OS: abhay say's I LUV U (part 2) updated

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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys i m really sad that phulwa is gonna end...so i trd a OS about abhay and phulwa...OS about how did abhay said "I LUV U" to phulwa...

the day started with full of celebration becaz abhay ws back to normal...evrybdy was in a happy mood...everybody was busy with d decorations...phulwa was dressed in a red sare...lukng absolutely gorgeous...in a free hair...was preparing the lunch fr everyone...all d problems were sorted out...thakur daroga singh was in jail along with his partners feeling sad abt their wrong doings...

then abhay was dressed in white shirt looking stunning (as always)...all were really happy...he decided to tell his love...to phulwa...in his room...he saw a picture of phulwa...smiling...and started

abhay: "phulwa aaj hum bhahut kush hai ...dil se...kyunki jo kuch bhi humne zindegi mein chaha woh sab kuch hume aaj mil chuka hai...aaj mein tume woh baat batane ja rahan hu jo maine aaj tak nahi kaha...tha tumse... par ab nahi...raat ke baara baje...woh baat bahut special hei mere liye..."

then he placed her picture...and then gauri cme and said that lunch was ready...and everyone are waiting fr him down...he was so excited...

he sat on d dining table...everybody were happy..that all their miseries have cme to an end...arjun was also there .he was so happy abt the family...then phulwa in her red ress was so beautiful..took the food to serve everyone...abhay was dumbstruck on seeing her beauty...he cud nt wink on seeing her...he was so excited to tell her..his love..

then she served the food...to evryone..

gauri : "jiji tum bhi beito na main serve kar deti hoon tumhare liye..."

then phulwa sat next to abhay...with a smile inside her heart...she thought to herself.."abhay aaj mein aapse kuch kehna chati hain jo itni dino mein nahin keha paaye...par ab nahi ...raat baara baje..."

they both luked eye to eye for a minute..lost in love...everyone giggled on seeing them...then bade thakurayen coughed to bring them to normal...they felt a little embarrassed ...then they started to eat...aftr sme time ...phulwa had hiccups...seeing dat abhay raised a glass of water to her..placing his hand over her head..gently tapping...they lukd at eachother...
then the song flows..."ore piyaa...oye..ore piya..."

guys i will continue part 2 only with ur suggestion...did u like it.?




Edited by akshi900 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Stupid girl why cannot u do it in a single stretch every one wanted to make all waiting... But yar it was beautiful and we have only left some very good memories of some stories like this our CVs disappointed us a lot but our forum members never and you are also in that list now very good writing and post the next part today it self late night hi sahi...but post it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good job pls continue i m waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: thiku

Stupid girl why cannot u do it in a single stretch every one wanted to make all waiting... But yar it was beautiful and we have only left some very good memories of some stories like this our CVs disappointed us a lot but our forum members never and you are also in that list now very good writing and post the next part today it self late night hi sahi...but post it

athira just 2 watch such cute & beautiful romantic moments of PhAb alongwid proper track & end of the show ,i want an extension of 2-3 months!!😍😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just to watch these sorts of cute scenes an extension... Why cannot they given that, u know one thing I wanted to ask is abt this AA guy are u sure he is one of the Phulwa writers... just curious that is it... Going frm here every time but coming back in the next moment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow so nice ... waiting for 2 part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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too good loved your writing...PLS post the next part quickly...only if we could see such scenes in the serial itself😊...well done again...waiting fr part 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks u sooo much guys...here is d 2 part

part 2

then phulwa drank d water...aftr lunch abhay cme to the room took d phone n ordered some roses fr his lady love...and made them clear dat it shuld b on time...he cudnt wait ...evry second he checked d clock to strike twelve...phulwa on hr part...thnkng hw to propose to him..was really feeling shy...and abhay thought to himself.."phulwa aaj ke baad tum hamesha keliye mere ho jaoge...hamesha hamesha keliye..."(smiling)...they cudnt wait ...as if every second ws a bane to them...both of them were busy with d preparations...😆 and then takurain cme to phulwa n said "phulwa hum,gauri aur chote thakurain abhi mandir ja rahein hein...tum abhay ka kyaal rakhna..hum jaldi waaapas aa jayenge.."

saying dat they went to the temple...and then arjun too starts off with them...now its only phulwa and abhay (so exciting).❤️...phulwa was in the kitchen preparing food...abhay was in d room practicing to propose her...he felt a little shy hw to tell hr...both of them wr a bit nervous..(nail biting)...there was only 20 mins left fr d clock to strike twelve...abhay went 2 d terrace 2 check d arrangements..everything was perfect...❤️

the whole terrace ws decorated with full of red roses...and a table with two wine glasses and wine bottle...phulwa hesitently rechd the room ...to find abhay...bt he was not here..she searched all over the palace...at last she went to the terrace to search fr him...as soon as she reached...abhay stood back to her and gently closed her eyes...phulwa in a bit angry mood...says"abhay aap kaha the mein aapko poore haveli mein doondh rahi ...hum aapse kuch zaroori baat kehna chate hein.."

then abhay.."ruko ruko..hum bhi tumse kuch zaroori baat kehna chate hein par tume thoda intezaar karna padega..."😆

saying that he turned on d music...it started..
"Kaise batayein
Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara batha na paayein
Baatein dil o ki
Dekho jo baki
Aake tujhe samjhaein
Tu jaane na aaa..
Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaa..
Tu jaane na
"


he bent down his knee...asking fr hr hand to dance...she gave hr hand with a little shy😳...then he placed his hand on her waist..phulwa becme a little nervous n dey started to dance on romantic night..under the twinkling stars..⭐️ .then he made hr 2 sit on the table n started..

abhay:"pata hai pulwa zindagi mein bahut akele raha hoon...sab kuch rehte huwa bhi kuch bhi nahi tha hamare paas..par aaj hum akele nahi hai..kyunki tum hamre paas ho..aaj se hame kisi bhi chees ki kami nahi hogi...kyunki..."

phulwa: "kyunki...?"

abhay:"kyunki...hmmm...ek minute..."

then he saw his watch it was twelve... .. said "kyunki phulwa... hum tumse bahut pyaar karte hain...bahut pyaar...humse se zyaada pyaar tume iss zindagi main koi nahi kar sakta.❤️..ha phulwa na jaane kab se hume tumse pyaar ho gayi...tumhare bhina hum bhilkul adhoore hai...hume aaj hi pata chala ki hum tumse itna pyaar karte hai... I LOVE YOU PHULWA..❤️.I LOVE U SO MUCH..hum waada karte hain ki hum tume kabhi bhi akele nahi chodke jaayange...kya tum bhi humse pyaar kati ho...?"

phulwa remained silent fr a minute...abhay:"phulwa...?"

phulwa...was surprised to hear this.😲..with smile on her cheek...winking both her eyes...blushing...😳 said "HAAN.."

THEN he hugged her..🤗..for a minute...they were laughing with full of joy...

phulwa.."abahy hum aapse yahi baat kehna cha rahe te..hum bhi aapse bahut pyaar karte hain..."she was full of tears..

they hugged each other...they rembrd all the moments they spent together.❤️.and then gently abhay placed his hands on her lips ... (lost in her beuty)...and kissed her (most romantic scene)..😍

and he tuk her in his arms and reached the bedroom...the bed was fully decorated with full of roses...he placed her on the bed...and said once again "i love u phulwa.."and switched off the lights..("rest is ur imagination..😆")

hope u lkd it..!!!!!!😊

Edited by akshi900 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi_s

Very well written...enjoyed it


thank u so much mimi..!!

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