Ajab Sa Ishq..os on maneet:)

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AJAB SA ISHQ

MSK: a total playboy. He didn't believe in LOVE. He is handsome, sexy and a perfect guy and he know it.

Geet: a simple, shy girl, exceptionally beautiful.

Love is like water. We can fall in it, we can drown in it but we can't live without it

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It was middle of the night when Maan entered Khurana Mansion. He was totally drunk. He was stumbling and accidently he bumped to a vase and it fell and made a loud noise. The loud noise woke dadima up. Dadi came running and saw Maan in the hall. She switched on the lights and came downstairs. No matter how drunk maan is, he never forget the respect he have for dadima. Dadi is the only one maan care about as soon as he saw dadi maan turn to leave.

Dadi: stop right there.

Maan kept walking..

Dadi: didn't u hear me I said stop.

Maan stopped and made a baby face. Dadima made maan sit on the couch and went to get something for him, after 5 minutes she came back with lemon water.

Maan: dadi u know u don't have to do this.

Dadi: just shut up maan. Look at your condition you can't even talk properly. Why you drink when you can't handle it?

Maan: u know dadima why I drink. I drink so that I can forget myself, I can forget all the painful memories in my life.

Dadi: beta drinking is not the solution.

Maan: you are right dadi. She is not just only in my mind, in my heart. She is part of my soul. Even after drinking so much I cant forget her. Why dadi? Why? Why her face is always before my sight? Why I can forget who I am but I can't forget who she is to me? why I cant hate her dadi? Why? Dadi this destiny is strange, pehli milati hai phir alag kar deti hai. Agar gham hi dena hota hai to pehle khushi kyun deti hai, kyon?

Dadi: why you hurt yourself so much haan? If you love her that much than why don't you bring her back? Why don't you go and get her?

Maan: NO, I don't love her. I hate her. I hate her. She left me, she left me.

Maan kept saying this and left for his room ..

Dadi: aaj bhi maan aaj bhi I know you love her more than your life. Just admit it maan otherwise yeh zid bohat kuch destroy kardegi.

Dadi had tears in her eyes.

*****

Next day

Maan got up and had a massive headache.

Maan: Sh*t!! nakul, ramlal, vijay.

Where the hell are u guys? All 3 servants came in running.

Maan: didn't I tell you always bring a painkiller and water before I wake up?

Nakul: sssorry sir, galti hogayi.

Maan: shut up! will u go or just stand here and stare at my face?

All the servants left and got him what he needed.

After 30 minutes sharp at 9:30, everybody was present at breakfast table. Dadima, maan, annie( maan's sis), Vicky ( maan's bro), raj khurana (maan's dad) and rani khurana ( maan's mom).

Raj K: I heard that our company had a 65% profit this month.

Maan: no, we had 83% profit. Maan had no happiness on his face. He just had his usual stern, cold look. It was normal for him.

Vicky: wow, that's great. Congrats bhai.

Maan: hmmm

Hi everybody! Everyone turned and saw Tania standing on the side.

Tania: wow, the breakfast smells delicious. Yummy

Dadi: Tania why don't you join us.

Annie: yes "BHABHI" annie stressed the word bhabhi.

Maan: excuse me. maan left the breakfast table angrily.

Rani: what happened to him?

Dadi: nothing, hogi koi uski meeting.

Tania seemed hurt. Vicky tried to lighten up the mood.

Vicky: lagta hai bhai sharma gaye. Everybody burst into laugh imagining Maan blushing which was next to impossible according to them.

Tania: rani mom, so when should I come for trial?

Mom:oh yea I have to tell you guys that I have kept a party for Tania. Its her birthday and it should be gorgeous. After all she is going to be the elder khurana bahu, Maan Singh Khurana's wife. Tania blushed while annie and Vicky whistled.

Yes, Tania and maan were engaged. It was totally parent's decision. Maan never even saw Tania from close. Tania always had a crush on maan. He is like a perfect guy, any girl would die to have. But Tania always got rejection from him. Maan never look at her, smile at her, acknowledged her, even on the day of the engagement all he did was slip the ring on her finger and left from there for meeting. Although Tania never complained but she always crave for maan's one look.

Rani: so I want all of you to be present for selection of dresses and all. Almost half of delhi is going to be at party, it should be perfect.

Dadi excused herself from there. She always hated these high society parties, where all people care about is how they look, the designer clothes, jewelries and all, everything materialistic. Although she belonged to the richest family in India she was simple and down to earth woman.

Dadi was sitting in her room when Tania came in.

Tania: dadi! Why you came upstairs? Everything is okay na.

Dadi: yes doll, everything is okay.

Tania: dadi am I bad?

Dadi: no doll you are not? Why what happened?

Tania: dadi why maan hate me?

Dadi: he don't hate you doll. Tania: NO he does, he hated when I am around. He never looks at me, he don't talk to me, I don't exist for him dadi? Why?

Dadi I.V. ( I.V= inner voice) kash mein tumhe bata sakti why, Tania maan had only one place in his heart that was taken years ago.

Dadi somehow distracted Tania.

Trial day

Everybody was busy choosing dresses. Maan was on the side checking his mails on his cell.

Tania: maan

Maan

Maan "suno"

Maan looked up instantly the word suno reminded him of someone whom he wanted to forget. All the anger and frustration just drove him insane, and he just shouted at Tania.

WHAT THE HELL YOU WANT? Cant you see I am busy, but still u are standing here. Just get lost.

Dadi: maan! Mind your language. Maan closed his eyes is frustration and left from there. Tania ran from there crying.

Everything suddenly changed. Dadi came out and saw Tania crying. Dadi cupped her face and kissed her forhead.

Dadi: beta don't mind him, he is not bad. But there are some incidents that just triggers his bad side. You have to win him which is not easy, and if u cant..

Before dadi can complete a servant came.

Servant: Tania madam, apko maan sab ne bhulaya hai.

Tania: what? This was not less than a shock for her. This was the first time maan ever called her. She went inside his room. This was the first time she was stepping in his room. Everything in his room screamed royalty

maan : sit!

Tania immediately sat down on the sofa.

Maan: look! Whatever I said to you was wrong. I don't say sorry and all so just forget that incident ok.

Tania: o-okay.

Maan got a call and left from there immediately. Tania couldn't help but take a look at his room. She saw that the cupboard was open. She went ahead to close the cupboard but her locket got stuck in the shirt and fell down. As she bends to take the locket, she saw that there was something behind the shirts. She knew its wrong to see someone belongings without permission but she couldn't help, there was a box and an album. As she opened the album she saw a picture of a beautiful girl. She flipped the pages all she could see was the pictures of that girl while sitting, smiling, pouting, sleeping, and every other possible way. As she opened the box she saw a red duppata, one earing, and a nuptial chain ( mangalsutra) and bunch of letters. Dadi entered the room she became worried seeing Tania with maan's stuff. As soon as Tania saw dadi she turned to leave.

Dadi: stop doll, knowing half truth is always dangerous than knowing the full truth. Don't you want to know who she is? Don't you want to know what is all this and why they are in Maan's cupboard? Tania nodded with teary eyes. She sat next to dadi, dadi lovingly caressed the picture and said while smiling she is Geet, maan's jaan. Tania was hurt and confuse. Tania I think its time for you to know the truth. Tania maan was never like this before he was a complete different person 4 years ago.

Now the story is in flashback. 4 years ago

It was the rose day in excel college, the top college in delhi. All the boys were busy flirting with the girls. MSK entered the room and all the girls just sighed. Maan went to the sexiest girl in the room.

Maan: I have seen u somewhere before rita.

Girl: rita nahin Sheila.

Maan: ohh Sheila, do you know what happens to me when I see you?

Girl: what?

Maan: my heart beat just accelerates.

Girl: oh is that so?

Maan: yes. Maan began praising the girl and gave her the rose. You know Sheila you are the only girl who got a rose from me today.

Well then who gave me this rose and me, as maan turned he saw all the girls whom he gave the roses in the morning. Maan cursed under his breath.

Maan: its not true shikha, I mean rekha, rita

Girl: SHEILA !!! the girl threw the rose and left.

Maan stood on one of the table in caf and start saying something.

Araz kiya hai;

Tujhe paney ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon

Tere pyar mein jee aur mar sakta hoon

Phir bhi tu nah mili to gham nahin

Yeh formula mein dusri par bhi try kar sakta hoon

Everyone started laughing and clapping. Wah wah wah

Maan: thank you thank you.

Later in the class''

Everybody was sitting in their respective seats.

Teacher: class there are 2 new admissions in our college and they are in our class today. I want all of you to stay in your limits. Two girls entered in the class. It was their first face off. Geet was dressed in typical shalwar kameez, covered from head to toe, her hair were tied in a braid and her clothes were really loose nobody could tell her body shape or figure due to the clothes while the other girl was barely dressed.

Some guy from the class: oyeee pataha and behnji

Everyone was laughing. There were two seats available in the class, one was next to a girl and other was next to maan.

Maan was praying: please be it hot girl, hot girl hot girl

The lecturer: geet I want you to sit with maan.

Maan: damit!

Boys: maan enjoy

Maan: shut up

Geet sat next to maan. As maan moved closer to geet she distanced herself

Maan: relax, I am taking the book not looking forward to touch you or anything because first of all you are so not my type.

Geet completely ignored maan and started writing her notes.

( a little conversation between maan's inner voice and his mind)

Maan I.V: what! Did she just ignored me?

Mind: heck yes

Maan: how dare she?

Mind: ask her

( end of mini convo btw I.V and mind)

Maan: are you trying to gain my attention?

Geet looked at maan

Maan: don't look answer my question.

Geet: you are the one being desperate to talk to me, rest you can understand who is trying to gain attention.

Maan: wah dekhne mein behngi, attitude mein hitler. Show off

Geet: you said something?

Maan: nope

After some days

Maan was going somewhere on his bike, he saw some guys were teasing a girl, first he decided to ignore then couldn't help and went ahead to help that girl. it was none other then geet. As geet saw maan she gained some confidence and started screaming his name.

Maan, maan, ahhh ( screams)

Maan: geet why are you screaming, I am right here said maan pretending to get annoyed.

Maan to guy: listen dude, neither she is hot, nor she is munni or Sheila types, why are u wasting your time? ( geet definitely didn't liked that)

Guy: why you care? Is she your GF?

Maan: oh please.

Guy pushed maan and held geet's hand. Maan wanted to kill that guy not because he touched geet, he wanted to kill him because he refused to listen to msk.

Maan started a fight. Other goons came one was about to hit maan with the stick, but geet hit him with a rod. The guy fainted on the spot.

Maan: wah yaar, tum to sherni type nikali.

Geet smiled.

Another guy came and pushed geet. Geet fell and her sleeve of the kameez got ripped. After some times all the goons flee from there. Geet was trying to cover herself. It started raining maan took her to a nearby store. It was a small store where all u can get were western dresses.

Geet: I will not wear this.

Msk: stop it; cause you don't have a choice.

Geet: please can we go somewhere else?

Msk: listen its raining really bad outside, my bike is not working. We cant get any cab from here and there is no other store here, so you have two options change your clothes or get sick. Choice is yours

Geet had no choice she picked a long dress and went to change. After 10 minutes she came out, maan looked up and couldn't believe what he saw. The dress emphasized geet's figure perfectly. To be honest she looked hot. She had her hair open. Maan was totally mesmerized he just couldn't believe his eyes. It is said that, in every man's heart there is a secret nerve that answers to the vibration of beauty. This was the condition of maan's heart. His heart was beating furiously. For the first time he realized, how beautiful she is. Maan slightly touched her face and kept looking at her. After a while when he realized what he is doing, he left her.

MSK: I am sorry.

Geet didn't said anything. She just left.

Everything changed since that night. All maan could think of was GEET, GEET AND only GEET.

He just told everything to his dadi.

Dadi: maan I think you are in love.

MSK: no dadi, its not possible, it was just attraction nothing else.

Dadi: so why are you so confuse beta.

MSK: I was dadi, now I am not confuse. It was just a weak moment.

Dadi decided to leave maan alone. She wanted him to realize what he really wants.

Maan went to college. He was back to his normal life. Everyday a new GF, flirting with girls and all.

A new guy came in college YASH. He seemed pretty interested in Geet. He became a really good friend of geet in very short period of time. He helped geet in gaining confidence. She became independent, her dressing style was more updated although she still wears eastern clothes, the clothes were simple yet sophisticated and stylish. Nobody could believe she is the same geet. Geet and yash's closeness hurt maan in every possible way. First he ignored it, but then he figured that he just cant ignore anything related to geet. Somewhere he realized that his emotions he was calling attraction were not just attraction, it was more than that. He was falling in love with geet and he couldn't deny that. It was a typical day in college. When geet came out some goons passed nasty comments on geet. Maan who was passing by couldn't control himself and he started a fight with them. One of the goons stabbed him and they all ran away. Maan was soaked in blood. Geet screamed and held maan, maan head was in geet's lap.

Geet: maan nothing will happen to you, maan look at me, say something, fight with me. maan if anything happens to you I will die, please open your eyes.

Geet was crying bitterly. Maan was in tremendous pain yet his soul soothed by hearing geet caring voice and looking at boundless love for him in geet's eyes.

Maan: shhh!!!! Geet do you have any i-idea how much your tears are hurting me. geet I might not get to say this again but I LOVE YOU GEET. I didn't know it was possible for me to love until you came in my life. I thought it was attraction but it was not, it was love, I love u geet madly.

Before geet could say anything maan fainted

Geet: nothing will happen to you maan

Geet managed to call ambulance and with the help of college students she was able to take maan to the hospital.

After sometime

Doc: he is alright now, but we need to keep him under observation for a week.

Geet: ohk doctor

Geet entered the room. There was sitting MSK on his bed.

Geet's thoughts: Who the hell can still look sexy while being covered in bandages?

Geet I.V: chi chi babaji geet yeh kya soch rahi hai..ughh babaji iss maan ke saath saath mein bhi besharam hogayi.

Msk: GEET! Why you are troubling your babaji and for god sake yaar tere liye hospital tak pohanch aya phir bhi you are angry at me.

Geet: nahin maan, you seriously didn't have to do this for me.

MSK: this is nothing geet, I can die for you.

Geet: MAAN don't say that. Maan lightly smiled and kissed geet's hand. Geet blushed and looked away.

Geet's thoughts:

A gentle brush of his fingers,

Sending shivers down my spine,

The love I see in his eyes,

Is the love that equals mine

He greets me with a smile,

And leaves me with a kiss

If he were to ever leave me,

I couldn't imagine what I'd miss.

Maybe it's his touch,

Or the way he makes me feel.

But whatever it is,

I'm head over heels

MSK: geet you still didn't tell me, do you love me or not?

Before geet could say anything dadi came in with the rest of the family. It was the first time geet and dadi met. In little time they became really close. Their relationship was like a mother and daughter's relationship. In whole week maan and geet became really close. Geet learned that maan is not exactly the way he portrays he is. He loves life, respect others and most importantly he loves her beyond limits. Maan also noticed that geet is very naughty and very frank with the people she love and people she is close with. Her nature is quite fun and bubbly. MSK: Geet I want answer today. Please

Geet: I Love You, I Love You from the bottom of my heart. When I close my eyes, I see only you. When I open my eyes, I want to see you. I love you more than the words could describe. Loving is just not in my control, my love for you have no limits maan. When it comes to telling you how much I love you I am short of words maan.

Maan had broad smile on his face. maan leaned forward and looked in geet's eyes for permission, geet smiled and maan kissed her.

Maan: I love you sooo much geet. I love you. Maan hugged geet and swung her around.

Dadi who was in the back seeing everything smiled and just couldn't control.

Dadi: and I love you both. Maan and geet saw dadi and both were embarrassed, dadi came ahead smiled and hugged them both. God bless you, may god give you both all the happiness.

Now maan and geet were officially dating. Everybody in college knew about their relationship. It was last day of college. Everybody was happy and sad at the same time. They were happy because they were about to start their careers basically a new life, and sad because they have to leave their friends and masti life. Geet was going back to Shimla after 2 days, maan didn't want her to go but both knew they don't have a choice.

Maan: geet don't go na jaan

Geet: maan I don't want to go but I have to. But we promised we will meet each other after 3 months when you will be back from your London trip.

Maan: I know right but still, (maan thought of something).

Maan: geet do you love me?

Geet: what kind of question is this? Ofcourse I love you, I love you more than anything in this world.

Maan: do you trust me?

Geet: yes, more than my life.

Maan: will you marry me, right now?

Geet: maan?

MSK: yes geet, right now.

Their love was very strong more than some mere words can express.

Maan took geet to a mandir where the pandit recited the pooja. Maan filled geet's mang and made her wear nuptial chain ( mangalsutra) of his name. they were married.

Msk: you are mine geet, just mine.

Geet: maan I was, I am, and I will always be yours just yours.

That day maan and geet separated, geet left for Shimla while maan left for London.

After 3 months.

Maan was very happy to be back, he just couldn't wait to meet and see his wife, his geet, he was going crazy.

He waited and waited but geet didn't come.

At last maan heard a noise, he thought geet came he ran towards the direction but no it was not geet there was girl who was very nervous.

Girl: are you MSK?

Maan: yeah that's me.

Girl handed him a box and a letter, geet gave this for you.

Maan was confused, as he opened the letter his world was upside down.

Maan you must be thinking what is all this? Maan after leaving that day towards our respective direction I realized that what we were thinking as perfect was not actually perfect. I tried a lot to convince myself but I cant change the fact what I thought was love was not actually love, it was just an attraction. Maan you have no aim in your life, you don't think about future, all you care about is the present. I want my future to be secured, I cant live my life with a guy who doesn't have a career. Maan my parents are getting me married, they guy is well settled and I am happy with my parents decision. I am sorry maan, please don't wait for me. I want you to live your life happily. I will pray that you get somebody even better than me. you deserve the best maan, I am not right for you. Be happy maan.

From geet'.

Maan couldn't believe all this. He just wanted to erase this moment from his life. He punched the wall behind him, the blood was dripping like water, yet he couldn't feel the pain. All he could feel was anger, anger towards the person he loves the most. That night changed MSK, he was not the same fun filled, happy guy, he was the cold and ruthless MSK.

End of flashback

Tania and dadi had tears in their eyes.

Dadi: from that day I never saw maan smiling. He became the top businessman just to prove to geet that he can be what she thought he can never be. There was nothing that he lacked in his life, our family was the richest in india, if he wanted not just him but all our future generations could live a lavish life with all the money we had. Yet he started his own business without anybody's help. In just few years his company was bigger than our family company. If we just look at him he is filthy rich there is nothing in this world that he cant buy for himself yet there is nothing that he wants. There is no happiness, no satisfaction. Although maan say he hates geet but the truth is he can never hate her. He loves her beyond limits.

Tania: if he loves her that much then why he never tried to meet her again?

Dadi:he didn't wanted to ruin her so called happy married life and second his ego stopped him

Tania: is she really married?

Dadi: I don't believe that she is married but this is what was written in the letter. I don't believe that geet never loved maan. But when maan stopped me from talking about geet and all there was nothing I could do. I wont say its easy to take place in someone's heart over their first love specially when it comes to geet and maan, its nearly impossible. Yet even after all this you want to try then best of luck doll.

Dadi left from there, ofcourse Tania was hurt but she decided something.

Tania went to Shimla to meet geet. As she went to her house a servant came out.

Tania: I want to meet geet K, ahh I mean geet handa,.

Servant: come in mam.

As Tania went in a lady came out.

Tania: hi, I want to meet geet.

Lady: who are you beta?

Tania: ahh i- I am her friend.

Lady: then you must've known geet lives in London now with her family. I am their housekeeper. I am with geet since she started walking and I know mostly everything about her. As far as I know I never heard about you from her.

Tania: ahh actually she met me in delhi in the college, as my family was really strict I kinda ask her to not tell anybody about me.( what the hell thought Tania)

Lady: OKAY.

Tania: can you please give me her address.

Lady: sorry that I cant, but I can give you her number.

Tania: thank you sooo much.

Before leaving Tania wanted to do one thing.

Tania: ahh aunty since, you are really close to geet I also want to congratulate you for the wedding.

Lady: wedding? Of who

Tania: geet's, who else.

Lady: what are you saying? Geet's marriage?

Tania had a wide smile on her face. Nothing aunty I was kidding.

Tania left. At night Tania finally gather some courage and called geet.

Geet: hello

Tania???

Geet: hello

Tania: hi! This is tania here.

Geet: yes do I know you.

Tani: no, actually I am Maan's fianc

Before tania could say anything else she heard geet dropped the phone and eventually the line got disconnected.

Tania: OMG damn it. I am stupid who the hell told me to say I am his fianc. Omg what will she be thinking? Tania tried calling again but it didn't work.

Next day..everybody was present at the breakfast table

MSK: I am going to London for a deal.

Tania eyes twinkled in happiness.

Tania: omg really I am so happy.

Maan gave Tania a look like "I don't care".

Tania: maan I also want to go with you please.

Maan: I think you didn't hear me, it a business trip

Rano: beta! First time she is asking you for something

Maan: but mom?

Rano: enough, its decided tania is going with you .

They left for London in the night.

As maan stepped in London, he didn't know why but he felt that something big is about to take place. Like everything is going to be okay.

Maan booked two different suites for Tania and himself.

Tania somehow managed to get geet's company address. What she saw left her mesmerized it was geet's company and the name on the company was geet khurana.

Tania: that's means she still believe in her and maan's marriage, there is something hidden and I will find it.

Tania was waiting for geet in the office. As geet came in,

Tania: must say, MSK's choice is the best. You look more beautiful in real.

Geet: excuse me

Tania: oh I forgot to introduce myself. Hi, I am Tania the girl you talked you that day. Geet's face color changed, tania very well noticed that. She wanted to play this game little more.

Tania: can I sit?

Geet: s- sure.

Tania: thanks. Well I am here to give you an invitation for my and maan's wedding. Its totally unfair to not call his good friend.

Geet heart sank: he is getting married. Fresh layers of tears blurred geet's view. Tania hated to see geet in tears but she wanted to know the truth.

Tania: you know it's a love marriage. Geet couldn't sit anymore, she took a glass of water and stood near the window looking outside.

Tania: you know geet this wedding is just for world like a formality otherwise we already live like a married couple from like 2 years you know.

Geet blood boiled she couldn't hear anymore. In anger she just broke the glass in her hand. Her hand was bleeding.

Tania: OMG, tania rushed to geet and held her hand.

Geet: LEAVE ME. JUST GO AWAY

Tania saw the hate for herself in geet's eyes.

Tania: you love him? Don't you still today?

Geet looked up in shock

Tania: don't look at me like that geet. It's the truth you still love him. Whatever was written in that letter was a lie. Why you did that?

Geet: what are you talking about? I don't know anything?

Tania: please geet stop it. what you think I don't understand what geet khurana means? If not let me tell you it means you still consider maan your husband. Geet what I said to you like 10 minutes ago is lie, plain lie. Maan, he never even looked at me then loving me is impossible. Geet was looking at tania.

Tania: I always liked him u know like crush types. But he never gave me any importance. Our engagement meant nothing to him you know why. I tell you because he loves you geet madly. Geet was crying now. Do you have any slight idea what your separation did to him? He is living his life like a robot, who don't care for anything. From past 4 years he never smiled. His heart is full of nothing but pain geet. I saw him losing his sense every night but still one line coming out of his mouth " she left me". do you have any idea what you mean to him? You are his life, happiness, his soul, his everything. He is nothing without you. Please come back to him. I beg you.

Geet was crying loudly now. she hugged tania.

Geet: I love him tania. I love him very much. These 4 years killed me every moment, every second. My life is nothing without him. Only reason I am alive today is because of him only for him.

Tania: then why geet? Why you left him?

Geet: I didn't leave him. I cant. I was forced to leave him, to go away from him.

Tania: what, who forced you geet?

Geet: rano aunty. Maan's mom.

I remember when I left the hostel, I was the happiest girl on the planet. I was geet khurana I needed nothing more.i called dadi one day to tell her about my and maan's wedding. Rano aunty heard it too. After some days rano aunty came to my house. She asked me to go away from maan's life forever. The reason was that I belong to a middle class family. She warned me that if I don't go away from maan's life she will destroy my family. She left after saying this. I tried calling maan but it didn't work, I also tried calling dadi but rano aunty never let me talk to anybody. I knew maan loves his mom a lot, I didn't want their relationship to break because of me. I left india, all the letter thing was just to make him believe that I was nothing but a mistake in his life. I wanted him to move on and not just live in pain.

Tania: I cant believe Rano mom did this. And did you seriously thought that he will " move on "

Geet" I didn't have an option. I didn't want maan to go through the pain of being separated from his family. When I left india I was shattered but one thing that kept me alive was maan's love. I came here and started this empire, god knows there is not even one second in these 4 years that I didn't want to go back to my maan.

Tania: geet you still have time. Go back to your maan

Geet: no tania, I cant

Tania: you both are CRAZY. On one side maan and his ego and here on other side you and your extra concern for others. Damit this is your life, you both are living in hell being away from each other. Why don't you both live together and solve the problems.

Before tania could say anything else her cell beeped. It was maan. Well that was strange maan never called her. She deliberately put the call on speaker mode.

Maan: where the hell are you? (It was Almost 4 years geet was hearing maan. Her heart missed several beats.) listen I don't have time for you I would've left you here but mom I didn't wanted to enrage her so where ever you are come to the hotel ASAP.

Geet felt odd her maan was never this serious. Then her heart sank thinking how her separation affected him.

Tania: we are going back geet. You still have time come back to him geet otherwise he will die geet.

Geet couldn't hear anymore. Tania left from there.

In the hotel..

Maan: where were you?

Tania: I went to meet "GEET".

Maan stood their totally shocked.

Tania: maan did you ever try to find out why she left you? Why all the things happen which don't make sense? You just let your ego and your anger win.

Maan: no, she left me, and I hate her.

Tania: enough, you love her and why she left you ask your MOTHER.

Maan shouted at tania.

Tania: I knew you wouldn't believe me atleast believe your geet. Tania took her phone and played the recordings. She actually recorded the whole conversation between her and geet.

Maan stood there shocked. He just couldn't believe his mom could do anything like this. He broke down completely. He needed his geet at the moment but again his ego, he wanted her to come back just the way she left him. He wants her to be first to come back.

After sometime they were at the airport. Tania couldn't believe that even after knowing the truth they are again going away from each other.

Tania: god, please give them some sense.

Maan: stop your nonsense.

Tania: hmm stop your nonsense ( tania mimicked maan). Maan ignored her. As maan and tania were about to go inside suddenly they heard a scream.

MAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maan froze hearing the voice. Maan didn't want to turn, he was scared what if he turns and she disappears, what if this all that happened 5 sec ago is a dream?

Tania: omg she is here. Thank the lord. Everybody geet is here. Tania was literally jumping.

Maan turned as soon as he turned Geet came running into his arms and hugged him as tight as she could.

Geet: I hate you, I hate you, I hate you, how could u let me go? Why u never came for me haan? Geet lightly punched him.

Geet : You were always on my mind, every day and night
Whenever I thought of you, everything felt so right
I always had the need to have you, need to hold you
And to tell you that I love you.
Maan, I don't want to see us apart anymore
This separation just tears away my heart
I missed you, oh, I really missed you
I need you more and more each day
I know I cannot live without you
I missed you, more than words can say.

I Love You, I Love You from the bottom of my heart. When I close my eyes, I see only you. When I open my eyes, I want to see you. I love you Maan.

Maan smiled. Tania saw him smiling for the first time.

Maan: I missed you so much that it hurts, my love
I missed you with every fiber of my being
I missed you like there is no tomorrow
I missed you fervently, it's all my loving.
I missed you with my entire heart
I wished every day that we are no longer apart.

My heart beats only for you, faster and faster
Everyday my arms craved to hold you once more
When I was away from you I felt that

My soul is withering away deep from its core.

I missed you desperately, with everything I got
I missed you mishti, I missed you every single day
I missed you my dear love, I missed you all the way.
I missed you and I can take it no longer

Never leave me again, I will not be able to take it

I can't live without you.

I loved you then as I love you now. I love you now as I always will. I wanted you then as I want you now. I want you now as I always will. I wanted you happy then as I do now. I want you happy now as I always will. I love you sooo much. I love you GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

Geet cried more hearing him call her KHURANA. She was clinging to him and kept kissing him.

Maan: geet yaar, will u eat me now? waise I don't mind, but we can do this in more private place. Maan winked.

Geet turned red hearing his comment. While Tania stood there with her mouth wide open.

Tania: OMG what did I just saw, MSK being naughty. Tania wondered what kind of love is this? They guy who completely changed himself. In 4 years he lost himself, all he needed was the girl he loved the most in front of him to get back to normal. When they are together nobody could tell that they stayed away from each other for 4 years.

Maan: Tania thank you so much. This is all because of you. Today I got my geet back its because of u. I promise Tania I will find the best guy for u. better than me.

Tania: o please don't, I don't want a silly guy like u.

Maan: TANIA!!!!!!

Tania got scared seeing Maan in anger but maan burst into laugh.

MSK: I am kidding yaar. Once again thanks.

Geet hugged tania' thanks tania because of u I got my life back.

------XXX-----

After a week

Maan and geet were standing outside KM.

Geet: maan do u think its right?

Maan: don't worry jaan. Nothing will happen I am with u. maan held geet's hand and took her inside. As soon as dadi saw geet she hugged her and cried with her.

Dadi: don't ever leave us again. Dad gave blessings to geet. Vicky was really happy and aniie was thrilled having a beautiful and friendly bhabhi. Only one person was unhappy and that was Maan's mom. Geet went ahead to get her blessing but she left from there. Geet had tears in her eyes, maan hugged geet and asked annie to take her inside. Maan went to see his mom.

Maan: mom I know whatever happened shouldn't have took place. Mom I love u a lot but geet she is my life. U both are two important people in my life, I cant live without any of you. Geet knew this that's why she left mom, but how could u never felt this? Mom I died every moment yet u couldn't see my pain. I love u a lot mom. I want to forget everything and start a new life with geet, and mom its not possible without your blessings. Mom please give geet a chance u will not find another girl like her. Please for my sake.

Maan's mom realized her mistake. She finally accepted her mistake and apologized to everybody specially geet and maan. Everybody was happy

Finally the day came of maaneet's wedding. Whole delhi was present on their wedding. It was one of the most happening and gorgeous, stunning event. Everybody was spell bound by the beautiful couple. Finally geet and maan got married and their love won despite all the troubles.

----xxx----

After 2 years.

Maan and geet had twins, one baby girl and a baby boy. They named them mishti and armaan. They were replicas of their parents. Their lives were perfect.

It was Tania's wedding. At last she found her prince charming. As Tania's wedding was going on maan hugged and kissed geet.

Geet: what happened MR khurana?

Maan: thanks for coming in my life and making it beautiful. Love u beyond words jaan

Geet: love yah too maan so much.

Maan was about to kiss geet but tania shouted.

Tania: ahem! Its my wedding today guys and I should be in spotlight, but u guys are RUINING it.

Maan: o really and how?

Tania: mr kiss your wife later. For god sake everybody is looking at u guys. Geet turned red and signaled maan to move. Maan stepped away from geet. Tania shouted while Vicky and aniie made faces.

Aniie: bhai,we lost.

Maan: lost how?

Vicky: we had a bet with tania. When we guys saw u almost ahem ahem, tania said she can make u step away, but we said u will kiss her but no we lost.

Maan: MSK never lose.

Tania: well it happened.

Maan: impossible and by the way I can kiss my wife anytime and anywhere, I don't need anybody's permission just like now. maan held geet and kissed her. Geet stood there with her eyes open. That was their luck that no elders were there. There were only youngsters there. Everybody cheered. Geet seethed in anger.

Geet: maan U besharam. Ughhh geet left from there, everybody laughed while maan went after geet to manofy her.

Maan: geet jaan listen na

Geet: maan what was that?

Maan: like u don't know. It was a kiss jaan. K.I.S.S. maan spelled it.

Geet: ugh maan have some shame now u are a dad.

Maan: excuse me I am a young and a sexy dad.

Geet: acha ji

Maan: hanji

Maan hugged geet and whispered I LOVE U and geet happily replied not more than me.

Their moment got disturbed when one of the baby started crying. Geet picked up armaan while maan picked up mishti. Their lives were complete. God gave them every khushi in the world,

Their ajab ishq made their live beautiful and they lived happily every after.

"Love is a symbol of eternity. It wipes out all sense of time, destroying all memory of a beginning and all fear of an end."

thank you soo much for reading...

hope u all like it..

sorry for mistakes..

thank you once again..

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Mishti13 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG it's really beautiful I really loved lt
cute finally maan got his love back
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome OS Jaanu
OMG i it very much

peene ko tu hum pee lete hai
par yaad unki yun hamare dil se jati nahi
bhol jate hai hum khud ko bhi peen ke baad
par jinhe bhol na chathe hai wo aur yaad a jate hai hamein (this is for my drunk Maan jaanu)


awww my MSK came
https://www.tenerifeforum.org/tenerife-forum/images/smilies/tenerife-forum-drunk-smiley.gifeveryday but loved that he still respected Dadi Ma
but i hate Maan Mom😡 for separating Maaneet and putting her own son in pain and my geet alsonot very happy with her at all but i loved Tania very much she played a cupid role in getting Maaneet back so thanks her for reuniting Maaneet, Uff Mariam have you lost it, I should be Thanking My Jaanu for giving Tania such a positive role😆 hai na Jaanu😉 sowwie janiti ho u said not to use thank u but kya karo aab meri Jaani itni achi OS de gi tu Thanks tu banta hi hai, hai na😉
coming back to the update
haye mar jawan he kissed Geet in front of everyone, but blame should go on Tania for betting him, MSK never loses any bet then how could hi loses this and that too this sweet where he get to kiss his Geet aur waise bhi use tu bas bahana chiye Geet ko karne ka
Thank u so much Jaanu for lovely OS
Love u loadsss
muahhh


PS: sowwiee Jaanu couldn't come online today, was really busy at home, my uncle and aunt were here...then got busy with HW😡 but promise kal pakka aungi...



Edited by Mariam94 - 13 years ago
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awesome dear...
really loved it...
its amazing...
thank u fr d lovely os...
love can conquer any situation...
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this is an awesome
os want to read over &
over. love it.great work.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWWW! That was SO sweet Mariam! :) Write somee moreee!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os
loved it
great yaar maaeet separation for 4 yers was sad
geat story
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WOW THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL...THANKS FOR WRITING SUCH A BEAUTIFUL OS...HUGS XOXOXO🤗
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Loved the os a lot..
Loved tania's character more...
beautiful one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome OS...

beautifully written...

thnx for PM...

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