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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-4
chandni is in her room and she is getting ready for office,combing her hair,taking her files and purse she cums to the living room where her mom is sitting on the dining table and cutting vegetables!!!!!
C=bye mom main ja rahi hun!!!!
C'S M=bye beta!!!!!
C=sorry mom agar aapko us baat ka bura laga ho maine aapse kitni rudely baat ki lekin main aur karti bhi kya mujhe abhi shaadi karne ki bilkul bhi jaldi nahi hai right now i jus wanna work!!!!!!!!
C'S M=thik hai beta main samajhti hun par ye 2 saal wali baat!!!!!!2 saal kuch zyada nahi hai!!!!!!
C=mom main aapse ek promise karti hun ki agar mujhe in 2 saal se pehle koi ladka pasand aa gaya to sabse pehle main aapko aakar bataungi!!!!!!!!
C'S M=promise!!!!!!!!
C=pucca promise!!!!
chandni hugs her mom and says gud bye to her and leaves!!
in the call centre everybody(adi,shanty,varun,smita,tara
,manisha and ami)are talking and laughing jus the chandni enters and adi is stunned to see her as she is luking very pretty in a cute pink dress!!!
S=hey hi chandni!!!!!!!
C=hi shaty,hi adi!!!!!
A=hi chandni aaj tum is dress mein bahut sunder lag rahi ho!!!!!!
C=thnx vaise aaj tum bhi bahut acche lag rahe ho!!!!
T=xcuse me yahan hum bhi bathain huye hai agar tum dono ka compliment dene ka silsila katham ho gaya ho to main kuch kehne ka kasht karun!!!!!
M=tara if u dun mind main kuch pehle bolna chahti hun!!!!actually guyz mere guruji ne mujhe bataya hai ki aaj ke din mangal ka vaas hai!!!!!!aaj dharti par lagbhag sabhi logon ke grahon ki bahut buri durdasha!!!!!isliye main tum sab ke liye ye nimbu-mirchi ki malain lai hu aur na......
everyone=shut up!!!!!!!!!!!
jus then kamini enters and claps in the air!!!!
K=shift shuru ho chuki hai get back to work c'mmon guyz!!
everyone=yes mam
K=c'mmon c'mmmon adi, chandni aur shanty tum bhi!!!!!
S=yes mam yes mam!!!!!!
everyone gets back to work and start attending the calls!
adi is attending a call in between he luks at chandni (who is also attending a call)and gets lost in her thoughts he is not listening to the customer any more!!

adi is not in his senses and is just answering without thinking and is jus staring at chandni!
customer=hello hello r u listening!!!!!!!r u mad or wat i am getting irritated!!
A=i am not mad ullu!!!
customer=wat what did u say i am cutting the phone!!!!!1
A=get lost!!!!
adi is still staring at chandni not knowing that wat did he say to the customer!!!!
jus then a bell rings and its break time!!!!!1
tara cums to adi whi is still not in his senses!
T=hello hello adi!
and she sees in the direction where adi was luking and understands evrything and pinches adi on his arm!
A=aauch!!!
T=jago adi pyare kahan dekh rahe ho half time ho chuka hai!!!!!!
A(with nervousness on his face)=kuch nahi kuch bhi to nahi kahi nahi dekh raha tha!and he leaves!
T(says to herself)=main sab kuch janti hun adi, ki tum kiske khayalon mein khoye huye the aur kiski taraf dekh rahen the!

Edited by srishti bhutani - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
how's it!!!!!i have tried to make the fic romantic as well as funny like i ve done in part 3 and 4!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
PART-5
Eveybody is in canteen and having fun!Adi is inviting everyone for his birthday which is next day!!!!!!!!!!

The day has cum its Adi's birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chandni is in her home and choosing her clothes but she is damn confused!!!!!!!!!Just then Tara presses the door bell and Chandni's mom opens the door!!!!!!
T=hi aunty chandni kahan hai!!!
C'S M=hello beta chandni to apne kamre mein tum kaho to use neeche bula doon?????
T=nahi aunty main he uske paas chali ja ti hoon!!!!!
Tara cums to chandni's room and chandni is damn confused what to wear!!!!!!!!!!!!!
C=kya pehnu!!!!!!
T=hey hi chandni!!!!!!!!!
C=hi tara tum hi batao na ki main kya pehnu kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha!
T=yeh dress pehan lo!!!!!!!!!
C=nahin ye to maine kal hi pehni ti!!!!!!!
T=to fir ye!
C=nahin ye to maine parson pehni thi!
T=ye!
C=nahin ye to maine pichle se pichle se pichle se pichle din pehni thi!
T=is yellow dress ke baare mein kya khayal hai!
C=nahin yellow to adi ko bilkul pasand nahi hai!
T=kya kaha tumne??????????
C(with nervousness on her face)=kuch nahi kuch bhi to nahi!
T(knowing everything)=to fir mujhe nahi pata party ka time ho gaya hai main to ja rahi hun tum baad mein aa jana bye!
C=bye!!!!!!!!!!!!
there adi is also very nervous and thinking that this is not his examination day then why he is gettting so nervous????????????????????
just then door bell rings and adi gets happy all like a kid and starts checking his clothes and hairsyle!!!!!!!
his gp is goes to open the door but adi stops him!
A=gp main darwaaza kholta hun na aap baki sab arrangements dekh lijiye!!!!!!!
gp=thike tu darvaaza khol main abhi aata hun!and he leaves!!!!!!
Adi opens the door and its Tara!!!!!!
T=hi adi!!!!!!!happy birthday!
A=oh tara hmm thank u aao na!!!!!!!!!!tum aur chandni to saath mein aane wale the na???
T=haan par use thodi der ho jaayegi!
A=hmmmmmmm kitni der!
T=let's see aadha ya ek ghanta!!!!!!!!!!
A=kya????????????????
T=jus kidding!!!!!!!!!!abhi aa jayegi!
A=bad joke!!!!!!!!
T(eligantly smiling)=I know!!!!!!!

then everybody has cum but not chandni!!!!!!poor adi is still waiting!!!!!!!!jus then shanty cums from behind!
S=yaar adi chal na yaar cake kaat te hain!bahut bukh lag rahi hain!
A=shanty ruk ja sabko aa to jane de!
S=sab to aa gaye hain ab kaun bacha hai!main aa gaya,kabir,varun,manisha,tara,ami,smita lo chandni bhi aa gayi!!!!!!!!!!!!!
chandni enters and she is luking really beautiful!she is wearing a red saree and she has let her hair open!
C=hi adi!many many happy returns of the day!
A=thnx chandni aao na!!!!!!!
adi cuts the cake and then there is a dance!
T=ab dekho shanty main kya karti hoon!
S=kya kya??????
T=bas dekhte jao!!!!!!
tara goes to adi and dances with her and chandni gets really jealous!!!!!she gets frustrated and goes to tara!
C=tara tumhara phone aaya hai!
T=mera phone aur yahan adi ke ghar par!
C(stretching her hand)=haan haan ab tum jao!
T=accha accha ja rahi hun chillax!and she goes to shanty!
S=va bhai tara tumhe ta maan gaya!
T=yeh to sirf trailer tha!
chandni dances with adi and they are lost in each others eyes!
T(interupts)=chandni sab ja chuke hain hum bhi chale!
chandni is still lost in adi's eyes!!!!!!!
T=chandni chandni!!!!!
C=haan haan!
T=chale!!!!!!!!!!!!
C=haan chalo!bye adi!
A=bye chandni bye tara!!!!!!!!!!!
T=Bye and they both leave!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
Grrrrrrr8 work.I read it tode only n its really gud.Eagerly waiting for next part. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-6
adi is sitting in his room and opening the gifts that he received on his birthday!!!!!!he is opening a box and wat he finds !!!!!!!!!!!!check out!!!!!!!!
A=nimbu-mirchi,vaastu-shastra ki book aur ye kya hai dusron ke shareer mein base bhooton ko nikalne ke 101 tareeken!!!!!!!ye cheeze to zaroor Manisha hi de sakti hai!!!!!!isse zyada pagal ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi hai matlab dekhi hai lekin ye to sabki ma hai nahi daadi hai nahi nahi par daadi hai!!!!she is jus impossible man!!!!!!!!!
A=next dekhte hai hmmmmmmmm ladkiyan patane ke 101 tareeken ye book to sirf Shanty hi de sakta hai!isko to ladkiyon ke alava kuch sujta hi nahi hai ye nahi ki kuch kaam kar le!!!!apne doston ne hi aise gift diye hai to dusron ka to rehne hi do!!!!!!!!!!kisi ne bhi ek dankha gift nahi diya hai!ye nahi ki mera interview hone vaala hai to uske liye koi preparatory book hi de de!!!!!!!!!!!!ya aur kuch nahi to ek best of luck sovereign hi de de!!!!!!
A=are ye kya hai watch ye to bahut costly lag rahi hai kisne di hogi!!!!!!!chandni!!!!!!!mujhe to usko phone karna chahiye!!!!!!is mein to uski puri ek month ki salary lag gayi hogi so sweet of her!!!!!!!!

chandni is sitting on her bed and reading a novel jus then her cell rings!!!and she picks up the phone!
C=hello!
A=hello chandni adi here!!!!!maine tumhe disturb to nahi kiya na!!!!!!!
C=nahi nahi bolo kya baat hai!
A=kuch nahi vo tumhe thx kehna tha!!!!
C=thx kis baat ke liye?????
A=vo b'day gift ke liye!!!1
C=lekin adi tum to thx b'day party mein hi bol chuke the!
A=haan par mujhe tumhe personally thx kehna tha aur watch to bahut expensive hain na!
C=to kya ho gaya dosti mein to sab kuch chalta hai!
A=haan but main abhi yahi soch raha tha ki howcan i except it!
C=are paagal ho gaye ho kya tumhe to except karna hi hoga jab mera b'day to tum mujhe bhi costly gift de dena bas!ok!
A=ok thx again bye!!!!!!!
C=bye!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Grrrrrrrrrr8.Srishti u r tooooooooo gud.now its getting really intresting.I ll b eagerly waiting for the next part. 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-7
Adi is sitting in the office and doing sum work and preparing a report and shanty is sitting beside him on a chair as usual doing his gupshup and he is in full2jolly mood!
S=pata hai kal maine party ke baad kaunsi film dekhi!
A=mujhe nahi pata aur main janna bhi nahi chahta lekin mujhe pata hai bataye bina tu chain se to bathaiga nahi balki mera aur dimaag khayega isliye batane ka kasht kar hi de!!!!!
S=kya yaar tu bhi boring hai bas din raat is interview ke picche apna dimaag khapata rehta hai aur kal apne birthday ke din bhi kal mere saath chala hota na to kya mazaa aata puch mat!neways tera to kuch ho nahi sakta!chal teri knowledge ke liye kal maine KRRISH dekhi aur kya mast picture thi yaar puch mat!
A=shanty ab tu mujhe bore kar rahan hai!
S=accha accha cool down ye bata tujhe apne birthday par sabse faltu gift kiska laga aur sabse accha gift kiska laga?????
A=sabse faltu gift hmmmmmmmm tera laga!
S=kya mera tujhe pata hai vo kitab pure rs100.25 paise ki aayi thi vo tips tere bahut kaam aayengi!chal mujhe pata hai ki tujhe mere gift ki ek din importance mehsoos hogi to hum mere gift ko no.1 par maan lete hai ab ye bata no.2 par tujhe kiska gift accha laga!
A=tujhe pata hai chandni ne kya diya tha vo jo market mein nayi watch aayi hai na!
S=kaunsi vo 20,000 vali made in USA!!!!!!
A=haan haan vahi vo usne mujhe di thi main to use vaapas dene ki soch raha tha par usne lene se mana kar diya!
S=accha huya mana kar diya yaar ladkiyan kabhie kabhie aisa dil nikalti hai tujhe agar lene mein sharam aa rahi hai to mujhe de de i m open!
A=haan tu to hai hi besharam!
S=kya kaha???
A=kuch nahi kuch nahi!main keh raha tha ki tujhe kuch kaam nahi karna!
S=nahi yaar ye angrez to mujhe bore kar dete hai unhe khud ko yahi pata nahi hota ki unhe kya chahiye isliye main jab irritate ho jaata hun na to main seedha bol deta hun hata saawan ki ghata khareedna hai to khareed varna nau do gyarah ho ja!!!!
jus then kamini cums and ......
K=tabhie main sochu shanty ki daily tumhari report mein deals cracked ke column mein sirf no.5 kyun likha hota hai cum to my cabin!
S=yes ma'm!
A=best of luck shanty!
S=i need this!
now its half time and everybody(the whole group except shanty) is in canteen!!!
tara is talking on her cell with his brother who is in new york!!!!!
T=ok bhai mein baad mein baat karungi bye luv u!
jus then shanty cums and adi asks him that wat happened in kamini ma'm's cabin!
A=fir shanty kaisi rahi daat!
S=are yaar daat mil jaati to fir bhi thik tha par ma'm to lecture sunane lagi thi jismein se mujhe ek bhi shabd samajh nahi aaya kehna padega ma'm ki nature aur hindi kuch zyaada hi acchi hai!!!main to so hi gaya tha!
A=ye le coffee aur jaag ja!!!!!!!
S=thx!
soon the break gets over and very soon the shift also gets over!
chandni enters her home and sees a photo lying on the dining table!!!!!!whose pic is this any guesses???????to find out that u ve read the next part and 4 that keep urselves updated with my fanfic!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ur fanfic really rox Shrishti....as usual u make me eagerly wait 4 d next part 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 .Its rocking i m eagerly waiting for the next part. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-8
chandni is about to see the photo but jus then her cell rings so she puts back the pic on the table without seeing that whose pic was it and leaves 4rm there!!its adi's call!!!!!
C=hello!
A=hello chandni main adi bol raha hun!!!
C=adi haan bolo!!!
A=aaj mera interview hai!!!!
C=oh main to bhool hi gayi thi khair all the best i m sure u'll do well and u'll surely get the job!!!!
A=thx chandni!!!ok main phone rakhta hun baad mein baat karunga!!!!!!
C=bye!!!!!!
A=bye!!!!!!!!!
chandni goes to living room!and sits on dining table!
C=are ye photo to maine dekhi hi nahi thi dekhu to sahi kiski pic hai !!!yeh kaun hai???????
jus then her mom cums!!
C=mom yeh kiski photo hai???
C'S M(excitingly)=yeh to vishesh ki photo hai!!!!
C=kaun vishesh?
C'S M=yeh tere papa ke bahut acche dost ka beta hai!aaj hi america se aaya hai!!main isse mili huyi hun bahut accha ladka hai!!!
C=wait a minute aapne iski photo jaan bujh ke table pe rakhi thi na!!!!!1
C'S M=nahi haan actually haan!!
C=mom!!!
C'S M=beta ek bar isse mil to le!!!
C=nahi!
jus then tara cums and says....
T=kyun nahi??????
C=nahi to bas nahi!!
T=kyun iska matlab adi aur tum.... aur is liye tum vishesh se nahi milna chahti
C=wait a minute in sab mein adi kahan beech mein aa gaya
T=to theeke tum vishesh se millo milne mein kya burai hai!!
C=haan burai to nahi hai!
T=to bas theeke hai aunty aap aaj vishesh ko phone kariye aur kahiye ki chandni usse milne aa rahi hai!
then back to IC everybody is in canteen(except adi & chandni)jus then adi cums and he is very happy!
A=hey everyone guess wat mera selection ho gaya and i m going to UK next year!!!
S=hey that's gr8 news congrats!ab kam se kam tu thoda sa intresting ho jayega!!
T=congo adi that's really gr8 news!!!
Varun,Smita,Ami,Kabir,Manisha=congrats yaar!!!!!!
A=thanx thanx hey btw chandni kahan hai!!!
S=usne to aaj half-day liya hai aati hi hogi lo aa gayi!
C=hey everyone!!!!!!
S=chandni u know wat adi ka us boring interview mein selection ho gaya!
C=wow congo adi ye to double celebration ho gaya!!
A=double celebration?????????
C=haan are main to batana hi bhool gayi actually mom ne mere liye ek ladka pasand kiya hai uska naam vishesh hai and aaj main usse mili thi and i reeeli like that guy he is very understanding!!!!!!!
T=to aakhir tum shaadi ke liye maan gayi its reeli a gr8 news yaar congo!
S=hey congratz chandni!
then after that everybody starts congratulating her!!but adi is reeli shocked!
A(in a low tone)=congratz!
C=thx adi!
jus then her cell rings!
C=are usi ka hi phone hai jus a minute and she leaves!
adi is left in shock and he is lil bit sad and he dun know why he is sad!
S=are adi tujhe kya huya!
A=kuch nahi and he leaves!
S=yeh bhi ajeeb hi hain!!!accha tara tum to bada bol rahi thi ki un dono ke beech main kuch hai kuch hai lekin ab to kuch aur hi scene hai!
T=haan may be main galat thi aur may be not!
S=tumhari baten tomujhe bilkul samajh nahi aati khair mujhe to treat se matlab hai dono se treat vasul karke hi chodunga!!!!

so this was 4 today and keep urselves updated with my fanfic 4 more fun and drama!!!

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