Write your own OS !!!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: Kabe

Sorry dhanya, can read n comment abt OS bt zero in writing it...sad

Originally posted by: kriya37

KRISHNA VS SHAKTI

Shakti is telling sajjan that he will throw everyone out of his shakti nivas! And just then K enters and shouts"Aaaeee Sakti bhai! tumka toh hum nai chodenge!" Shakti is furious and tells K," Aee baba! saala ab tum KUCHHO nai kar sakte! ab ee haveli ke malik HUM HAI! nikal jao!" K is terribly angry and pounces on Shakti! Shakti is ready and dodges krishna and slaps him! Krishna is angry on being slapped by shakti! He grabs shakti's collar and pushes him, then he punches shakti twice in the stomach and then kicks him on the face! Furious by this, shakti takes a gun and aims at krishna, but fearless krishna grabs the gun from his hand and throws it away! He says, "aasli mard ko banduk ki zarurat nai na! saala thakur ki aulaad ho! aamne saamne ladho!" Instigated, shakti and krishna get into wrestling, krishna finally beats up shakti badly! Then he says," aaj hum tumka jaan se mar denge sala! And he grabs shakti and bangs him on the pillar, shakti is badly injured and bleeding. Then krishna kicks him on the chest and beats him so badly that he falls down exhausted! then krishna says, "iss mukable mein humne tumka hara diya hai! tum ab chuppe chap saari jaidat ke kagaz bauji ke naam kar do nahi to hum tumka zinda nai chodenge" shakti is badly beaten up so he agrees and falls at sajjan's feet but SS refuses to forgive him and tells him to get out of their life! shakti goes away planning revenge...SS is proud of krishna and hugs him!

Originally posted by: ash_arja

Ok here m just trying out my imagination...
m just ignoring the waiter part and Shakthi's revenge...
so here it goes... if you guys like it pls hit the like button😃

Part 1

It was night time and Krishna stormed into the room'. Pratigya who had been waiting for him slept sitting on the bed' all the time she had been thinking about him and his behavior, his frustrations and his anger' she was afraid if his anger would put him to very many difficulties' tears rolled down her eyes' how this holi had been quiet' every holi of hers with Krishna had been fantastic'' and while thinking she was off to sleep. Krishna who entered, saw the tears at the edge of her eyes and wiped them off. His heart melted looking at the pearls. He had never been able to tolerate her tears' he thought to himself," kahin na kahin tumre ee aansoon ki wajah hume hi hai" wiping away his tears went into the wash room. After sometime he came out, he woke her and asked her to sleep properly'.. she did not speak to him and turned to the opposite side and tried to sleep' while he was sleeping on his back. he called her' "Babu''"

Pratigya: hmmm'

Krishna: humri wajah se tumko bahut pareshaani hoyi rahi hai na'.

Pratigya (turned to his side and kept hands on his which were resting upon his chest): nahi Krishna'. Hume to tumhaare saath bahut khush hai' ek ek pal humaare liye khaas hai'.

Krishna: nahi babu yaar'.

Pratigya slightly lifted her head and kept her hands on his forehead: dekho ye sab baatein chodo' tumhe apne ko pareshaan karne ka haq kisne diya?? (lifting her eyebrows)' raat bahut ho gayi hai so jaao'.

Krishna (got up and was almost into his old form): matlab ka??? Haq kisne diya matlab?

Pratigya too got up: matlab ye thakur saab'.. aapka dil humaare paas hai aur aap par pratigya ka raj chalta hai'. aur aap ko pareshaan karna, aap se gussa hona, jagda karna humaara haq aur adhikaar hai'. samajhe aap'.

Krishna was elated at her words'. " ye babu suno' tum na humraa dil khush kar diyo yaar' ab jaldi se jaun maang na hai maango'."

Pratigya: sach mein doge'.

Krishna: pakki'ek dum pakka

Pratigya (cupping his face in her palms): hume humaara Krishna wapas chahiye'.. wo Krishna jo har waqt masti mazak karta hai, kisi cheez ko apne dil se nahi leta'.. jo humse pagalon ki tarah pyaar karta hai' subah shaam, din raat sirf pyaar bhari baatein karta hai humse'.

Krishna (dull): raat bahut ho gayi hai'.so jaao'

Pratigya (angry): bade bade wade karte ho par usse nibhaana bhi nahi jaante'. (she turned to the pther side)

Krishna smiled''

The next morning' Pratigya came out of the washroom and she saw Krishna sleeping innocently. She went near him to place a kiss but stopped as he did not fulfill her wish. She turned away and went'. Pratigya, the dutiful daughter in law that she is was busy in the kitchen''.

Krishna got up and looked around to see that Pratigya has not even taken out his clothes'. Krishna smiled and he got ready'. Came out calling out her name loudly'Babu' Babu'..

Pratigya wantedly did not answer'. Amma taunted as usual that he will never change' Krishna," subah shuru mat ho jaao'"

Krishna was standing at the back'' Pratigya was in the kitchen doing the sabzis and she asked piyasiya to take the flour for making the dough'.. piyasiya who was going to take it saw Krishna was about to take his name' when silenced her by signaling to keep quiet'. Through signals he asked her to get out of the kitchen' she came out and whispered," bhaiya uu kisna bahu humka aata'." He said," chup hum sab dekh lenge tum jaao'.."

Amma was coming towards kitchen and Krishna quickly hid' he wanted to be alone with her in the kitchen'

Amma gave her some instructions and walked out' Krishna creeped in and hugged her from back'. Pratigya shouted," Ahhh'."

Pratigya though was smiling internally behaved tough out'.." Krishna jaao tum hume bahut saara kaam hai aur waise bhi hume tumse koi baat nahi karni"

Krishna: babu yaar'..

Pratigya: kuch mat bolo tum apni biwi ki ichcha bhi poori kar sake tum'. (struggling hard to get out of his grip)

Krishna: hum tumhaari ichcha poore karne ke kaam par hi to lage hai tum samajh nahi rahi ho yaar'. (moving her hair from back and slowly blew out)

Pratigya was feeling ticklish, shy the moment she felt his hot breathe on her back. She controlled her heart not to get engaged with him in this romance now as this was not the right time and place.

With great struggle, she came out of his grip''

Pratigya: dekho Krishna abhi tum jaao baad mein hum sab nipat lenge'..

Krishna: ee ka baat hui yaar'.. tum hi kahi ki hum pehle jaise ho jaaye ab jab ho gaye hai to hume bagaa rahi ho'' (turned away his face)

Pratigya (turned his face towards her): dekho' bahut kaam baki hai' hum jaldi khatam kar denge phir tumhaare saath saara waqt bitaayenge''

She moved to take the flour'.he stopped her from taking it'

Krishna: teek hai to ek kaam karte hai' hum tumhri madd kar dete hai aur tumhara kaam jaldi jaldi ho jaayiga' baad mein tum humre paas aa jaaogi'.

Pratigya (filled with tears'.thinking to herself): aakhir humaara Krishna hume wapas mil gaya'..

Originally posted by: piyarapiyari

Dhanya Dii superb post bt Dii I,m not gud in writing becoz if I write everyone ,ll run frm a forum bt will not get a place to hide 🤣 bt then also will try bt LIL one!!! And ashu zabardast superb I was lost in it 😳 😍 bt them it ends plz update 2nd part eagerly waiting!!

Originally posted by: dhakarn

👍🏼 wish this happens... 😊

Yeah man i would love to see such scenes! 😃 u liked my OS? it was my first one! 😊