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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ananyashera

<font color="#990099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">awesome update dear😊...

so finally we got to see their first meeting😳...superb😊...& their cute fights also started with this😉...looks like one more story of dhruv & pooja has also started😍...

plz update soon...waiting for next part...
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thanks dear
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
beautiful update!!
loved veer neha's 1st meeting with their knok-jhok
and veer also got his bhabhi for whom he was searching for
n wid tht his love too
love druv-puja too
waiting for next update

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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: shruja

beautiful update!!
loved veer neha's 1st meeting with their knok-jhok
and veer also got his bhabhi for whom he was searching for
n wid tht his love too
love druv-puja too
waiting for next update

thanks dear will update tommorrow

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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
HI...i just read ur ff...that's amazing...👏
liked our veer n neha's first meeting...lagta hai car ki back n front light ke saath saath in dono ke sar ke bhi light ud gae...😆
n dhruv n pooja...lagta hai rudra aur veer ko apni bhabhi mil hi gae...😉
update soon...
n plz add me to ur PM list...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ridzzi

HI...i just read ur ff...that's amazing...👏

liked our veer n neha's first meeting...lagta hai car ki back n front light ke saath saath in dono ke sar ke bhi light ud gae...😆
n dhruv n pooja...lagta hai rudra aur veer ko apni bhabhi mil hi gae...😉
update soon...
n plz add me to ur PM list...
luv u...😊

thanks 4 comment dear
luv u too dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
thanks dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
i hav a good memory , u told u will ud today...

ud soon
waiting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

i hav a good memory , u told u will ud today...


ud soon
waiting.

oh yeah you hv good memory
will update today
ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: tejjo

oh yeah you hv good memory
will update today
ok


TODAY IS OVER...TONIGHT IS GOING ON...ITS A JOKE, SO PLZ SMILE.

WAITING FOR UD
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
part 5

(sharma house)
neha n pooja just enter in the house n went to their room when naina call them

naina-''tum dono aa gayi chalo khaana khaalo''

neha-''mom me change kar ke aati hun'' n went to her room

naina-''pooja aaj itni der kaise ho gayi'' while serving the food

pooja-''wo maa aaj hmari gaadi ki takkar ho gyi thi dusri gaadi se''

naina is worried now to know this n ask-''kya...kyun...kaise tumhe chot to nhi lagi na beta or neha thik to h na kitni baar bola h ki thik se gaadi chalaya karo'

pooja-''maa hum dono thik h khuch nhi hua sab thik h''

now sameer n aditya enter in the house

sameer-''kya hua naina aap itni pareshaan kyun h ''

naina -''aaj pooja or neha ki gaadi ki takkar ho gyi in dono ko chot lag jaati to''

neha come downstairs n said-''oho mom aap itni jaldi kyun pareshaan ho jaati ho kuch nhi hua h hume''

aditya-'' kaki aap pareshan mat hoiye kal se driver inhe chodne jayega oo lene bhi''

sameer-''han ye thik rahega''

after that they all have their dinner n going to sleep

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(MALHOTRA HOUSE)

veer n rudra lying on bed n dhruv on sofa

rudra-''aaj ka din kaafi accha tha h na veer'' while seeing at dhruv whose busy in his own thougt''

veer-''aisa kya accha tha aaj ke din mein match to hum kitni baar jeet chuke h''

rudra-''oho veer me match ki baat nhi kar rha hun''

veer confused n ask-''to phir ''

rudra-''are wo gadi ki tikkar or us ladki ka jhagda...kuch yaad aaya''

to hear this dhruv come to his conciousness...veer n rudra thought to tease him n said-''veer waise wo ladkiyaan bahut gamandi thi h na ek to hmari gaadi ki lights tod di upar se hm se ladne bhi lagi''

veer-''han wahi to mujhe to un 2no par bahut gussa aa rha h aakhir samajhti kya h apne aap ko'' staring at dhruv whose little disturbed n said quikly-''nhi nhi 2no aisi nhi thi 2sri waali to kitni acchi thi usne mujhe sorry bhi bola'' n smiling

veer raised his eyebrows n said-''accha????''

dhruv-''han usne sorry bola...ho jaata kabhi-2 galti se bechaari kitni darr gyi thi use laga ki mein usse dantuga''

veer n rudra together-''bechari''

dhruv-''mera matlab ki wo he wanyed to say something when veer said-''koi baat nhi dhruv hum sab samaj gye ki tum kya kehna chahte ho'' veer n rudra gigled

dhruv-''tum dono ko sona nhi h kal office bhi jaana h ab so jao'' n he left the veer room

now veer n rudra laughed loudly rudra-''dhruv to gaya''

veer-''han lagta to yahi h '' he thought some thing n smile

rudra-''veer ab 2m so jao kal tumhara office ka pehla din h or pehle din late nhi hona chahiye'' he said good night to him n leave

veer close his eye n saw a beautiful face...pink lips..black long hairs...her smile remined him everything n he quikly open his eyes n sit on the bed n thought every thing happened today n atlast he's smiling n again close their eyes n try to sleep...soon he's in deep sleep.


in the morning

veer is still sleeping..every1 on the breakfast table
shubh-''nivi veer kahan aaj usse office bhi jaana h''.

nivi'' ji han humne usse kal bta diya tha wo time se office pahunch jayega aap chinta mat kijiya''

all of them finish their breakfast n leave 4 office

nivi in veer's room n see everything is mesh..his clothes lying on the floor...football on the bed...1 shoe lying on the shoe cupboard n another on floor...she's smiling n put all his thing 1 by 1 n said-''kya karun me is ladke ka saara samaan idhar udhar pada h'' n she sit on the bed n put her hand on his forhead-''veer jaldi utho aaj tumhe office jaana h agar time se nhi pahunche to badepapa naraz ho jayenge ''
to hear this he quickly wake up n see the watch this is 8 o'clock he quickly put the blanket aside n go to shower n said-''maa towel or mere kapde jaldi se nikal dijiye mujhe 8:30 tak office pahunchna h''

nivi-''humne tumhaare kapde or towel bathroom me pehle hi rakh diya h jaldi se ready hoke niche aa jao hum breakfast lagate h

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(SHARMA HOUSE)

aditya..sameer left 4 thier office n pooja 4 her dance classes..naina is busy in her kitchen works while neha quickly come downstairs n said-''mom me jaa rhi hun bye''

naina come out from the kitchen n said-''or naasta kaun karega aaj meine aaloo ke paraathe banaaye h tere liye''

neha quickly take a paratha n said-''ab thik h ab mein jaa sakti hun''

naina-''thik h dhyaan se jaana or time par lunch kar lena'' n kiss her forhead
she nodded n leave

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(MALHOTRA HOUSE)

veer quikly come downstairs n see his mother n said-''maa bye ''

nivi-''beta naasta kar ke jao bhuke pet nhi jaate ''

veer-'' nhi maa mein bahut late ho gaya hun mein office me hi kuch khaa lunga'' take his file n about to move when her mother call him-''veer ruko''

she have a thaali of aarti n bowl of curd..she give aarti to him n curd...he take bleesings of his mother n leave

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neha sit on the car n said to her driver-''jaldi chalaiye na nhi to aaj mein pakka late ho jayungi''

its a red signal when her car stops n she'sworried now what to do...veer's car just behind her car he's also worried'...

suddenly a green signal display bat her car not moving...she's more worried now n said to driver-''kya hua jaldi chaliye na''

driver-''madam lagta h gaadi khraab ho gayi h''

neha shocked-''kya ...ab kya hoga''

veer continously giving horn but that car not responding...

now neha is disturbed that bloody horn she's very angrily come out from the car n come to his car's window n knocked it

veer saw her n come out from the car n said-''tum chahti kya ho''

neha is shocked to hear this n said-''agaa yahin mein tum se kahoon to''

veer-''dekho mere pass tum jaisi bewakoof ladki se baat karne ka time nhi h apni car hatao mujhe jaana h''

neha-''bewakoof kise kaha tumne han ek to mein waise hi pareshaan hun upar se tum...nhi hataungi ab bolo kya karoge''she folded her hands

veer come close to her n she's shockingly moves backward-''to mein hata deta hun''n moves toward her car n said to driver to moves the car aside

driver-''sahaab hmaari gaadi kharab ho gyi h to side mein nhi kar sakta''

veer-'accha ek kaam karo yahaan se seeedhe jaaana or left mein ek garage hoga wahan jaakar kisi ko car thik karane ke liye bula lao or raaste me agar koi hospital ho to doctor ko bhi le aana tumhaari madam pagal hone lagi h''

to hear this her mouth is opens n she said to him-''kya kaha tumne mein pagal lagti hun tumhe ''

veer-''lagti nhi h tum pagal ho aadhi nhi poori ab mere raaste se hato mujhe late ho rha h''

veer sit in the car n see she's very worried n standind on the road for taking lift,,he moves his car n stand to her side n said to her -''car me baitho''

she's shocked n not listen him n turn to see other side..veer again said-''meine kaha car me baitho''

neha with anger-''kyun baithun mujhe nhi chaahiye tumhaari lift samjhe tum jao yahan se''

veer-''ok jaisi tumhaari marzi waise yahaan koi lift itni jaldi milegi nhi tumhe par mujhe kya mein chalta hun mujhe bhot der ho rhi h''

after that he start his car n move the car slowly as he saw her worried face...she's worried n wanted to stop him but his car is far away from her...he saw her face expression n smile to see her n stops the car n quickly open the door of that seat next to him

she saw the car stops n doors of another side is open...now she's relax n moves towards the car

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