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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

priyanka, awesome darling
loved it
btw, how was your exams ?????
waiting for the next part

do cont soon & do PM me

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nahtani88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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tia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka
original posted by
pari kashyap

sweet updt
lvd it
precap---G : maan plz ek baar meri baat sun liziye
M : geet stop ur crocodile tears.

nxt updt mai flash back mai hi ye dialg haina😕

dear uske liye krna hoga wait...

hayeee priya schi bhut wat krvati hai..😊
bt intzaar karne ke b apna hi maza hai...😃😉
cont soonnn

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aali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

nice par precap sounds scary..

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allibr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

...😛

4 PMing me...dear...😃

just ...

ur update...😳

n also a sweet

...4 u...😃

keep ing dear...😃

lov,❤️

Tama

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Please wait 4 sometime. I give update

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Thanks friends 4 liking and do comment

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Part 37

Adi : sir, ab hume chalna chaiye,
Nhi to hume ooty wapas puchne me late ho jayenga.

Maan : hmmm,
Chalo.

In house

Geet : ye maan ko kaunsa kaam aa gya,
Jo ab tak nhi aaye.
Her phone rings.

Geet : lo, ab yaad ayi, janab ko hamari,

She pick the call and said "hello"

Maan : geet, mein ek file room me bhul gya honga,
Tum usse office leke aa jayo.
Geet(mummer) : mein avyi khush ho rhi thi
Ye bi mujhe miss kr rhe honge,
Ye lo,
Inhone to file ki liye phone kiya hai
Maan : geet
Geet :
Maan : geett
Geet : aap chila kyun rhe ho
Maan : mujhe laga khi tum apne complain session me kho na gyi ho
Geet : maan
Maan : jaan, wo file mujhe abhi chaiye,
Kal nhi,
So please tum leke aa jayo,
Geet : maa
Maan : baki ki baatein baad me karte hai.
Bye jaan.
Miss you.
Geet : bye

Maan : adi, mujhe sb kuch bilkul perfect chaiye
Adi : yes sir
Maan : ab tak to sb kuch thik ja rha hai,
Adi : sir, ek baat puchu
Maan : hmmm
Adi : sir aap ye kaam, pichle kafi waqt se kra rhe hai,
Ab jake pura huya hai,
Sir in do saalo me kitna kuch badal gya,
Pr apne is sapne ko aaj tak sanjo ke rakha
Maan : adi, jb is sapne ke baare me mujhe geet ne btaya tha,
Tb hi maine soch liya tha,
Uska sapna jarur pura honga,
Pr isse sajayenge hum apni yaadon se
Adi : pr sir jo bich me huya tha
I mean
Maan : us waqt, ek pal ke liye to mere mann me aya,
Sb kuch whi rok du,
Sb kuch bikher du,
Par nhi kar paya
Jisse hr pal khud sajaya ho,
Usse kaise bikher deta
Adi : sir,
Geet madam ko bhut acha lagega.
Maan : hmm

In office

Geet enter in "khurana fashion world"

Tasha : sasha, i mean sasha madam
Ye yha fir se
Sasha : itne lambe waqt ke baad ye yha firse kyun ayi hai,
MK aate hi honge
Khi wo fir se gussa ho gye to
Tasha : madam, iski to shaadi ho gyi hai
Sasha : kya
Tasha : ha, wo dekhiye na, gale me mangalsutr hai,
Aur sindoor bi lagaya hai
Sasha : acha hai,
Nhi to MK ko firse pareshan karti

Geet : hey sasha
Hey tasha
Tasha : hey
Tum yha kya kr rhi ho
Wo bi itna sb kuch ho jane ke baad
Geet : tasha
Sasha : tumhare liye hi acha honga geet
Tum yha se chli jao
Pichli baar ki baat bhul gyi kya,
Kis tarah MK ne tumhara hath pakd ke office se bahar nikala tha

Flashback in

Geet : maan please meri ek baar baat sun lijiye

Maan : ab mujhe tumhari koi baat nhi sunani geet
Geet : maan mein janti hu, maine aap se bhut kuch chupaya hai,
Maan uske piche wajah thi
Maan : geet ye magrmuch ke aansu bahana bnd karo

Geet get out from my cabin.
Geet : maan please
Maan : tum ase nhi manogi.
He held her hand and drag her out from his cabin.
Geet : maan please mera hath chodiye
Sb dekh rhe hai
Maan :
Geet : maan bs ek baar, meri baat sun lijiye
He stop in mid and shout on her.
Maan : bs geet
Ek sabd aur nhi.

Flashback out
Maan(in angry tone) : sasha
Sasha : MK

Precap :
Maan : geet am sorry
Meri wajah se
Geet : maan

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago