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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvraj4ever


loved the first part...it was really interesting...loved every character esp dev๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ..--abhi se ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

.i love rajeev in intense roles๐Ÿ˜ณ...---dats good ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

so pallavi is the one???๐Ÿ˜ณ...we have yet to see more of her..--- yup ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ abhi toh entry li hai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† .
but who is the person in the end??????๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ---lets see ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›
cont soon and congrats for the new fic..๐Ÿ‘--thanku





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18


Hello Di๐Ÿ˜Š--- hello ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Another ff from you thank you for fulfilling our wish๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ-- ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ready to get bored ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

So here Raj is Dev like Laard Governor typical workoholic bussiness men๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰--- ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Laard Governor ๐Ÿค”

but there is something which made him like this but what is that decision which made him like this๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•---๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ will let u know soon ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

His friend Sid and all his family members are very good especially the lilttle one RJ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†--- yeahh ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† & he is not literally little...boy is in college ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

So there are two girls but who is the one that belongs to Dev๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†--- it gonna be pallavi i guess ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† cant make less than 18 khushi fall in love with him ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† my poor Dev wud be in jail ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

And in the last who is he or she which appeared to say Ruko ye nahi ho sakta๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†--- ๐Ÿ˜‰ lets see ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Continue soon๐Ÿ˜Š






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Originally posted by: golu_1677

do we get an update today???



hopefully yes... its 70% complete ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
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hopefully yes... its 70% complete ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...


okk.. will b w8ng
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waiting for the update..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Part 2..



Prachi opened the door & was surprised to see Dev at this hour it was late at nightโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ also he hadn't informed even he wud be coming.

Prachi(surprised)โ€”Dev, tum is waqt yaha sab theek toh hai?๐Ÿ˜•

Dev(assured her)โ€”sab theek hai bhabiโ€ฆI hope aap log soye nahi the abhi tak?

Prachiโ€”nahi not yet, aaj kabir office se late aaye the toh we gonna have a late dinnerโ€ฆ

Dev(seeing Prachi not letting him in)โ€”ab yaha darwaze pe khada rakhengi ya โ€ฆandar aa sakte hai ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†

Prachi(realizing)โ€”oh sorry! Come on inโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š

Massi Kabir Rj were also surprised to see Dev at this hour & asked same question as Prachiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Dev(joked)โ€”aap log itne surprise kyun ho rahe hai?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜† I didn't knew mere achanak aane se yeh reaction milegaโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Ranvijayโ€”ab surprise toh honge Bhaiโ€ฆhumesha hume aapko bulana padta hai aaj aap bin bulaye aagaye toh zor ka jhatka zor se lag gayaโ€ฆ

Dev(just smiled)โ€”actually main aap logon ke liye surprise hi laya thaโ€ฆinfact do surprisesโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

By then Pallavi & khushi also joined themโ€ฆMassi was very happy seeing them thereโ€ฆhugged both of themโ€ฆ๐Ÿค—

Massiโ€”Pallo,khushiโ€ฆtum dono yahaโ€ฆso good to see uโ€ฆmain dev se kehne hi wali thiโ€ฆki tum dono ke aate hi mujhse milne le aayeโ€ฆ (to dev) yeh tune acha kiya dev inhe milne le aayaโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Devโ€”sirf milne nahiโ€ฆyeh abse yahi rahengi โ€ฆHope its Ok with all of u๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šโ€ฆ(tried to explain) who main

Massi (interrupted)โ€”sirf Ok nahiโ€ฆyeh toh bahut acha haiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ mujhe bhi company mil jayegi...waise bhi pura din akele rehti hoon kabir office chala jata hai, Ranvijay collegeโ€ฆaur Prachi apne boutique โ€ฆmain bore ho jati hoon yeh dono pariyaan mere saath rahengi toh mera bhi mann lag jayegaโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Devโ€”Thank you Massi, ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I know inhe mujhe apne saath rakhna chaiye thaโ€ฆye meri zimmedari haiโ€ฆpar aap janti haiโ€ฆkaam mein busy rehta hoon , zyadatar out of town bhi jana padta haiโ€ฆ aise mein theek se dhyan nahi de pata inheโ€ฆaur naya shehar hai, nayi jagah, naye log โ€ฆaap logon ke saath rahengi toh they will feel betterโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š So,Thank you so muchโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Pallavi looked at him surprised he didn't told anything abt what happened back at houseโ€ฆHere Dev is giving totally a different reasonโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

***

Back at Dev's house

Before Ramsingh could answer Dev the voice of a woman could be heard.

Both girls looked back to see a woman in her early thirties, wearing a black designer dress...

Woman--'Don't you dare Dev Khanna ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก !!!!!! Who the hell are you to decide โ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก is ghar mein kaun rahega? Who the hell are these girls yeh mere ghar mein kya kar rahi hain?๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก


Dev had back to the womenโ€ฆhe turned back & in a very composed wayโ€“Chillane ki koi zarut nahi haiโ€ฆ

Not paying heed to his request she pointed her finger towards him and the woman started shouting again

Woman-- Don't you dare to tell mโ€ฆ..!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Before she could finish her sentence Dev raised his right hand to indicate her to stop and said with a strict voice that could scare anybody

Devโ€”Maine kaha naโ€ฆchillane ki zarut nahi hai Maya ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก ek baar mein baat samajh nahi aati tumheโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก aur rahi in ladkiyon ki baat to yeh meri mehmaan hai, Badi Maa ki betiyan. Yeh yahi rahengiโ€ฆUnderstood๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Maya(angry) -Nowayโ€ฆDev Khannaโ€ฆ . !๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

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Pallavi's eyes widened in shock ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ not because the woman just said they couldn't live in that house, but the woman had the guts to defy what Mr. Khanna said ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ โ€ฆshe thot to herselfโ€ฆ Agar is tarah mujhse baat ki hoti toh inki baat mana karna toh door ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• โ€ฆmeri awaaz bhi nahi nikaltiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• In this tone of voice I would probably have said 'yes' and 'amen' to about anything & everything he said...


Her chain of thots broke when Maya continued to shoutโ€ฆ.

Maya-- I will not let any1 in my house Dev ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก โ€ฆ. Yeh ghar tumhare baap ka nahin hai ki tum kisiko bhi yahaan par rakh lo, samjhe!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Hote kaun ho tum?inhe yaha rehne ke liye kehne waleโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Yeh mera ghar haiโ€ฆkoi Khairaati dhramshala nahiโ€ฆjahan tum apne so called mehmaano ko rehne ke liye le aaoโ€ฆalready tumhe is ghar mein bardasht kar rahi hoon wohi bahut haiโ€ฆ. ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก (dev tried to say something) Dev, ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก tumse behas karne ka nahi mujhe shauk haiโ€ฆNahi mere paas faltu waqt hai barbaad karne ke liyeโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก already I am lateโ€ฆ& main chahungi jab main wapis aau toh mujhe mera ghar Ghar hi lage Dharamshala nahiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก (abt to leave but turned back )& mind u Dev Khannaโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Just because we are married iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki tum jo kahoge main manugiโ€ฆtum๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Dev (his voice sounded like the thunder) โ€“Stop it right there Maya! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Ek bhi lafz aage mat kehna!... baar baar mujhe jatane ki zarut nahi haiโ€ฆMujhe already pata hai ki yeh ghar mere baap ka nahin, tumhare baap ka hai, ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก lekin Ghar mere naam par zaroor haiโ€ฆ Aur rahi humari marital status ki baat, to yeh main sab ke saamne discuss nahin karna chahta hoon!! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก & you know me mujhe explaination dene ki adat nahi haiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Tumhare liye itna janna kafi hai... ki yeh dono yahan rahengi...Hope its clear enough๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Both Pallavi & khushi felt out of place...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• They never really saw a married couple fight...๐Ÿ˜•
coincidently they happen to be the reason of fight... this was open hostilityโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Ramsingh who was still standing there, gave the girls a reassuring smile and continued to do what he was doing namely looking down at the marble floor.

Maya finally left withโ€”I don't care a damn Dev Khanna ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก โ€ฆ mujhe apne ghar mein koi bahar wale pasand nahi haiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก (coming closer to him so that only he can hear) & yes if u are thinking them to send them to ur outhouse toh tum jante ho it might just not be safe thereโ€ฆyou never know inke saath kuch bhi ho saktaโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• baad mein mat kehna I didn't warn youโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜ก

Maya gave a last look at her husband & walked out giving an angry look to the girls. ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Dev
(still there was anger in his voice)โ€”Ram Singh! Inka samaan lejao...guest room mein (Dev turned around to climb the stairs again)

Its when pallavi tried to say something in an unsteady voice. โ€“Uhmmm (She was nervous seeing Dev's anger).Mr Khannaโ€ฆ(dev turned to look back at her) agar koi problem ho toh(she fumbledโ€ฆas she was nervous) hum kahin aur reh lengeโ€ฆwe can understandโ€ฆ it's okay.

Dev(very calmly)โ€”tum log yahi rahogeโ€ฆ& its end of the discussionโ€ฆ(controlling his temper) Actually โ€ฆmaine Maya ko pehle nahi bataya tha ki tum dono aane wale hoโ€ฆ& she doesn't like surprisesโ€ฆtoh gusse mein kafi kuch bol gayiโ€ฆplz don't mind herโ€ฆuski taraf se I am sorryโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Main usse baat kar lunga she will understandโ€ฆI will manage her โ€ฆtum log yahan reh sakte hoโ€ฆ (he turned to go back when)

Ramsingh though being a little elder than Devโ€ฆ still apprehensive to defy dev's ordersโ€ฆtried to say something

Ramsingh(in a low voice so that only Dev cud hear) โ€”Dev Beta whoโ€ฆmain keh raha thi kiโ€ฆ (dev indicated him to continue) .Maya madam maraaz ho jayengi...aur koi problem hui tohโ€ฆMaya madam ne inhe kuch kaha toh...

Devโ€”tumhe pata hai Ramsingh jab tak main hoon aisa kuch nahi hogaโ€ฆ

Ramsinghโ€”par aap toh zyadatar bahar rehte haiโ€ฆaapke peeche se kuch kaha tohโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Dev agreed Ramsingh has a valid pointโ€ฆhe cant be here 24*7 to keep a eye on themโ€ฆ.then thot to himself the only place they wud be comfortable wud be only oneโ€ฆhe wud take them there.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Pallavi thought that they landed from a boxing match with fighting spouses into a tennis match where they were the tennis balls b/w boss & Master..๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Dev(finally deciding)โ€”theek hai Ramsingh inka samaan car mein Rakhwa doโ€ฆ main dekhta hoonโ€ฆ(to girls) tab tak aap dono kuch lengiโ€ฆtea coffeeโ€ฆanything (Both nodded NO & mumbled thank you) theek haiโ€ฆphir chaliyeโ€ฆ it is already quite late.

***

Now here they are at Khanna houseโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Pallavi came out of her thots when she saw Massi almost scolding Devโ€ฆ

Massi(pretended to be angry) โ€”lagta hai mera thapad khane ka man kar raha hai...shayad isliye thank you bol raha haiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜† tujhe pata hai teri problem kya haiโ€ฆtu sabke liye sab kuch kar sakta, par tere liye koi kuch kare toh tujhe lagta hai who ehsaan kar raha haiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜• main koi ehsaan nahi kar rahiโ€ฆKiran meri liye Sudha ki tarah hi thiโ€ฆuske saath zyada waqt nahi bita sakiโ€ฆpar ab uski betiyon ke saath waqt mila hai...yeh yaha rahengi toh sabse zyada mujhe khushi hogiโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š

Dev (nodded)โ€”Ok massi thank you nahi kahungaโ€ฆhappy (to kabir) Bhai aapse kuch discuss karna thaโ€ฆ(kabir nodded)

They both were abt to leave when Massi stopped Devโ€ฆknowing there might be something business related to discuss abtโ€ฆ she knew it wud take time. ๐Ÿ˜†

Massiโ€”Dev, sirf kabir se baat karke wapis mat chale janaโ€ฆtera liye bhi dinner lagwa rahi hoon chup chap kha lenaโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š (dev tried to refuse) aur yeh mat kehna tu dinner kar chuka haiโ€ฆwaise bhi yeh bachiyan bhi dinner karengiโ€ฆso jaldi aanaโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Dev knew there is no point in arguing he just agreed to massi... while he was leaving ...she saw Both girls comfortably chatting with Prachi & Rjโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Massi instructing Prachi to show them their roomsโ€ฆalso asking them to feel at home, introduced them to Prachi,& Rj.. He knew it's a good decision he took, they will be comfortable here more than in his house or outhouse fending for themselvesโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜•

***

back in another room

Kabirโ€”kya baat hai Devโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜•

Devโ€”Bhai โ€ฆek toh aapse khushi ke admission ki baat karni thi, maine Rj ke college ke principal se baat karli hai ๐Ÿ˜Šโ€ฆaap baki ki formalities dekh lenaโ€ฆ& (giving him the file) yeh in dono ke insurance papers aur baki documents hai jo lawyer ne bhijwaye haiโ€ฆbaba aur badi maa ki jo bhi savings thi & ghar ke papersโ€ฆsab kuch isme haiโ€ฆbaki aur koi expenses honge toh mujhe bata denaโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Kabir (interrupted)โ€”Dev yeh tu, hum log sambhal lengeโ€ฆyeh dono koi bhoj nahi banegi hum parโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Devโ€”I know Bhai, but still badi maa inki zimmedari mujhe dekar gayi haiโ€ฆso yeh meri duty hai ki main inka dhyan rakhu ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š โ€ฆI will have to take care of themโ€ฆ plz bhaiโ€ฆhope u understandโ€ฆ

Kabir (sighed)โ€”theek haiโ€ฆjaise tu chaheโ€ฆ(its when he noticed Pallavi at the door) pallavi tum yahaโ€ฆ

Pallavi (got little nervous composing herself)โ€”ermm who...Massi โ€ฆaap dono ko dinner ke liye bula rahi thiโ€ฆ

Kabirโ€”Oh haanโ€ฆchal devโ€ฆwarna massi ko jantaโ€ฆmere liye nahiโ€ฆpar tere liye yaha khana lekar aajayengiโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Dev joined all of them at dinnerโ€ฆDinner passed by to quickly for the girls

After a long timeโ€ฆthey got to enjoy a dinner with other people besides themselves.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š ..Every member seemed to have accepted the fact that they have 2 new members in their house and they looked pleased with it. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Every member tried their level best to make the girls feel comfortable.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Rj cracked his stupid jokesโ€ฆto make them smileโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Massi pampered them with asking them for more foodโ€ฆalso asked them to call her massi instead of Auntyโ€ฆ Prachi & Kabir also made them feel at homeโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

***

After dinner as he was leaving... Dev asked Massi again...

Dev-- Mausi aapse kuch baat karni haiโ€ฆ.(massi indicated to continue) aap ko bura to nahin laga ki mai bina pooche in dono ko yahanโ€ฆ.I meanโ€ฆ

Massi(interrupted)โ€”Maine pehle bhi Kaha hai Devโ€ฆyeh yaha rahengiโ€ฆ toh hume khushi hogiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š koi problem nahi haiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ aur dono itni sweet hai ...Main toh pehle hi inhe saath lane wali thiโ€ฆpar ye aayi hi nahiโ€ฆ (added sweetly) uparse Kiran aur Shrikant ki bachchiyan hai. Yahan nahin aati to aur kahan jaati.

Devโ€”Thank you mausi, (seeing massi glaring him..he just smiled)โ€ฆI know aapne thanx ke liye mana kiya haiโ€ฆ but still aapne meri problem solve ki haiโ€ฆ(sighed) main darasal inhe apne paas rakhna chaahta tha but...

Massi (worriedly)โ€”Dev, Maya ne kuch kaha kya?๐Ÿ˜•Did she do something ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Dev(instantly) -- Nahin aisa kuch nahi hai, it's just that ....(she knew he was lying...Dev changed the topic) anyways mujhe un dono ke saath kuch baatein discuss karni hai lekin aaj nahin, kal kar lungaโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Aaj bahut raat ho gayi haiโ€ฆ& Mausi aap inke liye woh barawala karma ready karwadenaโ€ฆdono ke liye jagah nayi haiโ€ฆisliye saath rahengi toh acha rahegaโ€ฆ

Massiโ€”theek haiโ€ฆMain prachi se keh dungi...๐Ÿ˜Š

Dev-- Accha mausi main chalta hoon, (hugged her) i will see you tomorrowโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Bye & goodnight

Dev walked out... wishing Rj & prachi also goodnight...

He was abt to get into the Carโ€ฆ when he heard someone call his nameโ€ฆMr.Khannaโ€ฆ

He turned around and saw Pallavi aproching himโ€ฆ heard the same sweet "Cham-cham-cham" he heard the last time he had walked toward his car earlier... Unknowingly he smiled again...like hours backโ€ฆ. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

***

As Dev led had them outside the house towards his carโ€ฆ Khushi's eyes had widened seeing the beautiful silver car that stood there... ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Pallavi was in deep thoughts to notice anything... 'I don't want to burden anybody, maybe I made a mistake coming hereโ€ฆshayad.hume nahi aana chaiye thaโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜•

Dev could notice the excitement of khushiโ€ฆbut wondered why the elder one was so quiet, was she walking behind him or did she stop midway?

Then he heard the sweetest noise he ever heard on this compound.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š A faint "cham- cham-cham" was following him. His lips formed a strange curve. He smiled!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š After such a long time he smiledโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š genuinely smiled coz he wanted to ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š โ€ฆhe smiled to himselfโ€ฆon his ownโ€ฆjust not to fool othersโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š it was the sweetest sound he heard! Even he himself was taken by surprise.

He suppressed the urge to look back and find out who gave him this melodious reason to smile...๐Ÿ˜Š

Dev asked driver to call for the day as he gonna drive himselfโ€ฆ also asked Ramsingh to make other workers to retire for the dayโ€ฆ


As Dev took the driving seat he looked at the two girls who were still standing and looking at the car and elder one was still in deep thoughts.

Dev(clearing his throat)โ€”ahem, Chaleโ€ฆ One of you can come and sit in the front โ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Š

Khushi just noddedโ€ฆ

Throughout the drive Dev kept glancing in rear view mirror & kept an eye on Pallavi who sat in back seat still lost in thots...


Pallavi rested her head & closed her eyes--
what gonna happen in future...
๐Ÿ˜•

***

Dev came out his thots when he realized she stood next to him. A little scared to look up...she avoided looking at him...

Pallaviโ€”Mr Khanna, just wanted to say thank youโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š thank you for calling us to Mumbai and for letting us stay here andโ€ฆuhmmmโ€ฆThank you,for everything. I hope we are not causing you any trouble & I am also sorryโ€ฆaapke ghar pe humari wajah seโ€ฆ.

Dev(interrupted)โ€”plzzโ€ฆmujhse sorry ya Thank you kehne ki zarut nahi haiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š aur jo bhi hua usme tum dono ki galti nahi thiโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š & tum dono ko mujhe yaha bulana hi thaโ€ฆKyunki main waha aakar nahi reh sakta tha...na hi itni door se sab manage karna possible hota ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š isliye Maine wohi kiya jo mujhe karna chaiye tha๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š โ€ฆinfact yeh sab mujhe kuch waqt pehle karna chaiye thaโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I know tumhe bahut se sawaal poochne hongeโ€ฆ you must be having a lot of doubts โ€ฆbut I promise we will clear them very soon๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š . (gave a small formal smile)โ€ฆ As for now just go to bed. Maine massi se baat karli haiโ€ฆtumhe aur khushi ko kisi baat ki problem nahi hogiโ€ฆ.dono behne saath rahogi toh you won't feel lost in your new house.. So, .Get comfortable here and we will talk tomorrow okay๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š,(pallavi just nodded) So, Good nightโ€ฆ

Pallavi-- Good night Mr.Khanna...

She stood there until she saw the silver car drive through the gatesโ€ฆ

***

Pallavi & khushi were given same room as Dev had asked massiโ€ฆ It was a good spacious roomโ€ฆb'fully decorated โ€ฆ

Though whole family had been so warm & welcomingโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š being in a new place, new house among new peopleโ€ฆit was difficult for Pallavi to sleepโ€ฆ she had a lot of questions in her mind...The feeling of uneasiness of being at a new place didn't leave her...

She kept looking at the ceiling in the middle of the huge bed in the room, Mausi got ready for them. She looked at Khushi who slept peacefullyโ€ฆ Finally giving upโ€ฆShe got up to sit in the terraceโ€ฆwhich she had loved as soon as she saw itโ€ฆit had small swing tooโ€ฆ She sat there lost in thotsโ€ฆ how within a month her whole life took a complete 360 turn โ€ฆ.

***

Barely 22, and in charge of the well being of her younger sister, though with her Mother's constant ill health she had been taking care of her mother & sisterโ€ฆbut now it was more difficult of managing everything, her studies, with job & home to take care ofโ€ฆ

Being not only a sister but also a mother, a father, a friend and most important a guideโ€ฆ. To her Choti "Khushi," as she lovingly called her, Khushi looks upto herโ€ฆfor every decision, she seeks her guidance... Khushi has only her as a family...

She saw her mother working so hard after their father's death, she has seen her working day & night so that she cud give her daughters the best, with No help from any relatives as her mother had eloped & married a middle class, orphan school teacher, her family broke all ties from them๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

Pallavi was only 15โ€ฆwhen her father passed away, but whatever happened, she then had her mother to look after themโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ŠIt gave her a sense of securityโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

But now she was alone, somewhere she was scared... scared that she was responsible not only for herself but for her choti's life too...What if something goes wrong...what if she messes it up She is Scared to be in charge of her most precious possession in the world...

She might be a matured girlโ€ฆbut still somewhere she seeks securityโ€ฆseeks that feeling of someone is there for herโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š someone is there to be her strength... if anything goes wrong there shud be some one to tell her, everything gonna be OKโ€ฆ.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

She had been little releived when few days back she received...massi's call telling her abt the will & guardian... & Dev had asked both of them to come...since khushi cant come & stay alone in Mumbai... She will have to come along... Though Massi had cleared her doubts abt Dev...she briefed her abt Dev's & his Badi Maa's relation...

Pallavi was surprised...thot to herself โ€”Par Mumma Papa ne toh kabhi kuch nahin bataya ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• to ab yeh guardian kahan se aagaya...?Pallavi tried to recollect if anytime her parents told them abt any1 living in Mumbai...but she cudn't remember any...

2 days later their family friend & lawyer visited them...& showed her the will & gave her tickets to mumbai...

Inspite of being apprehensive... Pallavi was so gratefulโ€ฆ She thanked God a million times that day. Of course she was scared to go to Mumbai and live in a strange city and in a strangers house, ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• but if there was some1 whom her parents loved & trusted so much to give him responsibility of Khushiโ€ฆ he could never be a bad person.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š


Pallaviโ€”agar mumma papa ne unhe Chotti ka guardian banaya hai toh kuch soch ke hi banaya hogaโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šwoh khushi ke liye koi galat faisla nahi lenge...


Now She would have some emotional support in raising her sister and she hoped she could continue upholding the values her parents wanted in them.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š She could not afford to make any mistakes in taking care Khushi, and now she would have someone who would help her and would point out things before she made a serious fault. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Pallavi decided it all ...that. till the time khushi would turn 18 she would try to get a good job and a nice apartmentโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š She will have 8 months to do that.

For advice about her sister upbringing, she now had the option of discussing with their newfound guardian. She would make sure gets well educated and well settled, and she could even give her life to accomplish that. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Pallavi looked towards her mother's photo seeking her blessingโ€ฆ also she asked God to give strength so that she makes a good life for her Chotiโ€”

Bhagwaan aapne humari zindagi mein Mr. Khanna ko bhej kar mujh par bahut bara ehsaan kiya hai. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Ab mujhe utna dar nahi lagta hai. Mere baad bhi koi khushi ka dhyan rakhega, is baat ki khushi rahegiโ€ฆ Thank you โ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š

She prayed silently againโ€ฆto her Godโ€ฆ"Ram ji", she had a deep faith inโ€ฆ the only one with whom she ever expressed her insecurities, her fearsโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

***

She dreaded what future has in store for her ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• ... the insecurity she felt about their future doesn't seem to vanish by coming to Mumbai...as she had thought few days back ๐Ÿ˜•

Lost in thots she dozed off...sitting there on the swing...

โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ.to be continuedโ€ฆ..








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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Haila ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ M i early this time ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...there is a reason behind it ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† coz half of part was already written when i posted first part ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† rest got completed today ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† so there is an early UD ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜† Another reason being... response to this part wud decided whether i shud write Part 3 or not ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...

This time i am literally scared before postingโ€ฆ that is why in first part itself I said that I am apprehensive abt the subject of the FFโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

so before asking usual question ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† whether part is OK or not โ€ฆI am scared how many wud be appreciating itโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†

As many had guessed Dev-Pallavi are surely leads in the story & they gonna be romantically pairedโ€ฆbut I am not sure after reading the part how many gona support their relationโ€ฆ๐Ÿค”

So I am dreading if this gonna be last part of FFโ€ฆ& I wud hope its notโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

I am not supporting or promoting an extra-marital affair, โ€ฆor breaking a marital relationโ€ฆFor me its just a piece of fictionโ€ฆjust a storyโ€ฆan idea which is developed into a story...As a reader you might be having your own perceptionโ€ฆyour own view abt the subject โ€ฆ& if you personally don't agree with Dev-Pallavi's relation & u feel that its wrongโ€ฆplzz free to tell meโ€ฆ& let me knowโ€ฆI wont mind stopping the FF. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Also somethings to be clearedโ€ฆ there has been no past-history...no bachpan ka pyaar b/w Dev pallaviโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† they haven't met each other earlier โ€ฆmost importantly there is 13 yrs age difference b/w themโ€ฆthat is the main reason whyโ€ฆDev remembers pallavi & she doesn'tโ€ฆ. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Wud be waiting for comments ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š this time even from silent readers this time ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Š


Hope โ€ฆ Part 2 hope its OK ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...As I always say ... njoy reading... ...

Any suggestions, criticisms.. all are welcome ๐Ÿค— .

but commenting is necessary'๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† silent readers can press the like button to let me know u liked reading the part'๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Keep Smiling & Njoy Reading ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Love Purnima ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Another great part...

Pls dont even think abt discontinuing this fic...

This Maya i hate her she was so rude to Dev her hubby...

There is surely something in the past that happened that dev married Maya...

He didn't mention to anyone why he got them here or about Maya to Massi... He keeps everything to himself...

There is no problem in moving away from a relationship if u r not happy in it...

Dev being attracted to pallavi is natural as his relationship with Maya is not good at all...

The part seemed small...

Will be waiting for the next part...

One more thing don't bother about what others think abt the fic u hv ur fans who love ur fic... So pls no stopping...

Cont asap...
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Edited by golu_1677 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
loved the update..aaaye haaaye!!!! kabaadaa ho gaya๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...hamare mr.khanna ki to mrs.khanna bhi hai๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ณ...vo alag baat hai ki yahan mr. and mrs. khanna nahin balki mr.khanna v/s mrs.khanna chal raha hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...hahahahaha...
abhi to pallavi aayi hi hai aur mr.khanna payal ki awaaz sunn kar muskura rahe hain๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...aage aage pata nahin kya hoga๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰...
waiting to read more of it๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ..
cont soon๐Ÿ˜Š

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