thread 2-maaneet ff kaisa ye pyaar hai

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janvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Hey

gr8 part..

cont.sooon

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Edited by janu_2006 - 13 years ago

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priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

original posted by
seemamary
WAiting to see maan knowing geet is pregnant.

bhut jald pta chl jayenga... thoda sa patience aur...

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

superb

do cont soon and do PM me

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priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Part 48(a)

Flashback in
She runs in the office. Geet runs in and bumps on to maan.. Maan catches her by waist.
Geet :sorry sir..
Mein .. Woh
(think) babaji please bacha lena.
Maan looks at her angirly and said "in my cabin in two minutes" & bring in the Mr. Singhania's file need some serious change in his design.
Geet : yes sir
(mummer) : dust danav kaise dekh rha tha mujhe
:bacha lena babaji
Geet rushes in maan office.
At other side
Tasha : sasha
Silly me
I mean sasha madam
Aaj geet kuch pareshan si lag rhi hai
Aur maan sir bi kitne gusse me the
Sasha : kuch to hua hai
Is bhenji ki wajah se
Pta lagana padenga.
In maan's cabin
She prayed just before she went in his office. She knocked.
Maan : come in
Geet walked in.
Geet : "here sir"
Maan : good. We have to finish this by today.
Geet : yes sir, but we still have no much designee to complete..
How will we.. She paused.
Maan looked angirly.
Maan : all work have to be done by today.
Geet : yes sir
She knew well no way. She could finish this but she had no choice she had to try.
Maan(think) : wo akele kaise karengi
As she was walking out with all blue print, maan stopped her.
Maan : geet
Geet : yes sir.
Maan : if you want i well tell adi and sasha to help you.
Geet : no sir, its ok. I will finish this by today by myself.
(mummer ) : phle gussa kro, aur fir mdad krne ka dikhawa
Maan : geet go and complete the work
Geet : yes sir
She left.
Maan : ek to iski help ke liye pucha.. Aur madam mujhe hi attitude dikha rhi hai..
Mein bi dekhta hu, bina meri mdad ke ye kitne time me project complete krti hai
Geet already done 70% of the project. She was sitting in the big hall i.e arctic designee room. She looked at the watch 7:00 p.m. She looked back at her work "kuch aur hours geet, then all will be done "

She looked at the watch again.
Geet : 9 bj gye. Aur abi bi itna kaam pending h.
She went to the canteen.
She walked by her and maan office. The whole office was empty. Eveyone went home.
"great, i am working over hours,
Wo bi is dust danav ki wajah se "
She went to kitchen and made tea for herself. She felt refresh and wake again.
Nn stop working in a project for more than 12 hours was driving her insane.
Geet : geet kya jararurat thi tujhe, us dust danav ko dust khne ki, jb wo help kr rhe the, to help kyun nhi li.
Mujhe thode pata tha, wo dust danav itna dust niklenga, pure project ke blue print ek hi din me ready krne ko de denga..

Geet ab kuch nhi ho sakta, kaam kr, nhi to..
Nhi to.. Us dust ne ek aur nyi sja soch rkhi hongi...
Babaji...

part 48(b)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2669586/thread-2-maaneet-ff-kaisa-ye-pyaar-hai?pn=43

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

poor geet

jab maan help krne ke liye keh rha tha tab toh mana kar diya

nd nw she is sulking😆

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

AWESOME DEAR LOVED GEET'S POUTING...TOO GUD...CONT SOON...😊👏

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maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Thanks for the pm dear...
i hv not read this story..
now i am starting from part 1...
prologue is really interesting...

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priyanshi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Part 48(b)

As she walked back to the room.. She noticed a figure in maan's office.. She peeks. She could only see the back. As he turned around without any hesitation she ran back to the architect room.
"robot".. I mean he may be can work non- stop. He can't expect same from others.. Kharus.. Dust danav.. She sat in front of the file again.. And started working again.
In maan's cabin
Maan : geet
Geet abhi tak office mein hi hai.. Wo bi is waqt tak..
Oh god.. Maine hi to usse..
Mein to kaam me bhul hi gya tha.
He called her.
Maan : geet come into my cabin.
Geet : sir, wo
Maan :now
He cut the call.
Geet : call cut kr di..
Babaji.. Ab inhe kya hua..
She knocked.
Maan : come in
Tum is waqt tk yha kya kr rhi ho
Geet (think ) : babaji inhe bulne ki bi bimari h.
Lagta to nhi h..
Khudne hi kaam diya tha.. Aur ab..
Maan : geet tumhara babaji se complain session ho gya ho, to jwab do
She make O shaped face.
Geet :sir bs thodi der aur ,
Mein sara work complete kr dungi
Maan : geet, maine tumhe yha project related baat krne ke liye nhi bulaya hai..
Geet : to phir
Maan : ab tum ghar jao
Geet (think) : oh, to mujhe taki firse kal daat sake,
Mein bina kaam complete kre hi chli gyi
Maan : geet, go to home
Now
Geet : sir, jbtk design complete nhi hote, mein khi nhi jayungi
Maan : geet 10 bj gye hai, ab tumhe jana chaiye,
Kal complete kr lena
Geet : taki aap kal fir se mujh pe gussa kar sake..
Aap hi khenge
" geet tumhe jo kaam diya jaye, usse shi waqt pe tumse complete kyun nhi hota"
Maan (think ) : ek to iske ble ke liye socho, aur ye
He said angirly " geet ab tum ghar tb tk nhi jayungi, tb tk ye saare designs complete nhi hote..
Why u are standing like that ?
Go and do your work.
Geet : ji

Maan : is ladki ko meri baat smjh me kyun nhi aati
12 :00 midnight
Maan phone ring.
Maan : hanji daadimaa
He looked extremely tired.
Daadi : maan are you finish all the work today.
When you coming home ?
It is 12 midnight
Maan : nhi
Wo daadi
Daadi : you have to hurry up
I have not eaten anything yet, waiting for you.
Maan : daadimaa,
Please stop behaving like a child.
Please aap kha lijiye
Daadi : humne jo ek baar kh diya. So kh diya.
Maan : ok daadimaa
I will be straight way. He hanged up walked pass geet room.
Maan : ab isse kuch khunga to ye fir se..

At another side
Dev : daadimaa, why u take so much tension
Daadi : bete, maan ko kaam ke aange kuch nhi dikhta hai
Ab hume hi kuch krna honga
Jo humari chinta ko apna bna le
Dev : kya matlab daadimaa
Daadi : maan ki shaadi
Dev hugs her : daadi this is best idea
Dev(think) : wow,
Maan bro ke baad, mein apni aur naintara ki shaadi ki baat kr sakta hu.
I hope friends you all like it.
This part specially dedicate to @fariya

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 13 years ago