My first SS:Jihne mera dil lutiya TEASER pg69 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for ur all encourage and comments.this time i not able to thanxs individually but thanxs u all for liking this story

PART-8

Without breaking kiss maan lifted her in his arms and comes our from

washroom.Maan made her led on bed and adjusted himself and cover themself with spread.

They doesn't break the kiss not even want to breath.Just want to live this beautiful moment in each other arms.

Maan explored every corner of her mouth and geet also did the same.Passion which they have for each other showed by this kiss.

After a long time like an half an hour they break kiss but not for breath,They break to see each other.This is the first time they kiss this much long.

Maan see her shoni eyes which r red.

Maan:Geet tum kal raat soi nahi tumhari ankhe kitni laal ho chuki hai.

Geet:Jab

Geet Ka Maan sari raat na soiya ho to geet sone ki gustakhi kase kar sakti hai?

Maan:Tume kase pata ke me sari raat so nahi paya?

Geet:Jab Geet maan ke pass nahi to maan kase so sakta hai.

Maan:Geet tum mujse itna pyaar kase kar sakti ho.

Geet:Ab apki sangat ka thoda asar to mujpar hoga hi na.

Plz licen to this song in background for get more beautiful feeling
Main waari jaavan, main waari jaavan

Say that she laugh louder while maan se smiling.Usse pata tha uski geet humesh usko hi age rakhe gi.

Saan tho ki hoya ve kasoor

He lost in watching her laughter.She looks so beautiful,so childish like an angel.Yes she is his Angel.Jiske ane se uski puri zindagi hi badal gai.Usse kabi sapne me bi nahi socha tha ke koi usse itna jyada pyaar karega,vo kissi ki zindagi ban jayega.

Main waari jaavan, main waari jaavan

Geet look at his lost hubby while some tears in his eye.She know it is happinesstears.She ask by narrowing her eye brows like Kya huwa?He just answer by moving his head in negative.

Dil to ye hoya majoboor'

Geet turn maan and now she is on maan and maan under her.He just lost in her eyes.

Chhu liya tune, lab se aankhon ko

She move forward and kiss his eyes follwed by other.Maan close his eyes in anticipation.Further kiss him on his forehead,then follwed by cheeks,his nose,then chin.She brush her lips on his then watch his expresions.

Mannatein puri, tumse hi

Maan eyes still closed his throat get dry by geet simple brush.Geet see it and smiles to herself.Maan open his eyes and see her smiling.

Maan:Acha ji hume sata kar apko hassi a rahi hai,isski saza to apko milegi hi.

Geet:Apki saza ka to hum kabse intazar kar rahe hai.

Tu mile jahan, mera jahan hai wahan

By saying it she again lock their lips.Maan encircle his arms around her waist.Geet one hand in his hairs pulling him and with other she start open his shirt button.

Raunakein saari, tumse hiii'

Maan hands move towards her towel.He opened it and torn it and geet did same with his shirt.Her soft bare skin touching his hard bare chest burning their desire more.

O Chhu liya tune, lab se aankhon ko
Mannatein puri, tumse hi

Geet break the kiss and start kissing him on his chest.She showered him with his soft kisses.While maan hands roming on her back.She bit him just on his heart.Maan moaned she immediately sooth his pain.

Tu mile jahan, mera jahan hai wahan
Raunakein saari, tumse hiii'

Maan couldnot take it anymore.He turn her around and in sec she is under him.He first kiss her eyes,then follwed by cheek.Then comes down on her shoulder kissing her nibing giving her love bite.He kissed her long neck.

Piya O Re Piya
Piya Re Piya Re Piya

In responce geet pull him more on her by his hand in his hairs.He give her a bite on her earlobe.Geet moaned in pleasure.Maan lick it imediately soothing her pain.

Inn dooriyo'n ne nazdeekiyo'n se sauda koi kar liya
Ho o o

She wanted him just as he wanted her. He removed that inch of space, brushing her mouth gently against his in a kiss that was as sweet as their first one. Her breath became faster as maan moved his fingers to her neck & gently began stroking the tender skin beneath her ear.

Jhuk ke nigaaho'n ne Dil se Ishq ka wada koi kar liya
Main waari jaavan

Slowly, so slowly it nearly drove her insane. He replaced his finger with his tongue & trailed the tip across her collarbone, then drove to the deep valley. She moaned maan driving him to insanity wanting more, so much more. His mouth moved down over the curve of her *****, teasing, tempting.

Main wari jawan
Saatho ki hoya ve kasoor re

He look up to meet her gaze their eyes met and maan smirk her before she could understand he also bite her on her heart.She moaned and flushed by his action.He lick it reduce her pain.

Sau-sau taaron se bhar ke ye daaman
He looked in her eyes before entering her. She moaned loudly in pain and pleasure. He silenced her with his lips. The room was filled with their passion.He collapsed on her panting after sometime.

Le chal mujhe kahin door
(Le chal mujhe kahin door )

Their hands were tied around each other, their mouth still exploring every new way of pleasing, legs twined. In the silent aftermath of passion they lay together with their bodies still into each other. They didn't even realize when they fell a sleep still kissing passionately.Both slept peacefully in each others' arms lost in their dream land.

Piya O Re Piya
Piya Re Piya Re Piya

After like an hour or two maan woke up find his ladylove in his arms.He just lost in her beauty.She look so pure and innocent.HIS ANGEL HIS LOVE

Piya O re piya
Piya Re Piya Re Piya

Maan set his jaw remaining silent he scanned her face, her features she looked beautiful filled with his passion, he could see her lips swollen a bit, her skin soar with his non stop sucking & biting, she was his only his, the thought drew him insane, he couldn't express him self better than just making love over.

Log kehte hai shadi ke baad jase jase waqt beeta jata hai pyaar kam hota jata hai,lekin inka pyaar dekhne ke baad kon manega is baat ko.Inka pyaar itna Paakh hai ke waqt ke saath saath badta hi ja raha hai.ye khude ke vo frishte hai jo ek dusre ke lie hi bane hai.Ek dusre ke bina ek pal jinna bi ye gawara nahi samjte.Ek pal ki duri bi inhe mout se badtar lagti hai.Jo bi inke pyaar ko dekhe bus uski gehrai me dooob jaye.

Precap:Maan jetaofy his HAQ☺️[can anybody guess ke konsa HAQ?share ur opinions]

Note 1:Sorry if i dont live upto ur expectation.I never ever write such romantic scenes,its my first time.Sorry if i dont do my job well.

Note 2:If any one of u want any scene aur something.pls tell me i try my level best to complete ur wish.Do write in ur comments.

Ab ap sab jante hi hai apko kya karna hai so plz give me ur precious comments
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
minnie_tweetie thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
waiting for the precap
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
loved the song selection
n kaunsa HAQ re????????/
n plz end the mystery whether this MK or MSK?????/
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update👏
Maaneet moment so romantic😳
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
waiting for the precap
mysteriousmilli thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
Maaneet moments so romantic😳...😳
please update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
cutie... u wer awsum baby...
man.. it ws sooo passionate I ws blushing ol d while... 😳
brilliantly written baby.. dnt wry... u wer great...

I loved the whole essence of maaneet's love..

um... HAQ... I feel r probably gonna go bak to d past.. n thea MK or MSK wil win his HAQ...
i hope m ryt... 😉

love ya cutie... 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
update
loved it
eagerly waiting for the next update
continue soon

thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update
thanks for pm
cont. soon

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