Friends???or something else!(part 14-end) - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 By d vay Shrishti 1 request yaar.....plz tum IC ki writer ban jao taki ve can c AC 2gthr varna i donno how long vill SA stretch it~~~~~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
👏. well dun yaar.grrrrrr8 going.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
PART-9
adi enters his house with a sad expression on his face!!!!!!
A=hi grandpa!!!!
gp=hey adi!!
A=khane mein kya hai??????
gp=khane mein aaj bari teri hai!!!!
A=oh haan main to bhool hi gaya tha aap baithiye main fresh hokar abhi aata hun aur khana banata hun!!!!!!!
then he goes to the washroom to freshenup and then he proceeds to the kitchen!!!!!!
he is still lost in his thoughts while cooking food!
then finally the food is ready and he takes it to the dining table and both of them starts eating the food!
gp coughs and starts drinking water and says...........
gp=adi ye tune ismein kitni mirchi daal rakhi hai!!
A=sorry gp pata nahi itni zyada mirchi kaise dal gayi!
gp=kya huya adi tera dhyaan kahan hai jab se tu aaya hai bada chup hai aur bol bhi nahi rahan sab kuch thik to hai na???are haan aaj to tera interview tha na kya huya selection nahi huya!dekh agar yeh baat hai to ismein itna udaas hone ki kya baat hai aise mauke to aate rehte hain is baar nahi to agli baar sahi!!!!!
A=nahi aisi baat nahi hai selection to ho gaya hai aur hum mera matlab aap aur main agle saal UK ja rahen hai!
gp=are ye to bahut acchi baat hai lekin tu itna upset kyun hai!
A=kuch nahi bas aise hi...
gp=kuch to zaroor hai tu zaroor kuch chupa rahan hai kisi se jhagra huya?
A=nahi balki chandni shaadi kar rahi hai!!hai na gud news!!!!!
gp=haan yeh to bahut acchi khabar hai lekin is baat se tu itna upset kyun hai!
A(in mind)=yeh to main bhi nahi janta ki is baat se main itna upset kyun hu??????
after that new day...... in the office everybody is in canteen jus then shanty says chandni hume to treat chahiye tumne to abhi tak apne hone vaale husband se milvaya bhi nahi ????aur adi tujhe bhi apne us boring interview ke liye ek rocking party deni hogi!!
C=hey adi mere paas ek idea hai hum dono ek combined party dete hai wat say!
A=haan kyun nahi!
C=cool!to fir kal pub indiana mein adi aur mere taraf se ek party aur haan vishesh bhi zaroor aayega!
S=ok then sunday!!!!full & final!!!!!dun!
the day has cum its party time in pub''indiana''.
chandni cums to the pub with her about to be hubby vishesh and introduces him to everyone!
C=everyone this is vishesh!and vishesh this is tara.
T=hi!
C=this is manisha
M=hello
C=this is shanty
S=hi buddy
C=this is smita
S=hi
C=this is ami
A=hello
C=this is varun
V=hi vishesh!
C=this is kabir
K=hi
C=and this is my best friend!adi i mean aditya!!!
A(in a low tone)=hello
Shanty=hey chalo bahut ho gaya intro ab chalo dance karte hai!
chandni dances with vishesh and adi is sitting and getting jealous to see both of them 2gether!!!!!!!jus then vish gets a call on his cell and he goes out as there was noise inside!!!!!after sumtime he returns back!
V=chandni i ve to leave ek bahut zaroori kaam aa gaya hai if u dun mind can i go!!
C=ya its ok!
V=thx u njoy!bye!
C=bye!
chandni leaves the dance floor and sits beside adi and jus then tara pulls adi's hand n gets him on the dance floor and dances with him!and notices sumthing odd!she is watching that chandni is getting jealous so she does a real close dance with him and chandni is getting more and more jealous!!!she takes a glass of bear and drinks,then she drinks and drinks and drinks and drinks!adi notices her and goes to her!
A=chandni r u allright!
jus then all her friends cum and shanty says.....
S=chandni bear akele akele
C(in full peeke tight tone)=yeh lo shanty tum bhi lo
S=thx
A(slapping on shanty's head not so hard)=are kya thx use rokne ke bajaye tu use encourage kar rahan hai!
S=haan yaar hmmmmmm chandni vo glass bhi mujhe de do main khatam kar dunga!
A=hopeless!
T=i think adi tumhe chandni ko ghar chod dena chahiye!
A=lekin aunty ko kya jawab dunga?
Shanty=bol dena tune zabardasti pila di!
A=shut up i m serious!
C(totally drunk)=mom to ghar par nahi hai!vo to do din ke liye pune gayi hai!
Shanty=cool to hum baaki ki party vahan mana lete hai!wat say guyz!
everyone=shut up!
A=dekho main chandni ko ghar chod kar aa rahun thike tum sab bhi vapas ghar chale jao!
adi takes keys 4rm chandni's purse and opens the door of chandni's home!
A=chalo chandni!
C=nahi jaungi!
A=i said chalo!
C(cries)=daat kyun rahe ho!
A=daat kahan raha hun chalo!
C(folding hands)=nahi!
so he pics her up and goes to her bedroom and makes her lay on a bed and puts a chadar on her!
A=ab tum so jao!
C=nahi!
A=plz so jaO like a gud girl!
C=thike adi and she closes her eyes!
adi leaves and strts his bike and gives a smile and says to himself ''silly girl''!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
👏 gr8 yaar.........hats off 4 ur roking fanfic
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
Shrishti...... 👏 you are one fab writer
by the way no Goodnight Kiss here?? 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-10
chandni wakes up from her sleep and its a bright new sunny day and she's having a headache which leads her to lay down on the bed again but as faith wud have it door bell rings and she has to wake up as her mother is not also at home to open that door she goes to open the door with great hangover and she sees tara in front of her!!!!!
C=tara cum yaar! baith!itni itni subah kaise aana huya?
T=subah subah its already 10 o'clock dear!jago!!lagta hai kal ki utri nahi!vaise ek baat bata tujhe drinks se to sakt nafrat to tune kal itni pi kyun?????????
C=vo to mujhe bhi nahi pata!sardard bhi ho raha hai!
T=ab agar 10 glass bear piyegi to yehi hoga!
C=10 glass!!!!!!!
T=haan haan 10 glass!main aisa karti hun tere liye nimbu-pani bana kar lati shayad thoda hangover utar jaye!u'll feel better!main abhi aayi!!!!!!
she goes to the kitchen and makes a fresh glass of nimbu-paani 4 herself and chandni!!!!
T=ye le!!
C(taking a sip)=thx yaar!accha ek baat bata mujhe ghar kaun laya!
T=tujhe ye bhi yaad nahi hai????
C=hmmmm nahi!
T=adi aur kaun!
C=kya adi!!
T=haan aur nahi to kya and i m sure tune uska tnx bhi nahi kiya hoga!
C=mujhe to vo bhi yaad nahi!
T=lo aur bhi mahaan!accha sach sach bata tune kal itni kyun pi mujhe pata hai tu janti hai vo vajah lekin batana nahi chahti!
C=ye jo tu ghuma-firakar keh rahi hai na mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha!
T=accha samajh nahi aa raha ya fir samajh kar bhi tu anjaan ban rahi hai!
C=accha vo tera jo bhai hai jo new york mein tha tu bata rahi thi na ki vo india aa gaya tune to uska naam bhi nahi bataya aur na usse milvaya!
T=topic change all of a sudden!khair agar tu batana nahi chahti to na sahi!rahi baat mere bhai ki tu main tujhe usse bahut jald milva dungi aur tab tujhe uska naam khud hi pata chal jayega!!!i ve finished my nimbu-paani!!!!!!!!mujhe der ho rahi hai u take care of urself bye!!!!!!
C=bye!
tara leaves from there but chandni is in a deep thought and saying to herself........
C=mujhe adi ka thx karna chahiye use abhi phone karti hun!
she dials his number but then b4 ring goes she cuts the phone in between!and says......
C=nahi mujhe adi ka personally jaakar thx karna chahiye!main abhi uske ghar usse milne jaati hun par kahungi kya??????????are uska thx karne ja rahi hun to thx hi kahungi na!main bhi pagal hun!
and she leaves 4 her bedroom!tara was seeing all this from a window and says to herself!
T=mujhe pata hai vo vajah chandni mujhe pata tha tum yahi karogi!
she gets a call on her cell and she attends it and leaves saying.......
T=haan bhaiya!
chandni is choosing a dress then she picks a pink dress and remembers the day when adi praised her saying that she was luking very beautiful in this dress!
C=ye bilkul perfect rahegi!
then she dresses herself and combs her hairs and wears a chain and earings!then she chooses her sandals and wears them and takes her purse and leaves with a smile on face!adi's home is on a walking distance so she is walking along the road and sees a flower shop and stops there!!!!!and says to the flowerist......
C=can i have a bunch of red roses plz!
F=yes sure!here are ur roses!
C=thx how much???
F=40 rupees
C=here!
F=have a nice day ma'am!
Chandni leaves from there and reaches to her destination i.e. adi's home,then she sets her hairs and press the door bell!!!and adi opens the door!
A=chandni!hi!
C=hi!
A=aao na!
she enters the house!
A=baithon!
and both of them sit on a sofa!
A=aur batao kaise aana huya!
C=actually main tumhara thank u karna chahti thi!vo kal ke liye!
A=oh vo vaali baat! its ok!
C=pata nahi kal maine itni kyun pi li!mujhe khud pata nahi!
A=its ok shayad tumne anjaane mein cold-drink samajh kar pi li hogi!
C=nahi adi main jaanti thi ki vo hard-drink thi!
A=lekin tumhe to drinks bilkul pasand nahi hai is everything allright kahin tumhara aur vishesh ka koi jhagra to!
C=nahi nahi aisi baat nahi hai!
A=accha thike bhul jao vo baat!!!!pata hai maine kuch banaya hai!!!!!!!!
C=kya!
A=ek minute main abhi aaya!
he goes to the kitchen and gets a dish!
C=ye kya hai!
A=maine banaya hai!its a sweet dish try karke dekho!gp ghar par nahi the!main bore ho raha tha to socha kuch ghar ka kaam kar lu!
chandni tastes it and says......
C=bahut accha bana hai!accha mujhe der ho rahi hai main chalti hu!bye!
A=bye!
chandni leaves and adi tastes that sweetdish and....
A(spitting the sweetdish out)=ismein to maine chini ki jagah namak daal diya kitna ganda taste hai iska!
he goes to the kitchen and drains the sweetdish in the sink!and says......
A=ye sweetdish to chandni ne bhi try ki thi lekin usne to kaha ki bahut acchi bani hai matlab usne mera dil rakhne ke liye ye sab kaha...........how sweet of her!shayad usse zyada acchi dost mujhe aur kahi nahi mil sakti pata nahi jab uski shaadi ho jayegi to main usko kitna miss karunga!


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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
👏 damn cool yaar.....totally awsum
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
this story is getting interesting...
arey by the way gulab ke guldaste ka kya hua ?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
hoga hoga uska bhi kuch hoga next part ka intezaar karo!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-11
Chandni is walking on the road and she remembers that she has forgotten to give the roses to adi..
C=are ye roses to main adi ko dena hi bhool gayi abhi vapas jauon ya shaam ko office mein de doon nahi nahi tab tak to ye murjha jayenge aur office mein dungi to tara bhi baat ka batangar bana degi abhi hi de deti hun.
and she goes back to adi's place.she goes and press the door bell and adi again opens it.
C=hi!adi vo ye roses to main tumhe dena hi bhool gayi.ye tumhare liye.
A=chandni itni formality ki kya zaroorat thi.
C=plz rakh lo na.main tumhare liye specially layi hun!
A=ok!thnx.
C=ok then main chalti hun!
As she turns to go adi holds her hand and stops her!
C=kya huya.
A=vo actually tumne mujhse jhoot kyun bola ki sweetdish bahut acchi bani hai!
C=kabhie kabhie dusron ko khushi dekar khud ko bahut khushi milti hai.
and she leaves and adi smiles and closes the door.
Edited by srishti bhutani - 19 years ago

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