FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38

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KhatamKahani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

This is a beautiful chapter, Bidzy. Simply beautiful.

I have a question--didn't Mohan say he wanted a court marriage?

And a slight nitpick...again 😆 Why does Kastur feel shy?😕

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: likarsh
This is a beautiful chapter, Bidzy. Simply beautiful.

I have a question--didn't Mohan say he wanted a court marriage?

And a slight nitpick...again 😆 Why does Kastur feel shy?😕

Mohan suggested to have a simple wedding and the best would be court marriage...Saroj preferred to get them married in the temple, so he went on his mother's decision. Well, to tell the truth, I actually forgot that Mohan did suggest court marriage in the beginning. 😆

So do you think that a bride won't feel shy? 😆 Btw where did you see Kastur's shyness in the chapter? 😆 Thanks by the way. 🤗

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Rani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: -Bidzie-

Mohan suggested to have a simple wedding and the best would be court marriage...Saroj preferred to get them married in the temple, so he went on his mother's decision. Well, to tell the truth, I actually forgot that Mohan did suggest court marriage in the beginning. 😆

So do you think that a bride won't feel shy? 😆 Btw where did you see Kastur's shyness in the chapter? 😆 Thanks by the way. 🤗

I didn't see any shyness from Kastur in the chapter either 😆. The girl was ready it's Mohan whose pretending to be sleeping 🤣

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KhatamKahani

@KhatamKahani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

" He's sleeping tonight .. seriously? i know that i ain't in such a condition to.." She blushed but keeping her shyness aside with a lot of difficulty, she turned annoyed again.

No, Bidzy I don't think it's a given that a bride would/should feel shy. She was married before is pregnant. Her issues were more on emotional trust rather than physicality, and whatever there was of that had vanished long before. He was the one that pulled back often times, not she.

So why would she be shy just because she's the bride and female?

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

Lik, I understood what you meant. Perhaps I got carried away. :P Anyways thanks for your opinion. Needed it to be consistent in my writing. :D

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Nandalala

@Nandalala

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

The Beginning of A New Life! What an appropriate title to this chapter, sweets! An elaborate wedding scene would not be appropriate for this particular couple...Your description of the temple steps & each step signifying their journey into a new life was awesome! Mohan pretends to fall asleep post wedding! Hahahaha...Classic! The baby's kicking was so apropos...the baby is an integral part of their life, married or not! Was grinning at their excitement to feel that sensation!

Btw, the mangalsutra is made of black beads, not black pearls... 😊

Waiting for the next part!

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