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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Than You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...

bechara kavya...maan aur geet k chakkar mein uska b'day k band baj gaya...he he he...aur udhar maan aur geet aram se hai...kya hoga inn logo ka...

its really amazing...

i really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
unki nit khrab krkr maaneet khud mje kr rhe h lolll

waiting 4 next
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor her was all worried for geet...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Frnds ready 4 update. Wait 4 some time
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Part 36



Maan : acha ji
Geet : hanji

Maan pull her in front of him and look at her, those fresh look, almond shape eyes, full lips and her fresh smell driving him crazy.
He closs the gas nob and just pull geet more closely and just without a second waste. He just kissed her lips. After few minutes, he freed her lips.
He smiled and said jaan u look so beautiful and driving me crazy now.
Geet : matlab mein aur din sunder nhi lagti.
Maan : maine asa kb kaha.
Geet : abi kaha
Maan : jaan baki ki baat baad mein

He open the gas nob again and finish the cooking first.
After eating the dinner both go bed and slept.
Hysterical chirping of the birds wake her up in the morning. She opened her eyes to find herself tightly secured in his embrace.
Geet hugged him and placed a kiss on his chest.
Geet : good morning maan.
She freed herself from his embraced but he jerked her back crashing her into his bare chest.
Geet : maan aap jaag rhe the
Aur mujhe laga
Maan : kya laga geet
Mein so rha hu,
So hi rha tha geet.
Wo to tumhari churiyon ki khanak ne mujhse kaha meri mishti chahti hai, mein jaag jayu.
Geet : or kya kehti hai meri churiya
Maan : kbi fursat me batayenge
Geet : mujhe abi janana hai
Maan : geet ye churiyo ki khanak tumhari aankhon ki tarah,
Tumhare dil ki hr baat ko byan kr deti hai,
Kb tum khush ho,
Kb tumhe dukh pucha
Meri wajah se..

She placed her palm on lips, please dont say that, he kissed her palm. She removed her palm instantly.
Geet : maan apka haq hai mujhpe, aur rhi dard ki baat,
Wo maan apne mujhe jan buzkar nhi diye,
Wo to halat the,
Na aap kuch samajh sake
Aur na hi mein aapko smjha payi,
Dard mila to babaji ne us dard ki marham bi di,
Aapko diya.
Jo har dard se bdkar hai mere liye.
Love u maan.
Maan : love u too jaan.

Both hugged each other may be words were not needed at their moment. They knew what they meant to each other. They both felt relieved.
After some time, geet come out from hug.
Geet : maan, uthiye ab, tyaar ho jaiye
Maan : nhi
Geet : maan badmashi chodiye, mujhe late ho rha hai
Maan : tumhe kha jana hai geet
Geet : maan mujhe bhut jaruri kaam hai
Maan : acha ji
Geet : hanji

He standup and goes to washroom and take shower and changed into white shirt and black jeans.
Geet : maan
Maan : ha geet
Geet : chliye aap breakfast kr lijiye. Tbtak mein tyaar hoke aati hu.
Maan : hmmm

After few minutes.
Maan : geet mujhe kaam hai, mein ja rha hu.
Geet : thik hai maan
.


In khurana mension


Tani : geet dress to bhut pyari hai,
Pr mein kaise
Geet : uff ho tani, tum bi na
Tani tumpe ye dress bhut achi lagegi,
Aur anurag to faint ho jayenga
Tani : kya
Geet : i mean, tumhe dekhta rh jayenga,
Common tani
Tani : geet

Geet : acha tani zara annie ko phone dena, mujhe usse kuch kaam hai
Tani : hmm
Annie
Annie : ji bhabhi
Tani : geet ko tumse kuch baat krni hai
Annie : ji
Hey bhabhi, aap kaisi ho
Geet : mein thik hu annie,
Jara meri baat to dhyan se sun

She tell her all plan.
Tu smjh gyi annie
Annie : ji bhabhi, u dnt worry.
Tani bhabhi yhi dress phengi. Aur bhut pyari lagegi.
Geet : hmm
Chl bye
Anni : bye bhabhi.

At another side


Maan : adi, sb kuch tyaar hai
Adi : yes sir
He look all things and arrangement.
Maan : adi this is superb. You done very good work.
Adi : thanks sir. I hope madam ko pasand ayenga
Maan : i hope too
Adi : he he he
Maan : adi
Adi : sorry sir
Ab hume chalna chaiye, nhi to hume ooty wapas puchne me late ho jayenge.
Maan : hmm
Chalo

Precap :
G : maan plz ek baar meri baat sun liziye
M : geet stop ur crocodile tears.


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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweet updt
lvd it

precap---G : maan plz ek baar meri baat sun liziye
M : geet stop ur crocodile tears.

nxt updt mai flash back mai hi ye dialg haina😕


Edited by parikashyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
original posted by
pari kashyap

sweet updt
lvd it

precap---G : maan plz ek baar meri baat sun liziye
M : geet stop ur crocodile tears.

nxt updt mai flash back mai hi ye dialg haina😕



dear uske liye krna hoga wait...


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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...

lagta hai surprise dene k chakkar mein dono mein mu na ho jaye...

its really amazing...

really loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon...

waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome update

nd i think precap is abt flashback

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