CREATIVE THREAD: PICTURE STORYepilogue pg128(20/9 - Page 68

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Posted: 13 years ago
ok arpita sab milay ga update main 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

ok arpita sab milay ga update main 😃


waisa update kab de rahi ho😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 20
JAWAB DO MAAN chup kyun ho ...geet shouted but maan was to shock to answer anything geet again slapped him hard daadi clossed her eyes in pain but she know that only geet have the right ti slap maan only geet have the power to save her MAAN and she leave them alone there.
geet...bolo maan kya is tarah woh waqt wapas asakta hai can everything gona be fine after doing this to ur self NOOO not even ur dea...she chocked how can she think this for maan for her maan geet started crying bitterly he was very badly injured geet suddenly feeling scared and she hold maan's hand and started draging him towards her car "dekho kitna khoon nikal raha hai"she wiped blood from his arm and reached to her car still draging shocked maan with her .she shouted to her driver RAJU TAKE US TO HOSPITAL FAST.
man was surprised with geet's behaviour
MAAN'S S.T
why geet is reacting like this she knows that i ruined her life but why is she so upset abut my wounds my pain did she love me as i love her no no thats not possible i'm not even worthy of geet's forgivness and here i'm thinking of having geet's love god maan"
END OF S.T
raju drive fast...geet again said to her driver when maan is starting feeling dizzy b'cause of blood lost and last voice he heard before fainting was geet's scream
MAANNN
DEHLI AIRPORT
meera and yash reach dehli and meera is trying to call geet but she's not picking her phn
meera...ufff yeh geet bhi na phn nahi utha rahi
but then someone recieve the call
meera...geet tu kahan hai kab se phn ker rahi hoon.
person...ma'am main RAJU geet ma'am ka driver.
meera...raju geet kahan hai?
raju...ma'am hum city hospital main hain.
meera... KYAAA geet theek hai kya hua hai
raju...geet ma'am theek hain kisi admi ko yahan layai hain aur bohat ro rahi hain.
meera...theek hai hum atay hain.
yash i don't know why but i'm feeling something bad
yash...every thing will be fine meera lets go.
CITY HOSPITAL
yash meera reached hospital and shocked to see geet sitting on the floor crying
meera...geettt wat happened ?why r u crying?who is he?
geet...meera geet hugged her tight "meera maan maan he's wounded badly he tortured himself in guilt but its not the solution na meera he ruined my life i know that,i love him i know that to but today when i saw him drenched in blood meera i dont know why why it hurts me like i was stabbed it hurts a lot meera it hurts a lott"geet was crying when yash grabbed her arm and make her stand and said
yash...ok geet u know he ruined ur life right but u also know u love him a lot and today when he's here in hospital b'cause of his own bad deeds ur crying b'cause it hurts u a lot b'cause offcoarse u love maan a lot then why don't u put all this to an end forgive him or punish him but do it asap.but end it now.
geet was shocked to hear this and she wana say some thing when dr came.
dr...miss ur patient is ok now u can meet him now.
after saying that dr went from there and geet wipped her tears and said to yash.
geet...yes yash u right i have to end it now i have to.
i'm going to meet maan .
THE END
precap...geet's deccission

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update sona
loved the whole update
whatever yash told was right
she has to take the decession
precap is😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update sona
loved the whole update
whatever yash told was right
she has to take the decession
precap is😳

thanks yar🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part sona..
Geet wanted to punish him but at the same tym can't c him in pain..
Yash's words knocked some sense to geet..
Nw waiting for geet's decision..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arpitaji

Maja aa gaya dear 😊

😆thanks yar😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Loved the part sona..
Geet wanted to punish him but at the same tym can't c him in pain..
Yash's words knocked some sense to geet..
Nw waiting for geet's decision..

😃thanks yar🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome cont soon
couldnt reply earlier
wating for precap!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing dear
waiting for her decision

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