~Fan~ ~Fic~...kya karegi bani

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Posted: 19 years ago
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(by the way this is my sistas account! i jus wanna write sumthin...so if i my sista reads this .. plz dnt hit me.. i love u... lol) so here it is (my 1st attemp and may be ma last if ma sista reads this lol! ...

part one:

Jai was sitting n his office...as usual with his lap top...looking sexc... and thinking bout bani...

he kept getting flash backs of what had happened that night...even though alot of time had gone past since the night jai still cudnt get it out of his mind. he decided that he would take bani out for dinner and tell her what on his mind...which was that he loves her... and also tell her the raaz!!!

mean while bani ji was getting things ready in the kitchen... all the servents were around and masi and dadi had gone to the mandir...bani was gettin lucnh ready... she was wearing a beautiful pink saree and look abosotlutly gorjus... one of the servents asked her to test some food to see if there was anything missing... bani took a bite and with out biting it any firther spat it out...something was wrong!!!...but nt with the food...

jai on the other hand was trying to call her...so that he could ask her out however she did not pick up any of the calls...jai gave up and very angrilly walked out of his office to talk to adi...

...all the servents were shocked at bani's reaction and tried to help her but before they could she had ran out of the kitchen and was running up the stairs!... every one just stared at her with a cinfused look...

jai entered adi office where he saw adi with a few employees..adi dismissed them and ask jai wots up... aji tolf him how he wanted to tell bani his true feelings for her... adi luagh with joy and said that he must tell bani...jai smiled abd blushed and walked out...

meanwhile bani has slammed the bedroom door shut and locked it.. there was unusual feeling inside her... she had not eaten that morning as she had no time but still she felt her stomach wanting to let somthing out... she burst into the bathroom and out came puke...

bani was confused... she though to herself that she had not eaten then why was she puking? she look at herself in the mirror.. and she knew somthing was terribly wrong with her!!!

jai tried calling bani again and this time bani piacked the fone up...

"bani?"

"ji mr walia"

"mmm..kya kar rahi ho?"

"ku kuch nahin" bani said panicking"

"tum teekh to ho na?"

"ji"

"suno aaj me tumhe kahin..mmm ek restaurant site hai jo main tumhe batana chahta hoon...so if u dont mind... tum aaogi?

"ji..shall i come over?

"NO! mmm we'll go at nite.. for a d...walk.. ok il talk to you wen i get home bye...

jay out the phone down leaving a very confused bani...

as much as she wanted to bani stopped thinkin about jai as she had n unknown illness which she had never before.. and unusual feeling... not being able reduce the wierd feeling bani decided to go to the docs...

...jai called adi and informed him about the plans he had made for the nite... adi came storming into jai's office and embraced him and they tole jai that he shud present a gift to bani... for an extra touch...however jai did not know wot to give bani as appart from kangans jai had never given bani anything...o and the medicine.. lol...adi advised jai to get bani some flowers and a ring as they knew that bani did not have an engagement ring.. jai set off to buy bani a ring with adi...

confused and scared and lost in her own world, bani entered the hospital. Being miss walia she was taken in by a female doctor straight away ... all the checks were done and the doctor very confidently broke the neww to bani that she was 1 month and 10 days preg!!!...

"KYA"

ha bani tum pregnent ho"

"main.. doctor.. are you sure .. woh mujhe"

"main janti hoon bani tumhe believe nahin ho raha but its true... so how are you goin to tell mr walia.. im sure hed be pleased to know...

without even hearing what the doctor had said or was goin to say bani walked out of the room and headed straight hom... all alone in her bedroom bani thought and though and jus kept thinkin of what mr walia would think... wot his reaction would be... would he shout at her...kick her out... every time she thought bani became more and more scared... tears rolled down her face and there was mothing that could stop them appart from jai...

there was a knock on the door and masi popped in with her usual bubbly smile... bani realised that she had just walk in and quickly wiped her tears...

"bani kuch hoowa kya???! masi asked anxiously

"nahin to" bani replied trying ot be strong but she could stop the tears.. masi sat bani down next to her and explained that every couple has their ups and down but that doesnt meant that people hide and cry behind others back.. to sovle situation they need to talk to each other... masi told bani to tell jai exactly what the problem is ....she kissed banis fore head and blessed her.. and left...leavin a very broken but even more confused bani...

how was bani going to tell masi that there was no problem betwenn jai and her.. instead there was somthing alse...somthing that may be bani wanted... but may be jai didnt...

bani stood up and help jai's photo in her hand ...tears still rollong down her face...

"mr walia...(sobbing) MAIN KYA KARROON?" bani hugged the framed and continued to cry...

by the way i have no idea wot its like to preg so if u dnt get that kinda side effext all the ladys who are mumy-jis then ... im so sorry... i hope u like it... im thinking of continuing but... thats only if u guys like it... please tell me if i shud make any changes, if u dnt like it.. of if i shud jus stop.!

meeras lil sista... please reply 😊

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sgumi82 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was sooo gr8..
u shul continue dear... meeras sis...

good job dear...

luv,
savi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow meeras lil sista! u should def become a member of this forum! u r def talented! n im pretty sure ur sista will give u a hug instead of a beating after she reads this fanfic! pleez do continue sweetie!! eagerly waitin for ur next part! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!! tht was awesome hun 👏 👏 👏
plzz continue soon....... 😳

luv,
LiSa
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THEN?!?!?!?!?! OMGGGGGGGG he bought a ring.. haila.. plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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That was nice. Please continue.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was soo good! lolz! lmao ur soo funny {and ur coments} lolz 😉

please continue 👏
SIKinLoVE thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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JUST DONT SEPARATE THEM.. OR I WILL CRY 😭 😭 😭 butt do cont soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey meeras lil sis
that was a grreat fan fic
i hope this really happens in the actual drama
damn i have been waiting for a long time for bani to become pregnant...
i mean in normal indian dramas it takes about 2 days for the girl to get pregnant.. just take anu from ek larki anjaani si for instance..
anywayz i cant wait for part 2..
that was grrreat though..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
Great start... pls do cont soon


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