Friends???or something else!(part 14-end)

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Hi guyz!ok I ve taken permission from riddhi to write a fanfic before the separate section opens 4 the purpose!!!this will be my first one!!!!!!!!!so firstly I would like to give a short summary and characters' introduction!!!!!!

ADITYA KHANNA : Better known as Adi!He works in a call centre as an employee.Basically he is a happy go lucky guy but when it cums to work he is all serious,dedicated and hardworking!!!!!!he lives with his grandfather in mumbai!!!!!!!!His best friend is Chandni with whom he can share all his feelings!!!!!!!

wardrobe:jeans and collared full sleeves(though he keeps his sleeves half folded) shirts!

CHANDNI KAPOOR :She also works in the same call centre. Very bubbly,sweet happy go lucky gal!!!!!she always takes her work and life cool-ly.His best friend is Adi with whom she can share all her feelings!She lives with her mom in mumbai who is always keen to get her married !

wardrobe:Flower printed frocks(length till knees) like SHELLY wears in HOTEL KINGSTON!

AMI,TARA,KABIR,SHANTY,VARUN,MANISHA(she is bit superstitious and always thinks negatively which irritates everyone but she is very sweet)and SMITA r their friends and working in the same call centre!!!!!!!

Kamini Bajaj:She is the owner of this call centre(INDIA CALLING)and she is very friendly to all her employees!!!!!!

the story deals with adi-chandni who r best friends&they feel possesively 4 each other!!!!!!!their friends always convince them this is love but they always refuse to face the truth and say that they r only best friends but one day they agree that this is luv,only TRUE LUV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So guyz how do u find the story!!!!!!!I can continue only if u find this fanfic interesting!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good srishti 👏 ....but is this fanfic widout a villan...arrey incase villan nahi hoga to fir story sweet n spicy kaise lagegi 😉 ...neways go ahead wid the story...waitin for ur next step.... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool Shristi. Incase you need some help I am with you.

Also check out the chained paragraphs, I have submitted a link to the chain. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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okies....good 1.....but kamini vry nice to everybody.... 😆 ...neways continue....v r w8n
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx guyz so first thing i can't continue everyday but i will try !okies!!!!!!!!here's the first part!!!!!

PART-1
chand is in canteen and she asks the canteen girl 4 a cup of coffee and some chocolate cookies she takes her order and sits on a chair and reads a novel just then adi cums.....
A=hi chandni can i join u?????????
C=ya sure bathon na!!!!!!!
A=hey ye to vahi novel na jiske sare stock full hai???mujhe ye vala novel bahut pasand hai!
C=Tumhe chahiye to tum rakh sakte ho main baad mein pad lungi!
A=No its ok pehle tum pad lo main baad mein le lunga!
C=okies!!!!!!!!

Tara and Shanty r watching both of them!!!!!!!!
T=100% chandni-adi ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai lekin kabhie manenge nahi!!!!!!!!
S=Yaar mujhe pehle lagta tha lekin ab mujhe nahin lagta unke beech mein kuch hai!!!!
T=Pakka unke beech dosti se zyada bhi kuch hai!!!!Dekhna chahoge???????
S=han dikhao!!!!
T=to dekho!

they both go and sit with adi-chandni!
T=hey adi aaj tumhari shirt ka colour bahut dull lag rahan hai!
C=nahin to adi to aaj bahut aacha lag rahan hai!tumhari nazar kuch kamzor ho gayi hai!
T=nahin meri aankhe bilkul thik hai kuch to kami hai!
C=koi kami nahin hai balki mujhe to tumhari top kuch ajeeb si lag rahin hai!dhoi nahin kya?????
T=hey chandni tum itna bhadak kyun gayi i was jus joking tum to har cheez ko bada lightly leti ho to fir aaj adi ke bare mein kuch burai karne se tumhe kya hogaya??????????
C=notihg and she leaves!!!!
A=kya Tara naraz kar diya use main use mana kar aata hun!
T=kyun shanty ab to mante ho na !!!!!!!!
S=han maate tara ab main aapko manta hun!!!!!!!!!lekin ab to hame in dono ko convince kar na hoga ki ye pyar hai dosti nahin!
T=vo tum mujh par chodh do aage aage dekho hota hai kya!

ps :how's that!well story mein villan circumstances hai!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey good.....continue....... 👏 👏
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PART-2
C=mujhe pehle kabhie aisa nahin laga to aaj tara ke joke se mujhe gussa kyun aa gaya????????aaj subha se mera kisi ke saath bhi jhagda nahin hua phir bhi mujhe apna mood kyun kharab lag rahan hai??????main to har baat yahan tak ki shanty ka silliest se silliest joke ho ya criticism lightly leti hoon to fir aaj?????????
A=Hi!tum vahan se chali kyun aai she was just joking aur maine uske joke ko zara bhi seriously nahin liya!!!!!!
C=Nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai bas aaj zara sa mood kharab ho gaya tha isliye frustrate ho gayi aur vahan se chali aai never mind half time over ho gaya hai lets get back to work!!!!!!!!
A=ok!!!!!!!!!

then after sum time their shift ends and everyone (including adi-chandni)is going back 2 home!
just then a peon cums to chandni!

P=mam apko kamini madam bula rahi hai!
C=main abhi aati hun aap chaliye!
P=thike!
C=main abhi aati hun!
A=thike main wait kar raha hun hu!

jus then shanty,manisha,ami,smita,varun and tara cum!

V=are adi ghar nahin jana????????
A=vo actually.......
T=kaise jayega uski gf kahi nahi dikh rahi!!!!!!
A=hey tara chandni is just a friend yaar!
T=maine chandni kab kaha!
V=accha thik hai yaar hum to ja rahain hai see u tomorrow!bye!
A=bye!

C=may i cum in !
K=Cum in chandni!
C=mam apko mujh se kuch kaam tha?
K=nahi nahi vo bas tum se itne dino se baat nahin ki thi isliye bula liya baithon na!
chand sits!
K=aur batao chandni kaisi ho aur mrs kapoor kaisi hai?
C=main thik hu aur mom bhi bilkul thik hai aap bataiye aap kaisi hai!
K=main bhi bilkul thik hu!accha haan mrs kapoor ko bolna ki jo unhone medicines mangvai thi vo main kal subah kisi ke haath bhij va dungi!
C=ji main unhe bol dungi ab mujhe chal na chahiye!bye!
K=ok bye!
chandni exits from there and goes back to adi!
C=chale
A=aap hi ki aane ki der thi!
C=sorry sorry ab chale
A=chalo!

Edited by srishti bhutani - 19 years ago
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PART-3
they both exit out of the call centre and adi drops chandni to her home on his bike as chandni reaches her home she waves her hand to say gud bye to adi and adi goes chandni's mom is watching all this from window and she is getting very happy!!!!!!!
C'S M saying to herself=chalo finally chandni ko koi ladka to pasand aaya.
chandni presses the door bell and her mom opens the door and chandni enters !
C'S M=ye kaun tha??? agar tune mujhe pehle kaha hota to main pehle hi ladke ke gharwalon se baat kar leti par chal chod hota hai is umar mein koi baat nahin tujhe koi ladka to pasand aaya!
C=kaun adi!!!!!!!!mom vo sirf mera dost hai!!!!!!
C'S M=uska pura naam kya hai?????
C=aditya khanna aur vosirf ek friend usse zyada aur kuch bhi nahi aur vaise bhi main aapse pehle bhi keh chuki ki main kam se kam 2 saal tak shaadi nahi karungi!
C'S M=accha thik hai lekin ye 2 saal tak shaadi nahi karne wali baat!!!!!!!!thik hai main maanti hun ki vo sirf tera dost hai par uske saath baat chalane mein kya harz hai aur vaise bhi ladka hai bhi punjabi aur dikhne mein bhi thik thak lag raha tha!!!!!!!
C=mom ab main is bare mein aur kuch nahi keh na chahti mera faisla nahi badalne wala kamini mam ne msg diya ki vo aapki medicines subah bhijva dengi. Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai aap khana lagao main fresh ho kar aati hun and she leaves!!!!!!!!
and her mom is very upset!there adi also reaches his home and his gp opens the door!!!!!!!!!!!
A=hi gp!!!!!aaj khane mein kya bana hai?????aaj khana banane ki bari aap ki thi yaad hai na ??????
gp=haan haan mujhe yaad hai aaj sab kuch teri pasand ka bana hai!!!!!!
A(sitting on the dining table and uncovering a dish)=wow aalu puri my favourite!!!!!!! (he takes his food and starts eating)
gp=achha adi tu bore nahi ho jaata tera to pata nahi lekin main to bahut bore ho jaata hun ek din tu khana banata hai to ek din aur jab tu jata hai to main to akele bethain bethain bore ho jata hu koi baat karne ke liye bhi nahin hota !!!!!!!!!!
A=i agree gp isiliye main soch raha hun ek bai(maid)rakh lun aap ke liye baat karne ke liye company bhi ho jayegi aur khana bhi bana diya karegi!!!!!!
gp(slapping adi on his head(not so hard))=are buddhu main kaamvali ki nahin bahu ki baat kar raha hun!!!!!!
A=oh bahu!!!!!! kya ?????????
gp=ismein itna chok ne ki baat nahin hai waqt aa gaya ki ab tu shaadi kar le!!!!!!
A=gp aapko pata hai ki mujhe itni jaldi shaadi nahin karni maine us ukki job ke liye pehle se apply kiya hua hain aur main abhi interview ke liye tayari kar raha hun aur aap chahte hai ki main shaadi kar lu no ways aur vaise bhi shaadi karne ke liye ladki bhi chhaiye hoti hai!!!!!!!!
gp=haan to ladki hain na!!
A=kaun??????
gp=tu use jaanta bhi hain!!!!!!
A=kise jaanta hun???????kiski baat kar rahen hai aap?????
gp=chandni ki aur kiski!!!!!!
A=omg gp u r just too much chandni is just a friend and nothing else!!!my decision is final bas ab main is bare mein aur koi baat nahin sunna chahta!!!!!!bye!!!and he leaves!
gp=puttar main bhi tera dada hun main sab jaanta hun ki tu chandni se bahut pyar karta hai lekin manta nahin lekin dekhna ek din main tujhse ye manva ke hi chodunga ki to chandni se bahut pyar karta hai mujhe ye to pata hai ki teri UK ki job lag jayegi lekin hum UK do nahin teen jayenge!!!!!!!tu, main aur meri bahu
yaani ki teri patni ''chandni''!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by srishti bhutani - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kya fanfic itna bura hai ki aage kisi ne use pada hi nahi!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx guys you know what i was thinking that the fanfic is so boring that no body read it!!!!!!!!!uff such a relief thnx again........writing the next part just in few minutes!!!!!!!

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