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Posted: 14 years ago
It was awesum as always! Luvd it!
Swayam kitna pareshan karoge bechari Sharon ko!!
Rey was really sweet!
Sharon nd kria ke memories!
In all it was just amazing!
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CHAPTER-7




recap: kriya and sharon are selected for the the post of personal assistant to rey and swayam respectively




It was lunch time, sharon & pinky was sitting and having their lunch in the canteen...

"khadoos, maha khadoos, maha maha khadoos...!" sharon kept on cursing

" chill yaar!! itna gussa mat kar warna wrinkles padh jayenge.." pinky said trying to lighten mood

"kya karoon yaar woh khadoos mujhe irritate karta rehta hai.." sharon said annoyed

rey walked in ...

"hey chocolate.."
(rey used to call pinky..as chocolate as she is like a little sis to him)

"hey rey!!" pinky answered

"hey sharon, kya hua u r looking pale?"

" see na rey... i woke whole night n completed all the files...n he refused to grant me half day leave...HALF DAY!! he gave me deathly look on asking that... acchha hua property nahi maanga warna toh us khadoos ka heart fail ho jata...kabhi kabhi toh aisa lagta hai jaise mai walls se baat kar rahi hu n aaj jab maine ye flowers uske cabin me rakhe the toh did u know what he said.." sharon complained


rey n pinky nodded their head in "big no"...

"he told me to throw it in dustbin...can u believe it ...in a dustbin...uska naam khadoos nahi, maha khadoos hona chahiye.." sharon answered

rey n pinky looked at eachother n chuckled at sharon's non stop talk...

"ok ok sharon calm down... u can have ur half day off n i'll talk to swayam.." rey offered to help

"really tum us khadoos se baat karoge??"

" yup...don't worry u can go, u have my permission.." rey permitted her to go

"thanku... thank u so much...bye guys.."

she ran out of the canteen before anyone could stop her

" bye.." pinky and rey said in unison

"tum saari gals itna ek hi time pe itna hyper ,excited n angry kaise ho jati ho?" rey asked pinky

at rey's comment pinky raised her eyebrows...

" see i told u all girls r same...even u raise your eyebrows.." rey said while pointing fingers at pinky

pinky crossed her arms above her chest..n said
"what do you mean by that.??"

"i mean sharon also raises her eyebrows n even miss. beautiful.." rey trailed

"what did u just said?? miss...??? miss what...?" pinky asked

"arr... nothing... nothing... i just said ki sharon , u n my assistant... u trio raises ur eyebrows time to time..god knows why??

" oh shutup rey... its nothing like that...forget it... swayam ke paas nahi jaana?? warna wo pura office sar pe utha lega.." pinky asked while sipping her coffee

"yeah...mujhe hi use calm down karna padega... chal bye chocolate..!" rey said getting up

rey got up from his chair n was about to leave his chair...but pinky stopped him by holding his hand n said...

" bro she is indeed beautiful.." n smiled..

rey smiled back...

@ swayam's cabin

"hey dude what's up?" rey said getting inside swayam's cabin without knocking

"nothing !! i don't have any pending files to do... just getting bored.." swayam said lazily

"are u sure u don't have anything to do...?"

" yup do u have any work.."

"arr.. swayam sharon just asked me 4 half day off and." rey smiled sheepishly

"and.??" swayam said

" and i agreed..i hope u dont mind..."

"well thats ok she completed almost everything.."

rey was surprised..

"but i thought u will be angry .."

"why will i be angry ... she almost completed all her work."

" but then why didnt u grant her day off when she asked.." rey asked

" oh that !!! i was just enjoying irritating her.."

"what?? nice dude!!! chal i am leaving i had a call from broker he is coming with a client at home to show the house for rent.."

" ok dude ...!!! i'll join u after some time.."

rey came out of the parking lodge in his car...he was about to move his car forward but stopped in mid way as his so called assistant was standing n waiting for a cab whom he saw from his rear view mirror..he back geared his car...

kria was waiting for a cab when rey appeared in front of her with his dashing car n dashing smile but to his bad luck as he backgeared his car, he didn't saw the pothole filled with mud on the road..at the moment he back geared his car...lo!!! all the mud flung into kria's face n dress...

rey's smile faded on seeing her, he came out of his car..

kria looked at him with anger..
rey looked at her n tremble in fear..

"arr...sorry.."rey said biting his lips

kria was in full on angry avtaar..
"sorry?? bas sorry bolne se meri dress saaf ho jayegi kya??"angrez"" uff!! mujhe pata hai aap mujhse aaj subah ka badla le rahe ho.."

"bad...badl...what??"

kria slapped her head on her forehead n muttered "angrez"

"ummm... i am really sorry let me help u in cleaning it... "
he forwarded his hand to touch her cheek but kria stopped him by signalling him to stop through her hand..

"look mister, if u think you'll get a chance to touch me, then u r wrong!! i am already engaged..do u get it??"

" ok ok i have a bottle of water you can at least clean up your face .."

he forwarded her a bottle which he took out from his car.. he poured water from the bottle n kria bent a little to wash her face...
as the water flowed from her forehead to her lips then to her her chin...(what next ??Uff!!) our dashing dude was mesmerized by her innocent beauty n was lost in her...

kria was finished by her cleaning up session n became straight... but rey was still pouring water n looking at the water dropplets on her face ..

" sir i am done." kria said
(no response)

"sir??"

(no response)(still pouring water ha ha🤣🤣)

"sir!! i said i am done...uff!! ye angrez.." kria said getting annoyed

kria then took bottle from his hand...n threw few droplets on his face...

rey woke up from his krialand..n realising what kria did just now...

"i said na i took bath in the morning itself..."

" this was for waking you up from your dreamland... i know u did this deliberately...you all boys are of same types ...you dont let off go one chance to flirt n come close to any girl..."

now rey had much of her nonsense..

" what the hell!! i told u sorry for that...what do you think of yourself?? you r always right or what?? have u ever seen your face in mirror once?? now u look like a beggar in this dress of yours !!"

"look... mister..."

as kria was going to say something...just then an indian traffic police inspector entered in the scene..

" hey both of you... why are you creating havoc in the middle of the road...?? i will put you both in jail do you get it??" officer asked them

"umm sorry sir!! it's all because of him..."

both rey n kria were telling him they were not at fault but inspector was not ready to listen... he was about to handcuff but saw their puppy face...n said r u both married??

rey n kria looked at eachother n suddenly kria remembered that rey doesnt know hindi language...rey was about to open his mouth to answer but kria interrupted n said...

" "yes" ... ye mere pati hai...n mai inki patni.." kriya answered

rey was shocked to hear that..
he held her hand n took her in a corner n said "what r saying ??"

"umm woh... i was telling him that you n me are just good friends and not married got it ..now shutup n just say yes to my every line." kria explained thinking rey doesnt know hindi

kria went to inspector n said "look inspector aaj subah hamara jhagda ho gaya tha n yaha bhi hamari ladai ho gayi thi but everything is fine now...plz let us go"

inspector looked at rey n said "kya yeh sach keh rahi hai??"

"yes inspector, meri patni bilkul sahi keh rahi hai...mai inka pati hu n yeh meri patni hai.."
as soon as rey said last line kria looked at him in surprise with open mouth ..

rey took the inspector in a corner n said..

"uncle u know na all wife are the same... meri patni bhi waisi hi hai.. zara zara si baat par gussa ho jati hai.."

inspector melted at his baby face n said " yes yes my child i know even my wife does the same ...u love her a lot ..dont u?? "

rey just stared at the inspector

inspector looked at kria n rey n said" you both are made for each other ... never loose her ok!!" n smiled

rey just smiled back...inspector left ...

kria was still in shock.. she was standing their with her mouth open...

rey loved her reaction..he came near her n closed her mouth..
r: mouth band karo warna flies ghuss jayengi...

kria came to her senses..she asked " tumhe hindi aati hai??"

"yup.." rey grinned getting seeing reaction of kriya

"tumne kabhi bataya nahi??"

" tumne kabhi bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya...waise bhi tumhari wajah se mai bahot late ho gaya hu...bye meri pyaari patni ji.." rey teased

"uff whatever..."

they both walked in opposite directions..

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sharon reached in front of a house...she turned back in anger n said..." mr. ellex i asked u for an apartment not for such a big house for two people..."

now broker who was standing behind her trembled in fear but said

"mam please have a look atleast , i know u asked 4 an apartment that too for rent purpose, but according to your demand n conditions, i could manage to find 5 apartments, out of which, 4 you have already rejected... this is the last one..."

"but do you know the meaning of the "apartment"??"

" i know this is not an apartment but owner of this house is ready to give it in rent.." broker answered

" ...and what about the rent price??" sharon enquired

" thats in the range you asked for ... n all the more there is also a cook who will cook 4 u...but there is only condition.."

"now what??"

"u'll have to share this house with people...n that too males."

"what?? i'll have to share this house with males...mr. elex how could you think about that??"

with that sharon was to move back from the door itself but stopped in midway...
she thought "whats wrong with u sharon..u live in USA... u can share your house with people...what if they are males, you can at least meet them and decide it afterwards...she made a mental note to herself"
and turned to broker..

" ok first i would like to meet the people who live in the house."

"ok!! lets go inside the house"
broker n sharon rang the door bell...

someone opened the door...
the boy inside n sharon were surprised to see eachother...
they both uttered at same time "tum!!"

they both said happily greeted each other with smile "hi"

(since they both happily greeted eachother u can guess its not swayam...otherwise world war 3 would have occur, rather it was rey)

"u both know eachother?? then plz have it your own way...rey sir , this mam wants to live here on rent with her sis.." broker informed rey

"is that so??in that case let me show you the house.."

rey showed house to sharon...


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kria went to her house n changed into a nice outfit suddenly she received the msg which contained the address of a house...
she decided to see the house herself...
she took her car along with her but car broke down on the way...now she was standing in the middle of the quiet lonely road...waiting 4 any car or cab so that she could take lift... she tried calling the garage but it will take 2 hrs for mechanic to be there...there was no help...

she cried" oh universe ji plz help me"

suddenly she heard a cars noise coming in her way...
she signed for lift but that car just sped away , didn't even stopped...she muttered "idiot kam se kam rok to deta"

but to her relief that car came back..a boy greeted her "hi tum yaha??"

" ummm...hello.. can i get a lift."

the car's glass moved down n a boy greeted her with a "hi!!"

the boy was none other than swayam...

" hey i think u wanna lift?? "

" hello sir.. actually i have to go at this address.." kriya said politely
she showed him the address..

swayam stared at the address n smiled...
"well i am going that way only.. u can come inside"

" thanks sir...its really kind of u.."

in the car

" so why do you want to visit this house ?? any relatives??"

"no sir actually just searching 4 an appartment .."

"ok do u know whose house is it?" swayam asked looking at the house

"no sir just one of my friend sent me the address ...she said i have to share this house with two males already residing there..so just going to meet them.."

"r u going to live there alone...?" swayam inquired

"no sir i've a little sis ...we will live together.."

"here we are...n thats the house.."

kria got out of the car said thanks to swayam..

but swayam too got out of the car n said...
"come let me drop u inside.."

kria felt a little hesitate but said "thanks sir , i'll go by myself..thanks for ur concern"

"but kria i have to come inside.."

"no sir its okay .."

"well kria i wanted to tell u something...the house which u r gonna see is shared by me n my friend..."

kria looked at him in surprise...

" so do u still want to see the house from inside or u dont want to live here..."

" sir in that case i would like to see house from inside too...as half of my work is done ...i know u and i bet your friend is same as u.."

so there is no problem with me to share a house with u...

"in that case let me show u the house.."

"sure.." kria said with a smile


they both were about to ring the doorbell but the someone already opened the door...

" tum??? tum yahan??" all the four shouted

this time they were standing face to face...sharey at one side n kriyam at one side..n kriyansh n swaron face to face

kria to rey...

"tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...??"

sharon to swayam

"woh chodo pehle batao tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...??"

" tum yaha kya kya kar rahi ho..?" swayam asked same question

"woh chod... pehle btao kria tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...?"

they didn't realise they were asking same questions ...


"main kyun batau?" sharon asked

"kyun nahi bataogi?" swayam asked

kriyansh were indulge in look look hawa hawa session

"maine pehle pucha tha.." sharon answered

" so what??? ab mai puch raha hu.." swayam asked

" main nahi bataungi.." sharon answered arogantly

"mujhe batao ..main tumhara boss hu..."

"boss hoge tum office mein ...yeh tumhara office nahi hai.." sharon retorted

kria n rey were staring at each other swaron fight broke their look look hawa hawa session...
just then rey interupted..

"tum yaha kya..?" rey asked

before he could say kria cut in between...

" tumhe isse matlab?? main kahin bhi jau..."

"look miss.." rey answered gritted

kria again cut in between

" look mr. i am already enga..."

now rey was fed up of her line "i am already engaged" line...
he almost shouted..."ENOUGH!!!"

all were quiet...

rey turned to kria...

""tum yeh kya baar baar slogan bolti rehti ho " i am already engaged" (rey almost mimicked kria🤣🤣) ...
itna hi pyaar karti ho apne fiance se to yahan kya kar rahi ho... apne pati ko dhundne aayi ho patni ji??"

as soon as rey said this line in one go... he realised every body is quiet n staring at him including kria...

rey turned towards swayam n said...

"swayam meet sharon our new house partner.."rey introduced sharon

"but rey, kria n her little sis will live with us.."

"no swayam am really fed up with this girl...sharon n her sis will live with us.."

"i said na kria n her sis.." swayam said

"no sharon n her sis.."

while reyam convo... kria came to sharon...

" tum yaha??" kriya asked

"ha woh ghar dekhne aayi thi... but tum yaha?"

"me too ghar dekhne aayi thi... ghar kaisa laga??"

" its perfect 4 us...in everyway...the rent is also in our budget... for cooking there is a cook also.."

"what about the people living here..?" kria asked

as kria asked this question..they both looked at reyam who were fighting for them like kids...
they both sighed...

"swayam is gud, but rey is.." kriya said

" if that khadoos is good then rey is also a good.." sharon said taking rey's side

they both went to reyam who were still fighting ...


" kria.." swayam said

" sharon.." rey argued

"kria."

"sharon."

" sharon.." swayam tricked

"kria.."

"ok... kria u will reside here..."

"swayam u cheated n sharon has already paid the deposite to broker so practically kria is late.."

krisha both smiled n said

"we both will live here"

reyam stopped heir convo..n said
"but there is space for only two person..."

before reyam can argue ...

krisha crossed their arm against their chest n blurted "we both are sisters"

" but how??" reyam asked in unison

" but you seem to be of same age" rey said

"we are faternal twins." sharon answered

"kria is this your "little sis"??" swayam asked

"yup."

"kis angle se "little"?? puri ki puri monster ki naani hai...!" swayam taunted

and stomped in his room...

sharon was burning with anger...
kria stopped her from saying anything...she looked at rey who was still standing their...

" we will shift here tommorrow..is that ok with u?" kriya asked in very sweet tone

" ok..patni ji...as u wish.." rey answered innocently

" whatever..!" kriya said making face and turned to go

"bye." rey chuckled

but kria didnt answer just looked back in anger n continued walking...




pheww!!

precap: shifting to new house , romance, fun, entry of new character...(no suspense this time its entry of a cook)

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Edited by chetna_yogini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
A nice update as usual and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...loved it very much
aweee cant stop myself from laughing🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
rey knows hindi and he is calling kria as PATNI JI aweee soo cute
and swaron fight was hilarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
and reyam fighting for kria and sharon awesome
superb part
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsummm...rey n pinky sharing sister n brother relation awww...n kriyaansh scene was awsummm...pati patni n den kriya reaction on hindi hehehehe 🤣...n da face wash scene remind me of kriya's scene wen rey is looking her n said MISS DEHRADUN MERI HOGI SOON...awww i luv dat scene

n den reyam fight 4 kriya n sharon...hehehehe 🤣 🤣...awsummm yr love it...thnx 4 pm n update nxt soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
heheheheheheeehe let me breath first pheww!!!
dat was awsam jaan as usuall!!!!!!
reyam scene omg rolf was so phanny
n dat traffic policeman hheheeh
patni ji
pati ji
n rey's mimic dialouge "i m engaged" heheheheh
lovd it totally update nxt part soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update yaar… It will be fun to see all of them staying under one roof… Hope to see more romance, fight and fun all around.. 👏
I loved the Reyam scene.. and the way Swayum cheated by saying Sharon and made rey say kria… lovely..
police waale ko bhi pata hai ki they are made for each other… Im sure Laddu's will be phooting in Rey's mind..

Now, waiting for our cook… update soon.. and really thank you for such a looong update and pm..

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Posted: 14 years ago
omigosh!!!
this was hilarious...🤣
loved it
patni jiii..hehe 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update! every character is equally entertaining n a pleasure to visualize. update soon👍🏼
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Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome part...loved it very much

aweee cant stop myself from laughing🤣
rey knows hindi and he is calling kria as PATNI JI aweee soo cute
and swaron fight was hilarious 🤣
and reyam fighting for kria and sharon awesome
superb part
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part


u took words out of my mouth... agreed thay were actually hilaous and enjoyed the update thoroughly... can't stop laughing...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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