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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
Shrishti i m addicted 2 ur fanfic yaar.......its way 2 gud..👏 .....plz post d next part 2 really fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
👏 . Its too gud yaar.i really luv ur fan fic yaar.
Well dun. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
Thnx ppl. 4 all the appreciation.will be writing the next part very soooooooooooooooooooooon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
PART-12
everybody(the whole group) is sitting in the canteen and having their food.adi is using a knife to cut sumthing and in between he badly hurts his finger which starts bleeding.....
A=!!ouch!!
S(who didn't know that adi has hurt his finger)=are adi ye tomato sauce plate ke bajaye tune apni ungli par kyun dal di.dekh itni waste kar di na chal main ye sauce thodi si lekar is samose ke saath kha leta hun.
A(interupting)=shanty vo sauce nahi
S=haan haan vo sauce main le raha hun ek minute hmmm is ka taste to bada ajeeb sa hai
T=kyunki vo sauce nahi khoon hai mr.dracula.
S(spitting)=ewwwww thu thu.
and everybody starts laughing except chandni!!!
C=adi tumhe mazaak sujh raha hai dekho kitni buri tareeke se tumne apni hi ungli kaat li.septic ho gaya to.dikhao mujhe!
A=chandni its ok.
C=no its not ok dikhao.
adi shows his wounded finger to her and chandni takes his finger in her mouth and after that blows some air on it adi is jus staring at her and jus then chandni says....................................
C=zyada dard to nahi ho raha na!
adi gives no answer then again chandni says.....
C=jalan to nahi ho rahi na
again he gives no answer and tara shakes him and says..
T=adi ji dr. chandni kuch puch rahi hai.
everybody strts laughing......
A=haan haan dard nahi ho raha.
C=ek minute mere paas bandage hai main vo laga deti hun.
she takes out a bandage from her purse and applies it on adi's finger and says.......
C=haan ab thik ho jayega.
T=chandni tum call centre mein kaha se aa gayi tumhe to dr. hona chahiye tha vo bhi dil ka.
and everybody strts laughing and chandni says......
C(making a face)=very funny.
the break gets over and everyone gets back to work and adi is staring at his bandage(on his wounded finger)and remembering the moment when chandni examined his finger he starts smelling it(bandage) as if it was having chandni's scent.jus then tara sitting at her desk shakes him from behind and says...............
T(knowing everything)=adi mere ghar mein ek pura first-aid box hai use ji bhar kar sungh lena kaho to kal le aaoun...
and both of them laugh....
T=c'mmon get back to work.
A=yup.

hey love is developing in adi's heart will he ever confess this love to chandni who is also feeling the same 4 him.........find out in the upcoming parts of this fanfic i.e. FRIENDS???OR SOMETHING ELSE!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ur fanfic is really as intrestin as d actual IC soap

Hats off pal 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
👏 .Its awesum yaar.Wow i m getting addicted to it.I just luv it. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
PART-13
tara is in chandni's home, in her room and they are about to go 4 coffee to a nearby cafe.chandni is in washroom and getting ready meanwhile tara is solving a crossword jus for timepass.jus then from the washroom only chandni says....
C=tara zara mere mobile mein dekna koi miss calls to nahi hai!
T=haan dekhti hun.
chandni cums out of the washroom.
C(combing her hairs)=chal chal late ho raha hai coffee seedha call centre jana hai.
T=haan bas ek minute accha yeh bata four letter magical word kaunsa hota hai.
C=mujhe nahi pata ab ye crossword chod aur jaldi chal.
T=teri vocabulary kitni weak hai rehne de i got it its 4 letter magical word is LOVE.
C=jaldi
T=1 minute accha haan teri 3 miss calls hai ek ami ki,ek kabir ki aur ek ADI ki.
C=aur kiski?????
T=adi ki.accha chal i ve completed lets go.
C=ek minute main pehle ek call kar leti hun.
T=kisko call karni hai?
C=adi ko!usne miss call di thi na.koi important kaam hoga.
T=abhi to tu bol rahi thi jaldi kar jaldi kar ab khud call karne baith gayi.
C(dialing adi's no.)=ek call karne mein kitna time lagta vaise bhi shift shuru hone ke liye abhi bahut time bacha hai.
T=sudden change and that too for adi.
C=shut up!
the ring is going and adi picks his cell up and attends chandni's call.
A=hello!
C=hello adi chandni bol rahi hun.
A=haan bolo chandni!
C=vo tumne ek miss call di thi!
A=haan miss call to di thi.
C=anything important!
A(with nervousness)=haan nahi
C=haan ya nahi
A=actually haan par abhi main vo baat bhul gaya!
C=kya???
A=ok bye!
and he cuts the phone.
T=kya huya kya kaha usne!
C=pata nahi!bol raha tha important baat hai.......bhul gaya.......
T=main samajh gayi vo kya bolna chahta tha!
C=kya!
T=kuch nahi lets go
C=ok!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
ur fanfics r so addictive shrishti
hats off 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-14(end)
adi is sitting with shanty in his room.shanty says.....
S=stupid tune phone par bataya kyun nahi ki tu usse pyaar karta hai.
A=kya kehta usse main to yeh bhi nahi janta ki vo mere liye kya feel karti hai vo jab bhi baat karti hai mujhse main nervous ho jata hun aur vaise bhi uski shaadi hone vaali hai.
S(giving an understanding look)=hone vaali hai huyi to nahi abhi bhi der nahi huyi hai kehde usse apni mann ki baat.
chandni and tara are sitting in cafe and having coffee
C=tujhe pata hai shaadi ki date finalise ho gayi
T=accha tune yeh baat adi ko batai.
C=nahi lekin i m sure vo bahut khush hoga yeh sab sunkar
T=accha abhi tu use phone laga aur bata de yeh baat
C=ek minute
she dials adi's no. and adi picks his phone
C=hello adi
A=hi chandni
C=mujhe tumhe ek gud news sunani hai
A=mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna
C=pehle main tumhe pata hai meri shaadi ki date finalise ho gayi hai its on august1 accha tum batao tum kya kehna chahte the
A=kuch nahi main bhi tumse yahi puccna chahta tha ki tumhari shaadi kab hai accha mujhe kuch kaam hai i will call u back bye
and he cuts the phone
T=kya huya yeh news sunkar adi excite huya
C=nahi balki uski awaaz se to aise laga ki vo upset hai
T=vo shayad isliye kyunki he luvs u a lot and mujhe bhi pata hai ki tum bhi usse bahut pyar karti ho
C=wat non sense
T=nonsense ek baar apne se puccho chandni ki ye pyar nahi to aur kya hai fir shayad tumhe meri baat samajh mein aane lagegi.
there shanty asks adi
S=kya kaha usne
A=uski shaadi ki date finalise ho chuki hai
S=kya
A=haan aur ab maine soch liya hai ki ab main apni dil ki baat dil rakhunga main uska pyaar to nahi pa saka lekin uski dosti khona nahi chahta.
days passed on and adi-chandni realised that its luv and its july 31 a day b4 chandni's marriage.
adi is in his room sitting depressed jus then tara cums
T=hi adi
A=hi aao na
T=adi i know why r u depressed adi i think tumhe chandni ko apne dil ki baat bata deni chahiye
A=kya
T=haan adi i know tum usse pyar karte ho aur main ye bhi janti hun ki kal uski shaadi hai lekin agar tumne usko kuch nahi bataya to tum andar hi andar ghut te rahoge
jus then gp cums and says..........
gp=tara thik keh rahi hai adi!and he gives an understanding luk
its chandni's marriage day her friends,relatives every body has cum
she is on terrace with adi
A=i luv u chandni nahi janta ki tumhara jawab kya hoga lekin haan bas ye jaanta hun that i luv u main jaanta hun ki aaj tumhari shaadi ho rahi hai lekin agar main yeh baat aaj nahi kehta to kabhie bhi nahi keh pata
C=i luv u too adi
jus then tara says from behind....
T=thats all i want
adi chandni turn and they see tara,gp,their friends and chandni's mom
T=yehi main chahti thi isliye ye sab natak karna pada
C=natak
T=haan natak kyunki agar main ye natak nahi karti to tum dono ye baat kabhie nahi mante jo aaj tum dono ne kahi hai.pata hai is natak ka main character kaun hai mera new york returned bhai jisse main humesha phone par baat karti hun aur mere pyare pyare bhai aur koi nahi balki vishesh hai.
C=kya
T=haan sorry but ye chota sa natak karna pada jismein hum sab shamil the
C=tara!!!!she goes to her and hugs her!
A=thx tara
T=its allright jijaji
and everybody laughs and tara says.....
T=one more surprise
C=ab kya
T=vo dekho
C=vo to shaadi ka banner hai uspe likha huya hai vishesh weds chandni
T=oh oh ek minute and
she calls sumone "bhaiyya zara asli vala banner lagana!"
haan ab thike ab dekho
C=aditya weds chandni
T=haan mujhe apne natak par pura bharosa tha isliye pehle se hi tayari kar li
and everybody laughs.
now in place of vishesh and chandni,adi-chandni get married.
and after sumtime adi-chandni and gp go to UK where adi has got a job and there they live happily ever after.

------THE END------


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yay!!!! Im soo happy dat so wat if SA doesnt let AC unite.........atleast u hav let dem unite.....Atleast tumhare fanfic mein v can c dem 2gether!!!!!! 😉

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