , and hugged him " i love you my laad governor"

______________________________

_ Khushi ! Khushi wake up !

she opened her eyes

_ Arnav ji ?! so it was just a dream ?

_ What the ? You were held me till i could not breath you are completely mad Khushi

_ How could i even dream about that che , laad governor ke saath ?

_ Kya kaha tumne ?

_ K...k ..Kuch nahi !

She get up , and went to the bathroom

_Khushi !.

_Kya ?

_ Your laad governor loves you too ; he smirked



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Not rubbish at all...I found it cute.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arrey.. sooo sweet... The CV's shud truly make use of her blabbering in sleep.. its high time they used it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww..short & sweet
i liked it!!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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when you write, never call it rubbish.. even if it is.. it is a gift from god that you can be inspired and translate it into words.. accept that you have a talent, even if you think you churn out rubbish.

I found it truly inspired..
the font added to the feel of the story.
and of course, the language was far better than most of the stories we get to see daily cropping up on IF.

very cute story :)

Edited by guturgutur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was short and sweet...
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haye kash aaisa show me ho jaye.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wahou ! Thank you dears ! I wrote it like that i am definitely a novice i used to write in french

So guys thank you so much ! I will try to write some others =)😍

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