~My first FF~ Pyar ho gaya(pg3 koki vs parag) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Oh god its amazing. I cant stop laughing at the way you ve portrayed relations. Jitu taklu wow and wow evil rashi and gopi i am loving it. Continue soon. Pl write longer updates next time if possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
im just loving the direction this story is headed...ahem and urmi a match made in heaven...parag a college hunk!!!!!🤣...hilarious...do update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Part 3:

Ahem- brother of kokila. Who is struggling like hell just to pay fees of kokila. Ahem is a vegetable seller(vegetable vender). He sells the vegetable in market. He loves his sister a lot while kokila's sister-in-law urmi is completely opposite. She don't like that just because of kokila's study ahem is wasting so much money. Ahem and urmi r parents of 5 children. They r living in chawl.

Chawl

Night

After selling vegetable ahem was so tired. From morning to evening he has to stand in market and scream like hell to adverstise his vegetables like 2 kilo bhindi bis rupe me, taza shabzi lelo.

Ahem: Urmi kokila kaha he?

Urmi: Medam nahne gai he.

Ahem: Aj me bahot khush hu?

Urmi: Kyu aj kya zyada tamatar bech diye?

Ahem: Nahi urmi. Me khush hu ki kokila fir se aval ayi.

Urmi: (to herself) Pata nahi us kagdi koki ko hamesha achhe marks kyun ate he? Ese hi chalta raha to wo puri zindi calej jayegi aur hamare paise lut ti rahegi.

Ahem: Tumne kuchh kaha urmi?

Urmi: Nahi….. Me soch rahi thi hame abhi kokila ki shadi kar deni chahie.

Ahem: Pehle use padhai khatam karne do. Fir me rajkumar ki talash karunga.

Urmi gives him a disgust look.

Child1: papa aj aap mere liye kya laye?

Child2: muje bi kuchh chahie papa.

Ahem: aaj kokila buva ki books leni thi to sare paise usme chale gaye.

Urmi: Futi meri kismat.

Child3: Lekin kal apko hamare lie kuchh lana padega.

Ahem: Thik he.

Child4: Papa muje test me achhe marks aaye.

Urmi: (to herself) Mera pura khandan padhne likhne ke pichhe kyu pada he?

Child5: Muje bhi achhe marks aye he.

Ahem: aap sab ko kokila buva ki tarha banna he.

Urmi: (to herself) Me yaha 1 koki kagdi udana chahti hu yeh ahem badsha 5 koki ko khadi karna chahte he.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
precap:
Basket ball match: Kokila vs parag.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You ve no idea how i am laughing. Like an idiot.ahem and urmi i cant believe it. Ahem father of five kids. Brilliant. Continue soon
Edited by vibz88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
😆at least in this ff...ahem fathered 5 kids..i seriously doubt abt SR in the show...i wonder how can he not have any feelings at all...come on yaar...he is young, smart and very much hot...i doubt his hormones..now... r they in tact 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17

part 4

College

Morning

Its time for basket ball match. All students and faculty members r excited for match. Its kokila vs parag. Most exciting couple of college. Hetal is confused between best friend and boy friend.

Rashi and Gopi r sitting in audience.

Rashi: match kab shuru hoga?

Gopi: excitement to dekho jese india aur Pakistan ka match ho.

Rashi: sab cheer to ese kar rahe he jese kokila aur parag nahi sachin aur sehwag khel ne wale ho.

Gopi: You know what I need a break from this kokila. Every day she is ready with new drama.

Suddenly jitu came and started shouting PARAG PARAG PARAG.

Rashi: What the hell r u doing?

Jitu: yahape bet lag rahi he. Kaun jitega kokila ya parag.

Rashi: I think parag.

Jitu: kitne ki bet lagani he? 1000, 2000 ya 5000.

Rashi: takle kal jo kuchh bhi tha wo to tu lut gaya? Ab kya khud ko bech ke bet lagau?

Jitu: yeh kamane ka golden chance he. Paise bad me de dena.

Rashi: (with excitement) really? I would love to go with parag. Ok meri 5000 ki bet.

Gopi: No. Rashi us bhes kokila ke luck bahot ache kam kar rahe he. Don't be silly.

Rashi: kokila ko basket ball ka B bhi nahi ata and parag is hampion. Jitu meri taraf se 5000.

Jitu: Ok

Now most awaited couple r there on ground to play. Kokila and parag r starring each other like salman khan and madhuri dixit stares each other in hum apke hain kaun. Their chemistry is rocking like ranbir kapoor and Katrina kaif in ajab prem ki gazab kahani and their dressing is like sonam kapoor and imran khan in I hate luv story.

Ball kokila ke hath me. She is challenging parag with eye contact. She is moving towards basket and parag wants to snatch the ball. Yaha kokila ne jump kia basket karne ke liye aur parag ne jump kiya rokne ke liye. Ball basket ki jagah ground ke bahar. Aur kokila ka ek per parag ke hath par aur dusra stomach me. Parag ko hath me fecture aur pet me digestive system out of order.

Moral: parag in hospital and matchover.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Awesome. Short and sweet. Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Jigar who is only husband of 2 wives mani and mithi. He is a father of chirag and parag but both of them dnt like to live as brothers as they r step brothers. Mani is mother of chirag and mithi is mother of parag.

Mani was choice of jigar's mom while jigar's father want him to marry with mithi. Being obidient son it was his duty to accept both proposals. So just for the sake of mom and dad he was ready to romance with both mani and mithi. His parents never thought to ask him abt his choice. In clg days jigar was in love with kinjal. But hearing hearing news of jigar's marriage kinjal thought to commit suicide. But after making few effort she thought its not easy to die happily. So she drop the idea of suicide and she found her true luv in urmi's father dhaval. Now she is mother of honhar daughter urmi and grany of half cricket team.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Oh wow atleast here kinjal and dhaval went to the next step in their marriage.impossible to see that on screen!

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