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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvraj4ever


loved the first part...it was really interesting...loved every character esp dev😳😳..--abhi se πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

.i love rajeev in intense roles😳...---dats good πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

so pallavi is the one???😳...we have yet to see more of her..--- yup 😳😳 abhi toh entry li hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜† .
but who is the person in the end??????😲😲---lets see πŸ˜³πŸ˜›
cont soon and congrats for the new fic..πŸ‘--thanku





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18


Hello Di😊--- hello πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


Another ff from you thank you for fulfilling our wishπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ-- πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ready to get bored πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

So here Raj is Dev like Laard Governor typical workoholic bussiness menπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰--- πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Laard Governor πŸ€”

but there is something which made him like this but what is that decision which made him like thisπŸ˜•πŸ˜•---πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ will let u know soon πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

His friend Sid and all his family members are very good especially the lilttle one RJπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†--- yeahh πŸ˜†πŸ˜† & he is not literally little...boy is in college πŸ˜›πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

So there are two girls but who is the one that belongs to DevπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†--- it gonna be pallavi i guess πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† cant make less than 18 khushi fall in love with him πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† my poor Dev wud be in jail πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

And in the last who is he or she which appeared to say Ruko ye nahi ho saktaπŸ˜•πŸ˜†πŸ˜†--- πŸ˜‰ lets see πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Continue soon😊






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do we get an update today???



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hopefully yes... its 70% complete πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ...


okk.. will b w8ng
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waiting for the update..πŸ˜ƒ
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Part 2..



Prachi opened the door & was surprised to see Dev at this hour it was late at nightβ€¦πŸ˜²πŸ˜² also he hadn't informed even he wud be coming.

Prachi(surprised)β€”Dev, tum is waqt yaha sab theek toh hai?πŸ˜•

Dev(assured her)β€”sab theek hai bhabi…I hope aap log soye nahi the abhi tak?

Prachiβ€”nahi not yet, aaj kabir office se late aaye the toh we gonna have a late dinner…

Dev(seeing Prachi not letting him in)β€”ab yaha darwaze pe khada rakhengi ya …andar aa sakte hai πŸ˜•πŸ˜†

Prachi(realizing)β€”oh sorry! Come on inβ€¦πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š

Massi Kabir Rj were also surprised to see Dev at this hour & asked same question as Prachiβ€¦πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Dev(joked)β€”aap log itne surprise kyun ho rahe hai?πŸ˜•πŸ˜† I didn't knew mere achanak aane se yeh reaction milegaβ€¦πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Ranvijayβ€”ab surprise toh honge Bhai…humesha hume aapko bulana padta hai aaj aap bin bulaye aagaye toh zor ka jhatka zor se lag gaya…

Dev(just smiled)β€”actually main aap logon ke liye surprise hi laya tha…infact do surprisesβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

By then Pallavi & khushi also joined them…Massi was very happy seeing them there…hugged both of themβ€¦πŸ€—

Massiβ€”Pallo,khushi…tum dono yaha…so good to see u…main dev se kehne hi wali thi…ki tum dono ke aate hi mujhse milne le aaye… (to dev) yeh tune acha kiya dev inhe milne le aayaβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Devβ€”sirf milne nahi…yeh abse yahi rahengi …Hope its Ok with all of uπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Šβ€¦(tried to explain) who main

Massi (interrupted)β€”sirf Ok nahi…yeh toh bahut acha haiβ€¦πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ mujhe bhi company mil jayegi...waise bhi pura din akele rehti hoon kabir office chala jata hai, Ranvijay college…aur Prachi apne boutique …main bore ho jati hoon yeh dono pariyaan mere saath rahengi toh mera bhi mann lag jayegaβ€¦πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Devβ€”Thank you Massi, 😊😊 I know inhe mujhe apne saath rakhna chaiye tha…ye meri zimmedari hai…par aap janti hai…kaam mein busy rehta hoon , zyadatar out of town bhi jana padta hai… aise mein theek se dhyan nahi de pata inhe…aur naya shehar hai, nayi jagah, naye log …aap logon ke saath rahengi toh they will feel betterβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š So,Thank you so muchβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ

Pallavi looked at him surprised he didn't told anything abt what happened back at house…Here Dev is giving totally a different reasonβ€¦πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

***

Back at Dev's house

Before Ramsingh could answer Dev the voice of a woman could be heard.

Both girls looked back to see a woman in her early thirties, wearing a black designer dress...

Woman--'Don't you dare Dev Khanna 😑😑😑 !!!!!! Who the hell are you to decide β€¦πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ is ghar mein kaun rahega? Who the hell are these girls yeh mere ghar mein kya kar rahi hain?😑😑


Dev had back to the women…he turned back & in a very composed way–Chillane ki koi zarut nahi hai…

Not paying heed to his request she pointed her finger towards him and the woman started shouting again

Woman-- Don't you dare to tell m…..!!!!😑😑

Before she could finish her sentence Dev raised his right hand to indicate her to stop and said with a strict voice that could scare anybody

Devβ€”Maine kaha na…chillane ki zarut nahi hai Maya 😑😑 ek baar mein baat samajh nahi aati tumheβ€¦πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ aur rahi in ladkiyon ki baat to yeh meri mehmaan hai, Badi Maa ki betiyan. Yeh yahi rahengi…Understood😑😑

Maya(angry) -Noway…Dev Khanna… . !😑😑😑😑

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Pallavi's eyes widened in shock 😲😲 not because the woman just said they couldn't live in that house, but the woman had the guts to defy what Mr. Khanna said 😲😲 …she thot to herself… Agar is tarah mujhse baat ki hoti toh inki baat mana karna toh door πŸ˜•πŸ˜• …meri awaaz bhi nahi nikaltiβ€¦πŸ˜•πŸ˜• In this tone of voice I would probably have said 'yes' and 'amen' to about anything & everything he said...


Her chain of thots broke when Maya continued to shout….

Maya-- I will not let any1 in my house Dev 😑😑😑 …. Yeh ghar tumhare baap ka nahin hai ki tum kisiko bhi yahaan par rakh lo, samjhe!!! 😑😑😑 Hote kaun ho tum?inhe yaha rehne ke liye kehne waleβ€¦πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ Yeh mera ghar hai…koi Khairaati dhramshala nahi…jahan tum apne so called mehmaano ko rehne ke liye le aao…already tumhe is ghar mein bardasht kar rahi hoon wohi bahut hai…. 😑😑😑 (dev tried to say something) Dev, 😑😑 tumse behas karne ka nahi mujhe shauk hai…Nahi mere paas faltu waqt hai barbaad karne ke liyeβ€¦πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ already I am late…& main chahungi jab main wapis aau toh mujhe mera ghar Ghar hi lage Dharamshala nahiβ€¦πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ (abt to leave but turned back )& mind u Dev Khanna… 😑😑 Just because we are married iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki tum jo kahoge main manugi…tum😑😑

Dev (his voice sounded like the thunder) –Stop it right there Maya! 😑😑 Ek bhi lafz aage mat kehna!... baar baar mujhe jatane ki zarut nahi hai…Mujhe already pata hai ki yeh ghar mere baap ka nahin, tumhare baap ka hai, 😑😑 lekin Ghar mere naam par zaroor hai… Aur rahi humari marital status ki baat, to yeh main sab ke saamne discuss nahin karna chahta hoon!! 😑😑 & you know me mujhe explaination dene ki adat nahi haiβ€¦πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ Tumhare liye itna janna kafi hai... ki yeh dono yahan rahengi...Hope its clear enough😑😑😑

Both Pallavi & khushi felt out of place...πŸ˜•πŸ˜• They never really saw a married couple fight...πŸ˜•
coincidently they happen to be the reason of fight... this was open hostilityβ€¦πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Ramsingh who was still standing there, gave the girls a reassuring smile and continued to do what he was doing namely looking down at the marble floor.

Maya finally left withβ€”I don't care a damn Dev Khanna 😑😑 … mujhe apne ghar mein koi bahar wale pasand nahi haiβ€¦πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ (coming closer to him so that only he can hear) & yes if u are thinking them to send them to ur outhouse toh tum jante ho it might just not be safe there…you never know inke saath kuch bhi ho saktaβ€¦πŸ˜•πŸ˜• baad mein mat kehna I didn't warn you… 😑

Maya gave a last look at her husband & walked out giving an angry look to the girls. 😑😑

Dev
(still there was anger in his voice)β€”Ram Singh! Inka samaan lejao...guest room mein (Dev turned around to climb the stairs again)

Its when pallavi tried to say something in an unsteady voice. –Uhmmm (She was nervous seeing Dev's anger).Mr Khanna…(dev turned to look back at her) agar koi problem ho toh(she fumbled…as she was nervous) hum kahin aur reh lenge…we can understand… it's okay.

Dev(very calmly)β€”tum log yahi rahoge…& its end of the discussion…(controlling his temper) Actually …maine Maya ko pehle nahi bataya tha ki tum dono aane wale ho…& she doesn't like surprises…toh gusse mein kafi kuch bol gayi…plz don't mind her…uski taraf se I am sorryβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š Main usse baat kar lunga she will understand…I will manage her …tum log yahan reh sakte ho… (he turned to go back when)

Ramsingh though being a little elder than Dev… still apprehensive to defy dev's orders…tried to say something

Ramsingh(in a low voice so that only Dev cud hear) β€”Dev Beta who…main keh raha thi ki… (dev indicated him to continue) .Maya madam maraaz ho jayengi...aur koi problem hui toh…Maya madam ne inhe kuch kaha toh...

Devβ€”tumhe pata hai Ramsingh jab tak main hoon aisa kuch nahi hoga…

Ramsinghβ€”par aap toh zyadatar bahar rehte hai…aapke peeche se kuch kaha tohβ€¦πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Dev agreed Ramsingh has a valid point…he cant be here 24*7 to keep a eye on them….then thot to himself the only place they wud be comfortable wud be only one…he wud take them there.😊😊

Pallavi thought that they landed from a boxing match with fighting spouses into a tennis match where they were the tennis balls b/w boss & Master..πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Dev(finally deciding)β€”theek hai Ramsingh inka samaan car mein Rakhwa do… main dekhta hoon…(to girls) tab tak aap dono kuch lengi…tea coffee…anything (Both nodded NO & mumbled thank you) theek hai…phir chaliye… it is already quite late.

***

Now here they are at Khanna house… 😊😊

Pallavi came out of her thots when she saw Massi almost scolding Dev…

Massi(pretended to be angry) β€”lagta hai mera thapad khane ka man kar raha hai...shayad isliye thank you bol raha haiβ€¦πŸ˜‘πŸ˜† tujhe pata hai teri problem kya hai…tu sabke liye sab kuch kar sakta, par tere liye koi kuch kare toh tujhe lagta hai who ehsaan kar raha haiβ€¦πŸ˜• main koi ehsaan nahi kar rahi…Kiran meri liye Sudha ki tarah hi thi…uske saath zyada waqt nahi bita saki…par ab uski betiyon ke saath waqt mila hai...yeh yaha rahengi toh sabse zyada mujhe khushi hogi… πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š

Dev (nodded)β€”Ok massi thank you nahi kahunga…happy (to kabir) Bhai aapse kuch discuss karna tha…(kabir nodded)

They both were abt to leave when Massi stopped Dev…knowing there might be something business related to discuss abt… she knew it wud take time. πŸ˜†

Massiβ€”Dev, sirf kabir se baat karke wapis mat chale jana…tera liye bhi dinner lagwa rahi hoon chup chap kha lenaβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š (dev tried to refuse) aur yeh mat kehna tu dinner kar chuka hai…waise bhi yeh bachiyan bhi dinner karengi…so jaldi aana… 😊😊

Dev knew there is no point in arguing he just agreed to massi... while he was leaving ...she saw Both girls comfortably chatting with Prachi & Rjβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š Massi instructing Prachi to show them their rooms…also asking them to feel at home, introduced them to Prachi,& Rj.. He knew it's a good decision he took, they will be comfortable here more than in his house or outhouse fending for themselvesβ€¦πŸ˜•

***

back in another room

Kabirβ€”kya baat hai Devβ€¦πŸ˜•

Devβ€”Bhai …ek toh aapse khushi ke admission ki baat karni thi, maine Rj ke college ke principal se baat karli hai πŸ˜Šβ€¦aap baki ki formalities dekh lena…& (giving him the file) yeh in dono ke insurance papers aur baki documents hai jo lawyer ne bhijwaye hai…baba aur badi maa ki jo bhi savings thi & ghar ke papers…sab kuch isme hai…baki aur koi expenses honge toh mujhe bata dena… 😊😊

Kabir (interrupted)β€”Dev yeh tu, hum log sambhal lenge…yeh dono koi bhoj nahi banegi hum parβ€¦πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Devβ€”I know Bhai, but still badi maa inki zimmedari mujhe dekar gayi hai…so yeh meri duty hai ki main inka dhyan rakhu 😊😊 …I will have to take care of them… plz bhai…hope u understand…

Kabir (sighed)β€”theek hai…jaise tu chahe…(its when he noticed Pallavi at the door) pallavi tum yaha…

Pallavi (got little nervous composing herself)β€”ermm who...Massi …aap dono ko dinner ke liye bula rahi thi…

Kabirβ€”Oh haan…chal dev…warna massi ko janta…mere liye nahi…par tere liye yaha khana lekar aajayengi… πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Dev joined all of them at dinner…Dinner passed by to quickly for the girls

After a long time…they got to enjoy a dinner with other people besides themselves.😊😊 ..Every member seemed to have accepted the fact that they have 2 new members in their house and they looked pleased with it. 😊😊 Every member tried their level best to make the girls feel comfortable.😊😊

Rj cracked his stupid jokes…to make them smileβ€¦πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Massi pampered them with asking them for more food…also asked them to call her massi instead of Aunty… Prachi & Kabir also made them feel at home… 😊😊

***

After dinner as he was leaving... Dev asked Massi again...

Dev-- Mausi aapse kuch baat karni hai….(massi indicated to continue) aap ko bura to nahin laga ki mai bina pooche in dono ko yahan….I mean…

Massi(interrupted)β€”Maine pehle bhi Kaha hai Dev…yeh yaha rahengi… toh hume khushi hogiβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š koi problem nahi haiβ€¦πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ aur dono itni sweet hai ...Main toh pehle hi inhe saath lane wali thi…par ye aayi hi nahi… (added sweetly) uparse Kiran aur Shrikant ki bachchiyan hai. Yahan nahin aati to aur kahan jaati.

Devβ€”Thank you mausi, (seeing massi glaring him..he just smiled)…I know aapne thanx ke liye mana kiya hai… but still aapne meri problem solve ki hai…(sighed) main darasal inhe apne paas rakhna chaahta tha but...

Massi (worriedly)β€”Dev, Maya ne kuch kaha kya?πŸ˜•Did she do something πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Dev(instantly) -- Nahin aisa kuch nahi hai, it's just that ....(she knew he was lying...Dev changed the topic) anyways mujhe un dono ke saath kuch baatein discuss karni hai lekin aaj nahin, kal kar lungaβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š Aaj bahut raat ho gayi hai…& Mausi aap inke liye woh barawala karma ready karwadena…dono ke liye jagah nayi hai…isliye saath rahengi toh acha rahega…

Massiβ€”theek hai…Main prachi se keh dungi...😊

Dev-- Accha mausi main chalta hoon, (hugged her) i will see you tomorrowβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š Bye & goodnight

Dev walked out... wishing Rj & prachi also goodnight...

He was abt to get into the Car… when he heard someone call his name…Mr.Khanna…

He turned around and saw Pallavi aproching him… heard the same sweet "Cham-cham-cham" he heard the last time he had walked toward his car earlier... Unknowingly he smiled again...like hours back…. 😊😊

***

As Dev led had them outside the house towards his car… Khushi's eyes had widened seeing the beautiful silver car that stood there... 😊😊

Pallavi was in deep thoughts to notice anything... 'I don't want to burden anybody, maybe I made a mistake coming here…shayad.hume nahi aana chaiye tha… πŸ˜•

Dev could notice the excitement of khushi…but wondered why the elder one was so quiet, was she walking behind him or did she stop midway?

Then he heard the sweetest noise he ever heard on this compound.😊😊 A faint "cham- cham-cham" was following him. His lips formed a strange curve. He smiled!😊😊 After such a long time he smiledβ€¦πŸ˜Š genuinely smiled coz he wanted to 😊😊 …he smiled to himself…on his own…just not to fool othersβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š it was the sweetest sound he heard! Even he himself was taken by surprise.

He suppressed the urge to look back and find out who gave him this melodious reason to smile...😊

Dev asked driver to call for the day as he gonna drive himself… also asked Ramsingh to make other workers to retire for the day…


As Dev took the driving seat he looked at the two girls who were still standing and looking at the car and elder one was still in deep thoughts.

Dev(clearing his throat)β€”ahem, Chale… One of you can come and sit in the front … 😊

Khushi just nodded…

Throughout the drive Dev kept glancing in rear view mirror & kept an eye on Pallavi who sat in back seat still lost in thots...


Pallavi rested her head & closed her eyes--
what gonna happen in future...
πŸ˜•

***

Dev came out his thots when he realized she stood next to him. A little scared to look up...she avoided looking at him...

Pallaviβ€”Mr Khanna, just wanted to say thank youβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š thank you for calling us to Mumbai and for letting us stay here and…uhmmm…Thank you,for everything. I hope we are not causing you any trouble & I am also sorry…aapke ghar pe humari wajah se….

Dev(interrupted)β€”plzz…mujhse sorry ya Thank you kehne ki zarut nahi haiβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š aur jo bhi hua usme tum dono ki galti nahi thiβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š & tum dono ko mujhe yaha bulana hi tha…Kyunki main waha aakar nahi reh sakta tha...na hi itni door se sab manage karna possible hota 😊😊 isliye Maine wohi kiya jo mujhe karna chaiye tha😊😊 …infact yeh sab mujhe kuch waqt pehle karna chaiye thaβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š I know tumhe bahut se sawaal poochne honge… you must be having a lot of doubts …but I promise we will clear them very soon😊😊 . (gave a small formal smile)… As for now just go to bed. Maine massi se baat karli hai…tumhe aur khushi ko kisi baat ki problem nahi hogi….dono behne saath rahogi toh you won't feel lost in your new house.. So, .Get comfortable here and we will talk tomorrow okay😊😊,(pallavi just nodded) So, Good night…

Pallavi-- Good night Mr.Khanna...

She stood there until she saw the silver car drive through the gates…

***

Pallavi & khushi were given same room as Dev had asked massi… It was a good spacious room…b'fully decorated …

Though whole family had been so warm & welcoming… 😊😊 being in a new place, new house among new people…it was difficult for Pallavi to sleep… she had a lot of questions in her mind...The feeling of uneasiness of being at a new place didn't leave her...

She kept looking at the ceiling in the middle of the huge bed in the room, Mausi got ready for them. She looked at Khushi who slept peacefully… Finally giving up…She got up to sit in the terrace…which she had loved as soon as she saw it…it had small swing too… She sat there lost in thots… how within a month her whole life took a complete 360 turn ….

***

Barely 22, and in charge of the well being of her younger sister, though with her Mother's constant ill health she had been taking care of her mother & sister…but now it was more difficult of managing everything, her studies, with job & home to take care of…

Being not only a sister but also a mother, a father, a friend and most important a guide…. To her Choti "Khushi," as she lovingly called her, Khushi looks upto her…for every decision, she seeks her guidance... Khushi has only her as a family...

She saw her mother working so hard after their father's death, she has seen her working day & night so that she cud give her daughters the best, with No help from any relatives as her mother had eloped & married a middle class, orphan school teacher, her family broke all ties from themπŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Pallavi was only 15…when her father passed away, but whatever happened, she then had her mother to look after themβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠIt gave her a sense of securityβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

But now she was alone, somewhere she was scared... scared that she was responsible not only for herself but for her choti's life too...What if something goes wrong...what if she messes it up She is Scared to be in charge of her most precious possession in the world...

She might be a matured girl…but still somewhere she seeks security…seeks that feeling of someone is there for herβ€¦πŸ˜Š someone is there to be her strength... if anything goes wrong there shud be some one to tell her, everything gonna be OK….😊😊

She had been little releived when few days back she received...massi's call telling her abt the will & guardian... & Dev had asked both of them to come...since khushi cant come & stay alone in Mumbai... She will have to come along... Though Massi had cleared her doubts abt Dev...she briefed her abt Dev's & his Badi Maa's relation...

Pallavi was surprised...thot to herself β€”Par Mumma Papa ne toh kabhi kuch nahin bataya πŸ˜•πŸ˜• to ab yeh guardian kahan se aagaya...?Pallavi tried to recollect if anytime her parents told them abt any1 living in Mumbai...but she cudn't remember any...

2 days later their family friend & lawyer visited them...& showed her the will & gave her tickets to mumbai...

Inspite of being apprehensive... Pallavi was so grateful… She thanked God a million times that day. Of course she was scared to go to Mumbai and live in a strange city and in a strangers house, πŸ˜•πŸ˜• but if there was some1 whom her parents loved & trusted so much to give him responsibility of Khushi… he could never be a bad person.😊😊


Pallaviβ€”agar mumma papa ne unhe Chotti ka guardian banaya hai toh kuch soch ke hi banaya hoga… 😊😊woh khushi ke liye koi galat faisla nahi lenge...


Now She would have some emotional support in raising her sister and she hoped she could continue upholding the values her parents wanted in them.😊😊 She could not afford to make any mistakes in taking care Khushi, and now she would have someone who would help her and would point out things before she made a serious fault. 😊😊

Pallavi decided it all ...that. till the time khushi would turn 18 she would try to get a good job and a nice apartmentβ€¦πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š She will have 8 months to do that.

For advice about her sister upbringing, she now had the option of discussing with their newfound guardian. She would make sure gets well educated and well settled, and she could even give her life to accomplish that. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Pallavi looked towards her mother's photo seeking her blessing… also she asked God to give strength so that she makes a good life for her Chotiβ€”

Bhagwaan aapne humari zindagi mein Mr. Khanna ko bhej kar mujh par bahut bara ehsaan kiya hai. 😊😊 Ab mujhe utna dar nahi lagta hai. Mere baad bhi koi khushi ka dhyan rakhega, is baat ki khushi rahegi… Thank you β€¦πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š

She prayed silently again…to her God…"Ram ji", she had a deep faith in… the only one with whom she ever expressed her insecurities, her fears… 😊😊

***

She dreaded what future has in store for her πŸ˜•πŸ˜• ... the insecurity she felt about their future doesn't seem to vanish by coming to Mumbai...as she had thought few days back πŸ˜•

Lost in thots she dozed off...sitting there on the swing...

……….to be continued…..








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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Haila 😲😲 M i early this time πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...there is a reason behind it πŸ˜†πŸ˜† coz half of part was already written when i posted first part πŸ˜†πŸ˜† rest got completed today πŸ˜†πŸ˜† so there is an early UD πŸ˜›πŸ˜† Another reason being... response to this part wud decided whether i shud write Part 3 or not πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

This time i am literally scared before posting… that is why in first part itself I said that I am apprehensive abt the subject of the FFβ€¦πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

so before asking usual question πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† whether part is OK or not …I am scared how many wud be appreciating itβ€¦πŸ˜•πŸ˜†

As many had guessed Dev-Pallavi are surely leads in the story & they gonna be romantically paired…but I am not sure after reading the part how many gona support their relationβ€¦πŸ€”

So I am dreading if this gonna be last part of FF…& I wud hope its not… πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

I am not supporting or promoting an extra-marital affair, …or breaking a marital relation…For me its just a piece of fiction…just a story…an idea which is developed into a story...As a reader you might be having your own perception…your own view abt the subject …& if you personally don't agree with Dev-Pallavi's relation & u feel that its wrong…plzz free to tell me…& let me know…I wont mind stopping the FF. 😊😊

Also somethings to be cleared… there has been no past-history...no bachpan ka pyaar b/w Dev pallaviβ€¦πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† they haven't met each other earlier …most importantly there is 13 yrs age difference b/w them…that is the main reason why…Dev remembers pallavi & she doesn't…. 😊😊

Wud be waiting for comments πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š this time even from silent readers this time πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š


Hope … Part 2 hope its OK 😊😊...As I always say ... njoy reading... ...

Any suggestions, criticisms.. all are welcome πŸ€— .

but commenting is necessary'πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† silent readers can press the like button to let me know u liked reading the part'😳😳


Keep Smiling & Njoy Reading πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Love Purnima 😊😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Another great part...

Pls dont even think abt discontinuing this fic...

This Maya i hate her she was so rude to Dev her hubby...

There is surely something in the past that happened that dev married Maya...

He didn't mention to anyone why he got them here or about Maya to Massi... He keeps everything to himself...

There is no problem in moving away from a relationship if u r not happy in it...

Dev being attracted to pallavi is natural as his relationship with Maya is not good at all...

The part seemed small...

Will be waiting for the next part...

One more thing don't bother about what others think abt the fic u hv ur fans who love ur fic... So pls no stopping...

Cont asap...
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Edited by golu_1677 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
loved the update..aaaye haaaye!!!! kabaadaa ho gaya😭😭...hamare mr.khanna ki to mrs.khanna bhi hai😑😳...vo alag baat hai ki yahan mr. and mrs. khanna nahin balki mr.khanna v/s mrs.khanna chal raha haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...hahahahaha...
abhi to pallavi aayi hi hai aur mr.khanna payal ki awaaz sunn kar muskura rahe hain😳😳...aage aage pata nahin kya hogaπŸ˜³πŸ˜‰...
waiting to read more of itπŸ‘β­οΈ..
cont soon😊

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