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LOVE IN GRAVE
Dark clouds were thundering again,in the lonely and beautiful rainy night a beautiful girl was running away on a broken road.she was crying madly "TALK TO ME YOU CAN;T LEAVE ME YOU CANT LEAVE ME"

someone has spoken truth"you never chose the love,love choose you"she was selected by love.
she was crying,her tears were falling on the road like rain drops on the earth.suddenly graveyard started.

it was the place where she had lost her love.it was the incident before 2 weeks ago.she lived in joint family with her cousins and the other relatives.her father had many enemies because he was in police.maan and dev were her two cousins.maan loved here but her marriage had arranged with dev from her parents.hermarriage was fixed on 25th july with dev.dev was out of city for some marriage shopping.she liked him but she was not in love with him.during these days her father caught a dangerous suicide bomber for which his gang gave many threats to her father.no one knew the results but security was very tight,

One day she went to bazzar with maan to do some shopping .during shopping whole sky was filled with black clouds.maan was watching the clouds'then watch her.A pain raised from his heart.he was thinking that after few days he would lost her love no,he was thinking that he still loved her and kept loving her till his death even when he would in the "GRAVE".but how as grave and death came in his mind he became upset.he wanted to see her love whole life because when he loved her he got huge satisfaction,he could not lose his satisfaction so he did not like the death and he didn't like the grave.but he did not know the fate was smiling on him.

Many drops fall on his face .he released his all thoughts and ran towards her love to ask her to hurry up and ready for home.she felt that maan was very silent during journey.before 4 kilometers of the home she felt two men with pistols were chasing them on a bike.she told maan,he rad the bike faster.suddenly bike lost the balance and they fell down.

he caught her hand and ran away on the same road right now she was running there in the heaven rain.

Suddenly graveyard started the other two men were still after them with the torch.nothing was seen in the dark night because of rain.they both fell down in the deep gravewhich was defected by rain .maan caught her in his two hand strictly during this somevhard thing badly injured him.but he did not care about his pains.this time these were the most beautiful moments of his life.he thought in the dreams that he embraced her love.he was deeply hypnothized by his love feelings.on the other side she was also shocked and felt that their hearts had exchanged their beats.maan stooped them.she was still holding his chest and shoulder because of fear and cold rainy winter.

After sometime maan picked her phone and called the uncle handa.hello hello uncle i am maan.oh where are you?we all were warned about uou..maan,.."uncle some people want to kill us,please come for help."son where are you?maan,we are in the graveyard some unknown place hello helloo...''

Tean tean..battery down .oh shit !! maan decided for waiting his priority to save his loveshe was weeping continuously and holding him strictly.but at time a huge black snake came slowly and bit maan.but he didn't feel any pain in front of love feelings.they spent 15 min in the grave,her hairs were again and again touching maan's face.he never thought that he would pass his most valuable moments of life in the grave.

Suddenly police van siren listened as they had reached near.she came out of the grave and shouted.her father came and police men.but maan did not come out of the grave when ploicemen picked maan out of grave.he was dead by snake bite.she was fainted to see this.

After 10 days her father organized simple function of her marriage,but now the situation was not same,she could never forget that night when she felt maan's silent love.now in the dress of bride she ran towards maan's grave.she was crying bitterly,"maan talk to me Iam ur bride.please you can never left me alone maan".slowly slowly her voice stopped,dev was after his bride to see where she was going.but when he reached at maan's grave he found her "DEAD BODY".he also wept to see this.he put her on his hands and returned to home..he was thinking that what love she did.how true !!






PS:PheWW!! f9nly f9nly i finished my 2nd OS ..ahem ahem please no jhootis and chappals😆waise i love this love this story !!..this story is very close to my heart.and my maaneet too..so i thought to pen down here 😳..hope u like this..i know this story is very heart touching story/sad story..i wanted to write something different...so here i cme up this story..hope you will support me like you guyz did in my 1st OS😃..thanku so much for your lovely dovely comments ..your comments is most prcs for me !!please dnt forget press "LIKE BUTTON"

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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emotional one...want one romantic college base os
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very emotional beautiful os dear...MAANEET r always one be it this life or next life or every life this is their beauty divinity magic speciality their pure true deep unconditional selfless feelings of care love respect admiration trust undertsanding worship pride happiness sorrow dreams dreams becoming reality peace every feeling every relationship of MAANEET is beautiful so they r eternal couple...Most Beloved Precious Inspirational Divine Magical Beautiful Romantic Passionate Musical Fairytale Royal Special Eternal Evergreen Unique Geet hui sabse parayi MAANEET Drashti Gurmeet GHSPIANS MAANEETIANS r the bestest so deserve the bestest...Long live Our GHSP MAANEET' maahi our life heart soul...V r Proud to be GHSPIANS MAANEETIANS ever n forever...V r Proud to be GHSP MAANEET' lovers admirers worshippers ever n forever...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice yaar but i like the happy wala ending so try to write some lovey dovey os on maaneet plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome n very touching os

plz write something funny or happy

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Posted: 13 years ago
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So heart wrenching 😭
Please write a hot hot OS next time ☺️ 😍 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was so sad and emotional yet beautiful
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Posted: 13 years ago
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touching...
yaar write a happy OS as compensation...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭
Its sooo sad
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