AarYa - Ek anokhi prem kahani FF

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Well guys! I hope someone here, some good FF writers may be or anyone with enough creativity will post a reply here as Part two of this FF. It will be like a game & we can continue posting randomly to complete the FF. If no one is interested this will remain as OS. Thanks 😊

AarYa - Ek anokhi prem Kahani...

A/ N : Well.. our Aarya are finally married & are all set to start a new life : )

And now, we all are dreamy about their interaction with kids, cute fights, awkward moments.. aren't we?

Well, I am a bit. CVs are trying to be realistic going slowly along the track & I wish these rasms will end soon & we get to watch their new life together : )

Here's my one- shot.. It starts after yesterday's epi & well someone can continue it by taking turns so we have a lovely FF titled Ek anokhi prem kahani.. lol


PART ONE



Aarthi brushed her tears as Ansh walked her way, ending her argument with the Dubeys. Her sorrow began as soon as she stepped down from mandap. How could she do it? Ansh was her life, her only ray of hope, her everything! How could she-

She turned abruptly to see that Shobha, her MIL was pleading, literally begging the new MIL.

"Please.. Gayathri ji.. Please don't separate Ansh from my daughter! Please.. I'm sure Aarthi has a heart big enough for all three kids! Please.. please.. " shobha was sobbing.

"I'm sorry, shobha ji... but its only a matter of few days.. then Ansh can join us, Aarthi can stay for two weeks away from him. Can't she?"


"What are you saying maa?" A voice interrupted them. Aarthi stood in a daze as Yash entered the scene.

"Yash?" Gayatri was puzzled.

"I already told you maa.. that Ansh isn't going anywhere and- "

"Yash, just listen to me beta- "

"You listen to me, please maa... I join my hands & I beg you do not separate the kid from his mother. I told you that earlier.. how can a girl who left her own son will be able to give motherly love to my kids! Plz maa.. I know Aarthi will do justice to my daughters!"

Shobha smiled a little, feeling proud of her daamat.

Yash continued, " Isn't it selfish of you maa.. you want her to be the mother of my kids & let go of her son?"

"But beta, her son can come back- "

"He's our son, maa!" Yash corrected. Gayathri's eyes widened.

"Aarthi is my wife & Ansh is my son now! I don't know about her past but.. from now Ansh is my responsibility as well. If Aarthi can be a mother to all three kids, I'm their father.. and we won't be discussing this again. "

Gayathri was perplexed listening to her son's bhashan. Yash, the one who hardly spoke had given her a lecture!

Yash sighed, "I'm sorry if I had been a bit rude to you maa.. kshama keejiye! Aap shayad bhool gayi ki aap khud ek maa hai, main bas yaad dila raha tha.. "

Ansh jumped at his spot, throwing his toy away as he noticed his naye papa.

"Naya pappa!"

Yash turned to see Ansh running towards him.

"Will you carry me to your car? Woh kya hai na.. I always wanted to go on a ride!"

Yash smiled as he picked up the kid, "sure beta.. humare paas bahut sare gaadi hai!"

Gayatri hid her disgust & stormed away. Shobha joined her hands and Mr. Dubey too was offering pranam.

"No no.. maa ji aap yeh kya kar rahe hai? You are elder than me! I respect you as my MIL & MIF.. please don't do that. " Yash smiled.

Shobha too wiped her tears & smiled. Aarthi joined them wanting to say something to he youngman who stood up for her, for her son.

"Yash ji.. woh - I - ... "

"Its okay Aarthi ji. I know you agreed to marry for your son. Just like I married you for my daughters! I'm just doing this because its my farz. I hope you will do your duty as a mother. " Yash finished speaking.

Aarthi was shocked, but relieved. Yash smiled after telling her everything he wanted to tell her for a long time.

"Yashuu! " Pankaj came running.

"Chal.. lets go. Aarthi, come on, now! We're getting late for Griha- pravesh! Shobha ji, plz hurry up!"

All the five started walking towards the entrance, when Shobha stopped Yash by holding his arm.

"Thank you beta.. I was so much worried for Aarthi but.. you have saved her, its second time you're doing it. " Shoba wiped her eyes, " thanks beta.. I don't know- "

"I promise you mammi ji. I'll be there for her, chahe koi rahe na rahe!"

A while later


As shobha watched Aarthi, the kids & Yash getting into the car, Shobha was sure, Yash was the best thing that had ever happened to her Aarthi.

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Now how was that? Drop in a comment plzz :) Thanks for reading.. & if someone could post a continuation to this, I'd love to read it 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks guys! Par kya koi interested nahin hai? No one wants to continue this??


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very beautiful written FF dear!!!
Plzz do continue!!!!!!!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully done...

will try and write further
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice post,...letz see what happens today...whatever you have written may also come true
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Well i tried continuing... here is it...please free feel to criticize...😳
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At Sindhiya's Residence

The grah pravesh was done making it a huge welcome for AarYa and PraDi...
Gayatri ji started with her family rituals and the various games for the married couples

At the same time Aarti was bit restless...whatever her dear friend Mansi told her Yas was totally opposite of that...he supported her when her MIL wanted Ansh not to be taken with her during her Bidaai

those words were constantly running to her ears..."Ansh is our son now"
Here the games started and yash and aarti were sitting opposite to each other...everyone was cheering for Yash and Paridhi and Vidhi cheered for Aarti


Aarti(self thought): Yash ji ne aaj saabit kar dia ki vo bhi apni betiyon ke liye mujse shaadi kar rahe hai...muje kisi bhi tarah unhe sach batana hi hoga ki ye sab jo ho raha hai thik nahin...ki main vidhwa nahin talakshuda hu...


Aarti(self-thought): yash ji main to apko sab pheero se pehle hi batana chahti thi par uss samay sabne mana kar dia...par haan kuch bhi ho main aapko ye sach batakar hi rahungi chahe uske baad aap koi bhi faisla lein


here Yash could see the tension on her face yet again he knew there is something that Aarti wanted to share with him...but he too was helpless as he could'nt talk to her at that time...

the ceremonies went off making yash wins them...here payal and palak were happy that their father won the game


payal: dekha hamare papa jeet gaye teasing ansh

ansh: vo tumhare papa hi nahin mere bhi papa hai...

palak: nahin vo mere or payal ke papa hai tumhare nahin


yash interrupted...makinh everyone surprised...he took payal and palak in his arms and made ansh sat on his lap...

yash: payal, palak aise ladai nahin karte...ansh tumhara bhai hai or main tum sab ka papa hu...or main tum sab se pyar karta hu...

aarti had tears in her eyes,,,,she had never though yash would do that...here restless increased to a greater extent...she wanted to speak to him and reveal all the truth...

It was the time when the couples were asked to be taken to their rooms...Aarti was taken to Yash room's by Vidhi...it was odd for Aarti to go to that room but she did it for teh sake of Ansh...here yash was even going through the same feelings...he was recollecting the time he had spent with Arpita...


Yash: Arpita tum dekh rahi ho na sab kuch badal gaya...par ek cheez kabhi nahin badlegi mera pyar tumhare liye vo hamesha waise hi rahega...aaj main Aarti ji se sab keh dunga...ki ye sab maine apni bahyo ke future ke liye kia hai...

Finally yash enters to his room...Aarti was really impatient...sitting on the bed...but she had no other option...Yash felt odd because he had seen his arpita their... both of them were silent for quite a time...byt finally yash broke out


Yash: aarti ji muje apse kuch baat karni hai...

aarti: yash ji main bhi kab se apse baat karna chahti thi...

yash: aarti ji pehle aap keh dijiye vo kya hai na main kab se dekh raha hu ki aap kuch baat ko lehar kafi pareshan hai...apke mann mein jo hai vo aap muje keh sakti hai...

Aarti: vo kya hai na...muje apse ye kehna tha ki...


She murmers but is unable to say...yash tries to make her comfortable...

yash: apko jo kehna hai aap keh sakti hai...

aarti(closes her eyes): yash ji apko ek dhokhe mein rakha gaya hai...darsal main talakshuda hu or mere pehle pati abhi bhi zinda hai...vo ma or bauji ne ye sab mere liye kia taki main apni zindagi ache se je saku or ansh ko uske papa mil jaye

Aarti: main jaanti hu ye baat sunkar apko bilkul acha nahin lag raha hoga...or main ye bhi samja sakti hu ki iss baat ke baad shayad aapko dukh hua hoga par main nahin chahti thi ki hamare beech koi baat chupi rahein...apka jo faisla ho muje manzoor hai...


Yash was astonished...but he kept listening...


Aarti: Yash ji main apko ye sab pehle hi batana chahti thi...lekin halat kuch aise the ki main bol nahin paayi...muje maaf kar dijiye...maine bahut koshish ki thi ki apko sach pata chaelin lekin ma or bauji ki kasam ne muje baandh dia lekin ab or nahin...ye sab maine apne ma bauji ke liye kia hai...

Aarti: yash ji aap jaante hai mere ma or bauji ne apko mere bete ansh ke liye chuna or jab se usne apne naye papa ko dekha hai maine uski khushi dekhar kafi khush thi...apko apne saamne pakar usko nayi khushi mili hai...or apka usse apnana meri liye bahut badi baat hai...


Yash kept silent...


Aarti: yash ji ye shaadi sirf or sirf meine apne bete ke liye ki hai...ye sab sunne ke baad apka jo faisla ho muje manzoor hoga...

Yash: Aarti ji aaj apki izzat mere dil mein or bad gayi hai...shayad ye wahi sachchai hai jo sab khehte hai ki iss rishte mein honi chahiye...aap jaanti hai muje hamesha se ek fikr thi ki meri bahiya hamesha khush rahein or sach maniye aaj muje yakeen ho gaya hai ko meri baatiyan apke saath ekdum khush rahengi..

Yash: muje apko kal se koi matlab nahin hai aarti ji...mere liye yahi kafi hai ki aap sach ka hamesha saath deti hai...

Yash: mere liye bhi ye shaadi aasan nahin thi par yakeen maniye ye kadam sirf maine apni bachiyo ke liye uthaya hai...hum dono ka ek hi maksad hai bacho ki khushi

yash: or main apse waada karta hu ki ansh ko uske papa kisi tarah ki kami mehsus nahin hone denge...


Aarti had tears in her eyes

Aarti: Aap jaante nahin apne meri kitni badi mushkil aasan kar di...yash ji aaj main apse waada karti hu ki payal or palak mere liye ussi tarah hongi jaise mere liye ansh hai...

Well all the MU was cleared and they started with their main aim of getting married...It was Payal, palak and ansh for them dats it...

Hope you enjoyed what all i wrote...and if not um sorry for disappointing u...My POV dats it...😳😳



Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thoroughly Enjoyed!!!
Lovely Update!!!!
Plzz do continue if ur continuing so!!!
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Originally posted by: nooriewas

Thoroughly Enjoyed!!!

Lovely Update!!!!
Plzz do continue if ur continuing so!!!



thanks um glad u enjoyed...that means a lot to me seriously
well i have my FF to be updated...ll try and continue if some other idea comes to my mind but only after i update my FF...😳

hope u understand
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update minnie! Superb! Fantastic! Loved it! Mu cleared, wow! I'm glad they spoke to eachother!

I may continue this... but anyone can continue as well:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it! Please continue this.

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