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Posted: 13 years ago
yipeee!!!!!!
will b waiting !!!

love kanika
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Friends,

Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

Some of you do not like me writing in two languages and some of you want englsih translations. So to make life easy for everyone, from now on alle nglish translations will be in green colour making it easy to spot and also to skip.

This part is dedicated to Cyberlife. She has given me not only motivation but also immense strength and confidence in my writing.

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 10

Next Morning

Geet woke up early and freshened up. She went up to her studio and sat in front of "Hope". She had spent a lot of time contemplating what her mom had said and she decided all she needed to know is that were her feelings strong enough to be called love. Were they deep enough to go beyond just happy dreams and expectations.

She had finally slept thinking hard about her feelings. And here she was again. Analyzing herself, trying to hear what her heart truly wanted.

She still remembered his eyes, the way they had looked when he had come to meet her the first time. She played back the entire evening trying to understand the reason behind her yes. Had she been too impulsive?

She glanced outside to see that the rain was tapering off. She got up and went on the roof, letting raindrops drench her. Arms outstretched she twirled in the rain looking up at sky.

"Babaji….mein nahi jaanti pyaar kya hota hai. Par mujhe apne aane wale dard se zayda unki muskurahaat ki fikar hai. Can I ever bring true laughter back in his life? Will I be ever paint his laughing profile. It is in my head, my imagination and in my heart. Is this love when someone's smile matters more than your tears?

Please Babaji, mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai. I know I can not be happy without him. He is my soul mate but am I his? Unki zindagi mein khushi nahi par kahin mera pyaar unka sukoon bhi na cheen le

Mujhe raah dikhayie Babaji. Ek ishaara de dijiye apni bachi ko…bas ek ishaara"

[Babaji…I don't know what love is. But compared to the pain I am going to face, I am worried about his smile. Can I ever bring true laughter back in his life? Will I be ever paint his laughing profile. It is in my head, my imagination and in my heart. Is this love when someone's smile matters more than your tears?

Please Babji, I am very scared. I know I can not be happy without him. He is my soul mate but am I his? He has no happiness in his life but what if my love steals his heart's solace as well.

Show me the path Babaji. Give your daughter just one sign…just one sign]

She closed her eyes, standing still, arms outstretched and hymned in her mind

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gAipul6yHf8

ik onkaar sat naam

kartaa purakh nirbh-a-o nirvair akaal moorat

ajoonee saibhn gur parsaad

jap.

aad sach jugaad sach.

hai bhee sach naanak hosee bhee sach.


sochai soch naa hov-a-ee jay sochee lakh vaar.

chupai chup naa hov-a-ee jay laa-i rahaa liv taar.


bhukhi-aa bhukh naa utree

jay bannaa puree-aa bhaar.


sehas si-aanpaa lakh hoh taa ik naa chalai naal.

kiv sachi-aaraa ho-ee-ai kiv koorhai tutai paal.

hukam rajaa-ee chalnaa naanak likhi-aa naal.

[O Nanak! By obeying, the pre-ordained order of the Lord's will.]

As Geet finished, she felt that rain drops had stopped. She opened her eyes to see sun peaking out of clouds. Sky was clearing and she inhaled the fresh aroma of drenched earth. A beautiful rainbow adorned the sky and she marveled at the symbol of two ends meeting.

Her Babaji had shown her the path.

She smiled and hurriedly went down to join her parents and brother for breakfast. On the way she picked her cell phone and called Maan.

Maan had also spent the entire day and night in tension. Day had still gone by with work which he had immersed himself into, despite Daadima's objections. But night had been hard. He had lain in his bed knowing that he had hurt Geet badly. He had a sinking feeling that she will not come back and felt guilty.

On one side he was relieved that though upsetting it will be an end to a relationship which had disaster written all over it. But on the other side, his heart sank thinking about the loss of last ray of hope of redeeming him from the realm of pathos he has pushed himself into. No one other than him and fate was responsible for his situation.

His mood darkened further seeing the rain outside. He just closed his eyes one last time and then got up to face the world once again. He heard his phone ringing as he put on the last button of his shirt.

His heart skipped a beat seeing Geet's name.

"Hello"

"Hi, Geet here. Woh maine yeh poochne ke liye phone kiya tha ki aap kab aayenge mujhe lene ke liye. Dinner ke liye aa jaate toh mummy papa ko acha lagta but I can understand if you are busy."

[Hi, Geet here. I have called to ask that when will you come to pick me up. Mummy Papa will like if you could stay for dinner, but I can understand if you are busy.]

Maan's heart jumped slightly in relief at her words; even though he did not want to accept it. How different was she from other girls. No mention of their last discussion but she still she relayed her decision

"Aap sun rahe hai na…hello"

[You are listening right…hello]

"Haan Geet….I am here. I will come for the dinner but if you want you can stay for some more time"

"Nahi it is ok. I mean if it is not inconvenient for you. Daadima ne bataya tha ki waapis jaake abhi aur kuch rasmein karni hain. Aur mom-dad kaunsa door rehte hain. I can come back again anytime once all the ceremonies are over."

[No, it is ok. I mean if it is not inconvenient for you. Daadima told me that some more ceremonies are to be done once I am back. Moreover, Mom-Dad don't stay far. I can come back again anytime once all the ceremonies are over]

"Thik hai. I will come by 7:00"

"Ok, Bye"

"Bye and Geet…."

"Ji"

"Thanks"

"Hmmm"

Geet spend whole day packing and chatting with her family. Rano had lovingly patted her head and told her that she was always there for her.

"Kuch bhi ho….tu mujhe bol sakti hai…..Maa hoon mein teri. Meri jaan basti hai tujhmein…waada kar kuch nahi chupayegi mujhse"

[Whatever happens…you can tell me…I am your mother. My life stays in you…promise me that you will not hide anything from me]

Geet hugged her mom "Aap chinta mat karo mom….I know. Waise bhi aur kaun free mein advice dene wala hai mujhe"

[Don't worry mom…I know. Moreover, who else is going to give me advice in free]

"I hope you find your happiness soon beta. Patience ki zaroorat hogi par main jaanti hoon aaj nahi toh kal, Maanji reh nahi payenge meri laado se pyaar kiye bina"

["I hope you find your happiness soon beta. Patience will be needed but I know for sure that if not today, tomorrow, Maanji will not be able to stay away from falling in love with my darling daughter.]

Just then Mohinder entered the room - "Kya baatien ho rahi hai bhai maa beti mein"

[What talks are going on between mother daughter]

"Humaari baatein to kabhi khatam nahi honi ji. Aap aao, baitho iske paas"

[Our talks are never going to end ji. You come and sit with her]

Soon it was evening. Maan came at Handa Haveli along with Vicky. He was little apprehensive not knowing what Geet had shared with her parents. But he was welcomed with same warmth and love which Handas had for each other.

There was dinner amongst light banter and soon it was time for Geet to leave.

Rano's heart tore as Geet started to leave. This felt more heart wrenching than bidaai as now she knew her daughter was definitely going to be in pain and she could do nothing but support her morally in the difficult path she had chosen.

Tears threatened her eyes as she held Geet's hand. She looked at Maan – "Betaji, bahut naazon se pala hai humne apni beti ko. Humara guroor, humari khushi, humara dil ab aapke haathon mein hai. Please beta, koi bhi faisla lene se pehle yaad rakhna ki ab aap akele nahi ho"

[Betaji, we have looked after our daughter with lot of love and concern. Our pride, our happiness, our heart is now in your hands. Please beta, before taking any decision always remember that now you are not alone.]

With this Rano cried not able to control her emotions anymore. In that moment Maan knew that mummy knew everything and the hidden meaning behind her words. Mohinder calmed his wife – "Kaisi galaan karde ho tussi Rano ji…Maanji khayal rakhenge Geet ka…waise bhi mujhe toh Maanji ki tension hai. Inhe Geet se kaun bachayega"

[What are you saying Rano ji…Maanji will take care of Geet…moreover I am tensed about Maanji. Who will save him from Geet?]

Maan came and folded his hands in front of Rano – "Koi galti ho jaaye to maaf kardijiyega mummyji. I promise I will try my best ki Geet khush rahe"

[Please forgive me if I do any mistake mummy ji. I will try my best to keep Geet happy]

Rano wiped her eyes and just nodded her head giving a weak smile.

Precap – Return Journey
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved ur update... geet giving second chance to maan... loved it... awesome... waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update

dey must give time to deir relationship
nd maan wil easily forget poonam bt not her love...its difficult for him tooo...will take time


will wait for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
sometimes...all it is needed is that some1 says that they r there...not leaving...

n this is just what maan needs...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. Abhi feeling sleepy. Detail me comment kal. Good night.
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Posted: 13 years ago
dii..
it's just awesome and lovely..
i really respect geet's feelings
and my maan'll surely fall in love..
just fab update(geet's feelings were great)
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved how Geet didnt jumped on direct decision but thought n analyzed abt it
Vicky also came
Looks lik we'll get sum cute moments in return journey
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was really touching, I could feel the pain that is there in Geet and her mom's heart, hope things will get better soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear for the update

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