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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

awesome part...what a trust geet has for maan...must bow our heads...but,maan failed to keep her trust by asking about meet,,,,lovely update dear..👏👏👏👏👏

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

😊 fantastic update.. Geet is so sweet.. Armaan Ridz are best friends... hope we'll also get to know Maan's side.. update soon

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

awesome yaar neha
she is so naive and she adore her love like something
plz update soon na yaar
fro me plzzz

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

lovely part...
poor meet 😭😭
but why did maan left geet ... 😕
waiting to know...

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

awesome update neha...
loved it to the core...
ahhh geet has gone through so much...
poor geet she lost her daarji too... ppchhh...
i am not at all able to understand why maan left... u know what i really hate him for leaving geet...
aww poor meet cried a lot for not meeting her papa... man its very horrible...
i was crying after reading this update.. i am already so low today... n this update made me cry...
at last maan came to know that meet is his daughter...
flash back part was awesome... ahem ahem maan is too naughty...
continue soon neha... oopzzz have to wait upto 27th right???
ok dear...

love u... hugs to u...

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: jyothikrish
awesome update neha...
loved it to the core...
ahhh geet has gone through so much...
poor geet she lost her daarji too... ppchhh...
i am not at all able to understand why maan left... u know what i really hate him for leaving geet...
aww poor meet cried a lot for not meeting her papa... man its very horrible...
i was crying after reading this update.. i am already so low today... n this update made me cry...
at last maan came to know that meet is his daughter...
flash back part was awesome... ahem ahem maan is too naughty...
continue soon neha... oopzzz have to wait upto 27th right???
ok dear...

love u... hugs to u...

thank u so much dear...
aww very sorry dear for making u cry... feeling bad...
but why was you feeling so low today?
hehehe ahem ahem was not too much.. that was simple peck...😉
all i can say that was a very silly misunderstanding... only that maan made his way in different direction...

no no dear.. will update next part soon... 27th tak wait nahi karna padega..
i am thinking that i will finish it soon...
love you dear..
hugs to u... muah..

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

awsum update luvd it

plzz cont soon x

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Anisha

@anisha_maaneet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

awesome part...😛

loved it...

cont. soon dear...

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neha gupta

@neha5058

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

part 10

one day she was reading magazine and first time she read man's article in magazine..don't know how many times she read it and kissed his pic..cut his pic and kept in a folder...then whenever she found his pic so she cut his pic and kept it in a folder...one day she saw his interview on tv and she record it then whole night she watch it again and again...
days are passing like this... one day at noon maan is going at home engrossed in his thoughts while driving..thinking about his first birthday with geet..how they celebrate that day..how geet surprised him...actually today his birthday and like other years this year too geet didn't wished him..he was so restless...missing her a lot...he was in drunk state and driving and suddenly something happened with him and he didn't realize that when and how this happened to him... in hospital one man came with another maan who is in pool of blood and fractured hand...laid on stretcher...he is faint..man is calling to doctors again and gain..geet came there and saw him and froze there like a statue..man shook her but she is not responding..armaan came out hearing so much noise in hospital..he looked at geet who is stood there numb...armaan shook her and she slowly points at the the maan who is on stretcher...he followed her finger and found maan is there...in pool of blood...he met with an accident..armaan immediately take him in an OT...but geet is still there standing numb but tears coming out from her eyes... ridz came near her and shook her...she led her in her cabin...she made her sit on the chair but still geet is in shock...ridz tried very hard for taking her back in her sense but no use...then she sprinkle water on her face..she came in her sense and worried..ridz maan...wo maan hi the na..kya hua mere maan ko ridz..her voice is choking...
ridz-geet, armaan is checking him..kuch nahi hoga usey...
geet-ridz, please mere maan ko bacha le...she said in a meek voice...she sat on her kness on the land begging to her that save maan...holding ridz's legs...
ridz-geet,,sambhal apne aap ko..kuch nahi hoga usey..mai promise karti hu tujhse...
geet-sachi ridz...tu sach bol rahi hai na..tu unka treatment karegi na..unhe hate nahi karegi na... ridz felt very bad for her..she is begging from her... she composed to herself...haan geet..mai and armaan uska treatment karenge..bas tu uske samne mat aana..samjhi.. geet nodded...
geet-par kya mai ek baar dur se dekh lu?
ridz nodded and take her in OT..she saw him laying in operation theater..messed up in blood on his face..his chest..his arms...a piece of glass in his shoulder..she closed her eyes...can't see him like this...she ran and ran like a maniac from the hospital..running on roads don't know where her feet take her...and she went in gurudware... she sat there whole day and on the other hand armaan and ridz operating him... operation went well...but they gave the doss of sedative...they informed to geet that operation is successful...geet came back to hospital and saw him from the window...they took his home's number from his mobile and informed his dadi..geet has no guts to do this so armaan did this... after some time meet told to driver that take her in hospital.. meet reached there and dadi also came there running crying...both enter in hospital unaware of each other..dadi went to reception and asked about maan singh khurana..and meet heard his name...receptionist tell her that 2nd floor and his private room...meet's eyes opened hearing his name and she followed dadi without letting her knew that...dadi ran there and enter in his room...maan is out of sedative doss and in his full sense...but didn't met with nay doctor till yet... meet also enter in his room following dadi...dadi ran to his hugged him immediately...meet saw him from far and took her steps back from there...she ran from there and went in amy's cabin..armaan shocked to see her there..he don't want that meet see his papa in this condition before he tell her something she asked papa ko kya hua hai? she hold his hand and dragged him in room...meet left armaan's hand and ran to maan crying... maan and dadi saw her..maan became worried saw her crying...maan immediately lift her and made her sat beside him...
armaan-beta,abhi unka operation hua hai na unhe pareshaan nahi karte...chalo aayo..
maan looked at him at recognized him in a minute..dadi looking at them surprisingly..
dadi-maan..aap inhe jaante hai?
maan ignore dadi's question and straightly asked to meet..ohh to ye tumhare papa... he became angry after saw armaan...he hates him...maan thought that because of armaan he is away from his geet... meet looked at him fluttering her eyes making sense to his question...
armaan-tumhe usse koi matlab nahi hona chahiye...you are patient here so behave like a patient...
maan-don't try to play games with him..
dadi-ye aap dono kis bare me baat kar rahe hai..doc maan theek to hai na?
armaan-ji bilkul..kuch chotein hia ...jaldi theek ho jayegi..kuch purane ghaav hai wo bhi theek ho jayenge.. he said this to dadi and taunting to maan...maan understand his sentence...
meet-wo to mere armaan uncle hai..
armaan shout on her..meet go from here..mama is waiting for you....meet start crying..armaan never shout on her...and today because of maan..he is very angry from him and his anger is coming out...
maan-koi apni beti par aise gussa hota hai kya? lagta hai tum achhe papa nahi ho..
armaan-mai kya hu kya nahi hu..tumse janne ki jarurat nahi hai..jo bhi hu tumse to bahut achha hu..atleast kisi ka sath bich me to nahi chhodta.... he hit on his weak point.. maan knew that where he is hinting...dadi looked at both of them..their arguments increasing the temprature of the room...
maan smirks at him..really..!!
armaan-well mr. khurana you won't be understand all this because you are sick man...it will be good for you if you take rest otherwise i'll forget that i am doctor here...
maan-ohh...doc armaan...if i want then i'll destroy this hospital in a min...
ridz came there and replied him back... do whatever you want...but please be away from our little world...that was not enough you have done before 7 years,you want to again destroy our life...
maan-what i have done before 7 years?
ridz-you are asking from me...shame on you mr. maan singh khurana...
maan's temper is raising..he can't control on himself no anymore...dadi was dumbstuck hearing all this...she was unable to understand anything what is going there? and the little girl meet scared from their argument..she never saw ridz and armaan with this bad temper..they tried their best for not to hurt him but the wound very deep which he has given to geet...
maan-who the hell are you talking to me like this?
stop it...they all heard a voice behind their...all turned and looked at geet but maan was unable to see the view but he knew who is she? his heart know that who is she?
geet-i said stop it... this is hospital and you guys are thinking that this is the wrestling stadium...
dadi-geet..a meek voice came out from her mouth... she looked at dadi and at once take the blessings from her...she looked at maan... there are so much questions in geet's mind...but she kept those questions aside and fulfilled her duty...
geet-mr. khurana you are not well..i think you should take rest..i'll give you the injection of pain killer..it will help in reduce the pain
maan roared back-i don't want any medicine...i am absolutely fine...
geet-injection to aapko lena padega... dr. ridhima can you please take away meet from here?... ridz nodded... geet prepared the injection and he was looking at her..thinking that she has been changed a lot...she was a sensitive girl before 7 years and now she is a strict doctor..he missed her a lot..he loved her a lot but never voice out...but his love always showed in his acts...she looked in his eyes and he also and geet gave him an injection...he didn't realize that when geet gave him the injection...then she immediately left from there and armaan too...but dadi's voice stop her..
dadi-geet... geet stop in her way..she indicates to armaan that leave her alone for some time..armann went from there... geet looked at dadi..
dadi-kaisi hai aap geet bete?
geet-i am fine dadi...aur aap?
dadi-hum bhi theek hai...bete meet?
geet-she is my daughter dadi...
dadi-aapki aur?
geet-sorry dadi maa...mai abhi aapke kisi sawaal ka jawab nahi de sakti....she left from there and went in her cabin where armaan,ridz & meet are waiting for her...she entered in cabin...and ridz shout on her..
ridz-why you came there?
geet-and why you guys were accusing him?
ridz-you know that why we both did this...
geet-yeah, i know very well...sorry armaan & ridz for all this..i have shouted on both of you...
armaan-don't be...we can understand your mental condition...
geet-thanks...please ridz you can take meet at home..i'll come home later..i have to fill some entries in register...
ridz-okkay but be careful...she knew why she want to be here...both left from there with meet..meet is very co-operative with geet..she never bothered her with her stupid questions...because she knew that her mom will tell her everything later...after some hours...she composed herself and went to patients ward for checking them...and went in maan's room..she looked at his sleeping face...she went near him and beside him lost in her thought...today his birthday...and today she shout on him... she still remember that his first birthday with her and how she celebrate his birthday...on his birthday..she went in his early in the morning sneaked in to his room quietly...he was sleeping...she sat beside him...caressing red rose on his lips and gave him peck on his lips and wished him happy birthday...he smiled in his sleeping state...she narrowed her brows...and he winked at her... her mouth fell opened in big O shape and he grabbed her in his arms..she hit him on his chest...you cheater... she said...
maan-ohfo geet..happy birthday ki jagah you are saying me cheater.. not fair na...!!
geet-cheater cheater cheater...leave me..
maan-geet...this is not fair...today is my birthday and you are beating me...how could you do this me?
geet-maan...maine aapko wish kiya na...aapne hi mere sath game play kiya...
maan-ek baar aur wish karo na please...
geet-no...maine aapko wish kar diya...
maan left her at once...ok jao...koi birthday boy ko aise tadpata hai kya? he turned to other side...
geet-maan..don't behave like this..
maan-mujhe nahi baat karni tumse...
geet laughed mutely but went to other side...whispered in his ear..happy birthday..!! he turned his face to her but didn't opened his eyes...she thought for a while and dipped her finger in chocolate cake which she brought for him and caress her finger on his lips..he felt something on his lips before he opened his eyes she took that cake in her mouth from his lips and ran away...he laid there mesmerized at her cute acts which made him fall on her again and again... she came out from her thought and looked at him...she bend down little and gave a little peck on his cheek and whispered happy birthday..she stood up for leave but maan hold her wrist... she looked at him shocked... she forgot that the effect of pain killer has been reduced and now he is wide awake... he all the while knew that geet is there beside him but didn't opened his eyes...he can feel her presence,,,,
maan-you have changed a lot geet...
geet-everything has been changed before 7 years maan...and me too...
maan-you remember how you wished me my birthday...
geet-how can i forget maan...
maan-but today you didn't wished like that day...
geet-i have changed according to you...
maan-are you happy geet?
Geet smiled at his question…my happiness? What does it matters to you?
Maan-it takes..
Geet-really..!! you snatch my happiness from me before 7 years and now you are worrying about my happiness. don't be maan…she replied him coolly but from inside she wanted to hug him, kiss him..
Maan-but …she cut him and said you should take rest...

precap
last part

tell me friends hows it?
now you all came to know the little truth..
in next part i mean in last part everything will be reveal out..
waiting for your response..
love neha

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

yipee me frst
frst time😆

nice part bt wt yaar last part itni jldi..🤢
yaar suspns khula nhi ki last part nt 🤢
kya yaar intrstng thngs jldi end kyu ho jati hai

Edited by parikashyap - 13 years ago

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