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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sajdaluver

The Chapter Is Sooo Wonderful...👏

Never Thought Someone Could Concentrate And Write While Tired...And Yah The Precap Was Good...👍🏼I Luv Suspense...😎
Anyways The Whole Thing Was Really Very Well Written...👏
Plz Update Soon!!!!!! Just Can't Wait...🤪
Thnx For The Pm...😊

sweets thank you so much that you liked it ...means alot i was so damn tired ... iwas worried that it might have been crapy ... n your welcome😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: arul01

that was a wonderful chapter! but it scares me to think what will happen to ranveer when MP finds out abt aaliyah's and ranveer's affair! please update soon!

thanks dear ... well that we will wait n c 😈😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mythical

plz continue soon. will come back and read it once more. looove it. big hug.

aww ria ... thanks dear your so sweet 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was an awesome update😃

great job👏
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Originally posted by: ashy924

that was an awesome update😃


great job👏

thank u dear 😳
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ch 4: Beete Lamhe: those moments

Later that night at malika's house in Aaliya's room.

Aaliya was lying down on the bed resting when ranveer suddenly walks in with a bowl of

Strawberry ice cream . .. "Here you madam ice cream your favorite." Says Ranveer

Aaliya hugs him ' thank you so much 'how did you know I wanted this? Says aaliya

"You' no Madam I didn't get this for you" says ranveer

"Phir kis ki liye ' huh for our neighbor kya" says aaliya

"No 'not the neighbor but for this our lil angel" says Ranveer (he puts his hand on her tummy)

He feed's aaliya the ice cream'

"ranveer do you want a girl or a boy" asks aaliya

"I want a girl'a daughther just like you and you aaliya" says ranveer.

"I want a healthy baby who's ki kismet is good ' but yes one thing I want

it to look like it's papa" says aaliya .

After aaliya is done eating she falls asleep on ranveer's chest.

*****************************

The next day at malika's house

its 10 am aaliya is in the bathroom showering

ranveer is in his room lifting weights while malika is down stairs

the door bell rings 'malika opens the door its mp and he has brought a few toys and things for aaliya.

"Hi mp how are you"? says malika '

"Im fine malika aaliya is in the room right" asks mp (he runs upstairs)

Mp is in the room waiting for aaliya

In the room aaliya comes out of the bathroom in a towel

Mp is just stairing at her

"Ahhh" screams aaliya (seeing mp)

Malika and ranveer run in the room

Aaliya ka hua says malika

They see aaliya '

"Mp what the hell are you doing here" says aaliya

"I can came to meet you but I didn't except such a pleasant surprise" says mp

"Shut up and turn around at once' just leave " yells aaliya

"Come on aaliya your acting if this is the 1st I've seen you like this infact I've seen you with out a towel" smiles mp'

"Shut up mp disgusting che "yells aaliya

Ranveer is pissed hearing mp words and hates the way he is eyeing her

"Mp I think we should leave 'let her get dressed" says ranveer

"No ranveer Waise bhi aaliya remember how you met ranveer and I" 'says mp

*************************************

*Flash back 6 yrs ago Delhi in a flat near mt college *

"Aaliya im going to the college library ..get ready soon and come" says nargis

"Ji apa tum jaoo im getting ready" says aaliya

Nargis leaves

Aaliya is showering there is a knock on main the door she cant hear any thing' she gets out

Of the shower.. wraps a towel around her ' plugs her ear phones in and drying her hair

And dancing

suddenly 2 men break in the flat .. she see's the men refelction in the mirror and yells she drops her ipod

ranveer grabs her pulls .. and cover her mouth (like he did when they 1st met)

mp has a gun and pointing at her' he seems so lost in her beauty

aaliya bites ranveer's hand and runs

mp grabs her and pins her to the wall ' the sunlight hits her face ' both can see her beautiful face

aaliya's is hugging her towel tightly eye's closed ..breathing heavely

"shhh we wont hurt you 'we just need to hide" . Says mp

Aaliya hugging on to her towel tightly scared she nods he head '

Mp moves away

When aaliya finally get her voice back from shock

"You both can hide here ' but if you don't mind can I plz go get ready im getting late for college" says aaliya

she runs in her room and locks the door and gets ready

"Mp woh larki where is she ' she hasn't come out is she scared" asks ranveer

"Ranveer larki hai ..young ..takes time to get ready.. you know woman na..just think of malika" says mp

25 min later she comes out looking like this

Both men are like wow expression ..ranveer quickly changes it

Ranveer thinks to himself ' not bad ' towel se aura chi lag re hai ' yaar I got snap out of it he thinks

she has goes to the kitchen takes out 3 glasses and pours some pepsi in them and grabs a bag of chips

"here take this I bet you boys must me tried from running"' says aaliya

She grabs her bag puts her cell and books in them..

"Oye teri ' where did I put my wallet already running late uff" she says...

The guys are just amused watching her

She empties her hand bag''

"Just to find a wallet you're empty your hand bag" say's ranveer

"Haan so ' I need to find it 'such a big bag ... has to be in her some where" she says

"Tum larkiyaan' have huge bag yet it's not useful...you lose everything in it" says mp

"Oye you know you both are very lucky' you both are seeing what inside a woman's hand bag"'says aaliya

"You know men should never touch a woman's bag"'says aaliya

"Now why is that young lady do explain" says mp

"There are mnay secrets in a hand bag 'what a woman has in her bag describes who she is" says aaliya

On a table was her ipod' laptop.. notebook, makeup.house key, cell, chocolates,a planner and asmall box with a lock on it '

"So this means by all this we can tell who u are huh" says ranveer

"Yeah exactly" says aaliya

"Let me try .. you love music'you are organized since u have a planner 'you have sweet tooth a and you are very secretive am I right" syas mp

"Bingo 'yup that I am not bad yaar 'enough bak bak im need to find my wallet Shit yaar ab kya" says aaliya

suddenly mp finds it under a few newspapers

"Here you go" he hands it to her '

"Thank you" she says puts everything back in the bag '.Aaliya Puts on huge high heels.

And is walking To the mirror its making noise on the floor and touches up her make up .. while walking '

"Ouch .. damn these new shoes" she mumbles under her breath

"If they hurt so much why are you wearing them" ' says mp

She laughs '. "Hello pain is beauty' I have to look hot ' simple'I'm willing to go through that" says aaliya

Aaliya is grabing her bag putting her sunglasses's on walking to door to leave

"Ranveer rolls his eyes'how dumb can you be'heels hurt yet wearing them ' huh kids these days"

says ranveer

she stops' turns around and marchs to him' points a finger..

"aye hello.. mr. criminal 'get one thing straight im nota kid ' im 18 yrs old understood and it's not dumb guys like all this right ..we go through the trouble to look nice for you dumb boys ." yells aaliya

mp is behind her ..she suddenly turns around her pony tail hits him in the face

"good bye" and she leaves'by banging the door

"yaar ranveer kya larke hai" says mp '

"come on mp yaar 'itne immature hai ' dude afaat ' hai'she is a handful"'says ranveer

after a while they leave

later that night'

"yaar ranveer what a girl' I need to get to know her" (he thinks of her hair hitting him in the face ' her in a towel) says mp

Ranveer he too is lost in thought about that girl'

he remembers her while boxing

how she bite him ' how she pointed her finger at him' her in the towel

"yaar im talking to you" says mp

"huh oh sorry mp'kya" says ranveer

"where you lost" asks mp

"nothing malika and me had a fight" lie's ranveer

"oh yaar main baat karo us se 'huh should I" says mp

"no yaar bolo kya baat hai" says ranveer

"the girl 'yaar the girl 'I need to get to know her 'kya larki thi" says mp

"ok I will" says ranveer

''''.

A few days later in a disco

Aaliya is there with her friends raveer and mp come to meet some men regarding the next consignment

They see aaliya there wearing this really short backless dress

Some men are teasing her 'mp notices a guy mixing something in her drink

He goes up to him a beats the crap out of them "Ranveer finish these men off" says mp

he grabs aaliya's hand

"What are you doing leave me" yells aaliya

Mp looks ta aaliya and he wraps his jacket around aaliya

"Ghar chalo" he says'

"What ghar" 'says aaliya

Car ride was slight

At mp's house

"What the hell are you wearing huh and what where you doing there you? '

you could have been raped" yells mp '.

Ranveer comes back ' he hears mp

"Ranveer where is malika" ' yells mp

"Mp calm down im here kya hua hai" says a young lady in her early 20's

Wearing this

"Malika take her upstairs a change her into some decent clothes immediately oh haan and carefully and I want her covered" orders mp

"Yeah sure hi im malika 'ranveer's girlfriend 'come lets get you changed" she takes aaliya up

*************

Upstairs

"So how did you meet mp" asks malika

"Oh um a few days back he" 'before she could finsh

"Oh you're the towel girl huh'no wonder he is so upset at what your wearing" says malika

"Normaly he doesn't care the shorter sexier the better but since you are he is upset" says malika,

"Huh you know about that I mean towel" says aaliya

"Yes dear he hasn't been able to stop talking about how beautiful..amazing you are" she smiles

"Really wow ' that werid" says aaliya

"But listen" 'she locks the door and on the radio loud

"Your very innocent just stay away from him and us ' he is very danderous ' I mean our world is ' know the way you both met you can already tell that but you don't know how this life is 'you will be traped

if you get involed with him you're a good sweet girl you deserve better" says malika

"wait huh I barely know him ' I don't even like him'and do you feel traped with ranveer"

"I know you don't but he does 'what did he tell you when he brought you here?

And I do at times feel traped" says malika

"He said ghar chalo'malika his first words to me where ghar .. home' . he saved me how can he be bad" says aaliya

Tum bachi ho aaliya' he isn't bad by heart but what he does ' just be careful I know this life and mp please don't say I said anything" says malika

"I wont and thanks for looking out for me" says aaliya

They come down stairs

Aaliya is wearing a read long sleeve top n jeans

"Well its late ill leave di must be worried if she calls ma 'there will be a problem 'thanks for saving me" say aaliya she is about to leave when mp stops her he grabs her hand .

"Meet me tommrow morning here at 9am" says mp

"Im sorry Im leaving to go see my dhaijaan" says aaliya

"You will understood" says mp

"No dhaijaan is very important to me Im leaving to go see her"

"Aaliya is walking out the house when mp says with in 24 hours you will be infront of me before 12 am tommrow " smiles mp

She turns and looks at him

We will see about that 'don't wiat for me she says

No you will see ' im mp ' mahendra pratap says mp

Ill drop you home says mp

No please di will go crazy if she see's me with a guy says aaliya

Malika drop her home says mp

Yeah sure come says malika

*****************

Later rhat night ranveer keeps thinking about aaliya in that sexy dress

Yeh larki pagal hai kya ' I have never been tp happy beating the crap out of those %$#@&

How dare they act like that with her '

And she ' why the hell would she dress that way '

He takes a glass of water ' and drinks it ' I better go to bed she will make more upset if I think of her

****************************************

The next day

ranveer comes running down malika mp kahan hai says mp

i dont know kyun ..kya hua

chalo lets eat breakfast says malika

he is think of aaliya soo lost he remebers aaliya dancing in the club

that he accidently puts his finger

in his tea

ouch ... dude says ranveer

kya hua ranveer ...asks malika

kuch nai he says

suddely he a servant cleans the guest room

raju kya kare ho asks malika

mp told us to have it clead out

shit i know where he must be...

Aaliya ...say both malika and ranveer

I told her to keep her distance from him ranveer' she shouldn't get invold she is too

Young and innocent says malika

I know and think about the mission malika '

Ranveer shut up ' think of that girl's life '

Outside aaliya place

Aaliya is on the cell

Dhaijaan we are leaving ill be there in few hours says aaliya

Taxi taxi .. (she gets in the taxi ) driver ...mysore '

Ji madam says the driver

He locks the door

He takes a wrong turn n stops

Excuse me where are you going highway is that way says aaliya

Ghar madam mera ghar says avoice

He takes off his hat and looks at aaliya from the rear view mirror

Tum says aaliya that's it for now do comment

Precap Ch:5 yaadein

More flash backs and ranya relation in danger

Hope u like it

Edited by lalmirch28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aaliya was lying down on the bed resting when ranveer suddenly walks in with a bowl of

Strawberry ice cream . .. "Here you madam ice cream your favorite." Says Ranveer

Aaliya hugs him ' thank you so much 'how did you know I wanted this? Says aaliya

"You' no Madam I didn't get this for you" says ranveer

"Phir kis ki liye ' huh for our neighbor kya" says aaliya

"No 'not the neighbor but for this our lil angel" says Ranveer (he puts his hand on her tummy)

He feed's aaliya the ice cream'

that was cute ranveer caring her so much just loved it😃

Come on aaliya your acting if this is the 1st I've seen you like this infact I've seen you with out a towel" smiles mp'

"Shut up mp disgusting che "yells aaliya

Ranveer is pissed hearing mp words and hates the way he is eyeing her

ranveer must be spliting fire from his eyes imagine the day when he was in gym just like that

Ranveer rolls his eyes'how dumb can you be'heels hurt yet wearing them ' huh kids these days"

says ranveer

aaliya kid and ranveer khud ko uncle samjta hai kya 😆

thnak god she answered him back

both guys were simply lost in her beauty.

mallika informing aaliya to stay away

i love her charcter

MP is totally lost in her

and now in taxi with her

😉

precap:more past {excited to know}

but ranay relation at danger 😡

i want ranya happy rember one thing 😉

well really amazing update 👏

for update


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful update!!!!
Can't w8 2 read next chapter!!
Thanx 4 pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awesome update !! loved it

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