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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Simmy_

This is soo good... And thanks a lot for thePM.. do PM me in future as well..😊

thanks simmy glad you liked it i will add u to the pm list 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u aanchal😳 means alot
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy Awes0me FF..
Loved it!!!
Plz updt it soon,eagrly w8ting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
great ff!!! i like how it is different from the show, but still has the same brisk pace of story! love your handling of the story 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1: dooriyaan hai zaroori: distance is needed

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Present day

"Aaliya open this door right now or else ill break it down don't try my patience" says mp

"Mp please cool it ..calm your self" says ranveer(he is pulling mp away from the door

"No Ranveer after she admitting to be with another man she cant just shut door and act like nothing happened" says mp

"Malika please come here right away problem hogi hai" says ranveer

Mp breaks the door down

"Grabs aaliya who the hell is he damn it tell me" yells mp

"Let go of me your hurting me" '.i say

"Not till I get my answer screams" mp

"Dude yell her calm down" says ranveer

"Mp leave her what are you doing ill talk to aaliya" says malika

"No malika he will only leave when ..he kills me like he killed mahilya" I say

There was a sudden slience in the whole room and mp let go oof his grip

Huh gasped malika

"For the last time aaliya it was accident what ever happened wasn't intentionally im sorry do you know I guilty I feel "says mp

"Mp aaliya didn't mean it aaliya what are you saying" says malika

"No malika your like my sister you can understand me' but he 'mp never what did you say sorry 'will that bring back my mahliya huh nooo it wont ' I cant atke this anymore I need space

Malika im coming with you to your place im not able to breath here 'every time I see mp I cant forget what happened " Isay

Don't go aaliya please says mp

No I cant I and malika leave

"Ranveer from today you are gonna be aaliya body guard stay with here I want where she goes what she does and with whom" says mp

"But how can I mp all the time 24/7" says ranveer

"I don't care go stay at malika or bring here to your place just keep eye on he"r says mp

At malikas house

"Aaliya why did you open your mouth if mp finds out the guy is ranveer then wha"t says malika

"let him I don't care I hate him" ' I cry

"aaliya please think with cool head mp is dangerous he will do anything" says malika

"malika I want to just relax" I say I go in the room a sit on the bed and close my eyes

Flash back *

"Ranveer please handel aaliya she is completely in shock and I have to leave the country please take care of her" says mp

"Aaliya aaliya come to your sense wake up" says ranveer

"Ranveer mahliya loves jamun right I made them for her tell her to come eat it
I say

"Aaliya damn it get hold of your self " he slaps me

I look at him with tears and cry he holds me in his arms

Few months later

Ranveer is driving me to goa when the car breaks down its pouring hard

I get out of the car and remember how mahilya loved the rain I start dancing and playing in the rain suddenly I break down crying ranveer runs to me and picks me up in his arms and looks deeply in my eyes and whispers '"Im here and always will be ..dont ever have tears in these beautiful night eyes". He whipes my tears and passionately kisses me I felt after months the love and care I needed the most was right here with me ever since that night me and ranveer were unseparateable I found my life in his arms

*flashback end*

Ranveer walks in worried

"Aaliya mp is fuming you have no idea what you have done he wants me to be your body guard" says ranveer

"I don't care ranveer I fear no one except god" ' I say

"Aaliya along with me he wont spare you he will kill you I cant have that happen to you"

says ranveer

"Its fine ranveer tere ishq pe marjawaan.. I don't mind even dying in your love ' I love you I say"

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Precap ch2: "aaliya I came to meet you so we can work things out" says mp

"No mp it wont help us there is no use" I say

"Aaliya I know distance came in to our relationship after mahilya but only that can help are relationship" says mp

"What are you saying" I ask

"Lets have a baby aaliya" says mp

"No with you never!" I say

"But why aaliya kyun" says mp

Mp grabs me and squeeze me suddenly I faint

" Rnaveer called the doctor now"says mp

Malika and doctor come out of the room

"Mp no need to worry she is pregnant" says the doctor

"Ranveer find the father of this baby I want kill him personally" says mp

ranveer nods his head and looks away
Edited by lalmirch28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Poor aaliyah... Seems like she is very depressed! MP too strict! I wonder how Ranveer and Aaliyah are going to save themselves... and OMG!!! Aaliyah going to be pregnant again! Seems like ranveer is in more trouble than Aaliyah... Save them both! Thank you for the PM! I loved the update a lot...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Fiza :)
Great Chapter !!!
it's getting more and more interesting
Now I'm even more anxious to read the next part !
Hope you update soon ! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arul01

Poor aaliyah... Seems like she is very depressed! MP too strict! I wonder how Ranveer and Aaliyah are going to save themselves... and OMG!!! Aaliyah going to be pregnant again! Seems like ranveer is in more trouble than Aaliyah... Save them both! Thank you for the PM! I loved the update a lot...

thanks dear ..yup she is very depressed after her life turned upside down ... yup ranveer is in a big mess 😕... mp is very possevie of aaliya ...lets see how ranveer handels this problem
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my goshhh...
u r such a amazing writer
omg ths is really dangerous lovestory
poor aaliya
omg ranveer aaliya n love still hiding
aaliya pregnant wth ranveer baby
how ranya will mange ths
m sure how much at ths tme ranveer wants to b wth her but mp

its so intrstng plz plzupdate soon and pm me

thnks lot for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: liza16

Hey Fiza :)
Great Chapter !!!
it's getting more and more interesting
Now I'm even more anxious to read the next part !
Hope you update soon ! :)

lisa sweets 1stly thank thank u ..thank u sooo much for the wonderful banner for my ff i love it❤️ 👏👏👏👏 gald u like the story so far xoxo 😳

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