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disha

@Conqueror212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

amazing...
loved it dear..
meet is sooo cute...

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

hey dear😊

sorry for late comment got busy with study

all the part are awesome n beautiful👏

i really loved it...

looking for maaneet to meet😳
thank u very much fr such a lovely update...
continue soon

plz add me in ur pm list

waiting... 😍

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Mishti13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

waiting for maaneet's meeting

thanks for pm

cont. soon

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

awesome part ...meet is so sweet...why maan left geet...w8ing 2 know.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

amazing FF...

I have send buddy request...

please pm mw when u update...

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

awesome updates

loving the flow of the story

update soon

thanx for the pms

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

awesome n beautiful update...

little meet is really amazing...

but why maan left geet n went...whn dere was so much love den why d mu n separation...m very upset seeing dem like dis...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

love the bond between meet n maan...

but y did he leave??

continue soon...

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

a big hug and lots of thanks to all of you..🤗
thanks a lot for liking it... i have never write any emotional story...
this is the first...😊
sorry for not replying you but i have read your comments...😊
lots of muahs...😳
now i am updating next part..😃
hope you all will like it...
love neha

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

part-9

After two days maan went to meet her in school at noon when her school is left…meet was waiting for geet and maan reached there…meet'e eyes twinkling in joy..she ran and maan took her in his lap..he kissed her and meet too…but then geet came there and she saw maan after 7 years in front of her..maan immediately leave meet from his lap and looked at geet…but she lowered her gaze and hold meet's hand and started to leave but maan stop her…she stood rooted there… he came close to her just behind her…her heart beating faster with his presence…
Maan-is meet your daughter? Her heart sunk listening this..she thought that maan surely knew that meet is her daughter but maan failed her.. at that moment she wanted to hug him, kiss him, complaint him but questions rang in her mind... she backed off from her mind and she replied him back..haan..
Maan-tumhari aur?
Geet-meri aur mere pyaar ki nishani hai ye..
He felt a lump in his heart hearing her & her love…means what he was thinking all the while that is true…
Geet-aur kuch? But maan didn't reply her back..he was shock…geet went from there….he sank on the ground hearing her words... and the thought rang in his mind that he didn't even ask her hows she? he bluntly asked about thar litle girl meet.. about the relation she has with her? oh god what he had done...

next day maan didn't went in her school for meet her..he was very busy...some new clients came there in his office and that is very big project...meet had wait for him very long sitting on the bench, didn't attend her class...crying furiously...it's been 3 hours she is waiting for him but he didn't came...teacher dragged her in class but when teacher touched her arm...her arms burning in fever...she immediately took her in kids care room and lay her down there..checked her fever and it is very high..she called to geet and told her what happened there...geet became very worried for her...this is never happened in past 3 years...but today it happened...geet & ridz went in her school and went home...ridz checked her fever and give her injection as geet is very worried..her hands are shaking...meet is sleeping now...ridz dragged her in another room and shout on her..
ridz-geet, kab tak chalega aisa?
geet didn't replied her back...
ridz shook her...tu kyo usey apni zindagi me shaamil hone de rahi hai jabki wohi tujhe chhodkar chala gaya..isi shehar me rehkar wo kabhi tujhse milne nahi aaya...tu bhul kyo nahi jaati usey...
geet-kya tu armaan ko bhul sakti hai?
ridz-geet...
geet-answer me dam it...kya tu armaan ko bhul sakti hai..she almost shout on her...
ridz didn't stop her..she let her opening herself...let out her hidden pain...
geet-mai nahi bhul sakti hu..mujhe nahi pata kyo wo chale gaye...ek baar mujhse miley bhi nahi jaane se pehle..meri kya galti thi..maine to unhe sachhe dil se pyaar kiya tha na..fir kyo? kyo wo mujhse chhodkar chale gaye? kya mere pyaar me kuch kami thi? she is crying bitterly holding his photo in her hand..
ridz-geet tu samjhti kyo nahi...jab jo hua so hua..par ab to tu aagey badh sakti hai na..jaise wo badh gaya apni zindagi me...
geet-i knew that wo abhi bhi wahi hai..tabhi to unhone shaadi nahi ki...
ridz-you remember maine tujhe warn kiya tha ki kya gurrantee hai ki wo tujhe chhodkar nahi jayega tere so called fav show geet huyi sabse parayi ki tarah..jaise wo NRI dev chhod kar chala gaya tha waise ye NRI maan tujhe ditch nahi karega aur tuney kaha tha wo aise nahi hai...but he also ditched you....both still remember their talk about this topic...
( ridz-are you sure you loved him?
geet-definetily..no doubts..all clear..
bani-what is the gurrantee he will not ditch you like dev ditched geet in the show?
geet-i saw in his eyes..he too love me...
bani-but ye to dev ne bhi kiya tha geet ke liye..
geet-har NRI dev jaisa thodi hota hai aur wo to specially geet ke money ke liye aaya tha na but maan ka to bahut bada businessman hai..aur wo to yaha business ke liye hai...
ridz-fir bhi...
geet-fir bhi ka kya matlab? i knew i love him and he loves me...
ridz-did he told you?
geet-nahi..
bani-fir
geet- i saw in his acts...in his eyes... aur ridz are you sure you love armaan...?
ridz-yes, i am pretty sure..
geet-jaise tu sure waise mai bhi sure... )

they broke their thought when both heard meet's voice..she is calling mama mama...both ran in her room..she is crying...
geet-kya hua beta?
meet-mama..papa..
ridz can't see both of them like this she left from there...
geet-kya papa?
meet-aaj papa nahi aaye...
geet-koi baat nahi bate..papa busy honge na...aise nahi rote...
meet-papa pasta...
geet-ale mera baby..baby ko pasta khana hai...
meet-papa wala...
geet-ha chalo papa wala pasta banayenge...whenever she missed her dad very badly then she demands his fav pasta... both went in kitchen and made pasta for her and gives to meet...geet is watching her cute innocent daughter but some times she behaves like a mature girl... she is watching her daughter having pasta and she engrossed in her thoughts...before 7 years...maan teach her how to make pasta in his style...and she also loved it...she used to watch him making pasta and teased him while cooking...after some days she cook pasta for him...he was gone for some work...when he came back then saw geet in kitchen..he watched her leaning to the door of the kitchen..how cute she is looking while cooking..more tempting while sweat came out from behind of her ears to her neck...she knew he is there...his gaze burning her back...but pretends that she didn't knew he is there...he came close to her just behind her back leaning his chest to her back...huskily said in her ears..pasta bana rahi ho?
she nodded feeling his hot breath on her neck sending shivers in her whole body...dipped his head in her hairs nuzzling his nose from her ears to her neck...mujhe pasta khana hai?
geet-aap hi ke liye to bana rahi hu...
maan-achha...
geet-ban gaya...
maan-achha...taste me to achha hai... kissing the nape of her neck and bitting her ear lobe..
geet-aapne to abhi tak khaya hi nahi...
maan-tumhe to kha raha hu...yahi achha hai mere liye...
geet-please maan...words came out from her mouth like moaning...
maan-achha chalo mujhe khilao... geet took the fork and indicate him to open the mouth but he denied..she narrowed her brows in question...
maan-apni fingers se.... she almost surprised and shied...geet denied but he insist...then she agreed...she took some pasta in her fingers, he immediately took her fingers in his mouth ate pasta but didn't let her fingers to come out in his mouth...
geet-maann she moaned... but maan nibbled her fingers in his mouth...hold her wrist and kissing her fingers...
geet-dadi.... he almost surprised and turned and fumbled...nahi dadi mai wo....maan said..
she laughed at his condition...he turned his face to her...she stopped her laugh but giggled mutely...before he reached to her..she took pasta plate and ran from there...
maan-geet, you can't save yourself from me...he also ran from there behind her...she went in his room...maan came and stop at the entrance of the room panting holding his knees...geet i can't leave you.. punishment to tumhe milegi...
geet showed him her tongue...he closed the gates...her eyes widen opened...
geet-maan...what are you doing?
maan-giving you punishment...
geet-do you really think so that you can give me punishment...?
maan-definitely..!!
she coolly stood there and having pasta...maan leaned closer to her...she is taking her steps back but enjoying pasta made by her... talking to herself..geet tuney pasta to achha banaya hai..wah..raising her invisible collar...maan came very close to her, she looked at him...pasta in her mouth..she stop nibbling pasta...rest the plate on side table...maan hold her from her waist and pressed his lips on hers...she wriggle in his grip...hitting his chest with her tiny fists...but his hold became more tighter than before...she opened her mouth for breath but he slipped his tongue on her mouth taking pasta in his mouth from hers...and left her lips..relishing the pasta which have taste of her mouth...winking at her..she stood there like a statue opened her mouth in big O shape...licking his lips looking at her...she gazed down at once can't hold his gaze...
maan-my pasta was very tasty that yours...mujhe aur khana hai... geet shook her head in no... she came out from her thoughts when meet called her...
meet-mama water...geet passed her water... no one knows that what happened 7 years ago...why maan left her? no one has the answer of this question except maan... geet didn't blame him for anything she lost in her life...she never questioned him...she knew his intentions were not wrong...she lost her daar ji because of him but never think wrong about him..never blame him..she blamed herself...she couldn't be a good grand daughter...her friends blame him but she never did...she tried to made them understand that he will get some work that's why he left from there...otherwise he will tell her surely...but the question is that one phone call doesn't take much time but he didn't called her for once...all think that he used her and left her...but this is not the truth...her daar ji got a heart attack and left her behind alone...just because of maan & geet but geet never blame him...she always sulked in washroom trapping herself in the shower so that no one can listen her cry...she always tried to be happy but some times became very weak and sulked...she was in between the age of 18-19 when she suffered all this...in the age of 11 she lost her parents and then her daar ji..left alone in this big world...only armaan,ridz and bani by her side...on the other hand ridz engrossed in her thought when they all came to know that she was 3 months pregnant...she missed her periods then she told this to ridz..both have the biology subject both knew that even armaan too but armaan get to know this later...ridz told her that made sure from this pregnant kit...and it became positive... she told everything to daar ji and he got heart attack after hearing this and he died...leaving her alone... that time armaan went delhi..ridz and geet thought that they will do their graduation from shimla but geet had no option... after her daar ji's death..she has to left shimla behind...she had enough money for buy the flat in delhi...she went delhi and met with armaan..told him everything...because he is aldo her best friend...he became angy on maan..how can he leave her like this but she had no answer...he took the responsibility of her and her baby...he helped her to settled in delhi...bought a flat on her name but she lived with him in his flat...she took admission in M.B.B.S with armaan..she used to attend classes but when she noticed her bump she stopped to attend the college and studied at home from herself and at night armaan gave notes to her and helped her... ridz also came there..in shimla no one knew about geet and her pregnancy..all think that afer daar ji's death what will she do here so she went to delhi... in her 8 and half moths pregnancy..she never became weak..she knew that it can be harmful for her baby... but one day she missed her parents a lot and she cried a lot...and pain started..she called armaan and cried furiously...armaan took her hospital from there where no one know them...after 6 hours of labor pain she gave a birth of her angel...when she took her in her arms..she forgot her all pain...all are very happy for her...very happy for her cute little angel...she told to armaan & ridz that see her nose is just like maan that irritates to ridz & armaan but they never show it on their faces..they can't see their best friend in this condition... one day she was reading magazine and first time she read maan's article in magazine..don't know how many times she read it and kissed his pic..cut his pic and kept in a folder...then whenever she found his pic so she cut his pic and kept it in a folder...one day she saw his interview on tv and she record it then whole night she watch it agian and again.

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maan in hospital

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