KAISAYEHPYAARHAI-ANGADKRIPAFAN(fanfic)-2 - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: me_iq

amazing part!!prateek is soo sweet n cutee

yup prateek is choooooo chweet 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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just caught up continue soon..cant wait until angad finds out that it is his son ! 😳 great job! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

hey when r u gonna continue

after 8:30 😛 ( cause after i c kyph then i will come online)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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soooooooooo soory , i just came online now 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
PART-175



suddenly it starts 2 rain

bhim- chalo jalidi , warna hum sach much phisal jaiyenge

bali- ha

bhim n bali run back but prateek is in his own world , enjoying the rain n splashing the water

the the ppl who were at the edge started moving back cause it was getting very slippery

when prateek turned behind n started runnign 2 go back b4 the teacher saw him , but 2 his bad luck he slipped n fell

he rolled 2 the edge of the mountain n was abt 2 fall , but he holded on 2 the edge n started crying n screamign 4 help

when all his hopes were going down n hand came from up

he could not c the person's face since it was raining very heavily

person- bete aapna haath do mujhe

pra- nahi main gir jayunga 😭

person- main tumhe girne nahi dunga

pra- promise?

person- pakka promise , ab aapna haath mujhe do

prateek gave his hand 2 that person n that person pulled him up

as soon as he got up he started crying badly

person- achhe bacche rote nahi hai , aapka naam kya hai?

pra-(crying) pra...prateek 😭

person- main aapko aake teacher ke paas le jata hu

the person took him near his teacher n friends

as soon as prateek was there he said thank you n ran off 2 bhim n bali without even seeing that person face even once

a smile comes on the person face seeing the kid runnign so cutely

person- cute kid

n finally the camera zooms on the person's face n it is angad!

a- bechara baccha dar gaya hoga

angad retuned back 2 his hotel n rested 4 the rest of the day in the hotel room itself

while prateek told the whole story abt how the person saved him from falling 2 bhim b bali while they were returnin back 2 their school from the bus

bali- prateek vo uncle kaun the?

prateek- arre!(put his hand on his head) maine us uncle ko thank you kaha tha lekin unka chera nahi dekha! 😛

bhim- arre prateek tumhare haath par to chot lagi hai

prateek saw his hand bleeding a bit

pra- agar mama ne yeh dekh liya to mujhe unhe batana hi padega iske bare main

bali- all the best! aunty to tujhe dategihi

bhim- ha , all the best

pra-

they reached school n saw kripa waiting 4 them 2 pick them up

k/t- tumlogoka picnic kaisa tha? 😃

all 3 kept quite

t- kya baat hai

bhim- vo aunty..... hum thak gaiye hai

t- thek hai to ghar chalte hai , phir aaram karna

bali- ha aunty

in the car kripa notice that all 3 kids were vey quite

t-(thinking) pata nahi yeh bacche aaj itne chup kyon hai 😕

on the other hand prateek tried 2 hid the cut from kripa

when they reached home bhim b bali had taked a bath n went out 2 play

prateek was in the room only cause the cut was paining alot althought the bleeding had stopped

tanya saw bhim n bali n asked them where was prateek

they told her that since prateek was very tired he will rest in the room

kripa went 2 the room 2 c prateek n when prateek heard of footsteps he jumped on the bed n acted as if he was tired

kripa entered the room n smiled on seeing he son watching cartoon

kripa sat next 2 him

k-kya baat hai prateek aaj bauhat thak gaiye

pra- nahi mama, main bauhat khela ... isliye....

k- pata hai beta hai main aapko kitna miss kiya

pra- of ho mama main sirf 4 ghante ke liye gaya tha

k- prateek , jab bhi tum meri nazar se boor jate ho main tumhe miss karti hu , ma jo hu 😊

kripa n prateek hugged but suddenly prateek screamt ouch! cause kripa's hand was on the cut

k-kya hua prateek?tum mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho?

prateek told her everything that happened

kripa started crying- agar tumhe kuch ho jata to , tum kyon gaiye waha par , teacher ne mana kiya tha na, bhagwan ka shukar hai ki vo aadmi waha pauhach gaya , warna kya ho jata 😭

prateek cutely wiped kripa's tears - dn't worry mama main thek hu 😊

kripa smiled at his innocence n hugged him

later she put medicine on his cut 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
can u all just imagine , i typed thta long part in just 25 mins!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 i typed veryyyyy fast!!!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
wow!!
but tat was an awsome part
cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
wow..what a sweet relationship between mom and son...very different from the real serial!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: angadkripafan

yup! n that super part will b written by a super writter 😉 me!!!!!!!😆

😆so wen is this super writter gona cont??? hmmm
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
hey great part plzzzzzzzzz continue

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