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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fantastic update
very well written
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
TEASER


hey did u here mrs kapoor(Ayush's mom) there are new residents coming in our colony...
in OUR COLONY??
yes..& that too in such a short notice...u know the person must be very rich..
yes he has to be rich to enter our colony..after all here all of delhi's richest persons only live..
no..u are not understanding mrs kapoor...he has bought the complete eastern part of this area..
bt that is the most expensive part of this area for it location & scenery...
yes..& that will be like almost 50-60 acre!!! & he bought that in such a short notice too..
wow seems like super rich.
i have heard that he is a super handsome young man too,one of the ladies said
.is he married??
actually i heard that he,i mean MR KHURANA has a wife & she is very beautiful
oh!! damm i was thinking to take my daughter's rishta to him..
don't worry mrs kapoor..we were thinking the same..bt i guess bad luck..
no maybe it's good because we would have fought against each other for one guy at this age ...she joked
that's right..they laughed...

bt kuhu's ears shot up at this, who was sitting with the girls of her age..mostly bahus of the ladies...the eastern part of this estate was so costly for its super rich scenery that no one could afford it..then who is this super rich guy..??& handsome too??!!
i am coming mr khurana..& i don't care who ever ur wife is..infront of my charm & beauty...u will forget that wife of yours..


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she tried to flaunt herself as much as she could..it was easy as she was wearing a saree in a very provocative manner..she gathered her anchal together on her shoulder giving a full view of her total waist...showing of her deep naval..
she was specially dressed in saree which she hated only because she had heard that mr khurana likes indian dresses...bt alas..everyone looked at her except one nerd called adittya & mr khurana himself...
oh!! maybe he is ignoring me in public...don't worry mr khurana..i will get u in ur cabin
Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
teaser
interesting...
shes cheap and low...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful teaser...

loved it very much...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
dear plz update jaldi do
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome teaser..

waiting 4 the update..
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Posted: 12 years ago

APP KI NAZROON NE SAMZHA PYAAR KE KABIL MUJHE..

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part 14
Those who have read the teaser, I am changing that a little bit as I felt later that ,that teaser is portraying my character in a wrong light..

MAAN ,MAAN,MAAN..WHO WAS THAT GIRL?? SHE CAME IN LIKE A BREEZZE ,CREATED A TORNADO ON SCREENE & VANISHED LIKE CHINDRELLA?!! OMG ! I COULDN'T EVEN COLLECT HER CONTACT NUMBERS,WHOEVR THAT WAS,MAAN I AM REQUESTING U PLS ,I WANT ONLY HER TO BE ONE OF THE LEADS IN MY..

Arjun..One of the leads?? Maan asked

Ya,actually my serial already got a lead & it is running for 1 year now , bt my female lead is a tantrum throwing queen & too proud of her beauty & talent..though our industry has much much much more talented actors than her, it was her beauty that we cannot help bt accept, so to break her arrogance, I decided to bring in a new character, a new face..bt finding one girl more beautiful than her was tougher than I thought,bt u solved that problem..

Maan felt offended..he could not accept her ladylove's talent & beauty being used just to break someone's arrogance..

No..i cannot let u to access her talent just to break someone's arrogance.. what will happen after ur so called heroine realizes her mistake..u will take geet out of ur show?? I can't accept..


No maan, Arjun cut his words in middle, u are thinking wrong..more that my current actress's arrogance it's geet's talent..i will keep her in my show & she & KUHU both will be of same importance in the show'& also I have future plans with that girl geet..

Hmm..ok bt it's her decision'WAIT!! What did u say?? What is ur current actress's name?

Kuhu..

Maan grinned a cunning smile..hmm interesting'ok buddy I will talk with geet.

Waise tu iss ladki geet ko kaise janta hai..

Maan's smile broadened ..she is my wife..MRS MAAN SING KHURANA'

Oohh'then arjun screamed'WHAT!!!! Then why..how..when..what'I mean why didn't u tell me before??

I wanted u to select her based on her talent..not for my name or the relation we share..aur sun..aur kisiko ye baat pata nahi chalni chahiye ki wo meri wife hai..or her talent will be criticized & judged for no reason..

Won't u announce ur wedding?

We will, bt not now..

Ok..i will keep it a secret,then

I will give u geet's contact number,u tell her.

Why don't u give her the

NAHIII!!

Chilla kyu raha hai??

Agar use pata chala ki maine use audition ke liye bheje tha waha'to wo mujhe kaccha chaba jayegi..

Arjun lauged ..ok I will call her.

Bye.

Bye.

***

Elegance ..was the colony's name'home of some of the India's most richest people..& that colony's main attraction..by status & by riches was the KAPOOR family..Ayush's family'

Everyday it was almost like a ritual for the colony ladies to gather with their daughter-in -Laws for evening tea at someone's home..the responsibility of this kitty party rotated to everyone everyday..today it was Mrs.Kapoor's turn to host the kitty party..so all gathered in Kapoor mansion..

As usual..in the big hall room ladies were divided in two parts..one of the group was of mother-in-laws & the other group was of bahus..Where mother-in-laws & bahus were busy at complaining about each other to their "friends"'


KUHU has always been the topic of their chit chat whenever the tea party was hosted by the Kapoors..that is ..how good she was acting, how beautiful she was,..mainly it was all praises..ho vi kyu na..afterall..they are the richest & most famous in their colony'they HAD to talk good about them..which only boosted Kuhu's fat ego...

Bt today's topic was focused on only one topic'.The new arrival in their colony.

Did u here mrs kapoor(Ayush's mom) there are new residents coming in our colony...

OUR COLONY??

yes..& that too in such a short notice...u know the person must be very rich' said mrs Gupta

yes he has to be rich to enter our colony..after all here all of delhi's richest persons only live..

No..u are not understanding mrs kapoor...he has bought the complete eastern part of this area..

Bt that is the most expensive part of this area for it location & scenery...

yes..& that will be like almost 50-60 acre!!! & he bought that in such a short notice too..& more than that..he built an amazing palace like house there'not to forget other multiple buildings, Greenhouses, helipad'

WOW! seems like super rich.

i have heard that he is a super handsome young man too, one of the ladies said

Is he married??

Actually i heard that he,i mean MR KHURANA has a wife & she is very beautiful

Oh!!NAhI!! i was thinking to take my daughter's rishta to him..

Don't worry mrs kapoor..we were thinking the same..bt i guess bad luck..

No maybe it's good because we would have fought against each other for one guy at this age ...she joked

That's right..they laughed...

bt kuhu's ears shot up at this, who was sitting with other bahus...the eastern part of this estate was so costly for its super rich scenery that no one could afford it..then who is this super rich guy..??Hmmm'.interesting'makes me curious ..what kind of person is he'

****

Ayush came back from office,though he was tired..he & his father were excited for some reason..

KUhu..

REKha'

Kya hua?? Mrs kapoor asked..

Kuhu came down reluctantly..she was not interested in anything today..

Hume ek bohut hi badi company ka project mila hai..

Hamari company to puri Delhi me sabse badi hai na..

Not anymore..they are the biggest in whole INDIA..this company is a foreign company,actually the company's owner is Indian & had first established the company in Canada..they are shifting the main base to delhi..

which company??Who is it?

KHurana construction..Mr. Khurana or msk..


Now kuhu got excited'

Ayush..how will u & dad attend the meeting? U have to go to ***, remember..worker's riots..

Don't worry dear..the problem is not too big. Hamare na jane se vi..

NAHI!!.. I mean'riots & workers ke demands ko itna lightly nahi lena chahiye'y baad me musibat ho sakti hai' she didn't want to miss the chance of meting this khurana guy..

Ha tumne sahi kaha..hume waha jana chahiye 'lekin phir Mr khurana??

Files sab ready hai kya??

Ya bt'

Then no buts..i will go

Tum!!lekin can u handle it?

I can..TRUST ME'

dekha ma kitni samajdaar hai apki bahu?

Mr Kapoor, specially Mrs. Kapoor knew Kuhu better..bt only for their son's happiness'they remained quite thinking..pata nahi..ab iske mann me kya hai'

***

Everyone in the office was looking at her'so beautiful!!

Gorgeous..

I heard she is mrs Kapoor & came on behalf of Mr Ayush Kapoor.

Kuhu paid no attention to them'she was extremely curious about this Khurana from the moment she heard about him & his deeds'she HAD TO meet this guy..

She waited patiently in the conference room..

The door opened & she looked quit disappointed..he was not so handsome as everyone says he is..guess..it was the money that was talking'

She stood up & greeted him..hello mr khurana..nice to meet you..she forwarded her hand for a hand shake.

The man started to laugh weirdly..i am not the boss..i am his right hand man Aditya chopra,nice to meet you.

Where is your boss then.

He will not attend such an insignificant meeting.

WHAT THE HELL!! WHAT DOES HE THINK ABOUT HIMSELF?!!

There is no need to get hyper mrs kapoor, Mr ayush already knew this..that is if u have studied the case & know all the details about the meeting..

Y..YES..of course I know..bt atleast he should be at the first meeting..or else how can we trust someone whom we never ..m'met..her words faltered in her mouth as she saw the deadly expression on Aditya's face..his silliness was gone replacing a horrible look..a look that can may be kill you'

PLEASE DON'T DARE TO SAY THIS IN FRONT OF ANY OTHER EMPLOYEE'THEY MIGHT KILL YOU..He said gritting his teeth..

& u don't need his face to recognize him..he composed himself & gave a confident smile..u will know the king by his postures'

ADI!!

Came a thunderous voice'I don't pay u for chit chatting'.a voice came from behind..

Kuhu was facing the back of the door..as she turned back..

She saw a greek god standing in front of her with the most stylish office suit & 6 bodyguards..

s..ss'sir..a..aaa..app yaha..u said u won't attend the meeting as u had another meeting lined up ..

yes..bt that meeting finished early so I decided to attend this..any problem? Maan said still standing in his tread mark style.

n..nnn..nn..no sir..n..not at all.

Ok let's not waste anymore time'mrs kapoor..pls take ur sit & let us start this meeting..

Precap- the meeting'& GEET IN OFFICE!!!!

Kuhu & Geet's amna samna..both onscreen & offscreen..


P.S- those who have read my teaser..forget about it as I have changed many things..specially the KUHU PART..cause it was giving a wrong impression of my character kuhu.

Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet ko serila mein offer mila woww😛😛.
hmm kuhu ki band bajne wali hay😆😆 abb kuhu finish😆.
MSK KI ENTRY 😉
KUHU SEE MSK 😎😎
IN NEXT PART WANNA SEE KUHU SHOCKED FACE
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear,loved it alott,ahaan the new richie n business man maan singh khurana,missed geet parrt here,continue soon will b waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsem update maan telling arjun about geet khuhu mmm geet amna samna

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