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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Thanks frnds 4 your love and support.

Thanks all of you.

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Part 34

He slowly slandering his arm around her waist claiming her. She pulled her hand away and looked away. He made a baby face. He held her wrist and go outside.
Geet : maan hath chodiye mera
Maan : geet tumhara hath chodne ke liye thode pakda hai
Geet : maan, mein akhri baar kh rhi hu
Mujhe andher jane dijiye, didi mera wait kr rhi hongi.
He kissed on her cheek.
Maan : krne do.😉
She bite on his hand.
Maan : oouch😡
Geett
Geet : sorry maan, mein to mjak kr rhi thi
Maan : its ok jaan.😊
He smiles.
Geet : maan aap has rhe hai.😲
Ab to mujhe aapse koi baat nhi karni.😡
Mujhe laga, apko meri wajah se dard hua aur aap
Maan : geet tum katati bi ho, ye to mujhe aaj hi pata chala,
Aur sach me mujhe laga
Geet : acha hai
Maan : geet meri baat to suno

But she leaves the place and go back in party.

Kavya : anjali, ye blindfold hatayo.
Aur kitna wait krna padega.
Anjali : kavya, bs kuch der aur
Romeo , sb tyaar hai
Romeo : yes madam
Tick tick 10
Tick tick 9
Maan slides his hand on her waist and come inched closer to her.
Geet : maan hath hataiye
Maan : nhi
Geet : maan hum is waqt party mein hai
Na ki ghar pe
Maan : to ghar chalte hai😆

Tick tick 2

Tick tick 1

She removed his blindfold and all people say together.

Happy birthday Kavya

Anjli hugs kavya and kissed on his cheek and say happy bdy.

Kavya : thanks anjli
Mujhe to laga tha. Tum khi bhul na gyi ho. Pr tum

Anjli : kavya asa kaise ho sakta hai.
Mein itne khubsurat din ko bhul jayu.

Geet : aap dono ka romance khtm ho gya to😉
Mein bi wish kr lu apne jiju ko

Geet came near and hugs kavya & said jiju apko aaj ke din ki hardik shubkamnaye.

Kavya : thanks sali sahiba
Maan glares towards him.
(ye maan mujhe ase kyun dekh rha hai,
Oh..
Mujhe geet ne hug kiya, isliye
Janab ka mood kuch kharab lagta hai
Hey geet ke babaji, mujhe bcha lena)
Geet : jiju to aaj ka kya plan hai
Kavya : geet aaj ka
Geet : oh ho jiju, aaj apka bdy hai
To apne aur didi ne kuch to socha honga
She slides her hand on his arms.
Kavya :
Geet : bolo na jiju
Kavya (bolunga to tb na, jb maan mujhe ase dekhna bnd karenga )
Geet : jiju
Kavya : geet abhi kuch socha nhi hai
Tum yha kya kr rhi ho, maan se jake baat kro na.
Wo itne dino ke baad yha aaya hai
Geet : jiju unse to baat hoti rhti hai
Pr aap se, to mein itne time ke baad mili hu.
Isliye mein bs aapse baat krungi.
Kavya (baat to tb karunga na, jb maan mujhe chodenga )
Geet : maan
Maan : hmmm
Geet : maan ydi mein apne jiju se thodi der baat kru, to apko koi problem hai
Maan : nhi geet
Geet : dekha jiju apne
Anjli : geet ab masti bnd karo,
Tumhe pata hai na, maan ko ye sb mjak pasand nhi hai..
Phle wo dance aur ab kavya aur maan ke sath ye masti
Geet : di, aap inki side mt lijiye
Maan : geet, hume der ho rhi hai,
Ab hume chalna chaiye
Mein tumhara car me wait kr rha hu
Kavya : maan mujhe wish bi nhi karenga kya
Maan : happy bday kavya,
Yaar sorry
Ab mujhe chalna chaiye
Kavya : geet ye kya hai,

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Kavya : geet ye kya hai,
Bechare ko naraz kr diya,
Ek wo hai, jo itne dino se yha aaya huya hai,
Wo bi bs tere liye..
Aur ek tu hai...
Jo tu usse khud se dur rhne ki sja de rhi hai
Aur khud ko bi..
Geet : maan yaha the itne dino se, aur mujhe kisi ne btaya bi nahi.
Iska matlab wo mera sapna nhi tha,
Fir maan ne ye sb kyun kiya..
Wo mere samne kyun nhi aaye.
Kavya : wo to mujhe nhi pata geet,
Pr mein ye janta hu
Tum dono ek dusre se dur nhi rh sakte
Anjli : geet, ab ja
Aur apni narazgi usse baat karke dur kar
Aur uska gussa bi shant kar
Geet : hmmm

In parking area

She came and silently sit in car. He silently drive the car and after some time both reach the home.

Maan : geet ghar aa gya hai
Geet : itni jaldi
Maan : geet ab tum andher jao
Geet : maan aap ase kyun kh rhe hai
Aap bhi chaliye
Maan : nhi geet

Geet : maan
Maan : geet kafi raat ho gyi hai, ab tum jao
Aur aaram karo
Geet : maan aap ase kyun kr rhe hai
Am sorry maan
Mein to bs mjak kr rhi thi,
Wo bi aap ki wajah se
Maan : meri wajah se
Geet : aur nhi to kya
Shurat to apne hi ki thi.

Maan : acha baba,
Galati ho gyi mujhse ab tum andher jao
Geet : nhi
Aap mere sath andher chaliye
Maan : geet
Mein car park karne ja rha hu
Bs abi aya

Geet : ok
Jaldi aana
Maan : hmmm
(mummer : pagli hai )😆

Geet : apne kuch kaha
Maan : nhi to
Geet : hmmm

In room

He came in room and saw geet is still standing there.

Maan : geet, ye kya tumne abhi tak change nhi kiya

Geet : maan mein apka wait kr rhi thi

Maan : oh ye baat hai😉

He slides his hand on her waist and pull geet more closely.
He open the dori of her blouse.

Geet : maan
Maan : kya hua geet
Geet : maan masti mt kijiye na
Maan : geet maine kya kiya
Mein to whi kr rha hu, jo tumne kaha
Geet : maine kya kaha ?
Aur kb ?
Maan : abhi to kaha jaan
She made confused face.
Maan : geet, jb maine tumse pucha, tumne abi tak change kyun nhi kiya..
To tumne kaha, tum mera wait kr rhi thi
Geet : toh
Maan : toh
Ye geet
Mein whi kr rha hu,
Jo tum chahti ho,
Tumhari change karne me help.
Maan hand massage geet's shoulder then to arm then his one hand goes to under blouse and other hand squeeze the geet waist.
Geet : maan, mujhe aapse baat karni hai.
Maan : toh kaho na jaan.
Geet : maan aap ase karenge toh mein kaise kuch khungi.
He buried his head in her hair then to neck and nibble there.

Precap :-
Flashback:-
Geet ka phla din office mein
Aur
Present
Aap sb bataiye
Kya dekhna chahte hai aap.
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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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Dona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

me first
awsome..
jo tumne socha hai wahi likho...

Edited by dona86 - 13 years ago

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allibr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

beautiful update dear...

i loved it...

thank u so much fr such a lovely update n also frd pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...