KRIYAANSH OS: Our Last Stand (Dedicated To Fans)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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They came dey conquered and den broke our hrt.. but all dis dey cud do was bcoz dey made us luv dem, adore dem and more importatly respect dem...In d last 10 months dey wer our entertainers, our frends and also dey wer our dream...They were so beautiful that we prayed for dis dream to bcum a reality...We fought for dem like guardians, we supported dem like family, admired dem like idols and luvd dem like best frends..
So here is an ending 4 Kriyaansh dat i'm writing dis last time nt for dem but 4 all dos beautiful ppl on dis forum who hav luvd dem and cherished dem and have been left wid a big hole in der hrt like dey'v lost a near an dear one...
So for all Kriyaansh fans i dedicate dis...u deserve dis and more...much more...
OUR LAST STAND
Goodbyes are not forever.
Goodbyes are not the end.
They simply mean I'll miss you
Until we meet again!
Kriya closed her eyes and wid her tears came d memories of d past 2 months...everything had happened so fast dat she did'nt know why or hw but she was der in d car on her way 2 d airport..she knew dis was her dream but suddenly a doubt had crept in2 her heart has my dream changed?????
FLASHBACK
The footloose competetion had finished...The dazzlers had cum 2gthr and become louins to beat the creeps of KR college and wid rey's help kriya had even conviced her mom to see she was born 2 dance...
St. Louis had lifted d cup but wid dat came a curse disguised as a blessing... Juliard School of performing arts had extended a scholorship to study for 1 year in new york to d girl chosen as d best dancer and d one to reciev it was non other dan Kriya...
Everybody saw it as such a gr8 oppertunity dat dey 4gt it ment she wud leav dem all for a year or more... only two ppl saw dat and dey wer rey and kriya but rey did nt want 2 cum in d way of her drms and kriya did nt want 2 disappoint rey by nt taking d path that he had paved for her...
PRESENT
But now the time had cum 2 leav kriya had met everybody, said goodbye to all but der was one person she had nt faced throughout her last week and dat was rey...
Kriya thot rey main tumse bye kaise kehti jab tum wo ek waja ho jiske bare main sochte hi mera dil kehta hai ki main duniya ki har khushi bhuladu aur wapis aajaun...main jaate jaate tumhe nai dekh sakti..ye yaad nai kar sakti ki maine tumhe abhi tak ye bhi nai bataya ki main tumse kitna pyar karti hoon...kya karun mujhe kuch samajh nai aa raha...
Swayam: kriya hum pohanch gaye hai tum nikal jao..
Kriya: thanks guys i'll miss u all..
Sharon(crying): we'll miss u 2..par kriya plz ek baar tho usse mil leti...wo mera best frend hai kriya aur aaj tak maine usse iss halat main nai dekha..plz kriya ek baar phone tho kar lo...
Kriya(crying): sharon rey mera wo sapna hai jo lagta hai adhura reh gaya...mil tho wo bhi sakta tha par nai mila na..main tum sabko bohat miss karungi par usse tho mera dil maan hi nai raha ki saath nai chal raha...sharon main apna dil tumhare paas chodke ja rahi hoon..plz uska khayaal rakhna...aur haan main apne dost(looking at swayam) bhi tumhare hawale kar rahi hoon..inhe tootne mat dena...
Neha(cryin): neha missin u sooo much..tum plz cumin back jaldi..hume sapna dekhna tumne sikhaya hai...aur ab tumhi...
Kriya thot shayad tumhe sapne dikhaye lekin maine saath main apna dil aur kisi ka sapna lagta hai tod diya..kya sapne itne mehenge hote hai..
Vicky: haan kriya hum sab tumhe bohat miss karenge...tumne hame weakling dazzlin jaise bekaar lines mitake hume sachi dosti aur pyar se milaya..thankyou soo much..
Kriya thot tumhe tho dil aur dosti dikhadi lekin aaj main jaa rahi hoon apna dil aur dosti peeche chodke dance k liye...
Rinny&simmy: ya kriya v'll really miss u...
Amar & bharat: hum tumhe bohat miss karenge..
Vishakha: dude hume bhi miss karna...v luv you..
Nilesh: kriya wahan na if possible kisi hot ladki se meri setting..u no wat i mean rit..
Suddenly announcement was made 4 kriya's flight call 4 security..
Kriya: i'll miss u all a lot...bye guys i'll call as soon as i reach.. mere liye rey k liye ek nai dance partner dhoond den
Suddenly from d back:
Rey: tum mere liye partner dhoond rahi ho???
Kriya(shocked): h.haan wo dance k liye...
Rey: kyun??? jab dance partner new hai tho life main bhi new partner honi chahiye...wat say???
Kriya(crying): i wish u all d best rey..i hope all ur drms cum true...
Rey slowly walked to kriya...
Rey: oh really...waise jab tum meri khushi hi chahti ho tho nil sun tu wo badi hot si sonia hai hai na usko bol kal se rehersals pe aajaye..i need a partner...
Kriya on hearing dis broke in2 silent tears...and turned away...
Rey: aur haan usko bol diyo any of her frends r also free 2 join us...it will b fun if i gt 2 pick my partner...
Kriya suddenly turned crying...
Kriya: i cant beliv ki tum aise ho..main abhi tak gai nai hoon an tum already planning kar rahe ho 4 a new partner...aur mujhe laga ki tum mujhse kher wo chodo main tho tumse...
Rey: mujhse kya kriya..kyun tumhe bura lag raha hai jab tumhi mujhe all d best bol rahi ho...tum mujhse kya???? ab jab tum jaa hi rahi ho time 2 set my life rit...ek nai kahani kisi nai ladki ke saath haina..issi k liye wish kar rahi ho..
Kriya(crying): main haar gai...main tumse pyaar karne lagi...itna pyar ki tumse duur jaane k khayaal se darr lag raha...i think of u and it makes me nt want to go... and haan meri jaane ki wajah bhi tum ho..tumne mere liye bohat kiya hai..mere liye sapna dekha..main ye sab isliye bcoz I LUV U...
Saing dis kriya broke down and sat dwn crying her eyes out..every1 around stared wid shock, both swayam and sharon had a small smile...and rey's eyes were filled wid tears of happiness...
Rey sat dwn in front of her...tuk her face into his hands delicately like a pearl and brushed away her tears wid his lips...den gazed deep into her eyes...
Rey: kriya kuch ek saal pehle main ek ladki se mila aur mai badal gaya...woh alag thi par usne mujhe bhi apna sa bana diya... usne mujhse dosti ki par main dil se kabhi uska dost nai ban paya...phir hamara beech jhagda hua aur uske khatir main dushman bangaya...phir dosti hui aur phir main uske liye dost se kuch zyada bana..par mere dil main tab bhi aur aaj bhi uski wahin jaga hai.. uski hansi k liye main roh sakta hun...uske khatir main duniya se lad sakta hoon...wo kehti hai tho main sun sakta hun..aur yeh isliye kyunki main usse bohat bohat pyaar karta hoon...i luv u kriya i luv u soo much...
Slowly both gt up staring deep into each each searching 4 sumthing and each liking wat dey saw...
Kriya: rey lekin ab main jab..
Rey: shhh...suno...
He slowly went dwn on one knee and tuk her hand in his...every1 around stared in shock...and kriya was stunned...
Rey: kriya tumhe mai shaadi k liye nai pooch raha...isliye nai kyunki hum young hai par isliye kyunki shaadi 7 jannamo k expiry date k saath aati hai aur main tumse kuch zyada maangna chahta hun...
kriya ghai kya tum hamesha mere saath rahogi...kya meri zindagi se meri jaan banogi???kya tum iss duniya ko bhul kar sirf meri banogi aur kya tum hamesha mujhse issi tarha pyar karogi???plzzz
Kriya slowly made him stand up and den kissed him...with her lips she answered all his questions...and together in dat passion dey sealed der fate which binded 4ever...Der breath ragged but dey held togethr like dis moment wud last 4 ever..
Every1 around started fidgeting and luking awkward...
Nilesh: so i guess dats a yes or she really dos'nt know hw 2 say no...
Every1: ha ha ha ha ha
Swayam: oy enough PDA warna police aajaegi...save sum 4 private time..
Suddenly rey and kriya realised where dey wer and dey broke apart blushing deeply...
Vicky: thankgod tune usse chod diya rey warna bechari oxygen k bina faint ho jati...
Neha: shutup vicky...
Kriya slowly turned back 2 rey wid a sad luk in her eyes...
Kriya: rey mere jaane ka waqt aagaya hai..main apna dil yahin chodke..
Rey: nai tum apne dil aur jaan ko apne saath leke ja rahi ho...
Saying dis he slowly moved out of d way and behind him was a luggage cart almost as full as kriya's..
Kriya: rey ye kya hai??? kya kya??
Rey: tumse alag main ek class k liye nai reh sakta tho socho ek do saal main tho marr jaunga...aur sirf tumhi nai achhi dancer ho..julliard maine bhi apply kiya aur mujhe half scholorship mil rahi hai and baki i think i can manage(wink)... aur hamare liye mere uncle ka khali ghar bhi hai wahan tho all is well...
Kriya ran to rey and hugged him tightly and cried till she had no more tears left...
Kriya: mere dil k bina main dance kaise karti????
Swayam: ok ab dil ki baat hogai tho dosti ki ek baat karun..main aur sharon tum dono se do mahino main milne aa rahe hai..hamari tickects booked hai..
Vicky: kya honeymoon cottage hai tere uncle ka??
swayam&rey: kya??
Suddenly d flight announcement went again..
Kriya and rey turned to say bye to every1...and den dey turned and walked to d gates..
Kriya: rey iss dil aur iss dosti ke bina koi dance nai hai... kyunki dil se hi hum dosti karte hai aur dil se hi dance...
Rey: aur ye mat bhulo dilse hi pyaar...
They turned one last time towards der frends and turned to walk through the doors were life was leading dem 2 a new adventure...but dey had no aprehentions bcoz dey were 2gthr...and 2gthr no problem was big enough...
They were each other's dil..
They knew true dosti..
And togthr dey were d magic called dance...
KRIYAANSH FOREVER
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww !! this was just perfect !! i loved it !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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freaking perfect luved it it end nd u watching d3 any more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aw its was awesome nd perfect i luv it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowso touching!amazingpiece of work n d PDA!!!haha!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful...:):)...a fitting dedication to the pair we all adore and respect the mmost...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww karthika dis was perfect...i rly loved it...DIL DOSTI DANCE i guess ise hi khte h...n 1 more tym u made me cry...n dis tym tears r rolling on my cheeks...i cn't even imagine dis perfect end 4 a perfect love story...thnx alot karthika u such a sweetheart...thnx a lot

n i will gonna miss our kriya miss our own shakti...love uuu shakti alot...n thnx karthika i m gonna miss ur ff tooo...love uuu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujucoolstar

freaking perfect luved it it end nd u watching d3 any more

i dont know but dis was my last bit of writing on des 2 coz i wanted dem 2 hav a happy ending...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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How i wish i cud hug u Karthika!! Thank u soo much for dis..!! Really a heart felt thank you...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was aw perfect as ArSha!!
it made me cry (at first) but then i had a huge smile...*sigh*

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