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hey guys its me fiza you all may know me from the pkyek,ipkknd and ehmmbh forums i have written a lot of ff on arshi,abhiya,KaSh and may more im writting an new ff on our favorite new hot and happening couple RanYA its diffrent story hope you like it

tere ishq pe mar jaawaan

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a dangerously risky love story

thank u lisa for the banner*

Trailer for my ff
thank you sneha ...i luv it

Character Sketch

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Mahendra Pratap AKA MP: 31yrs old well educate,d rich, notorious guy and one of the most wanted men in india 'ATB is searching for him'. to the world he is a ruthless..heartless.. cut throat guy .. he doesn't have any ounce of remorse for his wrong doing ..it doesn't affect him at all that his work involes him killing people.. ' ' but deep down inside he does have compassion he isn't as harstone as he seems ' underneath that animal there still good in him and that goodness was brought out thanks to the love of his life Aaliya ..he is his world his life he can do anything for her he loves more then his life but regrets what happened in that horrible raid1yr ago he knows he is responsible for what happened to mahliya and knows that aaliya cannot forgive him for that 'distances have creeped up in there relationship solely because of him 'he has lives this dark underworld life eversince he was a kid he knows nothing else ' even though he has blood on his hands he some how manges to get sleep at night .

Aaliya Hassan : 24yrs old beautiful , educated sweet simple ,innocent girl 'use to live life to the fullest'who was carefree 'who had dreams of becoming a singer and falling in love and having a family of her own . she is a kid at heart '.brave , just fearless ,confident and strong until the day she meets mp her life gets turned upside down the love and family life the normal world she wanted was all so complicated now 'she never knew the man she thought she loved was 'a man coonected with such a lifestyle'she some how adjusted tolerated everything just when things looked to change and finally fall in to place'.thats when mp is life style ruined her ' mahliya was taken from her' and life was at a standstill 'until she realizes she has a second chance at love with none other then mp right hand man Ranveer

Ranveer Chauhan 29 yrs old college friends with mp ' he is his right hand man known mp for the last 9 yrs 'known aaliya for past 6 yrs'he is drop dead gorgeous'chick magnet ..he works with MP but not as heartless like him'he is sweet, caring, compassionate 'but can be brutal when he wants'handles all of MPs major deals' knows that he has mP trust and conifednce '.has a deep secret that no one knows ' he is a undercover agent and been working on MP case for the last 9 yrs ..so far no one knows his truth '. Never lets anything come between is only mission to expose mp 'until his emotions take over and he falls in love with aaliya ..he feels her pain and deeply care for her 'he doesn't care that by doing this he will betray mp 'either way he is going do that but ..will his love for aaliya risk his mission will his 9yrs of work just go down the drain '.he feels responsible for what happened to mahiliya 'because of his mission and small mistake

Malika :28 yrs old sexy,confident, she is a undercover agent ranveers best friend she too is apart of the mission she to is been working with mp for the past 9 yrs acts as raveers gf part of the mission 'is very close to aaliya she is likea big sister to her'feels for her and knows aaliya is innocent in all this she desevers ranveer life cause fater the mission only he can give aaliya a normal life 'always loved ranveer but wants him to get hus love aaliya

Intro

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Life such a small word that means so much'how we live it 'what happens in it '.why its not always fair..it can change in a second 'lifestyles'lavishly or simple 'paths of it right and wrong

Just few things about it. this exactly what this story is about life' about how people live it in different world a dark world'world that isn't easy 'especially for one who doesn't know what they're getting them self's into 'when you meet someone how do you know who they are and how there life is 'we don't only with time and as we live life we do .. in this story we will see the life of Ranveer,Aaliya and Mahendra pratap how they all deal with it

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Teaser

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1year ago Flashback*

"Aaliya 'aaliya quickly get the 1st aid box" says mp

I run from the kitchen with the 1st aid box "kya hau" I ask

"Mahilya hurt her self while playing outside" says mp

I was standing there next them looking in aww just thinking

"A man who was use to killing people seeing blood all the time couldn't bare the sight of blood of a 2yr old his daughter's who triped while playing outside" '

"The concern he had .. the pain that she was in was if he was in pain the one to get hurt

Who would know that such a caring father and family man like him was a ruthless underworld don

Only if we had a normal life style life would be just perfect" I thought suddenly my train of thought was disrupted by

"Tell me my lil princess how did you fall down" asks mp

"Papa that sanjay uncles doggy chased me" says our sweet daughter mahilya

"RANVEER RANVEER" yells mp

Suddenly a tall man wearing black sleevless shirt (showing his biceps)and grey track pants walks in

"Yeah Mp tell me whats up ..kya hau" says Ranveer

"I want that sanjays dog finshed (covers his daughter's ears ) kill it" says mp

"Mp no it's a innocent dog bichara kuta no you will not ranveer it was a accident" I say

" Yes I will aaliya that dog made my princess bleed'.. ill do it my self" he takes his gun out and goes outside

"Ranveer can you please hold mahilya for a min ill just off the stove" I say

"Sure no problem" 'says ranveer

"Mahliya you are looking prettier everyday just like your mommy" says ranveer

"Ouch" I yelp

Ranveer puts mahiya down

"Let me see" (he grabs some burn cream)

"You cant see or what you burned your self be careful" he yells

Suddenly he I look up (eye lock think of RanYa's bg tune playing)

Mp walks in "aaliya what happened" says mp

"Mp she burned her self while cooking" says ranveer and moves away

"Aaliya I told you 100 times cooks hai you don't have do this are you ok" says mp

"Im fine ranveer put cream on it" I say

"Ranveer you are the best just like my lil brother (he hugs him) thank you" says mp

Suddenly ranveer cell rings

"Mp we all have to leave asap police have found out of our last consignment" says ranveer

"Ok no worries here are the fake passports we wil leave for thaiand tommrow" says mp

"But how will we so fast this is the third time in 8months we moved" I complain

"Listen aaliya this is how we live sometime we have to move around just listen to me" says mp

"Why should I mp im not even your wife just a girlfriend and the mother of our daughter 'you always do this our wedding is next week" I say

"We have to cancel it baby just till the coast is clear" 'says mp

"To hell with it mp we will never marry every time we want this happens" I yell

"Calm down both of you this not the time for this But mp i feel aaliya , and mahiya should go to her familys house they will be more safe" says ranveer

"No we will all be together nothing will happen" says mp

Mp and I go to pack

(Ranveer is looking at aaliya while she walking upstairs)

"She is looking stunning isn't she" says a voice

"Malika please you here anything important" says ranveer

"Well yes ofcourse you love her but are just hiding your feeling till when huh" says malika

"Please shut up nothing of the sort" says ranveer

"Anyways listen ranveer 'I gave the msg to the boss you guys will be in thialand right" says malika

"Yes" says ranveer

"Good he spoke to the police there" says malika

"Listen malika nothing should happen to aaliya and mahliya they must be safe and sound" says ranveer

"Don't worry kuch nahin hoga" says malika

Later that night

Mp,aaliya ,malika and ranveer at the dinner table

"Malika I love your style of sarees we have to go shopping" i say

"Yeah ofcourse yaar we are like sisters don't be formal we will go shopping ..shopping and me anytime" says malika

"I tell you ranveer these woman just need excuse to shop" says mp

"Exactly it torture to go with them" says ranveer

Suddenly there is knpck at the door

The door breaks down

Police come raiding in

"Ranveer you handel this aaliya come quick you and mahliya malika this way"

"No mp you go il be here with ranveer well come" says malikashe starts shooting at the police

He heads them out to the backway they are running

In the car

They are chasing after them

The car breaks down

They start running mp and ranveer malika are shooting the police while running suddenly in the middle of the shooting mahliya he shot

*flashback end*

Prensent day

"Sameer get me the next fight out to banglore aaliya isn't picking up the phone and ranveers cell is switched off im worried says mp

Later that night at ranveers place

In his bedroom

i and ranveer are in bed cuddled together after spending the eveing together

I slowly open my eyes and look at ranveer

I kiss him on the cheek and start to get out of bed when im locked ina back hug

"Where are going" sexy he says

"Ranveer its late let me go" i say

"Ok fine go" he says

"Wait ranveer Not till I hear those words from you"

"Oh which words he" says innocently questioning me

I look at him all sad

"Oh yes of course"

"You were great in bed" he winks with a smirk onhis face

I throw a pillow at him "you '.uff stop joking" I say all upset

"Ok ok I lo"

But before he can finsh

His cell rings

"Hello" says ranveer

"No mp I havent seen her in days i was out of town I got back this morning I went Singapore for I consignment ill go look for her" says ranveer he keeps the phone

i quickly gets dressed and leave

Right after I leave he to leaves

I stop at the mall for a bit

i reache home in my hands there are shopping bags

"Tum" I say while looking at mp and ranveer sitting there

"Where the hell were you" yells mp

"I don't need to tell you that where everi was I fine I had forgotten my pian my misery" I say

"Are you having affair" asks mp

"Yes I am but you are to blam mp only you " i say

Mp grabs the coffee table and throws it against the wall

"With who" he ask

" that doesn't matter" I say and go to my room and lock the door

"Ranveer I want that guy finshed" says mp

Don't worry we will find him says ranveer

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Liza. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start , Looking forward to reading more :)
Hope you update soon !
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Originally posted by: liza16

Great start , Looking forward to reading more :)
Hope you update soon !

thank you sweets i will šŸ˜›
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Great story cant wait for more šŸ‘
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Originally posted by: Hanaa91

Great story cant wait for more šŸ‘

thank u dear 😳
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Great start.

Do please continue.😊
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Great start!
Update soon!
Thanx 4 pm!
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This is soo good... And thanks a lot for thePM.. do PM me in future as well..😊
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Originally posted by: shazna123

Great start.

Do please continue.😊

thank u shazna i will 😃
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