App ki nazron ne samjha UPDATED NEW THREAD LINK @ pg 1 - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part.. waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
w8ing shilu..
its long time u updated
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Posted: 12 years ago



APP KI NAZROON NE SAMZHA PYAAR KE KABIL MUJHE..

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NOTE- Yes i have used Dhunki as geet's Introductory song like OSHEEN's MILAN. But i have already asked her permission to use this song ..Though most of it will be completely different from how she has used it..bt still i HAVE taken her permission looong ago...

Part 13

kaha hai tu?

why?

dost itne dino baad india aa raha hai to mujhe to excitement hogi na..

ya ya..i know teri chinta,chal jyada maska mat laga,kya problem hai bol..

main lut gaya barbad ho gaya..

the person screamed on his mobile & the people around him started to look at him weirdly..

& why is that??

i haven't selected the female lead of my serial yet..koi pasand hi nahi aayi! now producer wants me to shoot the heroine's entry today at any cost..kaha se lau??

the man on the other side of the phone smirked ..u can only see the director on phone talking to this other person ..bt sometime's a person's voice can be a mirror to his or her's appearance..if it is true..then this man on the other side has to be a greek god ..

don't worry...u prepare for the shoot..i am coming there with ur heroine..

sure??

yes..believe me..she is the best est..

i don't really accept on base of recomendation..bt if u say so..

ok then bye

bye...

*****

few hours later..

it was 12 pm..a summer day with scorching hot heat of the sun..

yaar kitni garmi hai aaj!! agar paisoon keliye nahi hota aaj ghar se hi nahi nikalta..one of the 50 artist of the set said with irritation..

yes..it wa indeed very hot..in addition the shooting location was on a dessert like place..where only a two tear high stage was all the prop.

they were junior artist & were brought to do the dance sequence which was actually the entry song of the heroine..

ok guys..lets start shooting..

bt u haven't yet choreographed the whole song..we have only learned till "mast malang hua dil ye mera" how can we shoot now & where is the heroine..

all ur problems will be sorted...u guys start..

bt..

NO BUTS!! I AM THE DIRECTOR HERE ...NOT U arjun ..the director said in a deadly voice

as everyone went to take their positions..arjun was thinking..maan..buddy baccha lena..tere bharose start kar raha hu..

he got a call from maan..

i am coming..start ur shoot & oh yeah..don't stop shooting at any cost..

that's weird request u know..

yeah..after u start shooting u will see a girl running in there..zoom ur camera to her..she is the one u were waiting for..

meanwhile...

a shining black JAGUAR car from the airport zoomed out..

geet in these few years u have changed quite a lot..specially ur confidence..& u changed me too..for better..

now i want to see if u really have learned what i have taught u..u have to give me a tiny miny exam..will u do it.

YES!! excitement oosed out from her voice..

the car came to an sudden hault..

geet look there..maan pointed outside..

hmm looks like they are practicing for dance...

go there..

HUH!

yes & show me that u have progressed by making them dance in ur step..

bt they will be disturbed..

if u can enchant them ..they will not be disturbed..

NOW can u make them dance inn ur dhunki geet??

she didn't say anything..bt gave a naughty confident smile that said all..she opened the door started to run toward the field..

****

(guys please try to imagine with the beats of the song..as i will be telling in details from the camera's angle & interpretations too)


(pls listen to the song while reading..u can then understand how i wrote it 😊)

no matter how much they whine..at the end of the day they were professionals...

as the beat of the song started all the 50 artists started to dance with the beat ..just as they were taught..like PROFESSIONAL..the 50 youngsters danced..

the cameras were capturing there grooves bt then suddenly heard a noise..arjun was shooting from a high place...as he saw a girl running to the shooting place...he zoomed to her from different angles..showing her stylish black square bangles,her light brown cross body bag..her light curly hair(here geet's hair style would be like Dhunki's katrina)..& her dress..


(sorry for poor editing & also geet's shoes will be of same style bt total glossy black in colour)


she jumped beside one of the actor watching her dance move as the lyrics started ..

Oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey

she followed her from the next

oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera, hey

the dancers didn't know the next step so they freezed in their positions..bt she continued flicking her curls with a bang..as the camera zoomed to her face ..

Ishq fikar da chadde palla
Maujein karta ho ke jhalla, jee ve

from the next beat the dancers on the first row started to follow her with uncertain steps..

Ishq mein dilda hoya fakeeri
Maange sab ki khair sukhalla, jee ve

more joined as she danced perfectly tuned with lyrics..

Gira deewarein, laga lalkaarein

Ishq di masti de vich sauvey te jaage

one by one with each beat the dancers were joining her steps as she grooved

Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage hey

Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage..

the rest of the dancers ..who were still uncertain also started to groove in her steps..

Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage.

Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage.

all the crew were watching dumbfounded as they saw a girl coming from nowhere made all the 50 dancers dance in her rhythms..
Oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera, hey

now it was no more professional people dancing for a shoot..forgetting ,the camera, the heat as they danced..they reflected their own self ..their own power...the sheer energy of youngsters..


the camera banged to her from the others as she sang the lyrics..with a smile strangely coupled with a deadly look which as if told...we are maybe sweet bt DON'T mess with us..

bt then as cloud suddenly clears from sky..her deadly look vanished as she sang the line inviting to love urself

the atmosphere..which was hot till now cooled down as the dark clouds from nowhere covered the sky & strong wind started blowing..it was thundering...giving a perfect background for the mood

Ladla dil ko har bashar
Ishq tha changa hai hashar

Karle kud se hi pyaar bandhe aa..

Hey jahan ki tujhko kabar
Kud se hai par tu bekabe
Lela apni jee saare bandhe aa

though she was leading them..bt it didn't look like that..they looked like the a group of youngsters as a whole who were enjoying the song which expressed perfectly their thoughts...we may be young,unsure..bt if united we can destroy any obstacle ..


Gira deeware..
Laga lalkare..
Ishq di masti de
Vich sone de jaage...ye..yeah..

Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ye.. (Ho dhunki laage ve)
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage.. (Ho dhunki laage ve)
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage..ye..
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage

it started to rain heavily..bt that didn't seem to lower their spirits as they danced in that strong rain... the camera was shooting them individually as they indulged in self expression through their dance with the music..

as the lyrics started..strangely they again formed & grooved with her..

Tu hawa
Paani aag hai
Tu daga
Daani daag hai

Jo bhi chave tu..
Ban jaave.. re..

they were youngsters free of those stagnant rules of the society which were only damaging for the society..yes they belived in tradition ..bt also adopted the new with open arms...

Hai bana mera dil khuda
Hai khuda kab mujhse judaa
Khudko dhoonde toh usko paave re

they believed in GOD..bt they believed that god resided not in any brick house..bt in themselves..the creations of GOD ...only through finding true self.. through respecting urself for what u are..u can find him

she gain hopped on the stage ..bt this time on the top tower..the weather was clear again..it seemed that as if the rain had also came to join in her DHUNKI...

Gira deeware..
Laga lalkare..
Ishq di masti de

Vich sone de jaage...ye..yeah..

she stopped dancing for the moment to see if the crowd were really in her dhunki...& smiled as she saw them dancing in her DHUNKI..

Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage..ve..
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage..

.she let herself fall from the stage from backwards opening her arms ,closing eyes...as she knew they will catch her...
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage..ve..

Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage..(Ho dhunki laage ve..)


as the sun shined brightly ..the crowd danced in Geet's dhunki including those in the the crew..the camera rotated, shooting from top -the dancing crowd as they danced to their hearts content enjoying...

Oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey oh malang hua dil yeh mera
Hey mast malang hua dil yeh mera, hey


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Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
kuhu18 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
new changed Geet and maan
please cont soon dont leave at this point for long
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
Maaneet are back
maan taking test of geet
geet making crew dance on her dhunki
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice intro of maaneet
continue soon
cant wait for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm finally maan nd geet change👏👏👏.
maan ne geet ko change kar dia 😛😛
geet ne apne dhun mein sab ko nacha dia wah wah😉😛
waiting for next .wanna se dadi nd annie too
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
maan wants geet to prove
n she danced as he said..n made all dance at her steps..
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
geet entry was in full bang
nd by the way u should geet dressing it shows she changed a lot
nd want o know thus maaneet relation proceed

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