CREATIVE THREAD: PICTURE STORYepilogue pg128(20/9 - Page 70

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you guys are just awesome!!
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so herat touching.
waiting 4 nxt update.
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PART 21
geet entered the room and maan was sitting on the bed.
maan...i'm sorry geet i know my torturing my self won't make things right but it help me this pain give me peace geet this is my punishment but i know it's not gona do any good thing for u today i came to meet u b'cause i have one thing of yours after giving it back to u may be may i can ask ur forgivness but after watching u cry alone only b'cause of me i could'nt control myself and u saw that i'm sorry again...
geet...maan what r u talking about?why u came to meet me?
maan...i have ur LAND geet ur dehli highway land.
geet...WATTT ...how is it possible?
FLASHBACK...
KC
maan in his cabin when adi came with a file
adi...maan sir yeh woh zameen ke papers hain highway wali.
maan...adi kya hua paper work poora nahi hua kya?u know that land is very important for our project.
adi...sir almost done bas land app kee naam transfer hona hai app paper dekh lain aur sign ker dain kal tak transfer complete ho jayae gi.
maan...hmmm
maan sees the file and shocked on owners name
maan...adi yeh yeh zameen too geet ki hai geet handa ki...usne bechi hai woh kahan hai kaisay mili tumhay?
maan has hope in his eyes.
adi was shocked to see maan like that.
adi...sir yeh zameen too geet handa ki hai but sale unke bhai ne ki hai.
maan...WATTT
adi...yes sir actully his sister geet handa is NO MORE so brij ji ne land sale ker diya hai.
all hopes of maan crushed and he some how calm himself in front of adi.
maan...hmmm per yeh zameen geet ki hai aur hamesha uski hi rahay gi.
adi...but sir yeh too app ne buy ki hai sirf app ke naame transfer hona rehta hai.
maan...i know adi but yeh hamesha geet ke naam hi rahay gi .
adi was shocked but he know maan very well jo bol diya woh hi hoga.
adi...ok sir jaisa app kahain.
END OF FLASHBACK
maan...that land is very suitable for ur project geet and its urs so i want to give it back to u.
geet was crying and suddenly she hugged maan tight
maan was surprised by that.
maan...geet.
geet...shhh chup rahiye bilkul chup app khudh ko takleef pohchatay rahay meri takleef ka soch ker and b'cause u are feeling guilty but jo apnay yeh kya hai naa maan yeh apki GUILT nahi PYAR tha u love me na maan...
maan hugged her back tightly
maan...haan geet i love u so much but when i understand that love of mine for u its too late i lost u forever i killed my love with my own hands.
maan was crying.
geet...maan i love u too
maan was shocked and he broke the hug to see geet
geet...ya maan i loved u a lot but haan jab tak samajh ayai bohat dair ho gayai thi but i know babaji jo kertay hain acha kertay hain shayad hamay aisay hi milna tha
after hearing that maan geet geet again..
meera entered in room
meera...app dono ki narazgi khatam ho gayai ho too ghar chalain sham main launch party bhi hai.
maan and geet both noded silently feeling embarassed.
LAUNCH PARTY.
after geet's speech about her dream project and working with KC .
music starts everyone was enjoying when maan came to geet.
maan...geet wohhh
geet...kya hua maan.
maan...will u dance with me mishti.
geet was acting shocked and hit on maan's arm
geet...yeh MISHTI kon hai aur dance tumko meray sath kerna hai ya apni MISHTI ke sath.
maan...offcoarse tumharay sath MISHTI
thay both laughed and

THE END
precap...😛
abb next koi aur likhay plzzz i'm very bad in writing romance😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
an extra update for u all friend
part 22
Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww...that was cute..
geet made maan tell that he s in love..
gud one sona..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome sona
loved it
waiting for next
luv u🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks friends 🤗
my net is giving me problems😡

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing dear loved waiting eagerly for the next part
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awww Sona that's fab update...
loved their sweet confession...
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awsome...

finally they confess deir feeling

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