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Nice update
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nic update ...
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hmmm nice update...felt bad fr mayu...
allah kisi bache ko apni ma se alag hone na de...
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ithis is indeed love. nupur loves mayank
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Thank u friends .🤗. and kheya_mayur and np18 .. blessings for you both, with a prayer of your happiness and contentment! 😃

Chapter # 12

Nupur had already picked her mobile at least twenty times but every time she managed dialing his number her courage failed and she disconnected the call even before any bell rang.
It wasn't until she received the threatening message from Gunjan,

"Stop doing that and call him princess."

That she finally took a deep breath and dialed the number. As soon as his name flashed at her mobile screen and she felt a strange possessiveness, along with a sudden urge to have his picture flashing along with the name. Sighing she kept on staring at the name flashing and heard the first bell ring distantly. Too restless to stay seated, she got up and started walking while the second bell rang and her heart beat increased. Her pulse rate kept increasing with every ring and her mind was bombarded with all kinds of emotions and thoughts.

"what if he didn't want to attend her call?"
"what if he was too heartbroken.."
What if he had someone else'"


The third thought was interrupted by his masculine, "hello" that was even more deep when on call.

Feeling butterflies in her stomach and feeling nervousness take over she cleared her throat, "hello sir,. how are u?"
"fine.. how can I help u Nupur?"
his voice sounded so distant but this time Nupur was able to also see through that tone at a vulnerable, pain stricken man who was mourning loss of his mother.
Nupur: "are u busy sir?"
Mayank: " no not really.. (irritated edge in his voice) koi kam tha Nupur?"
Nupur: "errrmmm' nahe. I just wanted to know how r u?"
Mayank: "I told u already I am fine.."

Nupur felt her heart bleed at the tone but she remembered what he himself had told her at the window of her study room.. taking a deep breath she tried again, "to phir hum thori dair baat kar len?"

Mayank was getting irritated by the way his heart wanted to let her in and talk out his grief with her but this was wrong. She was nothing to him except a student and he had himself rejected her friendship, then why did he all of a sudden feel like talking to her? Why did he want to shed the tears at last that he had been holding back since he came to this house and faced the memories that he was running away from. Memories of his mother getting beaten by his father but coming to him and smiling and kissing his forehead every night he went to sleep, hiding her pain from her own son. Why did he feel like telling Nupur that he missed her mother, he missed coming back to her tired and rejected many times but her warm hug made him feel he could do it, Why did he suddenly feel like sharing the depth of his pain? Most importantly, why did he feel this girl will understand?
Irritated by the direction of his thoughts he said, "Nupur, I don't know what is this all about but'"
Nupur: (cutting in) its about Nothing sir, I just wanted to make sure u are fine.. u see I know how it feels when u don't have your mother'"

For a moment Mayank felt his heart clenched in a tight fist.. Yes he knew Mrs Bushan had died but still it pained him to hear the heart wrenching pain in her voice'
Mayank: "I am sorry.. errmm.."
Nupur: "you don't have to be sorry.. u can't bring her back just like I can't bring your mother back but I just wanted u to know that I'm here if u want to talk.. and I know how incomplete u feel not having her in ur life'but u know what? I cant say this about my mother but can do it about urs- she will be proud of her son for what he is where ever she is'"

Mayank was unable to hold back the tears of anguish any longer and let them flow hearing her voice break but she continued , he knew they both were crying, they both were sharing the same loss, the same pain..

Nupur: " I never saw her' atleast u have her memories, I don't remember anything about her.. but still sometimes when Gunjan's mother hugs me I feel a warmth emanating from her and wonder how was my mother.. sometimes when dad sits infront of her picture hanging in his room and look at it for hours and then when he looks at me and kissing my head says , "you are like your mother princess" I always wonder how was she' atleast u knew how she was that sir, right?"
Mayank nodded his head and then realizing she couldn't see him, he whispered n a hoarse, tears filled voice, "yes, I know her, she was the world's best mother Nupur."

He didn't know how it happened but first time in his life he talked, he shared, he let out his grief.


"she always cooked my favorite meals even if dad groaned and shouted at her, she always came to wish me goodnight even if she was in too much pain because of the beating my father gave her.."

Nupur didn't miss the emphasis on the word dad and father and she realized that she atleast didn't have to face any such haunting memories about her mother, how helpless Mayank must feel now'

"she was the best mother Nupur and I still know she is still somewhere around looking at me' but why did she had to go Nupur?"

Mayank knew how unjust this question was specially done form Nupur, but he wanted an answer, so very badly.

Nupur: " who said she left Mayank? Who said that? My mother never left me.. I still feel her presence.. just the way I feel someone is supporting me even though I can't see anyone.. Sir mothers love their children too much to ever leave.. they always stay in our hearts.. my mother does!"

Mayank had no idea how she had achieved it, but suddenly he felt a warmth in his heart, as if his mother was trying to tell him Nupur was right..
After a pause in which both tried to pull themselves together, Mayank whispered, "thank you Nupur'"
Nupur: (smiling through tears) friendship mein no thanks and no sorry.. kaheen suna tha maiine.."
Suddenly realizing he haven't accepted her friendship she added, "I meant'"
Mayank: "well I heard that too.. so I will take my thanku back.."

Very softly, Mayank had taken his "thank you" back and simultaneously given her his friendship., for now that was all Nupur could ever ask for.


By the time they ended the call, Nupur was feeling at peace, she felt a weird calm inside her and a strange joy because she knew, somewhere she had lessen his pain., it was weird how just being able to do that made her feel happy, content.

They both had yet again felt the change, but this time the change was more prominent, because it had come from sharing their pain

Chapter # 13 - Page 41 - Fantasia,

Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Mehkuuu🤗 h r u sis...
@Kinza...,Mehku
Beautiful ff..sorry for not commenting on it regularly...
its amazing n i m loving the way you are showing progress in Mayur relation..
beautifully written
loved it
continue soon
Edited by Maria. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woww !!!! Awesome Mulan !!!!!👏👏

That was beautifully written..about mother !!.⭐️⭐️

Cont soon..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautifully written im just speechless after reading this part
superb

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