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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update Mehak 😃
the story is moving at the right pace n U both are doing a Brilliant job, if I need say...👍🏼

n Nupz's is toh already flat over Mayank 😉😆 Mayank seems too...but he is keeping his emotions under check so much...but jyada der tak nahi rakh payega I know 😆

n OMG Mayank's Mom is dead?😲

keep up the good job...waiting for the next update...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
nic update...
do cont soon..
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nupur loves mayank? I hope mayank can understand too
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update 😃...love samrat and gunjan in this...the 2 cupids for mayur...well if their relationship doesnt start off with the typical love story, i hope it does with a strong emotional basis
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mehku... the way you have written is quite evident that they both have fallen for each other.. now how they realize this... is to be seen...
Very nicely written 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kinza and mulan u guys have just written ausum ff..

just loved it...well i read all 10 parts together...

well sorry for not replying .i have my boards approaching...

and ya dnt forget to pm me other parts to will read aftr my exams ..

thnx,
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Edited by khushisati - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amzingg...luved this FF n ur speed too...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter # 11

Mayank's jaw tightened and Nupur was afraid she had made the wrong move, until he replied in a bare whisper, "its my mom's death anniversary'"

Nupur felt something drop in the pit of her stomach, the silence of his eyes and the blank expression of his face made her heart prick, and before even giving her a chance to express her feelings; Mayank was on his way to the gate. Just when she heard the drawing room close, she ran behind him but he was already out of the gate.

Taking a deep breath she kept on starting at the gate for a while and when finally her mind issued a confirmation that he is not going to return today, she made her way back to her room.

"death anniversary of my mother".

Mayank's mother is dead.

This thought made her feel hollow from inside. She understood the pain of not having a mother, and during her childhood, she used to envy everybody who had mothers, and even till now, she could not tolerate anyone basking in the warmth of motherliness, and wanted everyone to go through the pain she went through. Gunjan was the only person for whom she didn't wish it, because she knew the reason, she was her best friend and now after Gunjan, Mayank was the only person who actually instigated this feeling of pain in her.

She didn't want to see him in pain, not even the slightest bit.

It could be understandable if he would have been polite and friendly, but inspite of the fact that he bluntly refused her friendship, she was still worried and bothered about him, and not only this, she couldn't see him in his pain!!. He has to remain that stiff and calm!, weakness in his eyes was getting intolerable for her.

His weak, breaking voice came back to her ears and trying hard to distract herself, she picked up the phone to call gunjan. She had to talk, this person was taking her over, but before even dialing the number, she placed the phone away. First she needed to talk to herself.

" I think my sentiments for him have passed the boundaries of *just liking* Gunjan'"

She recalled her confession to gunjan, it was true she did felt something just more than liking for him, but this doesn't mean that this person would take a toll on her and day and night she would spent thinking about him. She had have boyfriends, which she actually claimed to be in love with, but she never felt this restlessness in her. Earlier those boyfriends never made their way in her prayers, but today, she was actually praying, wishing for his smile and contentment. Such a huge tragedy cannot happen with Mayank!. It shouldn't have happened. He can't be sad .. He ..

Her thoughts were interrupted by the loud bell from her phone in her hand, flashing a beautiful smiling picture of her best friend and her name below.

"Gunjannn!!", she almost cried and shouted after picking up the phone and gunjan who just called up for a random discussion was taken aback.

"what happened doll?'

"Gunjan, Mayank's mother is dead!", she said almost on the verge of crying and Gunjan was taken aback again.

"he is going to his village today, he said he won't be coming tomorrow, it's his mother's death anniversary!, how could it happen gunjan?, how could such a big hole exist in mayank's life!, Gunjan living without a mother is hell!, How could God make Mayank go through this .how ..

"Princess stop..", gunjan interrupted her completely breathless and nupur let the tears of anguish flow down, "please stop and relax".

"okay I am sorry", realizing the extent of her panicked state, she kept quiet and took a deep breath,

"jaan u want me to come over?", gunjan asked after a couple of seconds, and nupur gave the answer she already expected, that is the reason she was already wearing her shoes, "yes please ..", was nupur's answer.

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Entering the Sharma mansion, gunjan found Nupur in the condition which she expected, staring blankly at a point and playing loud music, "things aren't this difficult nupur", gunjan placed her arms around and sensing her support arrive, she hugged her quietly allowing tears to flow.

"this is not right gunjan!, this intense affection is not right!, that person hasn't even talked to me properly and I have started worrying about him like crazy!, I have met so many other people who didn't have mothers, you know arman , ", she held gunjan's hand, "his mother was also dead, but I never felt like this for him, but that low broken voice with which mayank told me that it's his mother's death anniversary!, it pricked me gunjan!, it literally pricked me!!, main kya karon?", she looked at gunjan with tears in her eyes and gunjan again pulled her in a hug, and she started speaking again, "even the day he bluntly refused my friendship, I couldn't stay cold to him, Gunjan he makes me feel so attached to him"

"are you sure it is not infatuation?", gunjan asked softly rubbing her back

"gunjan I answered you that day that I feel much more than liking and infatuation", she replied coldly.

"so do you want to say that you love him?", she softly stroked her hair and nupur moved away to look in her eyes.

"I don't know about love ", she said slowly.

"then who knows it nupur?",

"gunjan please stop it!, I told you I don't know!!", she almost shouted and gunjan pressed her hands, "then get to know it, you need to know what u feel for him, call him up!"

"what?", nupur was amazed at her suggestion.

"I am serious, don't suppress or run from your feelings Nupur, call him up, run behind him to find what you feel, because if you ignore then these are going to stay in your heart forever and you are never going to let anyone else enter your life ..

"why are you talking about anyone else!", Nupur glared her and gunjan got up, "I guess my job is over, I am leaving I have to go home early, and you are calling your tutor tonight", she smiled and kissed her cheek and left the room, leaving Nupur alone, she needn't repeat her suggestion because she knew once was enough.

Nupur took a deep breath and closed her eyes. If gunjan had asked her to call, then she had to call, and she will call.

Chapter # 12 - Page 38 - mulan.

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...
loved it...
plzzz post next part sooon

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