pyaar ki takaar,ff,hitler didi family

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi peoples, my name is Alia but everyone calls me alli, i'm totally new to this forum, i love inshi and sameer is hot so i had to write some thing about him or pair him up with someone, but i don't know if i should continue, and i wasn't a huge fan of mandira and sameer jodi, so please don't throw chapals, or tamatars, thank you. my first attempt at writing.
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sameer
hot huh😃
same as usual

additi
Indira's sister ,she's kinda like Indira, Indira and her are very close, hardworking, she lived in the US but came here
Indira
Rati Pandey in a press meet of Hitler Didi
same as usual

rishi
same as usual
and hitler's and adi's family.
prologue
this happened after rishi's fake parents left, rishi left with them, sam left afterwards
rishi's real mother about to slap Indira, a hand stops her, face appears, tan tan tan,
additi is adi,
adi- don't touch my sister, and how dare you try to slap my sister, get out of here, grabs her hand leads her out.
munna bhai- great Indira 2.0's here.
sunaina bhabi- what's going to happen to us know.
adi- ma, what is this you said Di got into an accident.
Indira- kya!
ma- well, you see i have a marriage proposable for you, Indira doesn't want to marry him, but you can, his rich, handsome, and everything you could want in a guy, if i were you i would marry him, par ye urmar problem create kar thi hai.
Indira- that's why you told adi i got into to a accident, you know very she won't come to India, unless its an emrgency, and now your trying to get her married to this canjoose makhi chuse.
adi- let me speak. wa this is what you call a ma, you are ready to sell your daughter and that to for money, only you can do that.


should i continue, what did you think ' biting my nails'
yeah i had this on another forum but i moved it here i cganged a couple things, and this felt more homey don't own the pics.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue plz... its rare to find FF, SS or OS on HD ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello😊, i decided ehh, why not, i will do this ff, but be warned i'm a lazy bum.
continuation
ma- huh, huh think whatever you want, walks off.
mandira- ma, always wants to get additi and Indira married, they get all the rich guys and i get, humph, walks off, sunaina bhabi ,munna bhai, all of them go,somewhere.

indira's room
adi- hugs indira, i missed you so much, a few tears fall.
indira- stop crying, know that your here, i'm not going to let you leave.
adi- who says i'm leaving, actually the thing is, i was planning a surprise for you, i was suppose to come a week later, and help you out with running this pagal canna
indu-why are you coming here,to ths pagal canna, i would have managed, and isn't your work in the US.
adi- yeah di, but i got this job offer from some diwan builders,-------
indu-diwan builders, your not going to work there!
adi- chill di, why are you yelling.
indu- i just don't want you workong there. turns around, folds arm.
adi- why, di, tell me, goes in front of her.
indu- narrates everything, her being in love with rishi, to sameer.cries.
adi- its okay di, hugs her, and let me tell you, i will defeinetly work there, if he tries to hurt you, i will chop that pig into a million pueces and feed him to he dogs.
indu-are you out of your mind, what if he does something to you, i can't lose you.
adi- chill di, and you can't get rid of me that easy.
indu- fine, par yeh western clothes ke bool jao, if your going to work there, and be careful, i don't want you getting hurt.
adi- anything for u di, meh apne jan be kushi kushi de doon gi, snd sbout my safety, don't worry, main hitler ki did hoon.
indu- okay, okay, know go sleep, you have to wake up early.
adi- bye, love u di. goes to the rooftop. sees rishi. goes over to him , puts her hand out, hi my name is additi, i'm hitler's sister.
rishi- well its nice to meet you, i'm rishi.
adi- so your rishi, di se pyaar karta ho.
rishi- scratches his head, yeah.
adi- didi ki dewaana, you know, what you did wasn't right, di hates lies, but there's fire on both sides, and she smiled when she was talking about you, and she loves you, and i'm not letting my di's ego get make her loose her love, so i have a plan to bring you and di together.
rishi- wa, behan ho toh aisi.
adi- thank you, so sweet.
so what did you think, comment, and press the like button.thank you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arey va!!! too good yaar. please continue.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ff !... plzz add me to ur pm list... and do pm me nxt time u update!!... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one ...
good job dear ..plz do pm me next time ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continuee... it was gud... need lengthy chapters :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Start dear
Lovelyyy
Keep it up

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Posted: 13 years ago
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adi's bedroom

knock knock.
adi-come in.
ishaan- hi bua.
adi- arey, abhi tak awake hai.
ishaan- bua, main ap aur indira bua ki bhanji hu, mughe kabhi kabhi care show karo, you came from america, and didn't get me nothing.
adi- sorry ishaan, main tumhare ke bag toh airpot main bhool gai.
ishaan- bua! folds his arms, pouty face.p
adi- i'm kidding, goes over to the closet, and gets out 2 chocolate bars, bends down and hands it to ishaan here.
ishaan- smiles, thank you bua, kisses her and leaves.
adi- arey, yeh to ab gai, di iske hath main chocolate find kare li, and that to at night, ishaan be gaiya, aur main be uske saath saath, hai, sighs i missed this pagal canna.
sameer diwan, that bas***d, he played with me, my feelings, and left me, and now my didi, i'm so glad she's not like me, and didi ke dewaana is really di ki dewaana, praying, please god don't chino this kushi from di.additi go to sleep , you have to face that bas***d tommorrow, yeh meri zindagi ki saath kehle thi, now its my turn, sameer, you love money more than anything ab to tumhare core ki loss hui.

flashback
the hotel was Exquisite, slight hint of vanilla in the air, coming down the stair was the devil itself, sameer diwan.
that night started it all
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful twist :P sameer has already played wid adi .. that's wonderful. continue sooon dear and plzzz make it lil bit long 😳

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