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Posted: 13 years ago
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Colourful Holi

Though its an os plz giv long comments


Geet woke up from her bed with lots of excitement.
G:Today is Holi.The first Holi after our wedding.I will rock.I will confess my love to Maan.
Maan and Geet had arranged marriage.They got married only for their parents' sake.Slowly they became good friends.Unknowingly Geet started feeling romantically for Maan.She decided to open her heart before him on Holi.

After some time Maan entered the room.Unexpectedly Geet pasted colour powder on his face.It fell on his shirt also.He held her hand.She did'nt expect it.

M:What is this Geet?
G:Holi.Right?
M:So?I got ready to go to office.Because of you i have to bath and change my clothes again.
Geet felt sad seeing his anger.
G:Today also you need to go to the office?
M:If i don't go who will do my work?I don't want my work to be pending.
Maan went to the bathroom.
She felt sad seeing Maan going to the office.
Geet wore a white salwar kameez.

Geet made a design on the floor with colour powder.

Maan's grand mother was impressed.
She:Wow!It's so beautiful.You are so artistic.
G:Thank you Dadima.
Slowly her face became dull.
G:I am sad that Maan won't be here with me for our first Holi.
D:Who said Maan won't be here with you to celebrate Holi?Holi is his favourite festival.He loves to play with colours.
G:But he got angry when i put colour on him.
D:He is having job stress.That's why.But he can't avoid Holi.He will come for sure.
Geet became happy.


After some time...
All were busy with Holi celebration.Geet's face blossomed when she saw Maan coming.But her face lost it's charm when his friends took him away.
She got irritated:He is always with his friends.He has no time for his wife.But why should he spend time with his wife?Our marriage is not based on love.He married me for his family.I am so foolish that i fell in love with him.By ignoring me he proved that he does'nt love me.Then why i should i get embarrassed by confessing my love to him?No need.
Her eyes got welled up with tears.

After some time she saw Maan coming towards her.He was staring at him.
G:Why are you staring at me?Are you drunk?You had bang with your friends.Right?Oh!I am fed up.I am going.
She turned back to walk out.But he held her hand.
M:You are fed up of me?But let me tell you...i won't allow you to go away from me.You will remain as Mrs.Maan Singh Khurana till the end.Understood?
Geet kept looking at his eyes with confusion.
G:Why?
M:Because i love you dammed.
She was surprised.Slowly she smiled.
Suddenly she got confused again.
G:Are you bluffing under the bang's effect?
M:What if i am under bang's effect?I am telling the truth.Right?Purposefully i drank bang so that without any shyness and effort i can confess my love to you.I have heard that people express their true feelings and emotions when they are drunk.
Geet was confused:Is he telling the truth?I think he is crazy after drinking bang.
She tried to walk away.He pulled her close to him.They both shared an eye lock.
He said softly:I was shy.I was scared whether you will blast at me if i tell you that i love you.So i thought if you think that i made confession under bang's effect even if you are angry you will pardon me.That's why i pretended to be drunk.
Geet was surprised:So you were pretending to be drunk?
M:Yes Geet.Because you were considering my magical words useless thinking that i am drunk.
She was very happy.
G:Maan!This is the most special Holi in my life.You made this Holi colourful through your confession.
M:Make my Holi also special Geet.
She blushed:Same to you.That's all i can say Mr.Maan Singh Khurana.
She was so shy that she tried to run away.
He held her hand.She looked at his face with a cute smile.She was very shy.
He put colour on her face.
She kept looking at his face.

M:Happy Holi!
G:Happy Holi Maan..
She threw colour at him and ran away.Maan ran after her and caught her by her waist.He carried her in his arms.They both shared a romantic eye lock.
The song 'holi Ke Din Dil Khil Jaate Hain Rangon Mein Rang Mil Jaate Hain
gile Shikawe Bhul Ke Doston Dushman Bhi Gale Mil Jaate Hain..'{Sholay}was played.
Maan and Geet lost their control and they danced together to the song.

The End..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS
Thank You For The PM
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wow... nice os...
loved it...
arranged marriage but after marriage they loved each other n confessed on holi..
thats really cute...

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wowww awesome nice cute OS yar loved it a lot
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lovely os very beautiful awesome thanks for the pm
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awsem maneet arrange marriage holi mein confession



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Nice os dear.at the time of ghsp i really wanted them to play holi together bt they never shwd it.
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wow really lovely OS
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loved it a lot...
confession part was good..
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very nice...😛

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