Ahem and love: there is something but what

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Possessive Ahem could not bear seeing his wife being soulless towards him, be it not having any eye contact with him when he asked her to take out his clothing to wear to when he was around her. She continued to make him feel disconcerted by her behaviour.
In their bedroom his mind triggered when she asked him what he wanted to wear as she never did so before. Making him to take her by her hand, like he did the previous day at the mandir and accepted that he should not have done so. This brought on a smile on which he enjoyed every bit of as this is the Gopi he wants to see and have around him.
He had unconsciously worked on redeeming himself thereafter. He smartly caught her attention through his short sentences, him approaching her and his body language. He achieved a second smile from her.
He asked for a second cup of green tea which she made. When the cup fell and broke, he apologised immediately taking the blame and attempted to pick up the pieces but in the process cut his finger. He was amazed at him as to how quickly she responded to making him feel better by taking hold of his finger and wiping off his oozing blood with the end of her pallu, and went on to nurse his wound.
He looked on at her thinking of why she suddenly distanced herself from him but when he got hurt she was there healing him. She knew that she still cared for him but there was something else bothering her, but what?
So Ahem is not heartless as today he had shown a considerate and loving Ahem towards his wife. Again as she was going away he called out for and this time with desperation he caught her hand. He wanted to see her smile. He wanted to see his happy Gopi who would do anything with devotion for him.
Gopi's real kanaji is alive and kicking for sure. He just needs to figure out what actually happened to him. Will he be able to join the dots for how he spent the the Holi afternoon while he is at the office?
A things to note in today's Ahem and love:
* he looked so dapper in his new black suit and a yellow shirt which complimented him very well.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another wonderful analysis Swasthi.

Well here we are, Ahem was quick to realize that something is wrong and was quicker to try to fix it the best way he could, but unfortunately for him he still doesn't remember, and seeing her in pain is causing him pain also, that much was obvious when he was unable to get a proper smile out of her.

Loved the way he caught her hand in his, shows how comfortable he is with her.
He is making all the efforts to get her to smile and put the sparkle back in her eyes, and for a moment he succeeded too, but it didn't last long. He realizes that there is something definitely wrong, but what? it has left him perplexed.

I hope he is able to remembers soon and puts that sparkle in her eyes and brings back her beautiful sweet smile back also.

At least he knows that she cares for him great deal and realizes he is very lucky to have someone like her in his life.


Last but not the least, have to agree, he looked his best today.
Nice to see him wear the yellow shirt just because she likes it so much.
Edited by sbp1971 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely post 👏...yes ahem came all decked up to please his gopi 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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now its ahem's turn to be head on heels for gopi! excellent post swasthi!1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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man has he fallen hard for gopi that her not responding to him his driving him crazy 👏👏👏
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Originally posted by: dipsy80

lovely post 👏...yes ahem came all decked up to please his gopi 😉

Thanks so much. That was quite a scene in the living room. He so wanted her to feel better. It tells that he does think about her and care for her a lot even though we do not get to see these scenes.
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👏Nice Post Swasthi...thank you👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abbay

now its ahem's turn to be head on heels for gopi! excellent post swasthi!1

You are welcome Abbay.
So true, Ahem has to begin to remember something as this can setback Gopi significantly. He senses that there is something wrong but is unable to put his finger on just what it is.
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fantastic post swasthi...ahem seemed lost when gopi did not behave with him like she normally would ...im liking the way he is trying to impress and woo her...and last but not the least ...like u said ahem was quite the eye candy today...
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Originally posted by: sbp1971

Res

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Another wonderful analysis Swasthi.

Well here we are, Ahem was quick to realize that something is wrong and was quicker to try to fix it the best way he could, but unfortunately for him he still doesn't remember, and seeing her in pain is causing him pain also, that much was obvious when he was unable to get a proper smile out of her.

Loved the way he caught her hand in his, shows how comfortable he is with her.
He is making all the efforts to get her to smile and put the sparkle back in her eyes, and for a moment he succeeded too, but it didn't last long. He realizes that there is something definitely wrong, but what? it has left him perplexed.

I hope he is able to remembers soon and puts that sparkle in her eyes and brings back her beautiful sweet smile back also.

At least he knows that she cares for him great deal and realizes he is very lucky to have someone like her in his life.


Last but not the least, have to agree, he looked his best today.
Nice to see him wear the yellow shirt just because she likes it so much.

Thanks so much Shilpa.
There was something in that last scene in the living room. Ahem watched her over and over again while she took care of his finger. He looked at her at least 6 times in succession and each time with a growing smile on his face. He was happy to leave without another cup of his tea or even breakfast. He knew that she still loved him as much as before, especially if she can show so much of love for his finger imagine the love she has for him.

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