App ki nazron ne samjha UPDATED NEW THREAD LINK @ pg 1

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APP KI NAZROON NE SAMZHA PYAAR KE KABIL MUJHE..

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part 1
she was going for interview..her mood was really bad..she wanted cry & scream to someone she did not wanted to go to the interview...
she could not believe that some hours ago she was so excited to go to the inter view..bt..she smiled sadly.. like any other day..it happend today too..
though it was happening to her everyday in two years..bt she still couldn't just shrug it off..
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today she woke up at four am..she was so damn excieted for this interview that she could not sleep at all..
so she lighted the lamp & started to prepare for the interview again.
her mom woke up at six a.m..it was still dark as it was winter..her mom saw the light of her room & went to their..
she shouted..paisa kya ped pe milta hai jo tune din me light on kar rakhi hai??
she had to light the lamp as her room was really dark..
she did not take it to heart..mama mujhe nind nahi aa rahi thi to maine socha ki main aj ki interview ki taiyaari kar lu..
rehne de waise vi tujhe wo naukri nahi milne wali..hmpp..badi ayi naukri karne wali..apna result dekha hai..pados ki wo buddhu ladki ko vi tujhse bohut zyada marks mile hai..she taunted wo vi isi jaga interview dene ja rahi hai..aur wo use chorkar tujhe naukri denge!she started to verbally abuse her..there was not a single gali thatwas left to use on her..the after sometime she left..

geet closed her room's door slowly,locked it & turned off the light..she sat on the floor & started to cry..
not only she bt her teachers & also her friends knew that she used her last blooddrop to get good result..not for her..it was for her parents..geet always used to say to her friends & teacher.."main itni mehnat isliye nahi kar rahi hu taki mujhe naam mil sake..main apne mama-papa ka sar garv se ucha karna chati hu"
though was not a good student ar first..bt when she got good marks in 11th she got the confidence that she can do it too... even her teachers were sure that she will held a good position in board exam, bt her luck ALWAYS came between her dreams ..
so when the result of the 12 th got published she got great scores in all sub..except in the one she worked most..
all her life..no one understood her..her parents for whom she was taking all this pain blamed her for not getting good marks in that subject,they ignored all the other subjects in which she topped ..on theresult day they only accused her..she cried then..

in her first year she was still depressed because of this,bt she still tried to do her best..bt it was really difficult with her big brother creating everyday a big fight & braking all things in house..because her family did not accept his girlfriend,her parents fighting everyday...that time too she cried..
she barely passed her 1st year..her family again blamed her for bad results..
that time too she cried..no,not in helplessness... she cried because she longed for someone ..jis ko wo apni baat bata sake,jiske god pe sar rakh ke wo ro sake,jo use pyaar se dilasa de saab thik ho jayega...
bt now somewhere she started to feel that she could never have anyone like that...she was not worth of anyone's love ,BECAUSE...
her all thoughts came to an abrupt end when a passing car spread mud in her white dress..
OYE!! andha hai kya..dikhai nahi deta??
car stopped ,door opened & a man o 30's came down..sorry wo mujhe late ho raha tha..
apne ye kya kiya..mujhe interview ke liye jana hai..
oh!! i am sorry..umm..accha ek kam kare..samne hi kapro ki ek shop hai..waha app koi vi loth kharid sakti hai..
par..geet was reluctant..
par war kuch nahi..maine dress bigadi hai main hi barpai karunga..
nahi iski zarurat nahi..
DEKHO..he said sternly..mujhe late ho raha hai..mere pass waqt nahi hai..
main aisi ladki nahi hu jo kisi se vi..
chup!! ekdam chup.zyada bolo mat..chalo..
he draged her to the shop where she selected a dress cribbing..
hey babaji..kitne dusht danav hai ye..kisi ki baat hi nahi sunte..
she selected a dress which was very cheap in price..
she wore it & came out..
while paying the bill the man smiled..thinking agar koyi aur iske zaga par hoti to koyi mehngi dress chose karti..par ye bahut bholi hai..
after that the man went from there by car & geet started to walk..
babaji aj subha se kuch accha nahi ho raha hai..kash mujhe ye job mil jaye..
when she went to the officce she saw only one candidate is left there & she was none other than her neighbour natasha..the one her mom was talking about..
she saw geet & smirked evilly,said in a yucky sweet tone,interview dene ayi ho yaha..
ha
tch,tch..GEET,tumvi na kitni buddhu ho..bar bar aa jati ho mere mu lagne..sbak nahi milta hai kya tumhe..waise umhara result dekh kar wo lag tumhe waise vi nahi lenge..
it was natasha's turn ..she went in smirking to her..bt came back with a dull face..
next was geet
she entered the room & got the shock of her life..!!!!!!! the man sitting in boss's chair was shocked too..
APP!
TUM!!
preacp-will geet get the job..some of geet's past with natashsa..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting continue soon 👍🏼
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nice one do continue soon
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Gud start..
So she s living a lonely life with her parents..


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congrats...
interesting start...
poor Geet...
is that Maan?
cont soon dear...
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very nicely written
good start...
looking forward😊

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very interesting start...

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Excellent ...
great start...loved it...
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