Hey Guys, I've been a silent reader here for a few weeks now and wanted to try a Virman Fanfic. Please excuse any grammatical or spelling errors and bear with me please. Feel free to criticize and correct my mistakes.
Wish me good luck. Here I Go, hope you all like it! J
Story: My story starts from the end of todays episode where Manvi is about to start her treatment.
Character Sketch: Mostly same as the show.
Vadera's: (live in Chandighar)
Virat: A very decent guy, who loves his family above anything else. He will do anything to see his family happy, but he has always felt that he is not as loved as his older brother because he is not as successful yet. Is also full of masti and is very outgoing.
Dadaji- A strict but very caring and loving man, he is a retired judge and owns his own law firm.
Swamini Bua (Bua)- A strict lady, cares about status and "the society", Can be very caring sometimes.
Vanshikia Ma (Ma)- Very sweet and loving mother, will do anything for her sons and tries hard to keep traditions in place.
Kadambari Chach (Chachi)i- very outgoing person but also very caring.
Chachu- is a good son, husband, brother, and uncle. He loves his nephews as they were his own is very hardworking and respectful.
Viren (Bhai/Jeeju)- he is Virats older brother, very fun, loving, and caring person. Is a very good lawyer and works very hard to accomplish a good name for himself and his family law firm.
Arohi- Virats cousin sister, very joyful and caring she is always messing around with him and Viren. She is currently attending college for a fashion designing degree. (Is Kadambari's daughter)
Chaudhry's: (Live in Ludhiana)
Manvi: A girl who loves life and lives life to the fullest every moment. She is very caring and sweet is also very cultured and at the same time very outgoing as well.
Jeevika- Manvi's older sister and her other half both sister love each other to death and are extremely close. She has recently married Viren and is a very shy and cultured girl.
Beeji- Manvi's grandmother, is strict but as the same time very loving and caring.
Madan Chachu- a man of principles and hardwork, runs a big farming machinery business.
Pinky Chachi- sweet and caring, but also a kaam chor.
Arjun Bhaiya- Manvi's older cousin brother (son of Madan and Pinky) helps his dad with the family business and is taking it to new heights as he has an MBA. Loves his sisters very much and will do anything to care for them.
Extras:
Maya: Virat's girlfriend/fianc she knows how to use people to her advantage.
Dr. Manan- is a family doctor and very intelligent.
Dr. Shekhar- cancer specialist he is treating Manvi.
*Note: I will add more, as other characters develop.*
Chapter 1:
Manvi looked up towards the machine Dr. Shekhar was examining for her treatment. It looked scary with all the pipes and meters around it.
Dr. Shekhar: "Manvi Dear, come please there's nothing to be afraid of. You'll be ok."
Manvi: "Yes Doctor". (After saying this, Manvi took a deep breath and walked upto the machine, "I have to be strong, if not for myself than for Beeji and Jeevika Di at least" she said to herself in her head.)
After she reached the machine, Dr. Shekhar explained the procedure to her very carefully and made sure she understood everything before beginning the treatment. Once that had was done and Dr. Manan had joined them Dr. Shekhar turned on the machine and made Manvi lie down and began the procedure.
Outside: Beeji and Madan Chachu were getting anxious waiting outside for the treatments first session to begin and then end. After about an hour the door opened and both the doctors came out leaving a nurse to watch over Manvi.
Beeji: Dr. Meri Beti kaise hai? Who teek tho hai na?
Dr. Shekhar: App fikar na kare, woh teek hai.. bas abhi thori si week hai, adhai ghentai thak usse ghar bhegh dai ghai, abhi bas thori dher monitor kar leh.. kyunki yeh pehli treatment thi na.
Beeji: Ji Dr. Saab, shukriya appka bohoth bohoth, kya hum uske pass baith sakthe hai?
Dr. Shekar: Ji zaroor, bas Dr. Manan appko ek dho bathai bathaige jinka appne kayal rakhna hai jaise Maanvi ka khana peena wagaira.
Madan: Thank You Dr. Saab.
Dr. Shekhar walked away as he talked to a nurse and Beeji and Madan followed Dr. Manan into an office where he told them what precautions to take during Maanvi's treatment. Once that was over Madan went to get Maanvi's medicines while Beeji sat with Maanvi.
Manvi- Beeji kaha thi app, main kabse appka wait kar rahi hoon.
Beeji- Woh hum Dr. Manan se baath kar rahei thai issi liye dehr lagh gayi'
Beeji walked towards the bed and sat down next to Manvi on the bed. As she sat there she started to run her hand on Manvi's head blessing her with a long life repeatedly. Suddenly the phone rang but before Beeji could pick it up it was cut off. After a few minutes it rand again and was again cut off.
Chandighar- Vadera's Mansion:
Jeevika was trying to call Beeji and ask her about her health since she hadn't spoken to her since they had left Chandighar. Unfortunately the call kept dropping due to the reception lines being unclear. After the second call was also dropped, she decided to give up and call later when she saw Virat and Maya walk in.
Jeevika: Hi, how was your day out guys?
Virat: Good Bhabhi, how was your day?
Jeevika: Its been good, thanks. (smiles)
Virat: Bhabhi, kya hua, app thori pareshan hai? (He asked because he realized his Bhabhi was a little off)
Jeevika: Nahin Virat, khus khaas nahin, main baas Beeji koh phone karne ki koshish kar rahi thi lekin who lagh nahin raha' (frowns)
Virat: Arre meri Bhai ki Fikar Minister, fikar na kaare main appko laga kai dehtha hoon.
Virat then went over to the phone and redialed the phone again, after a few rings when it didn't drop he handed the phone to his Bhabhi.
Ludihana:
Manvi: Uff, Beeji yeh kiska phone hai bhar bhar?
Beeji: Patha nahin, lagtha hai koy prank caller hoga.
Manvi: App Mujhe deh main issko seedha kartho hoon'(she then takes the phone)
On phone:
Manvi: Ji bhaisab, lagtha hai app bore ho rahai hogai issi liye bhar bhar phone kiye jaa rahe ho app.. actually kya hai na kai main bhi iss hospital kai bed pai par kai na bore ho chuki hoon'abb ap-
Jeevika: Maanu, tu hospital kai bed pai kya kar rahi hai!!?? (is shocked out of her wits)
Manvi is silent, thinking of what a blunder she had created.
On the other hand Virat is completely shocked after listening to this one sided conversation of Jeevika's and stops dead in his tracks. His heart stoped and then spead up, waiting for the bomb to drop. Wondering what it could be.
He heard Manvi explain something to his Bhabhi, but shewasn't listening at all. Infact she began to panic and also maked him panic and then he heard her tell her sister:
Jeevika: Nahin Maanu, tu jho bhi kahe, jab thak main ahh kai tujhe dekh nahin lehthi mujhe chain nahin ayyai ga..
After saying this she hangup and turned towards him.
Jeevika: (in a shaking voice)Virat.. tu please mujhe Ludihana leh jaiga' waha patha nahin Maanu koh kya hua hai, party wali raath usko fever bhi tha, or therai Bhaiya bhi kaam se bhahir gayai hai.. please Virat.
Virat: Zaroor Bhabhi, app appne ek dho cheexai leh legiye main thab thak ghari aghai latha hoon or Ma koh bhi bathatha hoon.
Jeevika: Thanks so much' (after she says this she ran to her room to grab a few things before heading out to the car)
Meanwhile:
As Virat headed to his Moms room his heartbeat kept escalating due to panic and worry. How could anything happen to his Sherni? HOW!?? She was the strongest person he knew. Upon reaching the room he saw that even Bua was there. He quickly told them what had happened and that him and Jeevika were going to head over to the Chaudhry's place and would inform Viren on their way there. Seeing the situation Ma and Bua also agreed that this would be the best course to take and went down to see Virat and Jeevika off.
Everyone was outside by the car when Virat took his bag and placed it in the car. He checked his pockets before getting in the car and realized he forgot his phone. He made Bhabhi sit down in the car and went back inside to grab his phone on his way out, Maya stopped him.
Maya: Maat jao Virat. Please.
Virat: (turned around)'Kyun kaya hua..?
Maya: I don't want you to be near Manvi,
Virat: Par Kyun??
Maya: I' I just don't like her..ok?
Virat is shocked upon hearing this, after all she was the one for whom Manvi had tried to convince him to open up.
Virat: She's my partner, and Bhabhi's sister, she does so much for everyone else. I have to go.
Maya: No, Virat, You don't have to'please don't go. She's not worth it.
Virat couldn't believe what he wass hearing, he heard everyone outside calling him to leave in the background but was not able to step forward or backwards. It didn't take him long after that to realize how fake the women infront of him was. She would never change, could never change. Last time she had walked out on him, well it was his turn now to walk out on her. And he did just that. Without once looking back he walked towards the car, got in and drove off. His direction, thoughts and prayers all focused on only one' His Sherni, his Partner, Manvi.
Please, Please Comment and press the like button. Seeing that I will decide to continue or not. Again do forgive me for spelling and grammatical errors and feel free to criticize.
-Pari
Index: Chapter 1-Page 1 Chapter 2- Page 4
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