My first story about virman part 13 - Page 7

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Dr stares at virat and virat stares back and the Dr they something was wrong...
Maanvi:(In her thoughts) whats wrong with me why are they looking at each other asif i have asked a bad question...
Dr:Maanvi nothing is wrong with you...your water level had gone down all you need was a glass of water to drink and then everything is okay...
Maanvi:Yuck water!!!...Never i would rather drink a pint of milk than water...
Virat:Maanvi..! (Nearly shouting at her)
Everyone looked at Virat...
Virat:(to the Dr)...Dr shall we go to your cabin and finish talking about the case...
Dr:(He understood what he meant)..Ji..
Maanvi:What case...?
Virat:A case about his wife as she had an accident but it wasn't her fault but she still had to pay to the other driver extra money due to favoruitism...
Maanvi:Oh okay can i just say one thing...
Dr and Virat:What...!?
Maanvi:(Shocked)..Doesnt matter...
Virat was moving closer to Maanvi and Vivek saw this he couldnt take the closeness so he intrupted them...
Vivek:Virat...why dont you go with the Dr and i will stay here with Maanvi...
Virat felt like he was getting torn into piece just by the look on Vivek face it was like he was getting seprated from someone special but he still never understood why he felt so strongly about Maanvi...
Virat:Okay...Take care of her...Come on Dr...
Virat and the Dr leave the room leaving Vivek and Maanvi behind will Maanvi is really nervous being alone with Vivek...
Maanvi:I..i..i am really tired so i'll rest for a bit...
Vivek:Okay my love...
Maanvi lays down but shuts her eyes pretending to sleep...

***in the Dr's cabin****
Virat:Whats wrong with her Dr...You were talking about water something too less...
Dr:Nothing wrong with her water levels but i think there must have been something wrong with what she eat or drink...
Virat:What...!?
Dr:I got my senior Dr to check the resutt and he said it might that she might have been poisened...
Biji:Poision...
Virat and the Dr look at Biji...
Virat:Biji...Wh..When did you come...
Biji:Dont ask about me what this about Poisened whos been poisened...Maanvi!?
Virat and the Dr looked at each other and the Dr tries covering everything up...
Dr: No Biji...it..its about my wifes case who someone tried posioning...
Virat:Ji biji...thats what we were talking about the case...the Dr's Wifes case...
Biji:(In her thoughts)What are they hiding from me...?And why does Virat seem so worked up...?
Virat:Biji...!?
Biji:Oh, okay i was thinking about Maanvi how is she Dr..
Dr:I have something to tell you...
Virat looks at the Dr with pleading eyes like no...dont tell her...

****In Maanvi's Room****
Vivek walks up to Maanvi who is pertending to sleep and sits on her bed...He starts stroking her face...
Vivek:Maanvi...you look so cute while you are sleeping just like a tiny baby and also when you laugh it makes me happy too...Why did you leave me...It you never had left me i would have been your husband and not your Nephew...We would of had loads of kids playing around us and when they would go to school it would be just you and me...No one else and Virat wouldn't be there either...
Maanvi wanting to cry but she cant...
Vivek:Dont worry though i wont let Virat come in our way not at all even if someone else tries coming in our way them i will swipe them clean...
While saying this he sees a shadow lurking about and starts walking towards the shadow without making a noise...
Maanvi:(In her thought) Where is he why cant i hear him anymore..Has he gone...No he cant have gone i never heard the door...Then where is he...And what was he saying about Virat...What does he know about Virat...
Loads of questions are going through Maanvi's mind...

***Back into the Dr's Cabin****
Biji:What is it Dr...?
Dr:Maanvi...Maanvi...(Gets cut off by a noise from Maanvi's room)
Virat:Maanvi!!
They all run to see Maanvi and see what has happened...When they open the door they are shocked with what they see...
Biji:Vivek!? Maya!?
Vivek and Maya are both standing there with glass all on the floor and they are both bleeding while Maanvi is in shock with everything that has happened so rapidly...
Virat:Maanvi!?
He quickly runs towards Maanvi and hugs her...Maanvi felt so loved and safier that she was in Virat arms but she also felt scared as she never knew what was happening to her as she everytime she was away from Virat and worried about him she would feel a sharp pain in her heart and when she was with him she would feel safe and happy...They were like that for a few minutes as if it was only them in the whole world until they were bought back into the reality by a scream...

Sorry for the wait but i will try to finish soon as im going on holiday on Friday so i will try to finish it soon if i don't i will try to update bits...

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I wonder what happened to Maya and Vivek please PM me as soon as you update...!!!

great start!!! please put me on the PM list, just added u on buddy list.. keep up the good work!! loved this entry, lookiong forward to reading some more.. :D

No why did u stop??? What happened to maya N vivek di they try to harm maanvi that maanvi battered them??? OMG whats going on??? Do continue soon and pm me by the way did someone put poison in maanvi's food?

Part 12

Maya had accidently cut her foot...Virat looked at her an then looked at Maanvi he was confused to who he should pay more attention to...Maanvi understood his reactions and knew what he was thinking...She grabbed his hand...
Maanvi:(Whispers) Go Virat help her i'm alright...
Virat gives her a weak smile...He got up to help her but as he was getting up Maya was already in Viveks arms...
Biji:Vivek beta you and get her cleaned up...
Vivek:Ji biji...
He takes her to another room and sits her on the bed...Maya stares at Vivek and realises that whatever she had for Virat was nothing but jealousy and her greed but she felt different with Vivek...So she just sat there smiling...On the other hand Vivek also realised that Maanvi was never meant to be his and never will be as right now whatever he was feeling towards Maya is totally different...Vivek starts blowing onto Maya's foot and Maya just pulls her breath in and Vivek grabs her hand to make her stay calm...

***Maanvi's room****
Biji:Dr please could i talk to you alone...
Dr:Ji Biji...
They both walk out of the room leaving Maanvi and Virat with confused faces...There was silence in the room...The silence was now irratating Virat...
Virat:Maanvi i would like to eat something what about (gets cut off)...
Maanvi:Your bothered about eating and not me...Oh Chep thats not fair...
That hurt Virat alot...
Virat:Maanvi...Oye Bandri look at me...
She looks up at Virat...
Virat:I'll always care for you and dont forget im your partner...
Maanvi now had a smile on her face it was like she had got what she wanted...She decided to tease him...
Maanvi:Why do you care for me...?
Virat:Because i...Forget it you wont understand...
Maanvi just stared at Virat face like she was waiting for something but still no idea what she was waiting for...
Maanvi:(In a serious mood)What won't i get Virat...
Virat:Nothing...I have to go somewhere...
There was silence in the room...

****Maya's Room****
Vivek grabbed Mayas hand to make her stay calm...Maya squeed it whenever she felt the pain...
When Vivek was finished bandaging Maya's foot he helped Maya to stand up but Maya lost her balance and they both fell on the bed with Maya underneath and Vivek on top...They also had a special moment...
Vivek quickly stood up...
Vivek:Sorry...
Maya:Its okay i enjoy...Traileed off...
Vivek understood what she was about to say and smiles inside him...
Maya:No..noo thats not what i meant i meant..
Her phone started to ring...The tune was "I love you"- From bodyguard...
Vivek felt like hugging her as he had now understood his feeling...But did Maya understand her feeling...?
He stared at Maya back as she was on the phone...

****Drs cabin****
Dr:Whats the matter Biji..?
Biji:You tell me Dr whats the Matter with Maanvi...?
Dr:Well Biji i will have to tell you as you are the eldest but i dont know how to tell Maanvi...
Biji:What Dr...?
Dr:She isn't suffering from low water level but instead she is suffering from Kidney Stones...But we can get rid of them by killng them through an operation...
Biji:Kidney stone...!?
Virat storms in:What...!?
Dr:Dont worry thats why we are keeping her overnight to perform the operation on her as soon as possible before the stones get bigger and goes in the blood stream...
Biji:Please doctor do whatever you like but please make sure that it works...
Virat:Ye..yes doctor please save Maanvi...
Dr:Dont worry i'll get the nurse to get ready for the operation...Nurse...!
Nurse:Ji...
Dr:Get the operation room ready for Maanvi Chaudrey for Kidney stones removal...
Nurse:Ji...
Dr:I need you to fill in some forms for me and then we can get going...
Virat:Ji Dr...
Virat fills all the forms in and pays the money and also phones home telling them about Maanvi and how she is going for an operation as the stones are already at a big size everything is getting done in a emergency...His family tells him that they are also on their way...

I know its not that guard but im also busy so i dont really know what im writing shall try to make the next few better...


to make somethiing clear the Dr thought it was Posioning but it wasn't she has Kidney stones... He found this out when he has gone to his cabin with biji but on the wy towards the cabin the Dr had recievied a phone call about Maanvi and he was told them that Maanvi has got Kidney stones not poisioning...Sorry for the confusing but i hope you like the story overall im trying to finish it soon as you can see btw i have got Maya and Vivek together and Maanvi and Virat nearly...
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I'm going on a holiday will come back after 2 weeks and update next part
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