App ki nazron ne samjha UPDATED NEW THREAD LINK @ pg 1 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago

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part 11
Geet was crying silently while maan was driving looking forward..bt after sometime her cries became unbearable to him..he stopped the car with a jerk & took a deep breath...then he looked at geet.
geet i am sorry..i
she started to even more & managed to say in between her sobs.. app kyu sorry keh rehe ho? app ne kya kiya?
nahi wo..wo to..wo sab..main..he looked really baffled
now geet smiled a little,waise app aise BAKHRI ki tara main main karte hue cute lagte ho..
maan glared at geet bt then a smile broke out of his lips...
accha? aur tum to ..tum to..
yaad aa jaye to batana..
the broke into laughter..after the spasms of laughter died maan looked at her deeply.
kya hai maan?
he pulled her into a bear hug tightly & said..sorry geet meri waja se u have to be detached from ur parents..bt i promise u..i will make them believe us...
she unknowingly snuggled in his warm cocoon..hmm..i know,she whispered.
waise i want to eat black forest cake now..
her eyes lit up at this name...
she jumped from his embrace & licking her lips questioned..BLACK FOREST..i mean..ahem..wo i don't want to eat though..
accha!! to ek kaam karte hai..sedhe ghar chalte hai..
NAHIII..mera matlab hai..ki agar app itna zor de hi rahe hai ..to mana kaise kar sakte hai..hai na??
maan smiled at her nautanki wife's antics..& drove to the pastry shop.
*******
bhabi app itni jaldi ..
maan looked at annie signalling her to stop..dadi also noticed that & assumed somethinng must have happend.
dekhiye na dadi i bought black forest cake for all of us.
pata hai dadi..dimag kharab kar diya tha mera apki bahu ne..
bhai!! my bhabi is THE BEST..u can't say anything to her..
lekin kya hua maan beta?
madam ko main le gaya pastry shop pe iska mood karane..
aur jab order aya to madamboli sabke liye le jana hai..akele nahi enjoy kar sakti..!! UFF!
though maan loved this side of geet bt he said it dramatically taki wo apna gam bhula sake..
HAWW dadi ..dekha dekha..kitne bade dust danav hai..
ha maan ..app hamari bacchi ko dant kyu rahe ho?
dusht danav..she showed her tongue ...
geet ki bacchi..tujhe to..he started to run behind her..& there goes...again!! there TOM & jerry chase!
*******
lekin i won't be able to eat that beta..'
kyu dadi?
though i want to..bt baccha i am suffering from many health problems..so i can't really enjoy most of the things..
geet became sad at this.
it's of beta..she planted a kiss at her forehead.
********
bhabi mujhe ye portion samaj nahi aa raha hai..
show me..
it has been 3 months since that day..nothing has changed in between them...actually may there was a change...
maan had told dadi & annie about what happened in geet's mayka..after knowing that they did all that they could to keep geet happy & busy..so that mayke ki yaad use na sataye..
nothing changed between geet & annie's realation..except the fact that the love between them multiplied..same goes for her & dadi's relation..
bt there was a change in her & her hubby's relation..
that day when geet was banished from her own house..she was finding it really difficult to keep her emotions at check...though she didn't cry much in front of maan & the family members..bt at night ..she couldn't help bt cry ,sleeping at bed..
that time..much to her surprise maan had pull her towards him..& kept her head on his chest..
(this scene seems familiar to me...bt i am not sure..if this scene resembles to anyone's ff..then pls forgive me..& ofcourse report me..i will try my best to change the scene)
he said nothing...bt he continued to stroke her hair with his fingers,holding her close to him with his other hand...as geet clinged onto him & cried for the whole night...
after that night..all days & nights seemed blissfull to her with maan,dadi & annie..yes,they were not rich,bt they were happy in their little paradise.
bt they say...happiness doesn't last forever..

PRECAP- someone from past..only to hurt geet!!!
KUHU TUM!!!
will update tomrrow
Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part..Geet comfortable with & his family..who's coming..
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Posted: 12 years ago
cake and maan consoling geet



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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
they all are living as a happy family
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
maans care towards geet n his loving family
making geet forget her maayka
no twist pls..
let them be happy 4 some more time..
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
loved it
thanx for adding me
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...
he is really caring.. loved the way he always makes her happy..
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow updated after a long time.
Maan & his family r so good.
But Geet's family shld suffer a lot & never get forgiveness for wat dey did.

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