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Posted: 11 years ago

APP KI NAZROON NE SAMZHA PYAAR KE KABIL MUJHE..

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Part 23

(sorry for being late,i was collecting materials for my NEW FF which i will start after ending MY JUNGLE GIRL 😃😳)

& those who are asking why geet was chup chup with all those rubbish talk...yaar she just met them,she can't be fiery when she doesn't even know what are their intentions!! Specially when the persons are her IN-LAWS!!! (FINISH THIS THREAD ,then next update😈)

Mom!!! I am so happy that you came here & now will be living with us! Maan exclaimed in happiness & hugged his mother.He was truly happy ... seeing his mom after so many years!

Yes,i am happy too maan.

Mom did you meet your choti bahu Geet? Isn't she a wonderful person?

N...Yes maan. But don't you think that ur marriage was too sudden? I mean...na jaan na pehchan...

Mom she was Anie's tutor for few years ..though i didn't realize it until our marriage!!! Maan said shyly scratching his head like he was some naughty kid caught in doing some mischief.

Tumhe pata nahi tha?

Ha..wo anie hamesha bolti rehti thi..meri di ye ..meri di wo...bt i couldn't meet her cause by the time i came home,it was always late at night.

To...how did you know her personally? Ya phir shadi ke din hi..Shalini(maan's mom) asked curiously

Nahi,actually the year we got married she was working as my secretary. Then uske shadi me...u know the rest mom..

Yes as being a dutiful son Maan felt obliged to tell his mother how he got married & every other details, so what if his mom couldn't come to meet him!(it is what he thought) It was his duty to not let her out from any drastic changes in family,wasn't it...?Ofcourse the only thing he hid from her is the fact that he loved His Geet even before the marriage,he was too shy to tell this to his mom...it didn't matter,right? because he was clear in telling the fact that he loved geet NOW.

So,you are saying that geet knew anie & then worked under you before marriage...are you sure that she didn't know that you are anie's Big brother??

Shalini tried to make it sound scandalous...I mean..isn't it too much a coincident??


Are nahi mom...,maan didn't even get the sarcasm & ugly suggestion in her voice...he just brushed all her malicious words without knowing ..with a sweet smile, You know,we two are really made for each other!! We are really dumbo's!!! Anie kept telling me about her & her about me,bt we stupids didn't even get it,neither me..nor geet...are hume chodiye...apki ladli beti bhi samajh nahi payi,even if we kept telling about each other to Anie!

Waise mom,she is really friendly. Dekhna,apke saath uski jam jayegi. Geet hai hi aisi,sabka dil jeet lati hai pal bhar mein. Wo...


Shalini was irritated with this love talk of Maan about Geet,so she interrupted..

Maan,i came from a long journey,so i want to take rest.

Oh,ha..sorry mom. Ok good night.

****

Naintara came after some moment maan leaving the room.

So mummyji,what do you think?

Uff!! I was so irritated with that boy! It's like he doesn't have anything else in his mind but geet ..!! Shalini huffed.

Koi baat nahi mummiji,we are now here now. It won't take much time for us to make him forget about that cheap do kaudi ki ladki! Then we can marry him off to my sister.

Bt Nt,are you sure that maan would want to marry ur sister?? After all she was maan's girlfriend & left him when she knew that maan have to join the kc brunch in India.

Don't worry mummiji,she has enough charm to make him forget that. She will say him that she didn't want to leave him & all...

Yeah..if i had knew that this stupid kid could earn so much that he turned this small India brunch into the MAIN BRUNCH..he made AN EMPIRE,i would never have driven him out of the house.

& now,we have to tolerate that little minx Geet!!! & for her we can not even make Maan dance in our ishara.

Don't worry mummiji,when we drive geet off & marry maan to my sis,this whole EMPIRE will be OURS!!!! He will do everything she says...aka WE SAY...Both laughed loudly at the thought.


****

In HANDA HOUSE:-

Brij & Pammi were in their room .

The BIG & lavish party of THE KHURANAs' were THE talk of the town,they were showing it every where...after all,maan was THE business tycoon of india now! It was not known to the Handas'(Geet's family) that how much MAAN or GEET HERSELF has achieved ...until NOW.

Pammi was changing channels suddenly her eyes struck to the popular new channel,which was showing some big shot's extremely lavish & gorgeous new built house & the extremely rocking welcome party in it.

Her eyes sparkled seeing all the riches...& she got hooked on to the channel.

It was a previously recorded video & a person was giving commentary with the video in the background.

Ab hum apko dekhane ja rahe hai,the persons behind this successful & GRAND party ,though they refused to give interview today..we can atleast show them to you..don't we?The commenter said.

The camera banged the other directions as it showed Dadi & Anie...

Hmm..ye ladkii aur ye Budiya(old lady) kuch jani pehchani lag rahi hai...

& last bt not least..The commenter continued...

We are going to show you..the ever perfect couple of the decade...Girls & boys,better be ready to have your breath hitched by their beauty & charm & ur poor heart be crushed by the fact that they are already perfectly married...


The Most handsome BUSINESS tyCOON MR MAAN SING KHURANA & HIS OH SO BEAUTIFUL WIFE...who is also the cause of my heart break along with many other boys...the commenter sighed... MRS. MAAN GEET SING KHURANA...


They showed the video of them gracefully & romantically dancing with each other in the party.

Pammi's eyes went wide.

BRIJ...BRIJ...BRIJ UTHO!!!

Kya hai?? Brij said groggily.

Aren't they GEET & MAAN ????!!!! She pointed at the screen

Brij looked at the Tv screen & his sleep flew through the window.

Yes they are!!! They...They...They are...

RICH!! (pammi) CHANGED!!! (Brijj) said together.

*****

In Maan-Geet's bedroom...

Sooo...kya kar rahi hai meri pyari biwi? maan said naughtily.

Haio RABBA!! Kitne besharam hai ye!! Geet said loudly...from BATHROOM.

Babaji apne aisa besharam pati dekha hai kavi huh..koi apne patni se ..y...ye puchta hai jab wo bathroom me naha raha ho??

Are gussa kyun ho rahi ho?? Maan said mischievously,thank GOD that geet couldn't see his goofy expression from inside the bathroom.

App...app...app na duniya ke sabse bade besharam,lafenge,aur..aur..aur...chichore pati ho.

Maan's smile went wider...well if any other female had said this he would have felt offended..bt he didn't think that any loving husband in the world wouldn't smile hearing these PARTICULAR "GALIS" from his beloved WIFE!!!

Bt he acted suprised...HAWWW!! GEET!! Tum apne pati ko AISA bol sakti ho!!!! Maine Sapne main bhii nahi socha tha!!


W..wo..main ..main..

Main tumse baat nahi karne wala geet ..he said like a child ...bt waited outside the door with a naughty smile.

Babaji,main bahar jake unhe mana lungi..haina babji..HA...she looked up & decided that her Babaji said yes.

Maan smirked listening to her.

After a few minutes..when her bath finished..she noticed she didn't bring ANYTHING!!! not even towel. She went beetroot red.

Ab main kya karoon...main to kuch bhi nahi layi!! Maan's goofy smile went wide,if it was possible.

M..m..maan...

Ha...kya hua Shona...he feigned innocence (come on!! You are anything bt that maan!!😆)

WO mera...ummm..kya lane ko bolu..HA..bathrobe thik rahega...she talked to herself unknown that a VERY naughty maan could here everything.

Mera bathrobe dena..main lana abhul gayi.

Are you sure geet,kii tumhe SIRF bath robe chahiye??

K..kkk..kkk.kya matlab hai apka??

I mean..baby...don't you need a towel to wipe yourself up? Then your dupatta.. salwar..kamiz...

H..ha,wo bhi de dijiye,geet said with stupid honesty turning redder than ever possible.

Accha...par mujhe to laga ..ki tum pehle B** aur P** pehnti ho .Geet hid her face in her plams...if there was a animation expert there,he surely would have pictured geet as her head exploding & lava coming out of it out of shyness & embarrassment.

Phir mujhe laga...ki tum slip pehenti ho..

Maan,a...agar..a..app mujhe yu chidayenge to..to...

To kya geet,ab meri kya galtii hai..tumne hi to kaha na..ki main lafanga hu,besharam hu...CHiCHORA Hu...

Main bahar aa jaungi..a..a..aise hi.

Maan weighed his option of either heart attack or severe nose bleeding...bt then his naughty CHICHORA mind overpowered him.

Dekhta hu kaise aati ho...he challenged her knowing she would jump at it without thinking.

ma..main aa jaungi..

...

main aa jaungi...

...

main aaa rahi hu!! Geet closed her eyes tightly & came out of the washroom.

Bt then was startled when almost instantly her body was covered with a big warm blanket..enough to cover her from head to toe...with maan's arms around her from her back.

she opened her eyes slowly,only to find the room darkly & found maan embracing her from behind closing his eyes.

He kissed her forehead & looked at her eyes.

Main apni geet ko tabhi dekhunga..jab wo chahegi...dil se. he whispered tucking the loosed strand of hair behind her ears gently.

Geet was touched ,this layer of tears gathered in her eyes. she turned & hugged maan.

They didn't know how long they had been standing there.just hugging each other...it felt so peaceful & serene in each others arms...

Geet,go get changed in the dressing room,or else you will catch cold.

Geet came in after changing,wearing her cute pink two piece night suit. She looked a bit fidgety..

Kya hua geet?

She ran to maan & hugged him...& he hugged her back,though not understanding anything..

Maan..geet whispered.

Hmm...

yaad hai hamari shart...

propose wala..??

ha...

she kissed him lightly on his lips..shyly...

ap kuch kuch kar sakte ho..she looked down blushing...

kitna kuch??maan said with a wicked smile

thoda sa...aur... bohut kuch..she said with an innocent shyness

Geet hugged maan tightly ...as he carried her to their bed in princess style, smiling at her lovingly...

Precap- This all happened in the same night the evil troop came,so next update will be about next morning😆😡

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was too romantik bitween Maaneet
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Posted: 11 years ago
haiyye inka romance is to die for dear
but so many people have their eyes on separating the poor babies
is she really his mother
if she was or is how can she be so mean while man so seedha sadha
wait maan itne seedha hain kaise
bless the way he was praising his wife
and not getting his mother evil comments just loved it
they are so made for one another
do you really think you can take geet away from him
no way in hell
and even if that happens am sure dadi and annie will see that maneet are back together
and get rid of the new pests
man was he being naughty or what
poor geet going shram se paani paani
waise this was bound to happen
but he said he will only see her when she wants him too
bless he is the best hubby and she is his best life partner
so her family too know about maneet right

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum update
luvd d maaneet scene
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good one dear...so all the evils coming together...omg Pammi bakhi thi woh bhi join hogayi...and Maan, oh god he is too much into loving and respecting his mother but the devil she want to separate out Maneet and get Maan married to someone...ergghhh
I hate them so very much

Just waiting to know how our innocent and good hearted Maneet overcome this storm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved maaneet movement lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kash me can bang my head...how could I just forget to mention it, especially when our Geet being so shy and romantic and Maan being romantic and naughty
Its the best part of the entire update as I got to see the love of Maneet

And another part dedicated to the evil gang out there...which is a major twist to the story



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Posted: 11 years ago
all evils got on same time
loved maneet part
tooo..ooo..oo..ooo.. much
very romantic naughty n lovable..
superb superb superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsem update nt and shalini in km and brij pammi in handa saari evil entries aaj hi kar di
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Posted: 11 years ago
abb kya hoga...

wonderful but scary update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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