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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: ananyashera

<font color="#006600" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">thank u so much for one more RTMC FF🤗...nice story dear😊...so many characters...loved it😳...

thanks 4 pm & plz update soon😊...waiting for their first meeting😍...
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thanks 4 liking will update 2morrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
very nice sweetie...just went through your HUM TUM...nice story...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 4

(in the evening)
as usuall veer n his brother won the football match n they all sit in the car to return back their home.

dhruv-''aaj bhot dino ke baad football match me maza aaya'' dhruv said while driving th car rudra sit next to driver sit n veer in back side,

rudra-''han wo isliye kyunki aaj hum itne dino ke baad sath sath h''

dhruv-''han wo to h kyunki jab hum 3no saath hote to hme koi nhi hara sakta'' n he's smiling to see veer whose busy to see outside the car

dhruv-''veer kise dhund rhe ho bahar'' n veer now see his brother n smile in very naughty way

veer-''apni bhabhi ko par wo kahin dikh hi nhi rhi h'' n smiling to see dhruv's face.

rudra-''arey koi baat nhi veer hum dono milkar jald se jald dhruv ke liye bhabhi dhundege''

veer-''dhruv ke liye nhi h bhabhi hme apne liye dhundni h''

rudra-''han han wahi'' n both of them gigled again

now dhruv stops the car due to red signal n turn back too see veer n said-''veer mein tumhe chodunga nhi aaj or tujhe bhi ''while seeing rudra

on the other hand neha n her sister sitting in car pooja driving the car.

pooja-''neha tera aaj hospital me as a doctor pehla din kaisa gya''

neha-''dii bhot accha hospital mein sabhi seniors bhot acche bhot helping h... pehle to mein kaafi nervous thi .but mujhe ek bhot acchi doctor mili wo bhot acchi h mujhse bas 1 saal senior h unse baat karke mera dar choo ho gya'' she's very happy while saying all to her sister

pooja-''accha to tumhe pehle hi din ek acchi dost bhi mil gayi''

neha-''han di she's very sweet like u unka naam sapna singhaniya h'

pooja-''accha?''

n both of them busy in their talks again

as green signal display dhruv starts the car n left that place the another car of pooja n neha just behind the dhruv's car both of the car run in their average speed...n after that a small boy come in front of the dhruv's car to save that boy he immidiately gave a hault to his car,but the other car behind them is coming in their mediate speed,...as she saw the other car is on hault she immidately gave the break ...but car already strucked to the front car...n all 3 boys pushed by a jerk inside the car...all of 3 move outside from the car...poja n neha also come outside to see their car...

veer n rudra are very angry to see the back lights which breaks as they all move towards the honour of other car...there are 2 girls..to see her car's head lights which completely broken into peices..

dhruv-''excuse me aapki wajah se hmari car ki back light tut gyi''

pooja turns back to see the male voice n after looking at pooja he completely lost in her eyes n she continously see at him with a very nervous face as she knew tht his car's headlight breaks bcoz of her..both of them continously looking at each other...neha still check her car from backside also...veer n rudra standing just behind the dhruv n they saw all of the drama happened between his brother n that girl...veer with in anger come to his brother side n said-''jab gaadi chalani nhi aati to leke kyun nikalti ho''

by hear this voice both of them return from their dreamland to in reality...pooja is very nervous she lowered her eyes n say-''sorry'' to all of them.

than another female voice interupt-''sorry what sorry'' she's neha whose come in favour of her sister

to saw this beautifull girl veer lost all his consiousness n he continously saw her long black hairs .,her black eyes,her pink lips n pink cheeks...after hear that voice he come to his senses.

neha-''di aap kyun sorry bol rhi ho galti to inki thi beech road me koi car aise rokta h kya?"

veer to hear this said-''accha?to tum gaadi chala rhi thi isliye itna bol rhi ho''

neha-''han mein chala rhi thi ab bolo kya karoge''

veer-''han mujhe pta tha ki tum jaise bewkoof hi aise car chala sakti h''

neha-''bewakoof kisko kaha tumne? apne aap ko kya rajkumaar samajhte ho? with full of anger

dhruv n pooja try to stop their fight but they continously arguing with each other

dhruv-''veer chalo hme ghar bhi jaana h chalo choddo''

veer-''kya choddo ek to is ladki ne hmari car ki lights tod di upar se tum keh rhe ho chodo mein ise nhi chodunga''

neha-''accha apni car ki tuti hui lights badi jaldi se dekh li tumne par meri headlightes tuti uska kya?

veer-''pehle soch lo tumhaari headlights ya tumhaari gaadi ki?''

neha-''han han wahi''

pooja tried to stop her sister n said to veer-''sorry galti meri h wo mujhe hi break lagane me thodi der ho gyi or galti se aapki car ki lights tut gyi sorry'' to hear this neha again about to said when her sister stop her...she angrily gazed at veer

now veer about to reply when dhruv said-''koi baat nhi aapko soorry kehne ki koi jarurat nhi h hmaari wajah se aapki car ki headlightes bhi to tut gyi...wo kya h na ek bacche ko bachane ke chakkar me ye sab hua ...hmaari taraf se bhi aapko sorry.

to hear this veer makes weired expression on his face n look angrily to his brother...neha smiling too see his face expression

dhruv n pooja again staring each other..to see this all happened rudra said under his breath-''lagta h dhruv ke to break fail to ho gye''

veer to hear this said-''kuch kaha tumne''

rudra-''nhi ...nhi to mein..mein to sirf itna kah rha tha ki bhot der ho gyi h hme ghar chalna chahiye''

veer-''han chalo'' veer n rudra move towards the car but dhruv n pooja still stairing each other n veer come in front of them n saw both are lost in thier thougts...veer smile to see that...he come near to dhruv n said in his ear-''aaj ke liye itna kaafi h ab chale''
to hear this both of them come to their senses pooja quickly move towards the neha who still gaze veer

dhruv.,rudra sit in the car while veer turns back to see neha...she moves along with her sister n not turns back...veer gaze at her 4 few seconds n then sit in the car...as pooja sit again on driver sit ,neha turns back too see him but he already sit in the car...n after few sec. she also sit in the car...
n after that both the cars left their places n invsible in the darkness of night.




Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
nice part,😛
I think , It will be Neha n Veer's First meeting😳
continue soon dear
Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
😉U were awesome, mind blasting...too tremendous...
just loved this ud.
it was super thrilling,

maza aa gaya ...

aakir kaar neha aur veer mil hi gaye...
i really waited for this


LOVE IN FIRST SIGHT-''😳to saw this beautifull girl veer lost all his consiousness n he continously saw her long black hairs .,her black eyes,her pink lips n pink cheeks...after hear that voice he come to his senses.(VEER KI THO NIKAL PADI)☺️

.neha-''di aap kyun sorry bol rhi ho galti to inki thi beech road me koi car aise rokta h kya?"(yeah, protective sister)👍🏼

veer to hear this said-''accha?to tum gaadi chala rhi thi isliye itna bol rhi ho''(VEER U R A BAD ANALYSER, ITS NOT THAT EASY TO ANALYSE OUR NEHA)😆

neha-''han mein chala rhi thi ab bolo kya karoge''(YEAH, HOW cud SHE JUST BACK OFF , JUST LIKE THAT)😃

veer-''han mujhe pta tha ki tum jaise bewkoof hi aise car chala sakti h''(JIS DIN TUMHE PATA CHALEGA KI VOH EK DOCTOR HAI, TAB DHEKENGE KI KYA KAHAGE)

neha-''bewakoof kisko kaha tumne? apne aap ko kya rajkumaar samajhte ho? with full of anger(AAPNE LAST 2 SHOWS MAIN VEER(RAJAT) PRINCE HI THA, AUR ISS FF MAIN BAHUT JALD TUMHARE SAPNO 😍KA RAJ KUMAAR BAN JAYEGA, JUST WAIT AND WATCH.😳😉☺️

veer-''kya choddo ek to is ladki ne hmari car ki lights tod di upar se tum keh rhe ho chodo mein ise nhi chodunga''(YES VEER ISSE PAKAD KE RAKHO,,...AFTERALL U LOVE HER)👍🏼

neha-''accha apni car ki tuti hui lights badi jaldi se dekh li tumne par meri headlightes tuti uska kya?(BE CAREFUL MA NEHA, Q-T-pie)😊

veer-''pehle soch lo tumhaari headlights ya tumhaari gaadi ki?''(yeh , bahas main tho tumhe aage koi hain hi nahi veer.)🤣

neha-''han han wahi''(why did u stop here, shud hav commented some more)⭐️

UD SOON ...AND YES DO MAKE SURE THAT EVERY UD HAS A ROMANTIC SCENE OF NEHA AND VEER...PLZ TRY IT IN ALMOST ALL UDS...

U NOE THID WAY WE FEEL IT TO B A COMPLETE UD.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

😉U were awesome, mind blasting...too tremendous...

just loved this ud.
it was super thrilling,

maza aa gaya ...

aakir kaar neha aur veer mil hi gaye...
i really waited forthis


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">LOVE IN FIRST SIGHT-''😳</font>to saw this beautifull girl veer lost all his consiousness n he continously saw her long black hairs .,her black eyes,her pink lips n pink cheeks...after hear that voice he come to his senses.<font color="#ff0000">(VEER KI THO NIKAL PADI)☺️</font>

.neha-''di aap kyun sorry bol rhi ho galti to inki thi beech road me koi car aise rokta h kya?"<font color="#0000ff">(yeah, protective sister)👍🏼</font>

veer to hear this said-''accha?to tum gaadi chala rhi thi isliye itna bol rhi ho''<font color="#0000ff">(VEER U R A BAD ANALYSER, ITS NOT THAT EASY TO ANALYSE OUR NEHA)😆</font>

neha-''han mein chala rhi thi ab bolo kya karoge''<font color="#0000ff">(YEAH, HOW cud SHE JUST BACK OFF , JUST LIKE THAT)😃</font>

veer-''han mujhe pta tha ki tum jaise bewkoof hi aise car chala sakti h''(<font color="#0000ff">JIS DIN TUMHE PATA CHALEGA KI VOH EK DOCTOR HAI, TAB DHEKENGE KI KYA KAHAGE)</font>

neha-''bewakoof kisko kaha tumne? apne aap ko kya rajkumaar samajhte ho? with full of anger<font color="#0000ff">(AAPNE LAST 2 SHOWS MAIN VEER(RAJAT) PRINCE HI THA, AUR ISS FF MAIN BAHUT JALD TUMHARE SAPNO 😍KA RAJ KUMAAR BAN JAYEGA, JUST WAIT AND WATCH.😳😉☺️</font>

veer-''kya choddo ek to is ladki ne hmari car ki lights tod di upar se tum keh rhe ho chodo mein ise nhi chodunga''(<font color="#0000ff">YES VEER ISSE PAKAD KE RAKHO,,...AFTERALL U LOVE HER)👍🏼</font>

neha-''accha apni car ki tuti hui lights badi jaldi se dekh li tumne par meri headlightes tuti uska kya?(<font color="#0000ff">BE CAREFUL MA NEHA, Q-T-pie)😊</font>

veer-''pehle soch lo tumhaari headlights ya tumhaari gaadi ki?''<font color="#0000ff">(yeh , bahas main tho tumhe aage koi hain hi nahi veer.)🤣</font>

neha-''han han wahi''<font color="#0000ff">(why did u stop here, shud hav commented some more)⭐️</font>
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<font color="#00ff00" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">UD SOON ...AND YES DO MAKE SURE THAT EVERY UD HAS A ROMANTIC SCENE OF NEHA AND VEER...PLZ TRY IT IN ALMOST ALL UDS...</font>

<font color="#00ff00" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">U NOE THID WAY WE FEEL IT TO B A COMPLETE UD.</font>



thanks swthrt 4 such a lovely comment n will try to update as u wish
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

nice part,😛

I think , It willbeNeha n Veer's First meeting😳

continue soon dear

thanks dear will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
nice part👏
Finaly Veer n Neha met...❤️
nice meeting dear
the way they staring each other it seems third war going to happen🤣
continue dear...
Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awesome update dear😊...

so finally we got to see their first meeting😳...superb😊...& their cute fights also started with this😉...looks like one more story of dhruv & pooja has also started😍...

plz update soon...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

nice part👏

Finaly Veer n Neha met...❤️

nice meeting dear

the way they staring each other it seems third war going to happen🤣

continue dear...

yeah dear there is 3rd ww going to happen
will update soon

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