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Decided to write a shot story on today's episode. Love Ahem today as he was fantastic. Dedicated to all romance lovers. Will be stealing some scenes from the episode.

" Where is this Ahem and Gopi sitting I can't seems to see them" Kokila kept on harping and when she was about to go and find them, Baa stopped her saying "why are you worried about those two, and besides you will be disturbing other cinema viewers so sit and enjoy."

" Baa Gopi bahu is not completely and..." " and Kokila she will be with Ahem who will take good care so why worry so much and besides what happens in the cinemas we both know" Baa smirked and laughed and winked at Hetal too. " Baa you are too much we are you daughters in law" " Chup Kokila have I ever treated either of you like that. You both are my daughters, a strict one and a soft one and therefore a balanced home so I can talk to my daughters any how."

" Hope we have not miss a thing by the way Ahem could not get extra tickets on our row and will therefore be sitting behind." Chirag said

" Rashi come and sit here so that Jigar can talk with Chirag bhai" but kakiji no buts Rashi do as told". This Kakiji does not understand the word couple and now wants me to sit in between them and leave my lovely Jigarji's side. I know Jigarji is mad at me but at least the few touches were doing some things to me and I think the same to him and the longer we stuck together then at a point during the movie he would have talked to me. Thanks to my unlucky stars a great opportunity will be misses offf this Kadgri now is too much. Rashi tought to herself

On the other side of the hall Ahem is Glad to be sitting alone with his Gopi and eating popcorn. Now this is what I call private but how I wished the elders would not be here but all the same I get to sit next to Gopi and alone, Ahem thought not knowing a huge pair of eyes are on the look out for her Gopi bahu.

Now is the time to romance her but where to start and what if she does not like it and all then all his plans with go to the drains. No Ahem you must take this chance if not how can she tell how you feel about her. " Gopi! ahhm are you comfortable I mean is your leg ok?" " Yes Ahemji and besides this is for Rashi and Devarji and I hope Kanaji makes everything alright and Ahemji thank you."

This girl will never improve am doing all this for her and she is bringing Jigar issue. God an't she sense the love busting out of me see I deliberately went for the corn as her just to touch her and when she looked shock I have to remove my hand as the electric shock is overwhelming. Please if only she will feel my heart beat then she would realised how much love I have for her but I think until Rashi happy in her marriage I would not be getting much attention rather I will be giving back. Gopi's kanaji please do some thing.

You see in our generation your grand dad always got ice cream and popcorn to enjoy with the movie. " Baa I will get it for all" said Jigar and then Rashi mind new now this is another chance not to be missed and jump to help him carry the load and was approve by Hetal and the couple left.

Now I must do some thing to get Jigarji talk to me and also to sit next to me but what and then she spotted a group of boys and pretended they were staring at her in a lust way and grab Jigar's hand and told him they should leave the area and see the attention that his beautiful wife is getting made him jealous within and gave her the tray and held her hand to make his claim which made Rashi blush and happy. Upon entering the hall and handing the drinks to the rest of the family, Rashi decided to sit a seat above Jigar which made him uncomfortable.

As the movie started, the man who was sitting a two seats away from Rashi came to sit near her and started to make passes at her. Rashi tried as she may to get rid of him but he would not burge and was leaning closer to her. Jigar at the coner of his eyes saw the man and at first thought nothing of it until he saw the uneaseness Rashi was facing and got and went ans said " did you not here what the lady said so leave her alone". " Listen man I saw this chick first so go and make a claim some where else" said the man in a drunken state. " Listen mister am warning you leave her alone" Said Jigar in an angry yet firm tone but the man asked him why interfere as she is not your sister to that Jigar said " she is my wife and if you dare come any closer to her I will rip your head off your neck". Seeing that Jigar was in fact ready to chop him he left and then Jigar moved to where he was sitting next to his beautiful.

I am angry at her but she is my wife and it has been difficult to ignore her but what to do as much as my heart wants to be close to her I just can't forget how she betrayed me over the year we were married but now is not the time to punish her as there are so many men lusting her and how dare they she is mine to lust, care, love and and... he shook his head so as not to dream of the thing he had always wanted to do.

Rashi on the other hand was on cloud nine for Jigar called her his wife and now is sitting next to her and then " Jigarji thank you and by the way I was feeling very uncomfortable but you rescue me and I know it's because you care for me even though I have hurt you badly. Jigarji whatever I did was wrong and I know that I have hurt you badly and broken your trust but I will do anything to place your trust in me again because over the year that we are married I may not pay much attention to you but allow me to say that I fell in love with you but only new when my kalakari came out and was loosing you. Jigarji I do not want to be separated from you as I carry you in my heart and at the moment it's not beating normal as I have hurt it. I live, breath and sleep with you in my mind and soul and hope one day you will find it in your heart to forgive me and give me a chance to prove to you that we are made for each other no matter the way we got married as marriages are made in heaven. I know you do not want to see or speak to me but I just wanted to tell you this and from now on I will stay away from you but you will always be in my heart." With that, Rashi was about to leave in tears but was held back and pulled to sit down but fell on Jigar's lap and the two stirred at each other oblivious of their surroundings.

Jigar was touched by her confession and new that he loved her and still do and cannot live without her and then unconciously was wiping her tears and removing the strands from her face and could not believe how beautiful his wife has become lately and without a thought leaned closer and was about to kiss her when a coughing sound distracted him and he quickly pulled away and making her sit on her seat but not leaving her hand.

"Rashi am not saying that I forgive you completely but everyone deserves a second chance and am willing to give you one but please if there are more surprises let me know now as next time I don't know whether I will be able to handle the shock, I want an honest life with you only if you will open up with me. I won't lie to you or myself I still care a lot for you and fought myself hard to hate you but my love is stronger and for that am willing to give our marriage another chance."

Rashi could hear no further and with tears rolling down her cheeks hug him and was saying sweet nothings all happening under the watchful eyes of Baa making her smile and was curious as to the silent couple and wondered what's happening with them and had a plan to find out.

Before asking Hetal to escort her to the lady's she made sure that Kokila and Parag were sitting next to each other and made Chirag keep a seat next to him for Hetal. The two were passing by Gohem when Gopi said " Baa may I come with you and Kakiji". Ahem wished he had super glue and would have glued her to the seat.Hetal seeing his tension understood his dilema and asked her not to worry. "Hetal bahu you too not to worry look Meethi is here with the driver so this old lady can go home and rest."

"Baa you cannot go all by yourself so I will come with you and..." " no Gopi beta you too stay and enjoy the movie and it's experience and besides Meethi is there with me so I wont be alone and this is my final order". Baa left with Meethi content seeing Ahem ready to kill his wife for not understanding his feelings and also happy her family will be back to normal only if Kokila too can see the love of her husband and leave Ahem to Gopi.

" Ahemji I think someone should be with Baa as you know she is old and weak and therefore someone should be with her at home. I can go and besides am better and can walk." She kept quiet when she saw anger reflect in his eyes and looked away worriedly and leaned on her seat.

"Tell me something Gopi hwo come you are worried about everyone else and see their problems but fail to notice what is happening right under your nose." Ahemji what are you saying I do not understand".

"Exactly Gopi you will not understand me but you understand everyone else. Do not look shock and I do not blame you as the whole fault is mine. Before you understood me and I misunderstood you but now I understand you whilst you do not. I can understand that you rather be with Baa than enjoy a movie sitting next to me which is making you uncomfortable. "

"Ahemji I did not mean that it's just that Baa is old..." " Gopi I know exactly how old my grand mother is and need no reminding and since you are insisting then considering our plan with Jigar and Rashi is a success I will drop you home to be with Baa."

She grab his hand and looked at him with pleading eyes to sit. He could not help but look in her wonderful eyes and sat next to her obediently. " Ahemji am sorry for hurting you I did not mean to and I like it that you are supporting and helping me at every stage and I do enjoy your company but Ahemji being married comes with other responsibilities toward family members and am just doing my duty but did not mean to hurt you."

" Gopi am sorry it's just that I got carried away in your company and when you keep on talking about other people it makes me wonder where do I fit in your concern. I know you know about my other needs such as black tea, green tea etc but what about my need to be with you, to see your smile, to share with you my excitements and work and to talk with you but I feel you are more open to others than me." How can I tell you what you do to me with your smile or touch God help me what I intended on experimenting with you here but you are more worried about others and mum interfering too much is not helping.

Gopi was blushing with all that Ahem was saying to her but at the same time aweful for hurting his feelings and without thinking too much she lay her head on his shoulders which made him look at her directing and was shocked to see her eyes close and a smile on her luminous lips enjoying the feel of him. He felt bad for what he said and in order to convience her all is well, he stroke her soft hair sending sensual feelings through both of them. They were seated with their hand entertwing and watched the movie the heat of their romance and both faced each other when accidentally their lips brush and both jerked away quickly and looking every where but at each other.

" Ahemji am feeling thirsty" Oh Gopi even my throat is dry from the effect of what just happen. Dear me if I do not go now I doubt I won't finish what happen. " Sure I'll get us some" and was about to leave when he felt being pulled back and thought now how am I going to stop myself in this dark room with her softness so close to me but took courage and look back to see that he was stuck to her sari and as he was trying to free himself before he fulfils his desire his dear mum voice cut through his thought like a knife making him so embarassed and not knowing what to do or say.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wahaaay im first!😎

Kamjal,that was lovely lovely love to read!

Wow Ahemji is so mischevious and yayyy there was a lot of Jigarji😍

I hope you continue to write more OS's,they bring a smile to my face! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHIKA784

RESERVED!👏


*EDITED*

wahaaay im first!😎

Kamjal,that was lovely lovely love to read!

Wow Ahemji is so mischevious and yayyy there was a lot of Jigarji😍

I hope you continue to write more OS's,they bring a smile to my face! 😛


you are welcome will take the offer of writing more os's. was missing Jigar's mischievous
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was a wonderful os...loved it
so ahem told what he feels to gopi finally...so sweet
and loved raji too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow that was wonderful OS kamjal.
Loved the raji part and jigar's anger. I could actually imagine that in my head. Gohem were a treat to read with ahem going all naughty to keep touching her. Loved it😃
Edited by maddy311 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great os..! hope something like this happens on monday.. but don't think so.. nice os.. love it.. especially raji.. i first thought u hated rashi and will end up her in tears.. but thanks u made my day.. hope u will write more ffs and os without separating raji ofcourse😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really lovely OS Kamjal. Hope some of this is seen tomorrow.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a great one-shot.loved it to bits.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wish ahem says dis in d show
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely OS...Poor Ahem not able to hold back his feelings...& Gopi atleast put him to rest at the 1st level !!!

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