thread 2--maaneet ff -- is pyaar ko kya naam du

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

dear..😛..

...4 PMing me...😛

4 ur hard work...👏👏

me just ...

lov,❤️

Tama

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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Thanks frnds 4 support and comments.
Aage bi ase hi sath dena

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Part 35

In kavyanjli house
Kavya resting his head on her shoulder from back and said "thanks anjli mere bday ko itna special banane ke liye"
She smiled.
Kavya : pr baad me jo hua geet aur maan ke bich me, wo acha nhi huya
Kya jarurat thi geet ko itna over react krne ki.
Anjli waked her elbow lightly in his chest.
Kavya : ouch
Anjli : geet ne kya kiya jo tum asa kh rhe ho.
Kavya : anjli tum itni gusse me kyun ho
Anjli : mein kyun gussa hone lagi
Kavya : whi to mein puch rha hu
Maine kya kiya
Anjli : tumne kya kiya,
Yhi to problem hai tum to kbi kuch karte hi nhi ho,
Kavya : anjli tum baat ko jalebi ki tarah kyun guma rhi ho
Anjli : mein baat ko guma rhi hu
Jo bi huya, sb aapki wajah se
Kavya : meri wajah se
Kya hua hai
Anjli : wo apka dost
Mr. Maan singh khurana
Uski wajah se meri geet ko kitni chot puchi
Kavya : anjli us time to tum khud hi maan ki side le rhi thi
Anjli : to aap kya chahte hai
Mein unki fight ko aur bda deti, saare mard ek jaise hote hai
Kavya : anjli isme sbi mard kha se aa gye
Anjli : chdo
Ek toh hamari koi baat nhi samajhte aur upar se
Kavya : anjli, meri baat to suno
Anjli :nhi sunani koi baat
Kavya (mummer) : maine kya kiya,
Fight wo don karte hai,
Bhugtna mujhe pdta hai
Anjli : apne kuch kaha
Kavya : nhi
Anjli : gud
Kavya : tum itni raat ko kise phone kr rhi ho
A : geet ko
K : pr kyun
She glares towards him.
K : i mean, wo so gye honge,
Tum unhe disturb karongi
A : to aap ye khna chahte hai, mein sbko disturb krti hu
K (mummer) : ye meri har baat ko ulta kyun smajti hai
Anjli : acha ji
Mein galat smjhti hu
He nodded.
K : nhi bilkul nhi
Tum phone kro na
A: wo mujhe aapse puchne ki koi jarurat nhi hai
K : hmm
(think) : in dono ki wajah se mere bday ka satyanash ho gya. Maine kya kya socha tha.
See below

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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tia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

wow
part 34 was amazngg
lvd it
hmara maan geet se jyada time naraz nhi reh skta...
sry sry sry sry sry sry sry 4 late cmmnts...😳😳
cont soonnn😃

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oops muje pta hi nhi chla tum updt de rhi ho... mai toh ab iss msg ko del. b nhi kr sktiii😆

Edited by parikashyap - 13 years ago

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

At other side
He buried his head in her hair then to neck and nibble there , and then bites her shoulder and neck. Geet moaned aahh.
He smiled and kissed there and said let you eat something first.
She look confused.
Maan : mein janta hu geet, tumne party mein kuch nhi khaya hai
Geet : maan apne bi to kuch nhi khaya
Mein abhi kuch bna deti hu
Aap fresh ho jaiye,
Mein bs abhi khana bnake layi
He held her wrist.
Maan : geet tum change krlo
Dinner mein bna lunga
Geet : maan mein kr lungi
Maan : geet dnt argue with me, nhi to mujhe chup krwana achi tarah aata hai
She chukled.
Maan : kya hua geet, kuch yaad aa gya
Geet : maan
Her phone rings.
Maan : tum baat kro, mein khana bnata hu
Geet : hey di
Kya hua
Is time phone kiya
Sb kuch thik hai na
Anjli : geet yha sb thik hai
K (think) : kha sb kuch thik hai.
A : tu thik hai na,
Aur maan ne kuch kha to nhi
G : nhi di, sb kuch thik hai, aap jiju pe dhyan dijiye
Wo pakka gussa ho gye honge,
Aaj unka bdy hai
Aur aap meri fikr kr rhi hai
A : asa kuch nhi hua geet
G : di jis tarah aap mujhe achi tarah smjhti hai,
Mein bi apko achi tarah janti hu
Gdnt di
A : gdnt, apna dhyan rkhiyo
Geet : hmmm
After changing the dress. She enter the kitchen and saw her handsome husband preparing something.
Geet hugged him from behind.
Maan : bhut pyar aa rha hai
Geet : wo to hamesha aata hai
Maan : acha ji
Geet : hanji
Precap :
Maan : adi, this is superb. U dne very good work
Adi : thanks sir.
I hope madam ko pasand ayenga.

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

wndrful updt dear
😳poor kavyanjli😳
😆maaneet ke chakkar mai khud jhagad prhey😆
bt hmare maaneet ek duje se jyada time naraz ho hi nhi skte..😉.
lvd it😃
precap... lgta hai maan ne geet ke liye koi surprs ready kiya hai...😍
😍cont soonnn😍

Edited by parikashyap - 13 years ago