KAISAYEHPYAARHAI-ANGADKRIPAFAN(fanfic)-2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i m not starting a new topic or anything , this is the same KAISA YEH PYAAR HAI-ANGADKRIPAFAN(fanfic) but since it had exceeded 150 pages shahidlover24 told 2 make a new topic n continue the fan fic ( btw shahidlover24 ur doing an awesome job of a moderator! πŸ‘) so now i will continue from part 171

( n for the ppl who r new here is the link of the original topic in which 1-170 parts r there https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/115945/kaisa-yeh-pyaar-hai-angadkripafan-fanfic πŸ˜›)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome!! can't wait to read more!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i m posting the next part in a few minutes πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-171


(as i told u all befor the characters n their natures r just like in kyph , but there will b no tannu , n kripa told her name 2 nishant as tanya, n bua treats her like a daughter n bhim n bali r nishant's bhatijas just like in the serial)



IN MASSOORIE ...........



v can 3 kids playing video game in their room

1st kid- bhim koi aa jaiyega to?

bhim- koi nahi aayega!

bali- agar aunty ne aakar dekhliya to!

then the third boy turnes n v can c his face n he is our cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee prateek 😳


(he looks chooooooooooo chweet!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 )

p- ha agar mama ne dekh liya ki hum itni raat ko tv dekhrahe hai to vo gussa ho jaiyege

bhim- aunty ko pata nahi chalega!

p-ok! πŸ˜›

then they hear footsteps coming 2wards their room n they switch off the video game n then the three kids sneek into their room n lie on the bed n cover themselves with the blanket

bhim- (wispers) aunty aagiye!

bali- sone ki acting karo!

p- ok

all three pretend 2 b sleeping n then someone enters the room in ones the light


its none other than kripa!

k- main jaanti hu ki tum log video games khel rahe the! to yeh sone ki acting band karo

all 3 get up n sit on the bed

p- mama hum sirf 1ghante ke liye khel rahe the

k- sirf ek ghanta! ek ghanta to tum aise keh rahe ho jaise ek minute hai

bali- sorry aunty!

bhim- hum aisa phir nahi karenge

p- aur mama mera to turn hi nahi aaya main kabse wait kar raha tha

k- tum teeno ko shaita ho!

p- lekin mama maine ko game khela hi nahi mera chance abhi aanehi wala tha ki aap aagaiye

k-prateek tum to baat hi mat karo! tum to in dono se bhi bade shaitan ho!

p- πŸ˜›

k- chalo ab jaldi so jao, aur agar phirse video games khelo ge to main nishant se keh dungi

prateek,bhim,bali -(scream) nahi!!!!!!!

bhim- aunty aisa plez mat karo chacu humme datenga aur jab vo ek baar bolna shuru karte hai to...

bali- chup hi nahi rehte hai

p-ha!

looking at their face expressions kripa bursts out laughing

k- πŸ˜† thek hai ab so jao

then she tucks them 2 bed n is abt 2 leave when prateek........

p- mama aap mujhe dono cheeks par goodnite kisi nahi dengi?

k- no , aaj tum bauhat nauhgty thek isliye no kisi

p- but mama i m a good boy πŸ˜›

as prateek said this kripa's face expressions changed into sadness

she quickly gave him kisi on both his cheeks n offed the light of the room n left

IN KRIPA'S ROOM......

kripa stood at the window

n remembered prateek saying i m a good boy
n then angad saying i m a good boy

k-(2 herself) angad tumhe to pata bhi nahi hai ki prateek........ hamare pyaar ki nishani,is duniya main hai . Tumhara beta bilkul tumpar gaya hai , bilkul tumhari tarha i m a good boy kehta hai(asmile came on her face 😊 but then a tear also came out of her eyes) main tumse aaj bhi pyaar karti hu bhale tum mujhse karo ya na karo , par main tumhare saamne kabhi nahi aayungi .... kabhi nahi..... hamare kismat main milna hi nahi likha tha, jab bhi hum nilte hai tab tumhe aur mujhe - dono ko dard ke siwah kuch nahi milta , par angad tumhare wajah se mujhe jeene ki ek naiye maksad mili hai -prateek .

NEXT MORNING............

all r having breakfast onthe dinig table n watching tv at the same time

all 3 kids r watching cartoon network

n- tum teeno yeh kya dekh rahe ho , tumhe news dekhna chahiye , yeh cartoon dekhne se kuch nahi hota

bua- nishant jab tum inki umar ke thek tab tumbhi cartoon hi dekhte the , actually tum inse bhi zyada dekhte the

all 3 kids giggle n as usual nishant makes his tie proper

k- achha baccho ab jaldi nashta karo , school jane ke liye deri ho rahi hai na

after some time the tv is on the news chanel

reporter: ab hum aapsab ko aapke favorite rockstar se milate hai in a special interview............. n he is nonw other then superstar angad!!!!!!!!!!!

kripa almost froze while the kis came running with their bags on their back

bhim- vo angad hai na!!!!!!!!!

prateek- he is my favorite rockstar!!!!!!!!!!

n then prateek started singing kaisa yeh pyaar hai !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kripa looked at prateek n remembered angad

k-(thinking) naa chate hue bhi prateek angad se jud gaya hai 😭

bua- baccho jaldi chalo varna school ke liye deeri ho jaiyegi

then all three kids ran 2 the car

bua- kya hua tanya? aaj tum unhe school chodne nahi jaogi?

tanya- (back 2 her sences) nahi... vo main... main abhi jaahi rahi the

bua- thek hai beta

then kripa went 2 leave the kids 2 school
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lolz finally i posted the next part!!!!!!!! πŸ˜› hope u all liked it πŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nyce part πŸ˜ƒ
cont fast!!!!
o and i understand abt the hwk πŸ˜† πŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was graet please cont.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part 😊
continue soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 part
can i know ur name????????
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

gr8 part
can i know ur name????????

my name is pritika but most of my friends call me kripa 😳

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