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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Wonderful part...
so meet is maaneet's daughter😛...and maan unknowingly met his daughter...
want to know their past ...
please update soon...

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Divz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

luvd it

waiting fr nxt part

updt real soon

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sakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

eagerly waiting for next part

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

updating in few minutes...
is anyone here?

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

part 8

ridz-pasta khana hai mere baby ko..
meet-hmm..ek dum papa wale taste jaisa...jaisa papa ko pasand hai same waisa...
ridz didn't like it but can't tell anything to this little innocent girl...
ridz-okay..masi aapke liye pasta banayegi..chalo chalo hum kitchen me chalte hia..isse pehle mama aaye aur aapka pasta kha jaaye..aap jaldi se finish kar lo.. meet giggled knowing that her mama loves pasta too.whenever meet demands pasta then geet also start having in her plate...meet took half-2 spoons and geet took pasta in full spoon... meet make faces then geet went in manofying mode... then for her she cook pasta and chocolate mousse... she became happy... amy & geet came home and calling both of them..meet came running from the kitchen but her lips are messed in pasta...actually after having pasta she was licking the plate and her fingers...she didn't like to eat pasta with fork...she love to eat pasta from her fingers... geet start scolding her but she hid behind armaan... she knew that if someone is there who can save her from geet that is armaan...
one fact is there after having pasta..whenever meet missed her papa then she has pasta...here papa's fav... geet took her in washroom and cleaned her...she is continously blabbering like her...and this time she listen her only...
geet-meet, kitna bolti hai tu..chup kar abhi..mama ko pakana hai kya?
meet-mama, aap bhi to itna hi bolte the na papa ke sath..poor mere papa..wo bhi yahi sochte honge na...
geet-haan wo to hai... she took her in her lap & telling her about herself and maan...that she was ga ga about something and maan only listened her...
ridz came out from the kitchen...
ridz-meet baby..ab batao aap itna khush kyo ho aaj?
meet-haan..mama, amy you know today i am very very nahi itna sara happy stretching her arms...
amy-arey wah..my friend itni happy...
geet-really my baby..chalo batao kya baat hai?
meet-mama, amy, ridzy masi..pata hia aaj mai kisse mili?
geet-kisse beta..?
meet-papa se...wo mujhse milne school aaye the..unhone mujhe chocolate diya...mujhe kissy kiya...mujhe hug kiya...maine bhi unhe kissy diya..
ridz became angry but geet's face lit up and her eyes twinkled in joy..
geet-really beta...aap jhuth to nahi bol rahe ho na..?
meet-no mama..sachi...
amy-beta unhone aapse kuch puchha?
meet-nahi...unhone to mera naam bhi nahi puchha...
amy-kyo?
meet-wo lunch break over ho gaya tha na isliye...
geet became sad..ridz hold her... her face lit up with joy but tears in her eyes... she hugged meet immediately...beta papa ne aapka kaha kissy kiya?
meet points at her face where maan kissed her.. geet also kissed her exactly there..all over her face feeling the touch of his lips...meet crushed in her arms..she want to feel his touch like his touch still on meet's body and she is feeling that she is in maan's arms...ridz and armaan also have tears in thier eyes...ridz can't see her like this..she went from there and armaan ran behind her...
ridz-armaan..she hugged him..i can't see geet in this condition..
armaan-ssshhh...chup ho jao..
ridz-wo samajhti kyo nahi...maan ne usey chhod diya hai..aur ab wo maan kya lene aaya hamari chhoti si duniya me?
armaan-lekin wo to meet ka naam bhi nahi jaanta..
ridz-fir wo meet se kyo mila...?
armaan tried to calm her but some question are rising in his mind too...
ridz-geet pagal hai...itni badi doctor ban gayi hai par usme akal nahi hai..
armaan-wo sambhal jaayegi..
ridz-par kab..kab armaan..kab? 7 years..whole 7 years... she is still like same as when she was 7 years back...you know her na...
armaan don't know what to tell her... he didn't know himself why maan left her...and today he came back in her life...
down the stairs..geet is very happy but crying holding meet in her arms...
meet asked innocently-mama why are you crying?
geet-mama missing papa na..that's why..
meet wipes her tears that are coming out but she is happy.. mama don't cry..papa promise me that he will come tomorrow...tab aap mil lena unse...
geet nodded at her samajhdaar beti...
meet-mama, papa hamre sath kyo nahi rehte?
geet-beta papa ko bahut kaam hota hai na isliye..wo out of station rehte hai..
meet-ohh..made sad face...
geet divert her...chalo hum dono chocolate cake banate hai..fir ek sath khayange..
meet-aaj hum dono ka miss you day hai..
geet-haan aaj hum dono papa ko miss kar rahe hai na to miss you day celebrate karte hai..
meet-yayyy..!!! aaj hum cake khayenge... ridz and armaan watching them...they are very sad for meet & geet and very angry on maan...but they don't know why geet is like this? why she don't angry from maan? why she tell eveything about maan to meet? she should keep away her from maan but she is doing exact opposite this...she used to tell her small-2 things about maan to her and her likes and dislikes are same as maan's...
both went in kitchen and prepared chocolate cake...and wrote on it..missing you...then cut it and fed it to maan's pic then fed to each other...geet knew that maan is also in the same city but she never tried to reach at him..she used to read about him in magazines...watching his interviews on tv...even some times tried to talk to him on phone in his office but then cut it...he has his private number that is very hard to find out the number for her...she is a surgeon in sanjeevani with armaan and ridhima... ridhima and armaan loves to each other but ridz kept promise to herself that when geet didn't settled in her life she didn't get married to armaan...geet has full faith on maan...she never questioned him back..she knew if he did something then there is big reason behind it...what he did, why he did, when he did...she never questioned him back...she knew he can't be wrong...he can't do anything wrong..he can't take wrong decisions...she knew if maan left her then it is for her sake, for his sake...so she didn't tried to find him..she is very happy with meet..in her small world... but she is feeling very sad for ridz & armaan...she tried many times to make her understand that get married but she didn't listen her...she knew she also ziddy like her...
next day again meet saw his on red signal and copied him...he smiled and did some unique movements that meet copied..making faces...and he love that...in lunch break he went to meet her...gave her chocolates, hugs and kisses...
maan-aapka naam kya hai sweetheart?
meet-meet...
maan-meet..bahut achha naam hai aapka...kisne rakha?
meet-mama ne..you know ye papa and mama ka mix name hai..
maan felt a lump in his heart listening about her father...he din't know why he is feeling possessive about that cute little girl...why he felt jealous from her father? why he wants to take this cute little girl with him forever...why he wants to love her like he used to love geet? why he felt a sudden attraction towards this cute little girl...? why he wants to be with her whole day? kissing her hugging her copying her like she copied him... why? why? so many question in his mind and he has no answers...he is fighting between his heart & his mind..one side says that she is his meet..like his own part..love her kiss her hug her and another side says that she is the daughter of someone's...don't know whom? so you should not love her.be away from this little girl who is waking same emotions in his heart like he felt before 7 years ago...days are passing like this..their morning meeting on red signal..she copied him daily and he smiled at her..meeting in school at lunch break..giving chocolates, kissing and hugging session is going on...but neither she questioned him nor he...she always addressed as paa and he never stop her...he love to hear paa from her mouth...it feels some kind of magic in her sweet kiddish tone which is showering so much love for him...neither he asked her about her family nor she told him...she is very reserved for him..she is like be with him in his lap... she was waiting for this whole 3 years...missed her papa's love whole 6 years...but armaan never made her feel that..he showered his love on her like a father...always be with her..as a father, as a friend...if someone is there who can made her understand anything that is armaan,,,always help in her studies..never made her feel that her papa is not here...she used to ask about her father and geet always tell her that he is out of station...but tell her everything..like papa aise hai..papa waise hai..papa ko ye pasand hai...papa ko wo pasand hai..everything...how they met first time...how he saved her...used to do yoga on the hills with each other..no no she teach him yoga and he did as she said...next day again meet met with him on red signal and copied him...and as usual he smiled at her back...she never questioned him as she knew that geet always tell her everything time to time...before she asked anything to her geet tell her...geet don't want that her daughter will have some false hopes...as she had...she thought that he will be by her side always but he broke her faith but she never complaint him back..still loves him to the core...still trust him..trust on his words...

precap
maaneet meeting

tell me friends hows this?
waiting for your comments
neha

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

awesome dear
love meet
but seeing her and geet like this feeling bad
and same with maan even he cant forget her and he is so j abt her father i like that
and maaneet meeting me eagerly waiting and let him know that its geet baby plz dear
can u update one more plzzz if u can

Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago